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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: ___Neha___

awww
loved it 😳
can't do long comments !!
not well I m 😔
but it was just awsm



Thanks Neha😳😳
Miss you :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: tani_0209

Oh wow yar..!!

Xtrmly well written..
Ogle dy were fighting soo much..
Kitchen m n coffee pr dn dat pillow fight.
Totally nibir things.
Enjoyed dm Vry much..
But dat proposal..oh god dat jst made d update 4 me..
It was too good..such a light but romantic scene..
D way nisha z irritating kabir n kabir z being soo desperate 4 his sweetheart
Aww..too cute yar..
Waiting 4 d epilogue
Thanx 4 d pm



Thanks so much Tani😳😳
Feeling glad you enjoyed all the banter 😃
Updating Epilogue in some time :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awwwssoommeee update yaar 👏

First of thanks to nisha 😉 kabir ko jaldi utha di yaar vo 😛 only she can handle him very well 😆
Then the pillow fight 👏 awesome 🤣
Bechara Saurav 🤣
Then their fight for coffee was another treat for us 😳🤣
And their confession was cho cho cho cute 😳 cherry on the top 👏
Loved it ❤️
Want epilogue soonest as possible 😛


Thanxxxz Anmol 🤗
Glad you liked the confession 😳
Updating Epilogue :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94


Thanks so much Niha😳😳🤗
Updating epilogue 😃 finally😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Res for chap 5&6😊

Unress😉
Fighting for coffee 😆😆😆 fir pillow fight😆😆😆
finally dolly aur saurav successful hue😆 both duffers confessed😳pata nai I doubt sach me sadme me na chale jaye dono news sunke🤣
And that smile in the end smirk ki jagah loved it ...😃 aur waah kya baat h ... kabir ka hug hme b mil gaya 🤗 waiting for next part😆😃


Thanks Poornima🤗
duffers confessed😆
Updating Epilogue :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mkjr

Totally good plz update soon


Thanks so much dear😳😳
Updating Epiogue :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NiBirSS: Memorable Birthday

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"ILU kya ab bacche hone k baad bolegi?" I whispered with smirk.

"Mai to abhi bolne wali thi, magar tu aisa chahta hai to thik hai" She smirked.

God! This is really not done. Mai sabse bada K hu naa, then why does she torture me? Yeah... torture it is (smirk). It's our wedding day today and she hasn't spoken those 3 magical words yet to me.

"Ahem! Baatein nahi" the priest glared at us for the fourth time.

Our marriage rituals are going on and we two are conversing (smirk). So, we both bore a sheepish look to Mr. Panditji and he continued his chants.

"Phero k liye khade ho jaaye" the priest declared.

We nodded.

"Soch le, abhi bhi time hai tere paas" she mumbled to me while getting up.

"Kya sochna hai?" I asked.

"Dimaag to hai nahi phir sochega kese"she giggled while I glared at her.

Moving round the holy fire we continued our whispers.

"Sweetheart abhi bol le jitna bolna hai, Shaadi ho jaane de phir..." I smirked.

"Phir bhi tu kuch naa bol payega" she smirked.

"You just wait"

She went ahead of me and again we continued with our pheras.

"Saamne dekhke chal varna tujhe uthaakar phere lene padenge" I smirked.

She shook her head and I grinned.

After pheras we completed rest of the rituals and the priest announced "Vivah sampann hua"

We smiled at each other and got up. After taking the blessings of elders...bidaai followed.
Nisha happily embraced Dolly and Dolly was in tears. Breaking the hug, Nisha smiled at her cupping her face, "Aww you look so cute"

"Nishu tu bhi naa" Dolly lightly hit Nisha's temple wiping her face.

Saurav side hugged Dolly.

"Glycerine chahiye kya Nisha?" I smirked.

Nisha turned her eyes to me" Le aa, tere aankho me daal deti hu" she glared.

"Tumdono har time jhagadte ho yaar...Shaadi ho gayi hai tumhari, ab bas bhi karo" Dolly said.

"Suhagraat me mat ladna" saurav simpered.

We stared at Saurav and he gulped.

"Err...chalo chalo late ho raha hai ab" saurav beckoned us to the car.
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I closed the room's door and reached Nisha who was removing her earrings in front of mirror.

I pulled her to me colliding her back with my chest.I spoke adjoining my cheek with hers looking at the mirror"You rule my heart"

She smiled gradually looking at my reflection and then smirked "I know it better"

I wrapped my arms around her "Accha to mai Shaadi k baad kuch naa bol paunga uska matlab kya matlab tha?" I smirked.

"Mujhe laga hi tha ki tune abhi tak kaise nahi pucha? tere chotu se dimaag me koi baat ghusti kaha hai"she chuckled.

"Chalo tune maana to ki chota hi sahi par mere paas dimaag hai to! Tere jaise upar ka maala khaali nai hai"

"you misinterpreted my kind words Kabir, I meant chota sa dimaag jo dhool khaata rehta hai"

"tujhe sharam nai aati suhagrat me bhi lad rahi hai? Gadhi!" I tapped her head.

She elbowed me hard "Haa to tujhe sharam nai aati mujhse ladte hue? Teri bhi to suhaagraat hai!"

I smirked after a flich, "Sharamaane k liye aur cheeze hai naa"

"Tu sudhrega nai naa?" she chuckled.

"Paagal mai sudhar gaya to satyug chaalu ho jaega" I chortled.

She grinned and went to get rid of her heavy jewellery.

"Mai help karu?" I asked as her try of unpinning the necklace wasn't looking much successful.

She smirked, "Tujhe pareshan karne k alawa help karna bhi aata hai?"

"Bilkul" I smirked as I slided her hairs with my hand and deliberately brushed my fingers over her nape and just saw her closing her eyes. I grinned and teased, "current laga kya?"

She sulked and revolved quickly glaring at me, "Tujhe du asli ka current?"

"Ha ha mai to ready hu kiss k liye kabse"I grinned.

"Chal hat ab mujhe nikalne de ye necklace...uff" she swiveled.

She was still trying hard to unpin while I was trying hard to suppress my laughter. She stopped and gave a deadly glare to my reflection. And my laughter broke out.

"Kabir! Stop laughing or you gonna regret!"

Composing back I smirked "I never have regretted laughing"

"You will!" she averred now trying to remove the necklace over her head without unpinning it but it was too tight to be removed that way.

"Nisha nisha... aise mat nikal lag jayegi" I held her hands.

"Mai nikal deta hu" I spoke sincerely.

"Koi zaroorat nai hai" she stated highly irked.

"Itna kya senti ho rai hai? Ab shaadi kar hi li hai mujse to kya pachtaana" I smirked opening her necklace and handing it to her.

"Shaadi? Haadsa tha vo haadsa! Idiot!"

"Tune thaan li hai naa ki apni suhagraat ko barbaad karna hai" I chuckled.

"Aww you do speak something sensible at times" she mocked pulling my right cheek and surpassed me.

"O madam thankyou kaun bolega?"

"Great! Shaadi k baad madam bol raha hai...hmm sudhar raha hai...keep it up" she smirked landing on bed.

I sulked"You really don't know my devil side yet" I warned sitting on bed.

"Your every side, inch by inch, is devil only" she showed her tongue.

"Accha? Inch by inch ha?"I smirked going near her with pursed lips.

"Kabir" she grinned.

"Ha Nisha" I grinned getting close to her.

I ceased almost a inch to her, "You haven't confessed your love yet" I spoke in a very low voice.

"Kiss k baad" she spoke huskily.

I grinned closing my eyes to slash the gap.

And my cheeks burned...burned? Not with blush yaar! I got a tight slap!

Ow! Yaar! I'll kill her now!

I shot open my eyes in anger and soon I felt my heart beat drop after what I saw.

"Tu kya kar raha tha Gadhe!" Saurav shook me.

God! I just discovered that I'm awake out a beautiful dream and now it seems highly awkward with me being dangerously close to Sauro. I jerkingly moved away.

"Gadhe! tu kya kar raha hai mere bed pe?" I snapped at Saurav.

"Mai to so raha tha aur tune meri neend barbaad kar di... I understand bhai you love me but you needn't have to kiss me proving it" he smirked.

I slammed my hand at my head annoyed over myself.

"Jo bhi hai...hatt ab" I got down the bed.

Actually, I had slept nearly around 4PM as I was feeling very tired and woke up to this situation of almost kissing Sauro(smirk).It's dusk time now.

As I was leaving my room I heard Saurav, "Nisha kitchen me hai vese"

Sauro bhi naa! Kher beechare ko mai bhi kitna pareshan karta hu to janaab uska hisaab baraabar kar rahe hai. Oh! Are you people confused? You aren't...I know. What? don't give me a look! I enjoy such looks by the way(smirk). Jyada pareshan nai karunga aapko...vo nature Nisha k lie reserved hai. Let me wipe out the confusion (smirk). Actually we, I mean, Nisha and I, aren't ritually married yet.

Why? You are asking why? Do you live on mars? Dil pe mat lo yaar but if you live in India then you must not have asked that questioned. Oh sorry I forgot!(sheepish smile) You may be living out of India. Well...well...well...let me tell you truth of life...zindagi me har cheez k liye paisa chahiye hota hai...or bhai... mere paas nai hai abhi. Kisi k paas bhi nai hai(smirk). Yaar demonetization se meri shaadi sapna ho gayi hai ab aur kya kahu(sigh) But you know that I'm so smart(smirk), Nisha and I are legally married. And I'm so innocent you know, I always abide by laws (smirk).

Par Nisha poori ki poori bigad gayi hai...ek ILU k liye itna tarsaayegi ki pucho mat! Vese puch bhi loge to bhi ye hi kahunga mai(smirk). Our traditional wedding is postponed to a month by the way. How lucky I'm. 2-2 Suhaagraat!(Smirk) Vese pehli legally married vaali suhaagraat me kuch ho naa paaya because aapko mere bakaaya birthday treats to yaad hi honge. Wo chukta kar raha tha Nisha ko disco le jaakar. Aur subah 5 baje to ghar aaye the, phir kya karte (smirk), so hi gaye.

I reached kitchen and found Nisha chopping some vegetables. I sat yawning on the platform.

"Uth gaya kumbhkaran?" she smirked not looking at me.

"At least tere jaise raavan to nai hu" I sulked.

"Saurav Jiju so rahe hai abhi bhi?" she asked.

"Hmm"

"Vo shakkar ka dibba pass kar"

I did.

"Jaa! Yaha kyu baitha hai?"

"Raah me kisi ki" I spoke sadly.

"I didn't get you" she spoke confused.

"Of course you got me...whole of me! Entire me!" I said widening my eyes pointing myself.

"Kya joke maar raha hai" she spoke amused.

"Joke?? Bas ha ab bohot ho gaya...beta ab tu paas mat aana mere!" I declared and walked out of kitchen immediately.

I was about to fall down as Nisha jumped over my back.

"Kya kar rahi hai?" I uttered irritated and stood straight as she came ahead of me.

"Mere hubby ko manaane ki koshish" she chuckled.

"Vikram Betaal" I flared my nostrils.

She grinned, "Take it any way"

"Kaha tha naa tujhe paas mat aana" I folded my lips inwards narrowing my eyes.

" Kyu?" she pouted.

"kyunki wify tune naa abhi tak mujhe ILU nahi bola hai!"

"wo kya hota hai" she asked candidly.

"jitna seedha mai dikta hu utna mai hu nai" I warned.

"Kisne kaha tu seedha dikta hai?" she smirked.

"Matlab tu nai kahegi" I crossed my hands over my chest.

"Naa" she said cutely.

Cute? Seriously! Kabir! Usne tujhe ILU nai bola abhi tak! Bhool gaya kya? Cute bol raha hai use... You're such an idiot!

"Thik phir divorse k lie ready reh!" I stated.

"Nai milega" she smiled.

"Go to hell!"

"Why not? Surely! when you are already there" she smirked.

"Wify tu bada tashan de rahi hai?" I raised my brow.

"Tujhse hi seekha hai" she spoke confidently.

I chuckled, "Aise to apne beech kuch hone se raha"

She chuckled and then said," You never know"

"Accha?"

"Yes"

"Bata phir kya hona hai?" I smirked.

"Batau?"

I nodded.

"Humare beech..." she encircled her hands over my neck.

"Hmmm" I smiled.

"kiss hona hai" she said huskily.

She neared me but I put my hand in between our lips.

"3 magical words bol pehle" I demanded.

She moved back and sighed ,"okay"

She did a quick intake of breath and smiled, " 3 magical words...You are K!"

I gritted my teeth rolling up my eyes and in no time I strode out of the house. She tried to stop me , holding my hands, coming in front of me, pulling my t-shirt but I jerked off everytime ignoring completely. Nakhre naa mai bhi dikha sakta hu okay(smirk)

It was night about to struck 12. I had not talked to her, not even faced her since then. She was still trying to get my attention. Dolly and Sauro too urged me but I didn't listen to them. And here I'm on the terrace under the open sky holding twinkling stars and a bright moon.

I felt warmth and realized it was Nisha holding my arm and keeping her head on my shoulder.

Haal-e-Dil ko sukoon chahiye
Poori ik aarzoo chahiye


"Tu abhi tak jagaa hua hai Kabir?" She whispered.

Jaise pehle kabhi kuch bhi chaaha nahi
Waise hi kyun chahiye

She had deliberately worn the yellow long skirt I had gifted her as a token of honouring me to be her husband though just legally yet. Dekho kitna khayaal rakhta hu mai aur ye madam hai ki...

Dil ko teri mojoodgi ka ehsaas yun chahiye

"I love you" she said with a huge smile looking at me.

Tu chahiye, tu chahiye
Shaam-o-subah tu chahiye


She continued,"Thank you for all your love"

Tu chahiye.. Tu chahiye..
Har martabaa Tu chahiye

I highly wanted to smirk saying she has just got a glimpse of my love until now and the ocean of love for her is still waiting but Overjoyed with her words that ended my long wait, I brushed my lips on hers and grinned as she pulled it in a kiss.

Jitni dafaa.. zidd ho meri
Utni dafaa.. haan, Tu chahiye


She was going to tear the kiss but I didn't let her. Kitna pareshaan kia isne...thoda mera bhi banta hai naa yaar(smirk).
She kicked on my leg and I left.

Wo o...
Wo oo...

"Kiss thoda chota nai tha?" I smirked .
She smirked "Shukr mana ki kiss tha to"
"Meri baaho me aane ko taras rahi hai lekin akad to dekho"

"Mar jaye koi teri baahon me aane se pehle"

"Tub hi to mar miti mujhpe"

"Tu naa-"

She fumbled with her long skirt and I caught her preventing her fall.

"Dekha aa hi gayi meri baaho me" I smirked.

She lashed my arm chuckling.

With a faint glow on our faces, we gazed each other in silence.After some time,I smirked(I just can't control my smirks)"Aise aadhi raat chudaele aati hai bolte hai "

"Ha khadi to hai ek mere saamne" she smirked.

"Sweetheart you're not so sweet" I smiled lightly.

"Vaise I don't mind kissing a witch" she grinned.

"nor do I" and without wasting a second more, I locked my lips with hers.

We shared a passionate kiss for some more time(smirk). Later,we left for our room to sleep(smirk).
This much is sufficient I think (smirk). I hope you liked my signature smirks as well as my sweetheart. Arey mai naam kese le sakta hu yaar uska (smirk). Just joking...Nisha ne hi to introduce karaaya mujhe aapse. I owe her for this. Besides, she also owes me a lot of things like mere birthday gifts ka kya hua yaar! Treats le li aur gift ki baari aayi to...k kahinki! Kher vo to mai usse le hi lunga. Abhi ritually bhi to shaadi karni hai, you know(smirk).


And yeah thanks for listening patiently to the craziest events of my life that began with my memorable birthday(wink). It really means a lot to me(a very bright smile)...God bless you.

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*COMPLETE* Huge Thanks😳🤗❤️

Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Ye story bhi end ho gaya 😭
Kya yaar neeru 😭
I just always loved this story one of my favorite ❤️
Kitna k hai kabir yaar 😆
Dream and Saurav 🤣
Nisha bhi kuch kam nhi hai kness ke mamle me 😎
Cute end of the story 👏
Story complete kar ke koi fayeda nhi hai neeru mujhe or stories chahiye or vo bhi bhout jaldi or Beach os ko SS ya FF banao
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Ye story bhi end ho gaya 😭

Kya yaar neeru 😭
I just always loved this story one of my favorite ❤️
Kitna k hai kabir yaar 😆
Dream and Saurav 🤣
Nisha bhi kuch kam nhi hai kness ke mamle me 😎
Cute end of the story 👏
Story complete kar ke koi fayeda nhi hai neeru mujhe or stories chahiye or vo bhi bhout jaldi or Beach os ko SS ya FF banao

Thanks so much Anmol🤗
Meri sab stories me Action k alawa ye favourite thi😳
Ha thoda nasha sa chad gaya tha typing ka isliye ek saath likh daala🤣
Football baaki h 😆
Par vo baadme😆
Jab tak Journey of Love chalegi Football bhi chalega I think 😆
Jokes apart, I really thank you for liking the whole story 😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Niha0606

i loved the dream most

Thanks so much Niha🤗
Dreams 😆 I totally agree😆
Thanks again 😳😳❤️

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