Hidden feelings||NiBir OS|| - Page 3

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Beautiful OS

Originally posted by: Amina...

Superb ...!!!
Loved The Way You Have Written It Annie ...!!!
Loved It Sooo Much ...!!!

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Such a beautiful OS

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Amazing yaar amazing os 👏

Thanks to sa-ga-ki for requesting u 🤣

Loved it just loved it...!!!!!

Originally posted by: Shats

Annie 🤣 🤣 🤣

Annie Annie annie yeh le ❤️ chumma from my side and a big waalllaaa 🤗
Finally finally finally
Finally mere fursat ki khwahish poori kardi 🤪 tu toh bhohot phaasstt nikli 😲
Never thought fursat can turn out to b like ❤️
Sooo beautiful sooo touching
Ice cream scene 😳 😳 it was soo
😳 😳
Emotional breakdown 😭 😭 😭 beautifully described 😭 😭 sooo touching 😭 😭
Finally nisha confessed.Chalo at least yaha toh nisha ko akal aayi 🤣 😉
And ofcrse dn my fav scene neck kiss se yha ki yaad aagayi 🤪
Luved it Annie baba 😳
Thankooo sooo much 😳
Hayeee mera fursat

Originally posted by: mishri0209

d os was soo nyc.. i jst cant find wrds to praise it

dy denying dere feelings

dn dere short date

dn dat icecream scn..

finally dere confession

all was soo soo soo gud..

loved it totally..

u r such an amzing writer..

sooo gud it was..

emotional yet romantic

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Awww... such a cute os... ❤️

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Lovely os...😳

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Very beautiful Os Annie! ❤️

Wonderful start! Their growing feelings for eachother but them trying to supress it thinking the other has no feelings towards him/her was beautifully portrayed by you! 👏

The KN moment at the window was so adorable! That hug, her pecking his cheek, him being playful, him asking her to go out with him for the last time, all were such lovely moments

The next scene was my absolute favourite! ❤️

Your description of the surroundings, the weather, their feelings, and the beauty of the silence between them, that ice-cream moment, her hug everything was PERFECT TO THE T. Such a breathtaking beautiful moment you painted with your words girl! 👏

And as if this was not enough to make the scene beautiful, the addition of the song, the lyrics resonating their emotions so well, all i can say is EXCELLENT! ❤️ 👏 👏

The next scene of Kabir breaking down and Nisha going numb but deciding to confess and their following confession was good too. But I felt it to be a little rushed. Coz both didn't expect the other to love them back so i expected a slight shock or something of that sort when she confessed 😆. Nevertheless it was a nice and well written scene! 👍🏼

Their promise of never to let go of eachother and the ending was lovely! 👍🏼

Keep giving such surprises! 😆

Do write more and thanks for pm 😊

P.S: thanks for requesting an OS on fursat shats! 🤗Never expected such a beautiful one on it! ❤️ Thanks annie 🤗

Originally posted by: zaara610

Wow..Annie..loved it

Awesome os..beautifully written..😊