NiBir SS- The Journey of Love - 2 (Completed)*2/5* - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I hope to get an update of this after your exams are over😆
Just a wish...
a simple wish
a simple cute wish
a simple cute sweet wish
a simple cute sweeet wish😃

Okay I won't blackmail you🤣

Update as per your comfort😆
chalo phirse bye... ab to mujhe padhne baith hi jaana chahiye tabse timepass karri hu 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aNibirFan

I hope to get an update of this after your exams are over😆

Just a wish...
a simple wish
a simple cute wish
a simple cute sweet wish
a simple cute sweeet wish😃

Okay I won't blackmail you🤣

Update as per your comfort😆
chalo phirse bye... ab to mujhe padhne baith hi jaana chahiye tabse timepass karri hu 🤣


Yeah bilkul bhi emotional blackmail nhi kar rahi ho tum 🤣
But I'll update this very very soon just after update of EMAET 😉
😛
Kyunki EMAET ka demand jayda hai 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ab isski baari 😉 in next few days 😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter - 1


The night was dark, as dark was nisha's life right now. Complete dark no source of light, the moon was hidden behind dark cloud which was playing with moon sometimes hide it then leave to shine and give some ray to earth. But Nisha wasn't getting any hope of ray as she thought everything was over, she curse herself for taking all wrong decision in her life. Only her parents it hope of ray but that was too blur. But she had to distract herself so she thought about aman's baby and very next moment thought of kabir come in mind.

Nisha wasn't able to sleep, as the thought of being caught is haunting her and only one thing was ringing in her mind why the hell she had to travel with him. She had never have been seen him, meet him, who was unknown to her.

She was lost in thought when her phone rang. She looked at caller ID once she thought to not to pick it up but she go against her brain and picked it up.

Hello Nisha?" The caller speak as soon as nisha picked the call

Haan dolly bolo..." Nisha tried her voice to keep steady

Thank god you pick my call, I thought you would not going to pick it up..." Dolly replied

Kyun phone kiya dolly...?" Asked nisha straight

Nisha kya ab hum baat bhi nhi kar sakte phele ki tarha...??" Dolly said to which Nisha didn't say a word

Theek hai Nisha main samjh gai...But one last time can I say something ??"

Jaldi bolo kal subha ki meri train hai..."

Ohh so you're going back...Good!! "

Toh main phone rakhun ?"

Wait Nisha let me... Nisha mujhe pata hai tu bhout upset hai, jo hua vo nhi hona chahiye tha, tujhe pata hai insab ka jimedaar kon hai ? You... You're the responsible for your condition...!!"

Excuse me..??"

Yes you're heard right... Tune hi hamesha se unki baat mani, tujhe kabhi shorts dresses pasand nhi the par tu sirf unke liye shorts dresses pehni, clubing ki, pub gayi or jo vo bolte the wahi karti thi...Tera apna koi wajood hi nhi tha, pichle ek saal se tu ek natak kar rahi hai, vo sab karne ki koshish kar rahi hai jise tu unki world me fit ho jaye par iss chakar me tune khud Ko hi kho diya hai...Tu vo nhi hai jo Ahmedabad aayi thi..."

Dolly I think I need a nap..."

Wait nisha... I want to say something more... Nisha iss duniya me kuch bura hamesha kuch ache ke liye hota hai...Nisha khud ko wapas dhund le or kisi aise ko apni zindagi me aane dena jo teri kadar kare or tujhe change na kare...I wish you always stay happy...I know you're going to block my number after this call just stay hap..." Nisha couldn't hear further she cut the call and actually block Dolly's number

She threw her phone away and cried for hour till her phone rang again. Nisha looked at caller ID, she immediately wipe her face and tried to control her breaths.

Hello! " Nisha picked up the call and tried her best to keep her voice normal

Hello...nishu...Kya kar rahi...Uff main bhi kaise questions puch rahi hun obviously so rahi hogi " replied caller

Bhabhi aap bhi na khud hi questions puch rahi or khud hi answer de rahi " Nisha said and chuckled

Arey nishu...acha bata so rahi thi kya ?" Asked Aman

Nhi bhabhi neend nhi aa rahi..." Nisha replied laying on her bed which again bring that void

Haan teri aavaj se bhi lag raha hai pakka kal ki chinta ho rahi hogi na...?" Asked Aman

Haan bhabhi kal ki sach me chinta ho rahi..." Nisha replied as she knows Aman will caught her in sometime

Are tu chinta mat kar vo pagal hai...Kuch Aisa waisa nhi karega warna main hun na uske haath pair tod ne ke liye..." Aman said making a fist

Bhabhi aap bhi na..." Nisha replied by chuckling

Haan baaten bhout jyada karta hai, bhout nhi hadh se jyada or neend me bhi badbada ta rehata hai par vo jyada baat kare na toh tu..." Aman tell her something

Haww bhabhi sachi.. ?" Asked nisha as her jaw dropped to kilometres

Haan, isse kam se kam kuch time ke liye uska muh band hoga " Aman said

Then both the girls laughed on kabir's childhood incident.

Acha bhabhi aap so jao or mere baby Ko aram do..." Nisha replied smilingly as she forget about all bad thing that had taken place in her life

Okay main so rahi...Or main uss bandar ki photo bhej rahi..." Said Aman

Okay bhabhi good night!" Said nisha

Good night..!!" Aman replied and send her kabir's pic

Nisha saw his pic and said "ye shakal se hi kitna badmash lag raha hai"

Umm chalo so jaate hai " she tell to herself and sleep peacefully for two or three hour

Next morning her alarm rang and bring her from dreamland, but she hasn't slept in night so she close the alarm and slept again. After a while she woke up and found that she it's 9:30 and her train was at 10:30.
She woke up instantly, now inside her P.T. usha' Ghost had taken over. She was doing everything so fastly that it was shocking her that she can do everything in this speed. She reached to station at 10: 20.

When Nisha was in taxi, her brother called her to inform about her seat number and coach of the train as tickets was with kabir. So Nisha knew where she had go, she told porter to take her luggage to B1 coach of okha rameswaram express. She reached to her seat and found people had adjusted. She too adjust her bags and paid off the porter with smile and said thank you to him.
Nisha sit on her seat then remember about books and she hadn't brought any novel for journey. To her good luck she saw a book stall just infront of their coach. She immediately get down to purchase a novel. By the time she was paying she heard the sound of train's horn, she ran fast to catch the train and she succeed in that. As soon as she put leg on train she heard a voice.

"Stop... Somebody stop the train "

Nisha peep out and saw one guy was running behind train with one bag on his shoulder and another one was a suitcase which he was pulling. Nisha shook her head in disappointment as he was non other than kabir.

Nisha...help...hath do apna..." Kabir shouted by forwarding his hand, Nisha looked at him shocked plus what the... look ,instead of giving him hand she made face and went inside.

What the..." Kabir mumbled seeing her reaction and try to catch the train

But train stopped, kabir took breath of relief and he climbed up the train only to blast on Nisha for not helping him.

To be continued...

Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
So so so good loved it please update next part of it first rather than other stories I loved it at least one more chapter please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
awesome
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Loved the update, its awesome.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Let me dance first !

Moon hide and seek was wow 👍🏼
Aman: Warna mai hu naa uske haath pair todne k liye 🤣
Kya introduction dia hai Aman me Kabir ka
Bolta bohot hai🤣 🤣bakar bakar 😆
Vaise Sirf shakal se badmash nai akal se bhi ho sakta hai😉
Mere ears me song baj raha tha 'Chennai aai aai aai Chennai Express'😆😃
Kya Nisha, DDLJ ka scene bigaad dia😆
Waise chalte train me nai chadna chahiye :) zindagi ek baar hi milti h
I think mujhe zaroorat nai hai bolne ki ye ki I loved it❤️😳
Coincidentally I had checked the forum the very time you updated but still thought to first read epilogue b of season 1 then first update of season 2 and then this one. Bhai aise me mood banta hai😎
And Pleeease ek aur update mil sakta hai kya iska pehle *pout*
🤗🤗 Khush kar deti ho everytime 😳
Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Continue soon
Thanks for PM

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