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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hai isse bhi zyada pyaar karti hun main tujhe ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

☺️ ☺️ 🤗 MAI BHI

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: poornima_15
Oh mansi ☺️kya kahu mai 😳 what an amazing drable 😊 just can't thank u enough for this 😃 ☺️ superb ... Sab k dil k khwahish puri kar di tumne ... 😉

mere khud k dil ki khwahish ye hi h😳😆

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
Superb drabble mansi 👏
Jodhi 😳

thank u sujoy 😳

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
☺️ ☺️ 🤗 MAI BHI

🤗

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

☺️☺️...Mansi...☺️☺️...ye tumne kya kar dia...☺️☺️...mere dil ki tamanna poori kardi tumne wid extra hotness...☺️☺️...just imagine agar ye sachi muchi main milta toh...☺️☺️
My GM is fully activated...☺️☺️

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Shats

@Shats

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Ufff ufff ufff mansi yeh kya kar dia re 🤪
Ab humara kya hogaaa.aaj firse katra katra dekha and dn yeh 🤪 haila 🤪
It was bloody hottt 🤪
Starting scene dr monologue part brilliant 👏 and d way u matched d actual scene dialogues wid dis 1 👏
Thank u soo much fr d kissy scene Jo sabki tammanaah thi u know nah 🤣
Poora scene firse imagine kiya and wid those extra portion of urs... 🤪
Just 1 qustn poora scene terrace pe 🤣 khullam khulla pyaar karenge him dono 🤣

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Uff!! That was some sizzling hot stuff you wrote there mansi! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Absolutely loved the start! You describe emotions so brilliantly! And like always you brought out both their dilemma and the resulting frustation and anger very well! 👍🏼

The description you have given through ridhi on how change in his moods reflected in josy's eyes was lovely 👏

The mix of your imagination with the actual happenings as shown in the epi was wonderful! 👏

And the kiss!!! ❤️ ☺️ you fulfilled that one thing which we all yearned for so bad after the katra katra scene ☺️ ☺️

And the feelings which you have shown that they felt during the kiss was a like a cherry on the top! It added so much depth to it! 😳

And the scene that followed! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

SPEECHLESS ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I've said it before and I repeat myself again, YOU ARE A PRO when it comes to writing the matured stuff mansi! You blend it so well with all the emotions that it comes out so marvellously and the reader is left wanting more!

And the end! It definitely couldn't have got better than this!

On the whole a very beautifully written sizzling hot drabble 😉

Thank you so so much for writing this yar! 🤗

and thanks for pm too 😊

Edited by .vishrutha. - 9 years ago

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

No words it is beautiful as always...

Jo hum chah rahe the vo pura ho gaya that was really hottt ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

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It Was Hot Mansi ... Amazing ...!!!
Very Beautifully Written ...!!!

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Loved It Sooo Much ...!!!
❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98
☺️☺️...Mansi...☺️☺️...ye tumne kya kar dia...☺️☺️...mere dil ki tamanna poori kardi tumne wid extra hotness...☺️☺️...just imagine agar ye sachi muchi main milta toh...☺️☺️
My GM is fully activated...☺️☺️

so my work here is done then... 😆😉

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