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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: arviabhigya
res😆

🤣🤣🤣 pehle waale to unres kardoo!

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sam_premc

🤣🤣🤣 pehle waale to unres kardoo!

unres ka koi bharosa nahin😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Very beautiful Os Annie! ❤️

Wonderful start! Their growing feelings for eachother but them trying to supress it thinking the other has no feelings towards him/her was beautifully portrayed by you! 👏

The KN moment at the window was so adorable! That hug, her pecking his cheek, him being playful, him asking her to go out with him for the last time, all were such lovely moments

The next scene was my absolute favourite! ❤️

Your description of the surroundings, the weather, their feelings, and the beauty of the silence between them, that ice-cream moment, her hug everything was PERFECT TO THE T. Such a breathtaking beautiful moment you painted with your words girl! 👏

And as if this was not enough to make the scene beautiful, the addition of the song, the lyrics resonating their emotions so well, all i can say is EXCELLENT! ❤️ 👏 👏

The next scene of Kabir breaking down and Nisha going numb but deciding to confess and their following confession was good too. But I felt it to be a little rushed. Coz both didn't expect the other to love them back so i expected a slight shock or something of that sort when she confessed 😆. Nevertheless it was a nice and well written scene! 👍🏼

Their promise of never to let go of eachother and the ending was lovely! 👍🏼

Keep giving such surprises! 😆

Do write more and thanks for pm 😊

P.S: thanks for requesting an OS on fursat shats! 🤗Never expected such a beautiful one on it! ❤️ Thanks annie 🤗

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zaara610

@zaara610

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wow..Annie..loved it

Awesome os..beautifully written..😊

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950842

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Haye.. this is so damn cute!

"Pulled on the strings of my heart,

NiBir are never gonna stay apart,

This piece is way too great,

I dont have words to express how beautiful this is, mate!" 🤗👏

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Ashveena.
Res
Unres
Annie👏👏👏
What have you done annie
beautifully written 😳
You described their feelings and emotion so beautifully👏
Awesome👏👏
Nibir☺️
Loved it so so much❤️❤️❤️
I'm in love with this os😳
Thanks for the pm😊

thankoo ashoo!😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Niya_789
Abh mujhe yeh OS baar baar read karne se fursat nahi milni ❤️

aww...thankoo mummu!😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: mishrialways
annie such a beautiful os 🤗
loved it to the core❤️
both feel but did not confess
the moments they spend at the lake was so beautifully written
both breaking down as they realize they cannot live wid out each other iloved the part😭
finally nisha spoke her heart and kabir too confessed☺️
and a beautiful ending❤️

thankoo so much ritikaa!😳😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98
Awww Annie I just luv it😳

The park scene was so very cute😳

Cheek pe ice-cream☺️

Then their pain😭...but finally confession😳

Then kiss ki baarish☺️☺️...aajkal kiss se mujhe sirf aur sirf YHA ki yaad ati hai😉🤣

Luved it❤️

Thanx for the pm🤗

thankoo roop!😳