NIBIR TS - One last night (updated) last part

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Niya_789
This reminds me of Fifty shades a bit😳
Anyways cont soon and study well🤗

bhabhiii... dont remind me of 50 shades pwleasee...

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

I have readed it 5 to 6 time it is sooo hooottt ☺️

Waiting for next part... Update soon ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago

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oh nakhrewaali

@oh_nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Amazing start Mansi👏
yaar, tum pov form waale stories itne acche kaise likhti ho?😲
training do na yaar mujhe😆

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Amina...

@Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesome Start Mansi ...!!!
Very Well Written ...!!!
Loved It ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!

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Snow12345654321

@Snow12345654321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Fabulous start

Very interesting one...loved it

Eager to know wht happens next😃

Do continue soon...😊

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Mind blowing start 👏
Really loved it
Nibir talks was really 😳
Beautifully written
Thanks for pm

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

superb start mansi
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

That was one awesome start mansi!

I feel for Nisha here! 😆 coz that's how most of my mornings start too! 🤣 Ofcourse minus the Starbucks and bumping into someone like kabira 😆

Anyways back to the update!

Lovely start! Nisha's monologue was too good!

Lol at that barista guy! and her thoughts about him 😆

Now coming to her bump and drool part, you have written it really well! And i could actually imagine her ogling at him!

Kabir checking her out and she feeling frustrated that he's not making the first move, and all that followed was awesome! 👍🏼

Liking this potrayal of Nisha! So full of sass! 😉

Kabir and gun? Seems something interesting is on our way!

Excited to read more of it!

Do continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

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Soha

@Crazysoha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Awesome superb mind blowing start 👏
Oye hoyee mamla garam ha aag dono side Se barabar ki lagi ha 😉 😆
Loved it Mansi 😳
I'm waiting for the next update

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Thank u k's...🤗 as i dont have much time.. i cant reply u all individually but always remember u people are way imp. For me

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