NiBir TS : Snow White - Twist In The Tale *Epilogue up pg 25* (25/10)

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Bhout bhout time phele se main isse likhne ki koshis kar rahi thi par abhi bhi nhi likh pa rahi.. Yeh story snow white ki hi hai but isme ek twist hai.. Dher sare twist hai isme... Bade dino se idea mere dimag me tha... Socha aaj start kar hi dun... So guys do tell me how's it ?? Waiting for your reply guys please do comment and like..



Prologue


Muma muma " a Lil girl try to wake up her mom

Hmm... Hmm " said the lady and sleep again

Muma utho muma utho " said the little girl pulling her mom's hand

Lady woke up again and looked her little bundle of joy and pulled her into warm motherly hug..

Happy birthday princess " mom said and kissed her cheeks and fall sleep again by hugging her daughter

Princess pulled herself from her mother grip and again say in low voice as her father was sleeping beside her mother

Muma utho you promised me " said the girl pulling her

Lady looked at her with half eyelash closed and said " babu sone do na... Abhi toh tumhari birthday party khatam hui hai.. Sone do na " said lady in sleeping tone

Muma vo 3 baje khatam hui thi or abhi subha ke 7 bajh rahe hai get up get up " said girl pulling her hand again as the lady was facing her and girl was pulling her hand to bring her out from bed

Beta tum 3 baje soyi thi or hum 4 baje safai me time laga na " said lady try to understand her daughter

Tohbhi muma utho.. Aap mujhse pyar hi nhi karte.. You promised me aap mujhe snow white ki kahani sunaoge mere 9th birthday me or aaj main 9 years or 7 hours ki ho chuki hun par aapne mujhe story nhi sunai " said girl using her last trick on her mother by crossing her hand across her chest and puffing

Bilkul bilkul apne papa pe gai same to same " said lady looking her daughter's drama

Chalo na muma.." Said girl pulling her mother out from bed

Haan chalo ammaji chalo..." Said lady and try to get up from the bed but then realize her love of her life, the reason of her life was holding her tight on waist.. She blushed a bit

What happen muma get up " said girl not knowing the real reason behind why her mother is not leaving the bed as the duvet cover them, hiding the sweet secret from everyone

Yeah... " she said and slowly withdraw his hand from her waist so that his sleep won't get disturbed

Finally after 4 or 5 min struggling with his hand she finally come out from his grip and moved out with her daughter but not before covering her husband properly...

Both daughter and mom moved to kitchen..

Muma mujhe chocolate flavor wala milk chahiye " said the girl

Acha aaj chocolate chaiye kal toh Almond milk chahiye tha " said lady boiling milk at one burner and on other preparing coffee for herself

Mummaa " said Lil girl and pout

Okay okay don't go angry with your muma... Mums will do what princess want... Happy " asked lady to which Lil girl show her teeth which still haven't come properly

After a while both were out at their garden enjoying the morning with their milk and coffee respectively as the morning view of their garden as fresh air were kissing their faces making their hair also dance with leafs as the trees and plants of their small garden are flowing with airs, the weather was cloudy and coldy both muma and daughter love rainy season that why they enjoy it more...

Morning itna refreshing hota hai mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha " said Lil girl enjoy the pleasant weather outside

Tum subha jaldi uthogi toh pata chalega na " lady give a taunt to her daughter as her daughter daily woke up late and show her parents much much tantrum while leaving the bed

Acha ab aap mujhe snow white ki story sunao " said the girl try to change the topic

Okk come here " said lady called the girl to sit on beside as she was sitting in front of her

Acha batao tumhe real princess snow white ki story pata hai ??" Asked lady hugging her daughter

Haan muma pata hai " said girl embracing back to her muma

Toh same hi toh hai ye wali love story bhi " said lady

No cheating muma you promised me jab 9 years ki hojaungi tab aap mujhe snow white wali story sunaoge jiske bare me sab baat karte hai... Dolly mausi, sukku mama, umesh mama sab sab baat karte hai " said girl

Fine I will tell you..." Said the lady


To be continued...

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Wow yaar look at him... How someone look cute and hansome at the same time??" Said a girl

Haan yaar ye hai hi kamal tujhe pata hai he can dance and sing too and he is very nice person also, pata hai har week ye apne dance shows kamaye hue sare paise ek orphanage home or kisi oldage home me dedeta hai.. Koi burai nhi hai iss me na drinking, na smoking he is just perfect " said the another

What he don't drink ??? I don't believe it after all he belongs to a royal family " said the first girl

Yess darling, he don't drink.. Koi bhi burai nhi hai iss me he just perfect... Perfect for everything " said 2nd girl

Kya iss ka koi bhai hai I m pretty sure vo bhi itna hi acha hoga " asked the 1st girl

Did you ever find our hand had same size of finger ???" 2nd girl asked

Nooo " 1st girl said

Toh phir yahan aisa q ho sakta hai... Offoo listen uska bhai hai or vo handsome bhi hai par iske jitna nhi... He is Greek of god... Oh god look at his smile, I will die for sure, Or pata hai isska Jo bhai hai usme sab royal wale tantrums hai, like girl is toy to him.. Hamesha nashe me dudt rehna pata nhi jab bhi vo koi acha kaam karta Mann se karta hai ke nhi " said the 2nd girl

Ohh its like that.. ohh I thought iska bhai bhi acha dikhta hoga.." Said 1nd disappointingly

Ooffo Maine ye bola kya vo acha nhi dikhta vo bhi acha dikhta hai.. Rook main dikhati hun.." 2nd girl said and look here and there

There he is Viraj Singh Rathoor " she said pointing to a tall and handsome guy who was listening their convo from long
Yaa he is handsome but not like kabir " said the 1st girl nodding her head in affirmation


Hearing all this Viraj again feel insulted..
This was used to happen always. Every girl drool over kabir but never looked at viraj.. He was too handsome and rich but he was not perfect or good as kabir was.. He had lots of royal tantrums.. Like drinking, wasting money here and there, many girls being his girlfriend, too much stubborn like ungli rakh di toh vo chiz uski, etc..etc.. He also do good work in front of people but that all are fakes.. He do this things only for reputation and to get respect.. But as they say " truth will rise above falsehood as oil above water " same with viraj, his all truth come in front of everyone but as he was belong to royal family no one dared to say something but they don't respect him as they do for kabir. Because kabir was pure soul. Whatever he do anything his intention was genuinely to help the society, his always aim is he can help everyone out here in any way that he could done..


Enough... Enough is enough " screamed viraj and throw all the things which kept on dressing table with in few min his room was turned into mess like just few min ago a tornado come there

Kab tak akhir kab tak Hume ye sab sehna padega... Koi Hume utni respect nhi dete jtna kabir ko dete hai... Koi ladki hume nhi dekhti par kabir ko dekhne ke liye marti rehti hai... " said viraj and broke down

Hum nafrat karte hai kabir aapse bhout nafrat bhout jayada nafrat " said viraj looking at the photo of his and kabir's which were taken together and throw that too now he was on the floor which were hanged on the wall few seconds ago.

Ab bas... Bas bhout ho gaya ab faisla hoga hum ya aap... Or Faisla hogaya hum rahenge aap nhi " said viraj in rage.




Muma iss story me kabir snow white hai or evil mother viraj " said girl

Haan par viraj uska bhai hai.. Thoda changes hai " said lady

Kaisa changes ??" Said girl

Jaise Jo Dwarfs hai vo real dwarfs nhi hai.. " said lady

Of course muma aaj ke zamne me sach me thodi dwarfs ek kutiya banake jungle me thodi rehte hai "

Yeah ammaji ab main aaghe continue karun or beech me mat bolna phir main nhi sunane wali " said lady

Okkie " said girl with speeshly smile


There was only one way by which viraj can get what he want, can get girls all attention, get all the respect from others, can get whole empire state in his name with nobody he have to share with it, and the way was killing kabir yes kabir have to be dead..

So to fulfill his demand viraj planned a murder plan for kabir which will look like it was just an accident, viraj order his servant to kill kabir by taking him into the forest and locked him in the car and throw off the car in ditch..

They were poor people what can thy do expect following viraj instructions.. So they did what asked. As kabir was always ready to help everyone, viraj told him at Jaipur he had check the condition of old age house which was constructed by them, so kabir easily agree with that and went to Jaipur

One driver and two bodyguards went along with kabir to Jaipur from Delhi to kill him.

Aaj ka weather bhout acha hai na kyun vikram " asked kabir enjoying the pleasant as they were going Jaipur by open jeep but his bodyguard didn't give reply as guilt was overpowering him

Kya hua vikram ??" Asked kabir curiously as he always being friendly to his servant treat them like they are his friend and all his sevant freely talked to him

Koi problem hai kya mujhe bata vikram I'll solve if I can't then I'll try to help you " said kabir again as he can feel something wrong

This bring tears in vikram and other two's eyes as they were going to best person of this world as kabir always there for help them, talk and treat them properly never treated them as a servant of his, they can't do this, they can't kill kabir.

Santosh kaka abhi gadi roko " said vikram

The driver stopped the car at mid of their way " kya hua vikram tell me ?? Gadi kyun rookwai ?" Kaka ??" Asked kabir

Vikram gesture to other that its time to tell him the truth.. They tell him everything, kabir got biggest shock of his life his brother was planning to kill him... HIS BROTHER that two word was enough for him to shake his soul..

Bhaiya aap chale jao yaha she hum ye sabit kardenge ke humne aap ko maar diya " said vikram

Haan kabir baba aap jao bas chale jao yahan se " said driver

Yeh lo kabir bhaiya ye kuch kaam ayenge aapke aap is jungle se chale jao bas jao yahan se" said the 2nd bodyguard giving him some food

With that kabir ran from there after thanking them for help.. And trio put a mannequin and pushed the car in ditch, it was like an accident, viraj was happiest men in this world but in front everyone he showed fake sadness, everyone to whom kabir had helped were crying on this news..

On the other hand, kabir was lost in the forest, he was roaming their from last two days, he had eaten all the food that he had, he was aimlessly walking there now his body was giving up, at a place he thought he should kill himself, what is use of his life when his brother tried to kill him but, he's not coward he is belong to royal family they don't teach him to be a losser, that why he struggling for his life..

By walking he reached to the highway he don't know where he was. He was looking here and there when a car hit him..

In next min. He was lying on road, his head had hit the bonnet of the car, his vision was get blur but he can hear some voices there.

Yeh kya kiya tune ??" Said a male voice

Hayyo rabba ab kya hoga ??"

Sees kitna khoon aa raha hai.."

Sees nhi see..."

That was it kabir was completely unconscious, he was not able to hear anything or understand what's happing there.



Phir phir kya hua muma " asked the girl


Phir seven dwarfs ki wajah se snow white apne prince se mili " said girl father who come out from their house and cover both of his princess in one shawl

Good morning paa " said girl and kissed his father cheeks

Good morning jaan " said her dad and kissed her cheek

Acha paa aap ki bhi love story bhi aisi hi hai ??"

Nope..." Said guy

Hmm main kabir ki wajah se hi inse mili thi phir hum Milne lage or pyar ho gaya simple..." Said lady but cut off by her husband

And sweet " said guy

Ohh " said the girl

Acha nishtha.. Tumne apna vo wala gift khola jo kitchen me hai??" Asked nishtha's father

Kya waha koi gift tha ?? Main abhi dekh ke aai muma phir continue Karna okkie " said nishtha and ran into her house

Good morning Mrs. Jain " said the guy and hug her wife

Ritesh kyun jhoot bola nishtha se koi gift nhi hua waha toh " said lady

Offho ek bina gud morning kiye aagai or abhi bhi nhi kar rahi " complaint ritesh

Okay baba good morning " said lady and give a peck on his lips

I love you kirti.." Said ritesh his voice reflected pure love for her

I love you too " said Kirti

They hear their daughter is coming out they immediately adjust themselves and nishtha come out with a gift in her

Thank you paa " said nishtha and hugged her father

Thank you toh mujhe kehna chaiye princess " said ritesh licking his lips making Kirti blush.

So muma continue kare ??"

Hmm" said Kirti



To be continued...

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Part 2



Kabir slowly started gaining conscious back... His vision was again blur, slowly slowly he started open eyes but couldn't as light were fall in love with his hazel brown eyes so they directly coming to his eyes by making way through window, soon his eyes adjusted themselves with light and look here and there, try to understand where he was, what happen to him?? He feel a sharp pain in his head, he try to use his right hand and realize it was attached to the many wires which were connected to the glucose, then he try to move his left hand and felt some weight on it, he rolled his eyeballs only to forget his pain and lost in ethereal beauty.

There was a cute beautiful girl was sleeping on his hand, partly on his hand, her breath were fanning on his knuckles giving him goosebumps. Her closed eyes were making him desperate to look the secret behind them, Some strands were disturbing his view which were on her face, he want to remove the strands from her face but couldn't as his one hand attached with wires and other was under the beautiful lady's head. He slowly try to pull his hand without disturbing her but she got disturbed and snappily open her eyes and looked at him.

Realizing what was happened she immediately sat straight and looked the hazel brown eyes for which she was waiting to see from the time when she had seen him in bitter condition, when he was not in his sense.

Kabir don't want to blink his eyes for a second as the secret is reveal to him now, now he can see the black orbs of her, but as he was opening his eyes after two days and his head was also paining at a time he was unable to bear it he closed his eyes in pain and groan in pain holding his head only to make her attentive and start her work..

Hey are you okay " she said holding his hand, when she hold his hand he looked her blankly being lost in touch

Batao mujhe kahan dard hai..?? Sar ke alawa kahin or dard ho raha hai kya..?? Hmm ??" She asked

Nhi or kahin dard nhi hai " said kabir

Okay... " she said and injected him a injection and then said " don't worry ye tumhare head pain ko kam karega.."

Hello my self Dr. Nisha.. You'd my patient from two days... How's you feeling now ?? " said nisha sitting beside his bed on a stool and asked him such question.

I m feeling better.. " said kabir half sitting in front of her on the bed

Okay so I will ask you some questions... Please tell me your name " asked nisha

Kabir singh Rathoor.."

Umm tumhe yaad hai tumhara accident kaise hua tha ??"

Haan mujhe ek car me takkar Mari thi or phir sab blank hai.. Main kahan hun ye hospital toh nhi lagta.. Or log jinhon ne mujhe takkar mari vo kahan hai or mujhe yaha leke kon aaya..??" Kabir asked in one go

Okay okay first tum mere Ghar me ho, second jinhon ne tumhe takkar mari vahi tumhe yahan leke aaye hai " said nisha and took out her phone and dialed a no.

Hello.. Isko hosh aagaya hai tum mere Ghar aajao " said nisha and cut the call

Pucho kya puchna hai ??" Said nisha looking at him..


He was about say something when a small girl shouted

Isko hosh aagaya isko hosh aagaya " she screamed and try to call everyone in the house in no time there was 7 people standing there and looking at kabir

Tum theek toh ho ??" Asked a lady

Haan main theek hun... Aap Sab ne hi mujhe bachaya ??" Asked kabir

Haan..." said a guy

Kyun..??" Asked kabir

Everyone including nisha looked him in shocked as they don't know what to reply him as they thought he will thank them for saving his life but here he was asking the reason why they saved him.

Hey... Maine isse kahin dekha hai" said a young girl

Kirti tu kis ladke ko dekh ye nhi bolti hai ??" Asked the same guy who told kabir yes

Shut up you bandar.. Maine isse sach me kahi dekha hai.. Kya tumhara naam kabir hai ??" Asked Kirti

Haan.." Replied nisha

Kirti screamed in fear and say " ghost... ghost.. " making everyone startled by this everyone also got scared and try to run from there but nisha slapped Kirti arm and said " ghost ko khoon nhi aata hai " and try to clam down everyone

No no nisha iski death 4 din phele hi ho chuki hai Maine news me dekha hai " said kirti only get angry glare from nisha

Okay tu bolti hai toh maan leti hun " said Kirti being scared from nisha




Ha ha ha ... Muma aap ko sach me nhi pata tha kya ki ghost ko khoon nhi aata ??" Said nishtha between her laugh

Tumhari muma ka dimag kharb hai " said ritesh while laughing

Kirti made a hwww face then said " okay hasso tum baap beti main jaati hun"


No no muma main kuch nhi bolungi " said nishtha and put finger on her lips

Main bhi kuch nhi bolunga " said ritesh and he too put finger on his lips

Better " said Kirti and continued..




Vo jhoot nhi bol rahi meri death duniya ki nazar me 4 din phele ho chuki hai..." Said kabir and told his story to nisha and her cousins they all feel pity on him..

Issliye puch raha hun kyun bachaya mujhe marr jane dete.. " said kabir helplessly which make everyone sad and make one person hell angry and the person was nisha

Hello " said a new guy who come from out

Hey ritesh... please check him" said nisha boiling in anger but it was not reflecting in her voice

Tum ho yahan toh mujhe kyun bulaya " said ritesh

Haan yaar meri hi galti hai I m sorry... Jab iss insaan ko jina hi nhi hai toh him iska ilaaj kyun kare... " said nisha to ritesh making everyone gasp shocked including kabir as he never thought nisha will say something like this then she turned toward kabir and said " aaaee utho chalo niklo mere ghar se bahar chalo utho"

Kya kar rahi ho nishu bro aap " said the Lil girl who had screamed at first

Arey jwalu isse toh jeena hi nhi hai toh ye yahan rehke kya karega... Tumhe pata life kitni important hoti hai... Tumhe bhagawan ne sab kuch diya toh bhi tum nhi jeena cahate... Tumhe do baar zindigi chance di hai jeena ka phir bhi natak kar rahe ho... Kitno ko ye chances bhi nhi milte... Zindigi ki kadar Karo kabir har baar tumhe chance nhi milega..." Said nisha in rage

Par..." Said kabir and nisha shout at him again

Par kya... Kya par... Hmmm mujhe kuch sunna hi nhi tum niklo mere Ghar se abhi... abhi matalb utho kahi aur jake... " she couldn't complete as her cousins took her out from the room while ritesh and kabir astonished...

You checks him please " said the last girl who moved out from the room to ritesh

You mean check ??" Asked ritesh

Haan wahi " shout the girl as she was at some distance

Ritesh did what asked, he checked all the injuries of a sad kabir

When ritesh was leaving kabir's room one girl come there with milk in her hand

Thanks ritesh " said the girl

Hmm " he said with the smile and left

Hellos kabir, main dolly, ab aap kaise ho?" Asked dolly

He didn't reply and looked down

Ohh m sorrys kabir nishu thodi gusewali hai... Par galti tumhari bhi hai kabir tumhe aise nhi bolna chaiye.. You knows she is a doctors and she had seens many people dyings because of cancer and they all wanted to live but couldn't... Whenever she see some people try to commit suicide or don't want to live their lives for silly reasons, she become mad at them " said dolly and paused for a while then continue " pata hai iss ghar ki sabse badmas bacha nisha hi thi.. Koi fikr nhi, Jo jee mein aaya wahi Karna par ek accident me humare sare badon ki death ho gai, koi nhi bacha Chacha-chachi, maa-papa, dadaji-dadi koi bhi nhi bacha " with that she started crying and kabir put his hand on her shoulder

Main jab 16 ki thi tab ye sab hua tha... Humara toh sab kuch khatm ho gaya tha kabir, hume bhi marr jana chaiye tha par nhi humne apne zindigi ka naya aim banaya.. Apne maa-papa ka sapna jeene ka..."




Shhh kirti " said ritesh and hugged her tight as she also started crying remembering her those days when they had nothing

Muma " nishtha also jumped on her mother lap and hugged her

Sab kuch dediya Umesh bhaiya, dolly di or nishu ne " said Kirti while crying

Shh shhh Kirti... I know everything " said ritesh and rubbed her arm to calm her down

Dolly di ne apni padhai chodi taki hum padh sake, Umesh bahiya me vo farz nibaye Jo ek pitha (father) ko nibane chahiye or nishu 15 saal ki thi jab usne part time job suru kiya or apne dum pe doctor bani..." Said Kirti

Muma aap ro mat.. Mujhe nhi sunna hai snow white ki story.." Said Lil nishtha to calm her mother down

No babu I promised you na I will fulfill it " said Kirti

After a while she calm down herself and continue..




Tumhe bhi ek naya aim banana chahiye kabir... Bas nazren gumao sayad aass pass hi ho tumhara aim " said dolly after when she stopped her crying session..

With that she leave the shameful kabir back in the room... He had decided first that he will fight for his life now how could he can give up he feel very shame on himself, dolly words kept haunting him whole night and he finally make decision that he will never give up, he will fight with this world till his last breath..


Next day as it's was nisha's duty being a doctor to take care of her patient at any cost so she come to check kabir..

Look its my duty to take care of once you will alright then leave my house and do whatever you want to do.." Said nisha directly entering in his room

Kabir ask apology for his behavior and told her he will never give up.. And he respond or obey her every command..

Slowly time started flying... Kabir injuries also got recovered and bring him closer to this gangwal family whose head was Umesh and his wife Aman who owed a restaurant, because of many problems Umesh always be quite but its not that he don't have fun around, he always try to have some fun but circumstances never let him do that only to secure his cousins he work hard and talk less and only one thing bring him out of his serious world is his thadka of his life aman to whom he got marry when his all cousins begged him to do so... Then dolly cute and sweet lady of the house, caretaker of everyone including Umesh also being his Lil sister after adding aman in her list, now kabir was also added as new member of this list.. Then Kirti and sukku who was in collage and trying hard to help their brother and sister but that never happen as nisha and Umesh always told them to focus on their career without taking any tension of anything, then last but not the least jwala and bunty who was like small brother and sister for kabir and jaan of the house, only these two bring smile on everyone's tension face.. ( And these are 7 dwarfs whose responsible for meeting of nibir or I can say because of them kabir accident take place ).. And the prince.. Means nisha who was doctor and help everyone out just like kabir but she hard but to crack as she never go close to anyone easily and same with kabir, she will talk to him but they had limit talk because of two reasons 1st she was hell busy at hospital and 2nd nisha was confused about him whether to trust him or not..


Kabir was fully fit and fine then its time for him to leave the gangwal house but everyone protest, so Umesh decide they will vote who want kabir in this house or not.. Everyone raise their hand when asked kabir will live in this house to everyone including kabir shock nisha too raised her hand.. So no one has any problem it decide kabir will not go anywhere..

Time passes more kabir become one of the family member, who help everyone.. Try to make everyone smile with his charm which always work.. Now he also become a very good friend of nisha.. Not friend more than a friend, both know they have a strong feeling for each other as each others helping nature make NiBir fall for each other but never say anything as like this feeling or waiting other to confess his/her feeling first



Everything was going well but the day come when evil mother got to learn about snow white's existence means viraj come to know about that kabir is alive..

It was success party for doctors who started a new project of cancer and they succeed in this project and save many people by providing proper medicine at less cost to poor people and yes nisha was part of this project.. And unfortunately viraj's NGOs help them to do so..

Nisha and whole her family including kabir went to this party celebrate nisha's success as no one know him there as all are doctor and their families and no media was coming there as it was private affair media had already cover the doctors at award function, and viraj was also at the party he was unable to come at award function and about this nisha knows nothing if she had acknowledge of it she will never invite kabir to this party and viraj saw kabir in the party. And again his blood boiled seeing kabir alive and fit and healthy. First he hide himself from kabir so he can't come in notice of kabir.. He immediately decided he himself will kill kabir right now..


He ordered to his PA to bring drugs.. He did what asked bring some drugs from near Dispensary as no one dared to stop as it was order from Viraj Singh Rathoor.. Viraj mix that drugs in the sweet and ordered to waiter to give it kabir.. Unfortunately kabir eaten that sweet which was offer by waiter and waiter forced him to eat that sweet.. Plan A was completed..


After a while kabir got a msg on tissue paper which say "come out poolside" before he can ask who had given this waiter left.. He looked here and there try to look for nisha he saw all gangwals but nisha was nowhere to found.. He thought that nisha had called him that why she was not at the party may be she was waiting for him at poolside so he left.

Reaching out at poolside drugs has started working.. Kabir felt like his head gone a blast in few second but the thought nisha had call him he was bearing the pain..

Nisha... Nisha " called kabir but no response

Nishaaa... " he called her again but this time he feel someone behind him and he was sure it was not nisha as his vision was getting blur and he was losing his sense..

Aap Maa papa ke pass kyun nhi gaye kabir, vo aap ko bula rahe hai... Chaliye jaayie " said viraj as kabir turned to see who was at his back, kabir was not in his sense to reply anything

Kabir was standing just one step away from the swimming pool and viraj just put a finger on kabir's forehead and pushed her lightly.. With that a huge sound of splash of water and Loud scream of kabir name was heard by viraj. He turned to see who screamed saw there are many people.



Nisha come back to her cousins after talking to her colleague.. She saw viraj was going somewhere.. She immediately look for kabir but he was not there, she told about viraj to her cousins they immediately follow viraj and witness to this sight which squeezed nisha's heart..

She jumped in swimming pool in order to save kabir as he had Lost his conscious.. While cousins hold the criminal viraj from escaping now it was time for him to get punishment for his deed..

Nisha bring kabir out of swimming pool with the help of Umesh and sukku..

Kabirr... Kabir..." She rant continuously while crying and shaking him

In this tension she forget she is a doctor suddenly she stopped crying and closed her eyes for a moment to calm herself down.. After taking a deep breath she started pressing his stomach so water can come out from his mouth, Nisha sensed that kabir was not breathing so the next step to give him some oxygen.. So Nisha attached her lips on his and blow air in his mouth, then again press his stomach and again give him mouth to mouth breath.. After three trial kabir started irregularly breathing and cough hard..

Kabirrr..." said a happiest girl in the world as her happiness has no bound and with this she hugged him tightly.. Everyone looking them silently as they know what was coming as they were very well aware of nibir's feeling for each other.

I... love... you... nisha..." Said kabir in breathy voice as he was breathing heavily

Nisha main apni zindigi ka aim tujhe banana chahta hun..." Said kabir in low voice which audible to nisha and she said yes in the same position as kabir hide his face in her chest and wrapped his one arm around her and nisha was holding him close to her tight..

The dwarfs means cousins clapped for them and cheer them up..

With that viraj was arrested kabir and kabir's bodyguard along with driver give statement against viraj..

And within the ten days nisha and kabir also got married





Wow muma interesting... But one question aap ne bola aap kabir moosa ki wajha se mile kaise ??" Asked nishtha

See jab sukku ne kabir ko thokkar Mari thi tab hum kabir ko nisha ke pass legaye the uske hospital me..." Said Kirti

Or main or nisha ek hi hospital me kaam karte hai or uss din bhi Maine or nisha me milke kabir ka case sambhala tha " said ritesh further

Ohh I get it... Mujhe abhi nisha mausi ke pass Jana hai abhi " said nishtha

Arey itni subha subha kaise princess ??" Said Kirti

Please muma hum kahin or thodi na ja rahe hai... Nisha mausi ke ghar hi toh jaa rahe hai... Please muma " said nishtha with puppy dog eyes

Kirti vo nhi mannegi chalo ready ho jao main tumhe nisha ke ghar drop kar dunga, mera ek appointment hai din me " said ritesh

Fine " said Kirti giving in her daughter's demand

Yyeee thanks paa " said nishtha and hugged his father



On the other hand at nibir's house



Kabir stretch his hand to hold nisha on bed but there was nothing as nisha was not sleeping beside him.. He immediately woke up and scanned whole room, but nisha was at balcony, hearing her sobs kabir immediately moved to balcony.

When nisha saw kabir was standing at the door of balcony she immediately stopped crying.

Kyun nisha" said kabir coming in front of her chair

Kuch nhi hua hai mujhe kabir " said nisha trying to hold her tears

Ab tu mujhse jhoot bolegi ??" Asked kabir and with this nisha broke in his arm and cry her heart out

Kabir let her do that slowly pick her up take into bed room.. Made her lie down and laid beside her embracing her.

Kabir I want this... please mujhe bhi maa banna hai "

Nisha you were not strong enough to carry the baby "

Please kabir... sirf ek baar kabir " said nisha and again started crying bitterly

Nibir's marriage has taken place 10 years ago and they don't have any child because nisha was not strong to carry baby. And at any cost kabir was ready to allow nisha play with her health, fear of loosing always arise so he was not let her go pregnant.. He can lose everything but not her as he need her like his breath. But now nisha so wanted to be mother that she cry daily and request kabir for this..

Fine nisha we will take this step but one complication I'll abort this child " said kabir making nisha face lighten up

Yes yes do whatever you want but please at least we can try " Said nisha sitting up

Doctor se Jo bhi report aayegi main phele dekhunga phir tu change toh Karna mat " warned kabir

I promise you kabir Jo tu bolega main waisa karungi " said nisha with a smile

Kabir pulled her on himself taking her whole weight on himself, looking her closely and said " main tere bina marr jaunga nisha please I beg tu cheating mat Karna agar koi complication aaye toh mujhe batana please "

Nisha didn't say anything just kiss him pouring her love out in that passionate kiss and by this kiss she was promising him she will never leave him while kabir also reciprocate in same way, they were going to further when they got to know about that nishtha had come to meet them..

Nisha immediately go out as her favorite bhanji had come to meet her but kabir groan and stopped her to doing so, but nisha was nisha anyhow escaped herself from his grip..


Reaching near the door of their room she said " fresh hoke aana inhi kapdo me mat bahar aana kal raat party me bhi yahi pehna tha tu "



Nishthaaa " screamed nisha stretching her arm inviting her into a harm motherly hug

Mausi..." Said nistha and ran into her arm

Acha suni kya snow white ki story ??" Asked nisha as nisha made Kirti to promise nishtha that at her 9th birthday she (kirti) will tell nishtha story of their personal snow white

Haan suni na khub maza aaya " said nishtha

Good toh kuch seekha ??" Asked nisha

Ummm..." Nishtha made confuse face

Haan babu batao kya seekha " added Kirti

Nishtha me seekha never give up kyun nishtha...??" Asked kabir

Haan moosa " said nishtha and jumped on him and kabir picked her up in his arm and nishtha try to search something in pocket and finally she got her chocolate and taking from kabir she ran behind nisha so her mother can't scold her.

Nishtha... What is this.." Started Kirti but kabir cut him off

Sshh sali shaiyiba.. Let her enjoy " said kabir

Par jiju..." Again start Kirti but this time nisha stopped her

Ab tu itni badi ho gayi hai haan ?? hume humari bhanjhi se pyar karne se rokegi ??" Asked nisha

Kabhi nhi nishu main kabhi bhi tujhse badi nhi ho sakti " said Kirti..


Not again muma " said nishtha

With that Nibir enjoy their day with nishtha and kirti, spending time with them make nibir more eager to have baby as one baby had lighten up their two membered house..

At evening ritesh come to pick nishtha and Kirti but nibir insists him to have dinner with them.. After getting scolding from nisha ritesh agree and have gala time with them..


Aaj kitna maza aaya na.." Said nisha coming to bed

Hmm " said kabir adjusting him self on bed

Toh hubby... kya hua tu sad kyun hai" said nisha after adjusting herself in his arm and playing with tee button

I m sorry nisha" said kabir

Tera affair toh nhi chal raha hai na "

Kya... Tu pagal hai kya nisha "

Toh phir sorry kyun bol raha hai ???"

Tu bhi na nisha... Main sorry iss liye bol raha tha kyunki itne saalon se tu pregnant hona chahti hai par..."

Par tu har baar precaution leleta hai... Tu jobhi karta hai mere liye karta hai toh main naraz kaise ho sakti hun "

So let's bring symbol of our love into this world... Or uske liye Jo morning me ho raha tha use continue Karna padega " said kabir with a smirk as nisha was blushing

Nisha humari shadi ko 10 saal hogaye or tu abhi bhi itna sharmati hai ??" Asked kabir touching her red cheeks

Nisha didn't say anything slapped his hand and hugged him tight.. And kabir also wrap his arm around her like protecting her. Then they shared a blissful moment with each other... What had gone in past they can't correct it but they can make their future best..

The end..

Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Yeh waale story pe toh quick unres hogaya 😎

Finally yeh story start hogaya

Awesome story 👏
Dekh mujhe msg box ka history check karna pada phir yaad aaya story kya tha 😈

Aur ab toh specially tere stories pe no guessing because jo sochta hu vo nahi hota hai isse acha dimag ko aaram do 😎

Toh update soon

Edited by Sujayricky - 8 years ago
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Finally Unres🤣

Read the prologue & part1 together😉

Prologue padke toh mujhe laga vo bachi ki mumma Nishu hai & papa Kabir...Nisha apni beti ko uski aur Kabir ki luv story sunaegi😳

But part 1😲😲
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Ritesh-Kirti??😲...lile really🤣🤣

Yaar tere updates unpredictable hoti hai🤣🤣

Mujhe kuch nhi sochna🤣🤣

Just update soon🤣🤣

So sorry for late comment😭
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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yeh kya hai😡how excited i was to know the story par tumne start hi nahi kiya😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
imagine myself the lil girl...i was sooo excited
abb mujhe nahi batha mujhe story padna hai padna hai padna hai padna hai padna hai padna hai padna hai padna hai😳
jaldi abhi update kar😊
lil girl is nibir's daughter😃 and kabira sleepind holding nishu waist
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Nice start ... update soon 😊 mee too curious like the little girl ... aur mumma papa ka naam nai bataya tumne par iss bar mujhe pata h 🤣🤣 aur jldi update dena😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww...
Lil grl z soo cute..I hope ull reveal her name soon
N NiBir to
Kabir holding her waist 😳😳
M sure ye NiBir ki past story hone vali h..
Waiting to kno it
Update it soon plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anmol awesome start, good one.
Congrats on the new story.
Jay thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome
loved it
update soon
thnx for pm

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