NIBIR TS - One last night (updated) last part - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Shock laga laga laga mujhe 😲 😲
That's not fair mansi sare naughty vibes tod diye 🄺
But fabulous outstanding update šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Story had turned very very interesting...
Do update soon...!!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Yeh kya tha? ???
Really really unexpected ...u r such a big big k mansi. ...last scene tho meri hosh uda diya...kabira know everything. ...then why he is not coming infront of her ...ohhh god many many many questions ...
Continue soonishhh
And Thanku for pm
It was just amazing mind blowing as usual...
U have such a great talent dear...:):)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Hell, how can you be so cruel?
Kya socha tha kya mila huh!
Anyways jo bhi tha acha hi tha.. except Kabir's decision to hurt her like this, Men! Why don't they confess easily😔 cont soon and study well šŸ˜‰
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Hell, how can you be so cruel?

Kya socha tha kya mila huh!
Anyways jo bhi tha acha hi tha.. except Kabir's decision to hurt her like this, Men! Why don't they confess easily😔cont soon and study well šŸ˜‰

m not cruel... m evil 😈
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
It is really amazing...so damm beautifully written every scene!!
Last part was a shock.
Wonderful updatešŸ‘
Pls pls continue soon...eagerly want to know wht happens next😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Mansi kaise karti ho tum aisa??šŸ˜†...1st part padke na jaane maine KYA KYA KYA soch lia tha k 2nd part ye hoga, vo hogašŸ˜†...but ye toh surprising update tha ekdumšŸ˜²šŸ˜†

NIBIR's first day in their house scene was so damn goodšŸ˜‰ā˜ŗļø

But Kabiraa hurt Nishu??😲😭

Stepping out of the shower i scanned my body. Soon my finger graced the places where i still have his imprintson me. The big scar down my collarbone in a vertical position, which still stood proud claiming me as his and the one right beside my shoulder almost covering half of my arm. There are some more of them on my body... somewhere on my legs and my back. But the one who stood alone is on my belly right below my ribs on the left. That one is beauty. I adore them... they are his gifts to me... the claim he has from day 1. They pained me when he gave them but now they give me pleasure to possess them
This part is written so so so so so beautifully MansišŸ‘šŸ‘

Kabiraa roz raat ko ata hai Nishu k so jane k baad😳

Update soon Mansi please😊

PS= but Mansi one thing...kya ye sach me 3S hai?? I mean next part will be the last part??
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

m not cruel... m evil 😈

Nope you are cruel! You did the same with LBLD! 🄱
You give hopes then you shatter them 😔
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Mansi kaise karti ho tum aisa??šŸ˜†...1st part padke na jaane maine KYA KYA KYA soch lia tha k 2nd part ye hoga, vo hogašŸ˜†...but ye toh surprising update tha ekdumšŸ˜²šŸ˜†

NIBIR's first day in their house scene was so damn goodšŸ˜‰ā˜ŗļø

But Kabiraa hurt Nishu??😲😭

Stepping out of the shower i scanned my body. Soon my finger graced the places where i still have his imprintson me. The big scar down my collarbone in a vertical position, which still stood proud claiming me as his and the one right beside my shoulder almost covering half of my arm. There are some more of them on my body... somewhere on my legs and my back. But the one who stood alone is on my belly right below my ribs on the left. That one is beauty. I adore them... they are his gifts to me... the claim he has from day 1. They pained me when he gave them but now they give me pleasure to possess them
This part is written so so so so so beautifully MansišŸ‘šŸ‘

Kabiraa roz raat ko ata hai Nishu k so jane k baad😳

Update soon Mansi please😊

PS= but Mansi one thing...kya ye sach me 3S hai?? I mean next part will be the last part??

yup next paet will be the last...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Niya_789


Nope you are cruel! You did the same with LBLD!🄱
You give hopes then you shatter them 😔

u will never forgive mw for lbld... will u?... ue ab to ye bhi usi line m h lagta h..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

u will never forgive mw for lbld... will u?... ue ab to ye bhi usi line m h lagta h..

I'll never forgive you for LBLD! šŸ¤”
Maybe I'll forgive you for this one, seems to be inspired by Fifty! Is it?

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