NiBirSS: Let's Football! Chap5 Updated(2 Dec) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
this is really a cute os !
loved the way u described nisha's struggle in bus.
plz continue..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
I hope u know Hindi because whatever i am going to write ahead is in Hindi, typical HINGLISH
Dhaasu, dhinchak! awesome! Faadu! i love football and after reading the heading i was like CAN ANYONE WRITE AN OS, that too FOR A COUPLE ON SUCH A TOPIC. and when i read it... you nailed it yr. I mean end tak toh main kabir se firse pyaar karne lagi thi as he a a football player, now selected for National team. Kya sahi tha. Fantastic! And u described the bus ride so properly, it seems u were a victim too. i know it very well. Nisha bechaari sirf 25 rs dene ke liye BUS, kismat kharaab ise kehte hain. Usko kitna irritation hua hai after she could not find the person whom she had to return the money. I couold really feel it. Awesome work really! Do wriet some more stories like this. BASED ON FOOTBALL.😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Anmol333

It was another amazing story 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I loved loved loved ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ it
Bus scene was so nicely written I was imagine everything what was happening with nisha 👏😳
Poor nisha know nothing about football just like me I also don't know anything about football 😆😆 but I m not topper of the class 🤣 🤣
Last scene was awesome 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

One request don't write any os... Always write ts 😆 because it is so beautiful I want it's next part
Update its next part please 😳


Thanks so so much Anmol🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Okay SS done😃 but updates dene me time lag jayega then😕 cz already Bloodbath ek SS chal raha hai
Lovely thanks again❤️😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

see I told u neeru sab bolenge ab they want next parts of it!!
and amnol ekdum sahi boli 🤣
neeru u shld stop write OSes !! ty Ts hi likha kar 🤣


Okay Neha done SS😃
but mujhe isme updates dene me time lag jayega phr since already an SS is going on😆
Thanks so much again🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: mkjr

It was too good so amazing and lovely last scene was mind blowing plz plz make it two shots or three shots like memorable birthday


Thanks so much dear😳😳
Will make it an SS 😃
But updates dene me thoda time lag jayega
Thanks again🤗

Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: aNibirFan


Okay Neha done SS😃
but mujhe isme updates dene me time lag jayega phr since already an SS is going on😆
Thanks so much again🤗



worry out!!
me b writer hu u know that all!!
meri 4 stories ongoing h😆
mujhse behtar kon samaj sakta h😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Niha0606

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Thanks a ton much Niha😳😳
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Lovely Thanks again❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niha0606

please i want next pls isse SS bana dho pls pls pls

i am in love with this story read like 9 times now...pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls


9 times Niha😲

Okay done SS❤️
Okay done SS❤️
Okay done SS❤️
Okay done SS❤️
Okay done SS❤️
Okay done SS❤️
Okay done SS❤️
Okay done SS❤️
but dear thoda sa late honge updates cz already an SS is going on so
Thanks so so so much🤗😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: poornima_15

This is so good 😳... and the best part of your stories is that we can actually relate to the situations... they are so into our daily routines... and yes I'll not say one more part😆 ... because I want many more parts for this🤣


Thanks soo much Poornima😳😳
Okay done an SS😆
but updates me thoda time lag jayega
Hearty Thanks again❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: tani_0209

Wait wait

Plz drop d plan of letting Dis an os only.🥱
U mst n should continue it
It was soo soo amzng
Enjoyed it a lot..👏👏
Dere frst meeting in d bus
Oh god..poor nisha !!!😡
Bt kabir 😳😳
He was already prepared to give her his no
Such a k he z 😉😛
Loved it totally...
Plz continue it😊


Thanks so much Tani🤗🤗
Okay making it an SS😃
Will continue but updates thode time lenge
Big thanks again❤️😳

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