Withered Roses || Nibir TS|| CHAP 2 -PAGE 14 - Page 12

Originally posted by: tani_0209

Dat was way xbeyond Wat I can evn complimnt ..

I'll perhaps Nt say dat i loved it cz Wat happened at d end though

was expected bt was Nt desired..

I nvr wanted dat to happen bt dat is was ur stories demand so

Nyways it had such a beautiful strt😳👏

Later took sum dark turns

Frankly I dint like d part wen he pushed her soo hard dat she landed on d ground n also he left her all alone dere..I mn he love her soo much Hw can he be soo rude???

Othervise evrythng fell at ryt place.. perfect part..!!

N if u really took 2 months dn trust me it was wrth it..

Superfantastic update😭🤢

👏

Thankoo .n sorry 😕 😆

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Hey ram!😲
Yeh kya kar daala? 😒
Awesome update👍🏼

Thankoo betu 😃 😳

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Annie Annie Annie😲...what an update👏👏

Starting main toh I was blushing☺️...Kabiraa bhi na☺️...subha subha start ho gaya☺️
Washroom scene☺️☺️
Their convo😳
It was just awww😳

But then cafe scene😲
Virajj??😕
That unknown guy😕...Haaye daar lagna vahi se start ho gaya

NIBIR fight...I know Nishu rude thi but Kabiraa ko bhi aisa nhi karna chahiye tha😭

Then hotel corridor scene😲...tab toh daar 10 guna bad gaya

Then again a beautiful scene😳...Nishu preggy☺️

But but but ...phir jo kuch bhi hua😲😭

Kya zarooraat thi Kabiraa ko Nishu ko akele chod k jane ki😭...n Nishu ne darwaaza kyu khola😭

Vikram😡😡

Only I know how I read the last part😭...pad bhi lia toh comment nhi kr pai😭...isiliye late comment kr rhi hu😭

Pata nhi next update kaise padungi😭

But one thing I want to say...Annie I so luv u for writing something like this...the update had everything in it...happiness, fear,sadness...everything...I dunno kaise likhti hai tu aisa👏👏

Do write more n more n more n more n update soon😳

Thankooo roop! 😳 😉

Anniee Annie annieee 😭 😭 yeh kya likh diya 😭 😭
hayee starting was sooo Damn beautiful 😳 😳
washroom seq 😳 mujhe yeh 50 shades se inspired kyun lag raha hai??yeh washroom seq 🤣 😳 naughty girl 🤣
cafe scene 🤔 I do no war to say 🤔 Dr stranger. 😕 Nibir in danger 😕
kabira 😭 how can he do dis to hr 😭 😭
And dt corridor scene 😕 😳 my good I literally had goosebumps.nisha's situation 😕
Okay soo dy r from political background
last scene 😳 speechless m just speechless 👏 👏
watt a scene 👏 👏 my godd 👏 hw do u do dis Annie? ?? 👏
nisha's instincts got real 😭 really really felt baad 😭 😭
I luvvv u fr disss 😭 😭
dt was soo bloody emotional as well as thrilling 😭 👏
luved it ❤️

I loved it totally..it's written really beautifully..

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Res
unres

god annie

superb this was👏

a roller- costar of emotions

you started by making us blush and happy cozy moments😳

then the atmosphere kept becoming dark and dangerous

misunderstandings fights warnings😭

some hope some happiness

and again darkness total darkness

waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: Amina...

O MY GOD !!!!!

ANNIE !!! IT WAS INCREDIBLE ... AMAZING ...!!!
OUT OF WORLD ...!!!
MY WORDS ARE DECEIVING ME DEAR ... IT WAS SOMETHING ELSE YAAR ...!!!
... WONDERFUL ...
AND THE END ... IT WAS SOOO PAINFUL ... FELT SO BAD FOR NIBIR ...!!!
BUT I CAN'T HELP MYSELF ... I AM STILL HOPING FOR A HAPPY ENDING ... I M HOPLESSLY IN LOVE WITH HAPPY ENDINGS ... BUT ITS QUITE OBVIOUS FROM THIS UPDATE THAT I M NOT GOING TO GET ANY ...

AND LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST ... THE WAY YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT ... ITS AMAZING ... REALLY LOVED IT ...
THE WAY YOU WROTE THE STARTING SCENES ... IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL
AND I M REALLY AMAZED THE WAY YOU WROTE THE ENDING ... YOU ARE A STRONGE GIRL DEAR ...!!!

LOVED IT TO THE CORE ...!!!
CONTINUE SOON PLEASE ...!!!

Originally posted by: Shats

Anniee Annie annieee 😭 😭 yeh kya likh diya 😭 😭
hayee starting was sooo Damn beautiful 😳 😳
washroom seq 😳 mujhe yeh 50 shades se inspired kyun lag raha hai??yeh washroom seq 🤣 😳 naughty girl 🤣
cafe scene 🤔 I do no war to say 🤔 Dr stranger. 😕 Nibir in danger 😕
kabira 😭 how can he do dis to hr 😭 😭
And dt corridor scene 😕 😳 my good I literally had goosebumps.nisha's situation 😕
Okay soo dy r from political background
last scene 😳 speechless m just speechless 👏 👏
watt a scene 👏 👏 my godd 👏 hw do u do dis Annie? ?? 👏
nisha's instincts got real 😭 really really felt baad 😭 😭
I luvvv u fr disss 😭 😭
dt was soo bloody emotional as well as thrilling 😭 👏
luved it ❤️

Originally posted by: neha_zamia500

I loved it totally..it's written really beautifully..