NiBirSS: Let's Football! Chap5 Updated(2 Dec) - Page 4

Originally posted by: teju19

this is really a cute os !
loved the way u described nisha's struggle in bus.
plz continue..

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

I hope u know Hindi because whatever i am going to write ahead is in Hindi, typical HINGLISH

Dhaasu, dhinchak! awesome! Faadu! i love football and after reading the heading i was like CAN ANYONE WRITE AN OS, that too FOR A COUPLE ON SUCH A TOPIC. and when i read it... you nailed it yr. I mean end tak toh main kabir se firse pyaar karne lagi thi as he a a football player, now selected for National team. Kya sahi tha. Fantastic! And u described the bus ride so properly, it seems u were a victim too. i know it very well. Nisha bechaari sirf 25 rs dene ke liye BUS, kismat kharaab ise kehte hain. Usko kitna irritation hua hai after she could not find the person whom she had to return the money. I couold really feel it. Awesome work really! Do wriet some more stories like this. BASED ON FOOTBALL.😉

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Thanks so so much Anmol🤗
Okay SS done😃 but updates dene me time lag jayega then😕 cz already Bloodbath ek SS chal raha hai
Lovely thanks again❤️😳

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

worry out!!
me b writer hu u know that all!!
meri 4 stories ongoing h😆
mujhse behtar kon samaj sakta h😛

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Yup okay😆

And yaar sorry vo actually mera laptop hang ho raha hai baar baar to thodi problem ho rahi hai🤔

You are not invisible but my laptop ki screen is getting invisible😭

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Yup okay😆

And yaar sorry vo actually mera laptop hang ho raha hai baar baar to thodi problem ho rahi hai🤔

You are not invisible but my laptop ki screen is getting invisible😭

Originally posted by: angelanju

completely loved it👏

but plz another update do na😳

nibir coffee date

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

get well soon to ur laptop 🤔

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

ya Allah...
neeru k laptop ko jaldi theek karde!! 🤔
I want updates 😃