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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
that was christ only... ha i recalled christian at one or two places but still... waise bhi i like calling him christian only... no short forms 😉

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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Res res... Too bad Annie phele update Karna tha na 😔 par koi nhi... I love you🤗
Unres

The starting was awesome... But I don't like end...
Please iss story ki happy ending kardo please please Annie..
I don't like nibir to bear this 😭😭 I don't want their lil world come to crash 😭

at first, thankoo!😆😆😆

second, the story can't be changed anmol, it is based on that concept only! it is meant to come to an end like that! don't worry there's another part left! i'll see if anything could be done in that but that won't be a happy ending or maybe. but i'll definitely try to compensate for this!😆

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Anmol

@Anmol333

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

at first, thankoo!😆😆😆
second, the story can't be changed anmol, it is based on that concept only! it is meant to come to an end like that! don't worry there's another part left! i'll see if anything could be done in that but that won't be a happy ending or maybe. but i'll definitely try to compensate for this!😆

I know Im going to get this reply only... I know concept can't be changed, its okay, and yeah I will take compensate with interest 😆

I forget to add at my last comment because I was sad... One request Annie please please complete your two pending stories i.e. ek tha deewana and passion of my love, waiting for them to be completed from long time please if you get time then complete them 😊

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poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

What an update👏 full of rollercoaster of emotions... the starting was so beautiful and their happiness but towards the end so painful😭... waiting for the next part ... it was worth waiting... awesome job 😊

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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Anmol333

I know Im going to get this reply only... I know concept can't be changed, its okay, and yeah I will take compensate with interest 😆

I forget to add at my last comment because I was sad... One request Annie please please complete your two pending stories i.e. ek tha deewana and passion of my love, waiting for them to be completed from long time please if you get time then complete them 😊

😆😆😆 okay

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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: poornima_15
What an update👏 full of rollercoaster of emotions... the starting was so beautiful and their happiness but towards the end so painful😭... waiting for the next part ... it was worth waiting... awesome job 😊

thankoo😳😳

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tanisha

@tani_0209

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Dat was way beyond Wat I can evn complimnt ..

I'll perhaps Nt say dat i loved it cz Wat happened at d end though

was expected bt was Nt desired..

I nvr wanted dat to happen bt dat is was ur stories demand so

Nyways it had such a beautiful strt😳👏

Later took sum dark turns

Frankly I dint like d part wen he pushed her soo hard dat she landed on d ground n also he left her all alone dere..I mn he love her soo much Hw can he be soo rude???

Othervise evrythng fell at ryt place.. perfect part..!!

N if u really took 2 months dn trust me it was wrth it..

Superfantastic update😭🤢

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oh nakhrewaali

@oh_nakhrewaali

Viewbie

+ 38

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Hey ram!😲
Yeh kya kar daala? 😒
Awesome update👍🏼

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Annie Annie Annie😲...what an update👏👏

Starting main toh I was blushing☺️...Kabiraa bhi na☺️...subha subha start ho gaya☺️
Washroom scene☺️☺️
Their convo😳
It was just awww😳

But then cafe scene😲
Virajj??😕
That unknown guy😕...Haaye daar lagna vahi se start ho gaya

NIBIR fight...I know Nishu rude thi but Kabiraa ko bhi aisa nhi karna chahiye tha😭

Then hotel corridor scene😲...tab toh daar 10 guna bad gaya

Then again a beautiful scene😳...Nishu preggy☺️

But but but ...phir jo kuch bhi hua😲😭

Kya zarooraat thi Kabiraa ko Nishu ko akele chod k jane ki😭...n Nishu ne darwaaza kyu khola😭

Vikram😡😡

Only I know how I read the last part😭...pad bhi lia toh comment nhi kr pai😭...isiliye late comment kr rhi hu😭

Pata nhi next update kaise padungi😭

But one thing I want to say...Annie I so luv u for writing something like this...the update had everything in it...happiness, fear,sadness...everything...I dunno kaise likhti hai tu aisa👏👏

Do write more n more n more n more n update soon😳