NiBir TS : Snow White - Twist In The Tale *Epilogue up pg 25* (25/10) - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

Nisha is a doctor.. 😲
and ritesh also!!
Ghost ko khoon nai ata 😆
LOL kirti 🤣
Aww hamari mayus snow white n gusse wala prince 🤣
wat ??
all elders died in accident 😭
Finally also decided not to give up ... 😊
Everyone wants kabir to live in gangwal house only 😃
Aww nibir become good frnds 😳
Omg evil mother got to know abt princess being alive 😲
Ab kya hoga!!
Usne kabir ko drugs mila k diya sweets me 😲
Oh no!! Where is nishu??
And it was plan then wat is plan b and viraj kya karne wala h? I m scared 😵
He will kill him!!
Kabir thought it nishu who called him at poolside but no ye to viraj h!!
"Aap mumma papa k pas kyu nai gye?!" Uff dis dialogue sounds ...
Some psycho can say this!! Psycho killer 😡
Hopefully nisha reached there!!
Viraj is exposed!! Great 😃
LOL nishu forgot she is a doctor 😆
Aww nibir confession 😳
Vuraj got arrested n nibir marriage 😃
Kirti n ritesh kabir Ki wajah se mile!!
Sweet story loved it!! ❤️


Well thank you Neha 😳
I'm writing epilogue too of this hope you like that too 😳
Posted: 8 years ago
OK I will wait 😳
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

OK I will wait 😳
update soon


Will definitely try 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

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Anmol tu nai toh snow white ka gender hi change kar diya🤣

Superb ending 👏
Loved this ts ❤️

Viraj 😡 male gender ka chudail nikla 😆

Nibir bonding was lovely 😳

Beautifully written 👏

Ab epilogue bhi de de mere waale scene dekar 😉 please 😃


Thanks sujay 😛
Chudail 🤣
Dekhte hai epilogue ka 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333



Thanks sujay😛
Chudail🤣
Dekhte hai epilogue ka😛


Abey koi dekhte bhekte nahi hai tu degi epilogue bas but usse pehle mera request jaroor pura karna ok 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky


Abey koi dekhte bhekte nahi hai tu degi epilogue bas but usse pehle mera request jaroor pura karna ok 😉


Epilogue phele re or dekhti hun 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Epilogue



Nishtha was sleeping peacefully, but her sleep got disturb from some sound that coming from outside of the room as it was rule when a person try to sleep peacefully is close to impossible because it was nibir house and there will be always khit-phit. And what special occasion on this day so Nishtha can sleep peacefully. She slowly open her and looked left side of her bed as expected that kabir is the one who was making this noise but her prediction was wrong as kabir was sleeping peacefully beside her, then she turned her head at right to see her beautiful maasi but she was not there.. Nishtha immediately get up and run toward source of the sound.

Nisha was preparing breakfast, when she realize that someone is behind her. She immediately stopped her work, gulp down her saliva, she started praying, and slowly turn around hoping kabir wasn't behind her. She revived seeing Nishtha behind her but soon confusion take place in her peaceful mind as soon as she saw a smirk on nishtha face. She understood what her favorite bhanji wants, so she said " in 15 min... Go hurry up " that was it for nishtha.. She got ready in 15 min and escape with her maasi from the devil kabir according to nisha he was devil but he was not.

Actually Ritesh had gone Kolkata for a seminar and it's was one month tour so he was supposed to go with his family i.e. with Kirti and Nishtha but to his bad luck in that month nishtha were having exams so she can't go along with 1st Kirti decide she will live back but nibir insist her to go with Ritesh they'll look after Nishtha and after a lot request Kirti was able to leave Nishtha with nibir. And there Nishtha witness daily great war in the house and today same thing gone be happen. And she loved this war as after studying for long time she got some entertaining as nisha use to teach her for long long hours and between kabir always try to save her lil bhanji by taking nisha away from Nishtha for some kuchi-ku moment which were always ruined and fight start.

Nisha being cancer specialist she had an emergency at hospital, she come hospital with Nishtha without telling kabir as he'll not allowed her to do something like that as now days her day went full of tiring as she had to take care of 2 babies and her big baby always torture her, as he always want nisha to be with him.. So after her surgery she come back to her cabin and found nishtha asleep on the bed which were for patient's check up. She smiled and moved toward bed to wake up as they had to go back otherwise kabir come here hospital and will show her he is angry with her and not eat food until nisha stop taking her food or he will angrily glare at her and after reaching home be will fight with her that will more painful for as it always ended up to their sleepless night. The second case only happens when nisha work continually 6 to 7 hour without taking break for even food.

Soon she and nishtha was in car and heading back home. In between what come in nishtha mind she asked nisha " maasi sanchi ka naam kisne rakha Aapne ya mausa ? Ya aap dono ne milke ?"

Nisha smiled at this and remember her fight with kabir for selecting one name for their daughter.

*****
Nibir was in private Ward nisha was half sitting on bed as she had just given a birth to snow white's daughter and kabir was just standing in front of her and thinking hard for their daughter name.

9 mahine bhi ho gaye but tune ek naam nhi socha abhi tak ??" Said nisha angrily folding her hand across her chest.

9 months complete nhi hue hai abhi pura ek week hai 9 month complete hone kyunki doctor ne ek week baad ka date diya tha madam yaad karo " said kabir

Shut up... Toh kya hogaya tu ek naam bata mujhe.. Or kuch nhi Sunna hai mujhe.. Ek naam bhi nhi soch sakta... huh.. "

Arey tu bhi toh naam soch Sakti thi.. ?? "

Haan sab main hi karun tu toh hill bhi mat bas mota hota ja "

Aeee main mota nhi hua hun tu hui thi moti nhi moti nhi hui thi tu, tu hippopotamus ho gai thi.. He he..." He couldn't laugh further as she give deadly stare

Toh zimedaar kon tha meri us haalat ki ?"

Haan theek hai na.. Sab kuch bhul ja or ye soch hum princess ko kis naam se bulange"

Vahi toh main bol rahi Hun tune ek naam bhi nhi socha ??"

Arey maine socha tha par bhul gaya.." Kabir said scratching back of his neck but nisha glare him he accept the truth " OK main nhi soch paya.. Vo bhi Teri wajha se.."

Arey meri wajha se kyun ?"

Tere baare me hi hamesha sochta rehta tha.. Tera khayal rakhne ke alwa mujhe kuch yaad nhi rehta tha.. Bas teri or baby ki hi fikr rehti thi mujhe or main tujhe khona nhi chahta tha.." Said kabir looking down expressing his insecurities

Yehi chiz na mujhe pasand nhi.." Kabir looked upward found her frowning hard then she continued " har baar distract kar deta hai tu main lad bhi nhi paati tujhse... huh " she said with slightly smilingly and open her arm and ask him to hug her.

Kabir smile wildly and moved toward bed and hugged her tightly.

I missed you so much Nisha"

I missed you too hubby " said Nisha and pulled him in a soft kiss they kiss passionately till they heard their princess wailing. They both looked toward cradle which were beside nisha's bed. Kabir went and bought their lil princess to nisha as this time she need her mother. Nisha was trying to hush her by giving her warmth, but no use she was continually crying, nisha was taking her on lap, the holder her and swing her lil bit all the while he adore her as the shine of her face was different being tried but her face was glowing her eyes is reflecting her happiness. But she was not able to calm down her daughter, she looked at kabir with big eyes with "help-me-please " look. Kabir smiled widely then said "may be she's hungry "

Then nisha immediately feed her and kabir was right she was indeed hungry. While drinking mother milk baby fall asleep in her mother lap itself. Both of her parents were adoring her. Nisha looked up to say something to kabir but stopped seeing him as he was looking so cute adoring the baby now she can actually see his happiness after long nine months. He was too waiting for their child, he too want to be a father but he loves her a lot that he can't think anything above her. Everything thing in his life comes after her only, the time when they got to know about her pregnancy he was in full of tension it's not like that he wasn't happy but thought of losing his nisha always scare him out of wits and now he had responsibility of two he had to be careful, these nine months kabir had taken care of his wife perfectly and because of his precautions and care nisha was able to give normal delivery. Nisha was lost in her hubby's thought when kabir shouted.

Mil gaya.. "

Shhh shh.. Baby is sleeping " said nisha in low voice

Mil gaya naam nishu mil gaya " he said in low voice

Nisha smile wide and ask him what is the name in action

Iss duniya ka sabse khubsurat naam nisha " he said in dreamy voice

Haan kya naam?? "

Nisha "

Abey aaghe bhi bol "

Hum baby ka naam "nisha" rakhenge nishu samjhi "

Nisha give him "are-you-mad" look, then a thought come in her mind as she know he will not gone listen her easily so she said..

Nhi kabir ek isse bhi khubsurat naam hai kabir "

Nhi nisha koi bhi naam iss naam se acha nhi ho sakta "

Nhi kabir ye bhout acha hai "

Aisa kon sa naam hai bhai?"

Kabir "

Kya ??"

Kabir hi toh sabse acha naam hai " said nisha and now this time kabir gave her "are-you-mad" look

Tu pagal ho gai hai kya nishu hum ek ladki ka naam kabir kaise rakh sakte hai ?" Asked kabir and nisha's face palmed

Toh hum nisha bhi kaise rakh sakte hai pagal " she screamed at him

Nhi hum nisha hi rakhenge "

Nhi... tu pagal hai kya ??"

Haan hun tere pyar me "

Majanu bhi ho jayega Na do minute me agar bakwas band nhi ki toh.. Maar maar ke bharta bana dungi tera " said nisha

First kabir chuckled then " tu maregi mujhe machar kahiki " and again laugh

Teri toh.." Nisha shout and try to get up and then she realize she was holding baby and baby got imbalanced both nibir manage to secure her properly but when this action take place dolly who just enter in the room and kabir who was sitting in front of nisha both screamed loud "aaeee" which were loud enough to wake baby as her sleep got already disturb due to nibir's fight.

Dolly come forward and take a crying baby from nisha's arm and try to make her sleep again. While nibir gulp down as they know dolly don't leave them easily.

*****

After a while baby again fall asleep, dolly di come to us and scolded us and then she give the solution of our problem "babies name " and dolly di decided the name on our baby name ceremony " told nisha

Dolly maasi ne aap dono ko khub danta hoga na ??" Asked nishtha

Bhout nhi bhout jayada danta tha poore ek ghate tak vo chilai thi " said nisha in sad tone

Maasi sanchi ka birthday aa raha hai iss baar kya theme rahega ?"

Nishtha ka favorite cartoon character kon sa hai ?"

Kabir mausa "

Arey vo toh mera bhi hai.." Said nisha and both burst out into laughing

Mera... Favorite cartoon character hai Doraemon"

Okay toh iss baar ka theme Doreamon hi hoga "

Arey maasi pichli baar bhi toh meri hi pasand ka tha.."

Na babu pichli baar.. Chiko (UmAn's son and chiko name was given by her mother) ne chose kiya "

Chiko bhaiya ko bhi Tom and Jerry pasand hai.. 1st birthday Tom and Jerry then 2nd birthday doreamon kitna maza aayega na??"

Princess Kush na ??"

Haan maasi main bhout khush "

Maasi aapne or kabir mausa ne milke mera naam rakha tha Na ??" asked nishtha

Haan Babu aisa hi hai hum sab cousins ek dusre ke babies naam rakhte hai " said nisha and laughed Nishtha also join her

Acha Maasi abhi ghar me toh kabir mausa khub gussa ho rahe honge na ??"

Nhi toh... "Said nisha with naughty smile

Arey yaar mujhe ghar me hi rehna tha... " said Nishtha and frown as she missed her show



Back to nibir home


Kabir come in living room and sat on sofa was waiting for nisha, he feel like someone was staring him from long.. So he moved his eye ball right side and found sanchi was glaring him then he turned his face toward her and glare her back. Both father and daughter are same both want only one thing nisha's attention they used to fight with each other which used to daily soap of nishtha now days, and all the time winner was 2 year old sanchi (next month she will turn 2) but kabir was kabir, he had to be adamant and always do his antic on which nisha always melt, so no one losses as nisha love them equally... Sanchi is combination of both as she got same eyes and lips of nisha and rest she got from kabir. Whenever she frown of being angry her forehead got same linings as kabir had. She was a true fighter just like her parents in both terms, she had both a great spirit to fight with every problem as her parents had did and 2nd one is she is always ready to declare a war as her parents do everyday may it's love war or serious war but they fight daily. Today is one of those day when sanchi woke up and didn't found her mother, she started wailing and kabir who was already red in anger as nisha left without telling him. His all ager flied in air and from that time he was taking care of her. But he did one mistake as sanchi daily go angry with her mother for making her to take bath and nisha always tricked her by saying she is going to kabir and not talk her listening her mother threaten then only she forgive her mother and daily nibir together made her bath but today kabir alone had done that you know he is multi talanted as he is snow white just perfect and now sanchi is hell angry.

Kya haan??" Asked kabir glaring her

Gaa... aa.. nn... dee (gande) " she said and turned her face showing him that she is angry

Toh theek hai na tu gussa hai na... Great ab ye chocolate main akele khaunga" said kabir taking out a bar of silk and started eating it. Then only she come forward and take away chocolate from him. Then after a while kabir take out new bar of silk and that too sanchi snatch it from him.

Tab taachi ka (sab sanchi ka )" said lil girl

Sirf uski mumma ko chod ke kyunki vo dadda ki hai " said kabir with proud

Naa naa thif thaachi ki mumma (na na sirf sanchi ki mumma ) "

Bola na Maine nisha meri hai "

Naa thif thaachi ki (na sirf sanchi ki )"

Then both give deadly stare to each other and after a while kabir said " ruk tujhe baata hun " and moved toward kitchen to bring more chocolate and this time he was not going to give her.

When sanchi saw her father was coming out from kitchen with chocolate and started eating it and making her jealous, she intentionally throw her one of the toy in kabir's way without coming in his notice and to kabir's bad luck he slipped and fall down, while sanchi laugh hearing her laugh he turned his face to face her and she come forward and take chocolate from him and went away from him and sat on sofa and started her mission to finish her chocolate. Kabir after a while got up bearing the pain but today was his bad luck, he again put leg on sanchi toy and was about fall down when his Prince come and saves him, means nisha just enter in the house and saw him falling she come to rescue him but in order to save him they both fell down. And one toy hit kabir back he shouted in pain. Nisha immediately stood up and help him to get up. Seeing nisha this much close to her farther sanchi started crying to get attention of nisha. Seeing sanchi crying nisha try to go near her but kabir was in pain and she can't leave him too then her rescued come and take sanchi in her arm. Nishtha who had taken a shouting sanchi in arm got scared as sanchi was crying so loudly (hearing kabir scream she got scared as she thought it hurt her father much) due to her continually crying she started coughing hard. Seeing this both nisha and kabir immediately ran to her and kabir fastly taken her in his arm and try to calm her down by rubbing her back and nisha used her presence of mind and immediately bring cough syrup and made her drink after a while she was normal and still was in her father arm.

Kabir de mujhe " asked nisha for sanchi while kabir turned his face showing he is angry, nisha made face then asked sachi to come she too turned her face indicating nisha that both father daughter is in one team but nisha know how to tackle them.

Ohh toh kuch log gussa hai nishtha " said nisha

Hmm maasi " said nishtha and laughed seeing expression of SaBir

Yeh toh bhout achi baat ab pura din mujhe aaram milega yeppee" nisha said

Maasi bhout bhook lagi hai "

Haan chal na mujhe bhi bhook lagi hai... Kuch log ne toh akele hi chocolate kha liya hai "

At dining table nisha was feeding nishtha and seeing both SaBir was getting jealous and they looked at each other and talked mentally as I told he is snow white and sanchi is daughter of snow white so they both are very talented. Nodding their head in agreement SaBir moved to table and glared at nisha causing her to look at them. Nisha and nishtha give a understanding look to each other then again look back them.

Agar mere hath se koi khayega toh main gussa nhi rahunga " said kabir

Nisha and nishtha giggle and nisha open her mouth kabir feed both of her. Seeing this sanchi too made a small byte for nisha and offer her nisha eat that also. And soon there was war and nishtha was sitting popcorn with her hand as sanchi started making byte for nisha before kabir so nisha can her made byte and not let kabir to feed nisha by stopping his hand as she was sitting on his lap only and kabir was too adamant whenever sanchi stop him he also stop her in mid way like sanchi offer to nisha he hold her hand and bring near his mouth and eat it. By this they both started fighting and nisha was fed up with their fight she started eating by own. But she had to be peacemaker so she started feeding them. By this they had launch.

Soon nishtha and sanchi started playing as nishtha's exams were over yesterday only now she is free for sometime. All this while kabir had taken a good class of nisha while nisha told him it was urgent but he was so angry as she was having fever few days ago and he had strictly told her to not to work much. They had a good fight which soon ended up with their ultimate romance, they come back from their la la land when nishtha and sanchi come to them. They played with both of their daughters had gala time forgetting morning events.

Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww such a cute epilogue... sanchi is so cute ... their fight for selecting the name ...endimg up with a scolding from dolly was good😆 then at home ... kabir and the baby too cute😳 loved it 😃
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow yaar aaj hi vapas aayi mai aur aaj hi ye update bhi mil gayi mujhe! What a lovely coincidence!😃
Snow white and the 2 dwarfs 😉
Aur Prince(Nisha) to bhai Prince hai😎
Big baby caring liked it!
Aww snow white's princess 😳😳
Naming was 🤣 but Dolly helped😆😆
Dad-daughter scene was so cute😊
Oho SaBir👍🏼
Awesome Epilogue Anmol👏👏👏
Loved especially the pink part
I was reading with a blooming smile all through😃
Sooo nicely written👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Wow yaar aaj hi vapas aayi mai aur aaj hi ye update bhi mil gayi mujhe! What a lovely coincidence!😃
Snow white and the 2 dwarfs 😉
Aur Prince(Nisha) to bhai Prince hai😎
Big baby caring liked it!
Aww snow white's princess 😳😳
Naming was 🤣 but Dolly helped😆😆
Dad-daughter scene was so cute😊
Oho SaBir👍🏼
Awesome Epilogue Anmol👏👏👏
Loved especially the pink part
I was reading with a blooming smile all through😃
Sooo nicely written👏👏


Thank you neeru 😳🤗
I'm glad that you liked it 😳
Thank you so much 🤗 I m happy that my update make some one laugh 😃

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