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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Kabira and his smirk ..i love it😃 and yes plzz continue this 😃


Thanks so much Poornima😳😳
Glad you liked
Ohkay I'll continue Kabir😃
Will update soon😳
Thanks again <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Woah!!👏 Thanks for continuing it. The smirk😆🤣. Awesome. it was so cool.

continue soon soon. 😃😃


Thanks so much dear😳😳
Feeling great that you liked
Will update soon😃
Thanks again<3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

👏Awesome blowsome update

👏
Kabir's smirk..🤣
I m getting confused...do nibir love each other really or not???
And thier knok joks..🤣
And pls pdate sooon


Thanks so much dear😳😳
And erm what do I say😆 NiBir love each other but hate each other🤣
Feeling glad that you enjoyed😃
Will update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74


NiBirSS: Memorable Birthday

Fifth Shot


You forgot me? Haww! What? You didn't? Great! So you missed me? Aww... so nice of me. I made you miss me. Though you did contribute a little (smirk). Arey don't get sentimental yaar, I love you people yaar. You people like me as I'm and thanks millions for doing it. You missed me and Your Kabira missed you more. And see I'm back...back with a bang. Just heard the phrase somewhere (smirk).
Dolly di offered us water and went to bring in coffee for me and Saurav. I sat stretching myself on sofa after keeping my bagpack aside. Saurav too settled opposite me.
"Lovely house" I beamed.
"May I know why this is being said to me?"
"Because I don't want to share your room" I smirked.
"I very well knew it" Sauro stated.
"To pucha kisliye?"
"Tere muh se sunne k liye"
"Oho meri aawaz itni pasand hai tujhe?"
"Kya yaar Kabir... kabhi to thoda pyaar se baat kar liya kar, tujhe jhelna apne pair pe kulhaadi maarne jaisa hota hai"
"Correction...mujhe jhelna kulhaadi pe apna pair maarne jaisa hota hai " I chortled.
Saurav chuckled"Tu is janam me sudharne se raha"
"Agle janam me bhi no chance..." I chuckled.
Dolly came"Tum dono ko thoda wait karna padega, coffee powder khatam ho gaya, mai paas ki shop se le aati hu"
"Mai le aata hu" Saurav spoke.
"Nai tumdono abhi aaye ho safar se...mai le aati hu, paas me hi to hai Saurav shop"
"Arey Dolly coffee hi chahiye aisa nahi hai, chai bhi chalegi" I said.
She smiled "Kabir chai bhi nahi hai ghar pe"
"Accha" I giggled.
"Rehne de phir, kal le aunga mai" he said.
"Ha aisi koi zaroorat nai hai, Sauro k paas baitha insaan vese bhi so nahi sakta safar me" I smirked.
"You were the one who snored" Saurav pointed out.
"Atleast I wasn't pulling you in sleep like you were doing" I simpered.
"What? No!"
"Yes you did! 5 times! Disturbing my peaceful sleep like hell"
"But-"
"Chill Guys! I'm bringing coffee powder in 5 minutes. Till then take rest instead of fighting on stupid topics"
"He's doing it!" we both spoke at the same time.
Dolly smiled "Alright whatever it is... I've told Nisha to take out some snacks"
"Thik hai" he spoke and I nodded.
Dolly left.
"Paani" Saurav asked innocently.
"Tera pet hai ya kuaa? Abhi piya to paani"
"Please le aa yaar I'm feeling exhausted. Itna bhi nai kar sakta apne bhai k liye?"
"Naa"
"Bhai k naam par kalank hai tu!" Saurav spoke and got up.
"Itna senti mat ho, laata hu,magar kitchen kaha h ye to bata?"I smiled making him sit.
He gestured me with his eyes and I went accordingly.
I took a steel glass, poured water in it and was going to exit when I was pulled by my half jacket and my back thrusted on a wall.
I gulped a lump of saliva as Nisha stood opposite me pinching the knife under my chin.
"W...what are you doing?"
"Making you understand that this knife is sharp enough to ooze out your blood" she fumed clutching my jacket more.
As I bore a frightful look she then put the knife down but still stood glaring at me.
"Pehle mujhe laga tha ki mai bekaar me hi yaha aa gaya, but ab lag raha ki nahi...everything has a reason"
She rolled up her eyes moving away from me.
"And the reason is to admit you to a mental asylum" I smirked keeping the glass aside.
With lightning speed she brought back the knife and in fear, I closed my eyes with my hands up. "Pagal log murder bhi karte hai"she huskily spoke almost grazing the knife edge against my neck.
"S...sor..sorry" I stammered with my eyes still closed.
"Tera sorry gaya tel lene...Welcome to hell" she announced with a prick to which I flinched.
After a while, I slowly opened my eyes and my lips curved up in a little smile when I saw her observing something as her gaze was down(smirk).
As she moved her eyes up to mine, she glared again.
"Mere hontho ko kyu ghoor rahi thi?" I whispered raising a brow.
"Abe o nakli Salman Khan, hontho ko nai, mai dekh rahi thi ki kese maaru tere gale pe ki ek jhatke me tu swarg sidhaar jaaye" she clarified.
"Itna sochne ki zaroorat kya hai...bas ek baar gale lag jaa vese hi swarg mil jaaega mujhe"I smirked.
She clenched her jaws,"Gardan pe chaaku rakha hai magar teri bakwaas khatam nahi ho rahi"
"Accha thik hai chal ab bakwaas band"I uttered smiling.
She relaxed her expressions and turned away reaching near the gas stove placing the knife.I put my hands down and picked up the glass.

I smiled"Tune saari kyu change karli?"
"Tujhse matlab?"
"Hot lag rahi thi"I smirked.
"Tujhe bhi hot banaa deti hu tujhpe ye garam paani daalke" she said with a cheezy smile eyeing the steaming hot water kept in a vessel on the stove.
"Arey nai...is mamle me tujse competition kaun kare?"
"Tu kyu aaya hai yahaa yaar" she spoke with a frown.
I neared her "meri birthday treats baaki thi naa"
"Mujhe bhi nahi mili treats" Dolly spoke standing at the entrance.
I took a step back and smiled to Dolly "Haa aapko to sabse pehle milegi bhabi"
"Accha" she spoke taking out coffee powder.
"Chalo Kabir change kar lo tum aur Saurav ko bhi bol do...mai sabke liye coffee laati hu"
"Ha"
While going I swiveled and saw Nisha looking at me while Dolly was engrossed in her stuff. I immediately gave a flying kiss to Nisha and laughed quietly.
"Dolly di aap jao mai banaati hu coffee" she spoke gritting her teeth.
"Tu kyu Nish- Arey Kabir tu gaya nai?"
"Huh? Ha" I left.
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After changing my clothes, I sat with Saurav and Dolly in the balcony. In no time, Nisha brought 4 cups along with some snacks in a tray and handed the cups to each. She sat beside me as it was the only unoccupied chair.
"Accha kia Kabir yaha aa gaya kuch time ke liye" Dolly said.
"Mujhe lagta nahi ki aapke alaawa kisi aur ko accha laga" I smiled.
"Kyu?" Dolly questioned.
"Mai hi to laaya tujhe yaha" Saurav defended.
"Mai to bohot khush hu" Nisha spoke with an exaggerated smile to me.
"Dekha sab khush hai, ek tu hi hai jo sabke baare me kuch bhi sochta rehta hai"Saurav said tilting his head.
I smiled and took a sip. I immediately shot my eyes to Nisha who grinned.
God this girl! I won't be able to forget this coffee for my lifetime(smirk).
"Bohot badhiya bani hai coffee Nisha" I said and deliberately gulped the over spicy coffee eyeing her.
She smirked "ek cup extra bani hai...aur laau?"
"Sach me coffee bohot acchi bani hai"Dolly appreciated.
"Haa Nisha abse tu hi banaana" Saurav joined.
I coughed hard hearing Saurav while Nisha chuckled "okay"
After I got normal I averred "Mere haath ki coffee is best...I'll prepare next time onwards"
"Nobody can beat my coffee" Nisha stated tapping my shoulder with pursed lips.
"Challenge?" I smirked.
"Accepted" she said arrogantly.
"Guys isme kya challenge?" Sauro uttered.
"Mazaa ayega" dolly spoke while Nisha and I exchanged full on confident stares.
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After we all had lunch, Sauro went for a nap and Dolly went to visit one of her friend's house. You got something? (Smirk)
Hey I forgot to tell you that today's Sunday. Now you got something in your brain? (smirk) Exactly!
Aadat se majboor, I directed myself to Nisha's room. The door was open so, I stepped in.
Thud!
This was me kissing the floor.
"Aaah" I yelled when my chest and palms slammed hard the ground.
"Oh God! Tu to gir gaya!" I heard Nisha lifting myself.
I dusted my clothes sitting on my knees.
"Par tu to pehle se hi gira hua tha" she smirked standing with crossed hands.
I blasted with tightened jaws "How dare you!"
"Look I'm scared!"She mocked.
I stood on my feet and pointed a finger to her "Tune taang kyu adaai?"
"Tune adaai meri life me"
"Oh just shut up! Tere vajah se gira mai"
"Ab earth ki gravity tujhpe mar miti to isme mai kya karu?" She laughed.
"Oh really?"
She waggled her head up and down.
"Punge lene ka shauq hai naa tujhe?"
"Reserved especially for you" she showed me her tongue.
I smiled and side hugged her "Zyada ud mat,mai form me aa gaya naa to-"
She jerked off my hand over her shoulder "To tu pitega vo bhi meri chappal se"
I chortled "Coffee was awesome"
"Accha itni sweet lagi?" She grinned.
"Sweetheart ki har cheez sweet hi lagti hai" I smirked.
"Trailer tha vo, poori picture abhi baaki hai mere jaani dushman"
"Kya kaha? Jaani? Teri jaan hu mai?" I smirked.
"Dekh tu-"
"Accha chal chod! Ye bata treat me kya chahiye"
"You leave this city now"
"Done! Pichli treat k liye ho gya ab aur ye waali?"I asked coolly.
"Tu maan gaya hai...mukarna mat okay"
"Okay"
"To jaa"
"Chal" I smirked.
"What do you mean?"

"I'm ready to leave this city along with you sweetheart" I smirked.
"Phir paltaa tu!"
"Nope...tere saamne to hu yaar" I showed my teeth.
"Ye battissi mat dikha!"
"30 hi hai"I chuckled.
"Oh ha... wisdom teeth missing hai "
I sulked "Tere to milk teeth lagte hai"
"Atleast tere jaise yellow to nahi hai"
"Ha black hai naa tere"
"Tu aankh waala andha hai naa isliye tujhe black hi dikta hai "
"Kam se kam tere jaise akal ka andha to nai hu"
"Akal hogi tab naa"
"Kyu mere neend k dushman bane ho tumdono yaar" Saurav spoke drowsily.
"Sorry Jiju" Nisha pouted.
"Tu darwaza band karke kyu nai sota?"
"Mujhe aawaz nai chahiye...chaho to so jaao tumdono bhi alright? But kindly let me sleep" he spoke and left.
"Chal jaa ab"Nisha said.
"Kidhar?"
"Guest room me aur kaha"
"Abhi to bola Sauro ne chaho to so jao tumdono bhi eh?" I smirked.
"Leave!" She shoved me.
"Fine fine...Coffee challenge to yaad hai na?"
"You're gonna lose it"
"Galatfehmi me jee rahi hai tu"
She shook her head and I left her room.
You really think I would leave so easily? (Smirk) I peeped in again after some seconds.
And she was smiling still standing there looking at me with her hands over her waist. Smiling for what? I don't know...seriously. Though I cannot really be serious (smirk) but yaar I truly don't know the reason behind her smile...genuine smile rather.
I smiled back sheepishly and finally walked to my room. I too felt like sleeping so retired to bed.

(Smirk) No reason for my smirk... but I did it... Will see you when I wake up (wink).

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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Amazing update 👏 Amazing update 👏 Amazing update 👏
Just loved it❤️
Bhout maza aaya 😆
Kitchen romance cum fight 🤣
Coffee 🤣
And last their cute fight 🤣 teeth wala part was amazing 🤣
Bechari Saurav 😆
Kabir ko jaldi uthana na 😳😃
Please ek alarm bhi set kar do 😆

PS neeru one request tum bhi apna writing index banao please 😊
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb...👏
nisha🤣🤣sweetheart ki coffee kabir ko bahut accha laga🤣
loved the dialogues 😆
bas kabir ab jaldi utth jaaye neend se😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Amazing update 👏 Amazing update 👏 Amazing update 👏

Just loved it❤️
Bhout maza aaya 😆
Kitchen romance cum fight 🤣
Coffee 🤣
And last their cute fight 🤣 teeth wala part was amazing 🤣
Bechari Saurav 😆
Kabir ko jaldi uthana na 😳😃
Please ek alarm bhi set kar do 😆

PS neeru one request tum bhi apna writing index banao please 😊


Thanks so much Anmol🤗🤗
Feels great you enjoyed
Utha rahi use alarm baj gaya hai😆
Mera Index?😕 Ohkz will try😊
Thanks so much again😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Great Thanks Niha🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Glad you enjoyed it😳
Updating in some time
And epilogue next😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: angelanju

superb...👏

nisha🤣🤣sweetheart ki coffee kabir ko bahut accha laga🤣
loved the dialogues 😆
bas kabir ab jaldi utth jaaye neend se😉


Thanks so much Anju🤗🤗🤗
Glad you liked it😳😳
Utha rahi Kabir ko😆

Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago

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