Withered Roses || Nibir TS|| CHAP 2 -PAGE 14 - Page 13

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Superb update abm👍🏼
The starting was perfect😊 and full of blushing😳
Der morning kiss😳
Bath tub😳 m blushing verry much yr...
Cafe...the way nibir met at first time...
Then wo stranger...mujhe ek baat samajh me nhi aai...wo itni baar unhe bola run away...to unhone koi step kyu nhi lia...jabki dey know dat der family were in politics...to ek baar to maan lete aur kahin aur chale jate...
Den kabir ne nisha k sath jo behave kia i fdlt so hurted...
Den nisha ne us stranger ko fir se dekha n wo marte marte bola to bhi undono ne ise seriously nhi lia...
Den kabir nishu ko akele chhod k chala gya jab ki pta h its dangerous for her...
Uska mood to wo ek baar abroad chale jate to bhi wo thk kar sakta tha ya uske sath time bita ke...jabki uska use akele chhod k jana use itna dara chuka tha yr...

Then after that jo incident hua...
I m crying crying n crying... 😭 kuch bolne ki haalat nhi h meri...
It was so painful yr...
Mujhe to iska nxt part padhne pe bhi dar lag ra...

The way u hv written dis hatts off to uh...u did justice to der ech n every emotions 👏 👏

after a very long tym...
it was fabulous..
all d scenes were superb..
waiting eagerly for d nxt part

Superb update
loved it ... beautifully written


thnks for pm

thankoo janvi, nimi, shruti and anu!😳

Well hats off to you for really writing it so well that make the readers feel the lurking terror👏👏

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Well hats off to you for really writing it so well that make the readers feel the lurking terror👏👏

The prologue itself held my breath like anything!

I liked different emotions displayed in different chapters NiBir's love was outstanding 😳

Butterfingers😆😆

But seriously it is very 😳scary

Kabir's friend is really helping them out nice of him

Their trauma is really very very very emotional 😭😭😭

Commendable work 👍🏼

Waiting for next chapter expecting a high roller coaster ride of emotions again

That😳 was just awesome...👏👏..such a romantic one!!!

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

That😳 was just awesome...👏👏..such a romantic one!!!

😳😳

and the suspense...hope nisha KO much na ho,...pls cont the soonishhh

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

abbe kuchlikhne to de🤣🤣

gaon basa ni, roopa aagayi🤣

Meri jaanu ki post PE res karna is my JSA🤣