Firstly I m glad u decided to write a drabble on Jodhi especially on the terrace part, cz it was much needed 😊
With the incredible pace the episodic was moving in, it was hard to make sense of the storytellying. But fortunately ur drabble provided just that adding depth to our favorite scene 👏❤️
Fabulous drabble❤️❤️
Loved the first part where u are describing Jodhi's emotions and thoughts😃 Beautifully penned down👏👏👏
As I mentioned earlier, it added to the depth of the scene😳
From the way u described Josy's thoughts to the part where he senses her presence to the part where Riddhi looks at Jossy's features, every description was beautiful Especially that part about the description of the eyes which change shades with different emotions😳
Absolutely loved those few lines❤️
And that part where she wants to run away seeing him stare at her with such intensity was
Then the last part was ☺️
I also liked how u described their emotions😆
But the best part was when both of them say that they love each other and they are not letting go 🤗 That one dialogue signifying their love for each other and faith in their love.
It sort of added more intensity and passion, to the entire scene and their story
All in all, perfect yaar Mansi🤗❤️
Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
Indian Idol 15
