NIBIR TS- Bol Do Na Zara ( Epilogue updated pg 25) completed - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Anasthasia786

Just one word awesome 👏

Thank u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Ab kya bolo. ...WOW...just wow keep going ...can't w8 ...jaldi...and yeah abhi mpinmw ki update hi like ragi join raat ko mil jayega agar wi fi ki meherbani rahi tho

Thanks shanaya 😳
And I am waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

wow awesome story
loved it ...
update sooonest plzzz
u said its ur 1st/2nd story?? and u don't knowhow play with words??
jhoot...
u did it really well...
part 1 padhke to mujhe sahi feeling ati jaise exam me padai nai hui bolke last moment tak apka fend paper likhta rahe.. u did same thing!! nai ata bolke , kya superb likha hai!!
jab start se hi u r this much mindblowing ... forum k saare writers to pachhad dene ka irada h kya??
loved ur writing...
I m ur fan now


Thank u so much neha 😳

@ green: main aisa apne sapne me bhi nhi soch sakti


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RTme0w

Lovely story.

Back on the forum after forever and I'm glad I could an opportunity to read this.
God Bless ❤️

Thank u tannu 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Unres kab??? 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Aww you remember me? Or you read it on the AT?
Still, so sweet 😆
Welcome ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RTme0w


Aww you remember me? Or you read it on the AT?
Still, so sweet 😆
Welcome ❤️

I remember u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you everyone for liking and commenting 🤗
Maine kya socha tha or kya likha gaya hai mujhe nhi pata 😆
Hope you like this part


Part 3a


Its been one week and nibir bond was like they know each other from ages.. Saurav is become second best friend of nisha as saurav & kabir both were opening this academy together saurav also come sometime being part of the project and trio bonding was superb.. With saurav and kabir she forget all her worries all problems as kabir had solve her one of the biggest problem (viraj) by sending him for training and making sure he will not take nisha with him.. But For 2 weeks only as they says " something is better than nothing " They always have fun together saurav told nisha some kabir stupid or embarrassing incident to which kabir rewarded him punches and kicks which make nisha laugh out heartily.. Nisha always have faith on kabir from day one when she saw him first time.. And the trust between them make their relation more pure

As kabir always love her but never cross his limit he know nisha is not happy with this marriage but she is married to other so he never took advantage of the situation.. On the other hand nisha was feeling deep connection with kabir.. And her dreams were keep increasing she always see him in her that dreams which she had already had seen with her secret admirer but this time in place of her secret admirer is kabir.. She was still not able to solve this equation and felt guilty seeing kabir in her dreams..

It was fine afternoon but the weather was not so fine as black cloud cover all the shin of the sky and spreading all over darkness..
Seeing the weather kabir told nisha that they should headed back as any movement this cloud were going to burst out nisha nodded and headed toward the car as they come to site of there academy which is away from kabir's office..
They had cover 1/4 distance when its started raining...

Nisha was getting annoyed with this... Kabir didn't notice this and started babbling " nisha tujhe rainy season bhout pasand hai na.. Hamesha enjoy karti hai na tu.. Barish aaya nhi ke nikal gai scooty leke... Khub bhigna pasand hai tujhe... Ohh that ice cream hamesha barish me hi khana rehta hai na tujhe... Or jab tu..."" He stopped in mid at looking shocked face of nisha.. Then he realize what blunder he had done...
Tumhe kaise pata " asked nisha still in shocked
Are tumne hi bataya tha mujhe" kabir try to cover up
Jhooth" stated nisha
Sach bol kabir " said nisha
Main hi q sach bolun tu bhi mujhse sach bol " said kabir
Kaisa sach ?? " asked nisha
Teri shadi ka sach.. tere in choton ka sach " said kabir looking at her she again looked him in shock becoz she always cover her wounds n no one knows that she is not happy with this marriage..
She was in her trance when kabir said " chal theek hai ek kaam karte hai ek sach tu bats ek sach main batata hun"
She nodded as she want to know how kabir know her very well and always know what's going in her mind n she know she can share all problem with kabir as from day one she trusted kabir... After marrying viraj she was all Scarry girl scare from everyone especially men but with kabir she always felt secure her heart always told her to trust kabir...

They were at viraj and nisha's house
Kabir had settled himself comfortably on couch in front of nisha and waiting nisha to start

Main ye shadi nhi Karna chati thi.. Main intzaar kar rahi thi uska.. Us din main bhout khush thi dolly di ki shadi thi na us din par vo raat aaj tak kati hi nhi us raat ki subha Hui hi nhi aaj tak kabir... " saying this she started crying making kabir heart ached seeing her like this...but he chose to remain silent...

After a while she composed herself and continue " us din bhuot khush the hum sab.. Sab masti maze kar rahe the or kare bhi q na dolly di ki Shadi thi after long humare Ghar me kisi ki shadi ho rahi thi.. Baarat aa chuki thi viraj mandap pe baith chuke the dolly di ko lane ki der thi bas phir shadi ki sari rasme suru ho jati jab main or kirti dolly di ko lene Gaye toh vo waha thi hi nhi.. waha pe letter that jis me yeh likha tha ki vo yeh shadi nhi Karna chahti kunki vo kisi or se pyar karti hai or vo yha se jaa rahi hai... Family or viraj ke reputation ki baat aa gai thi toh dolly di ke baad main sabse badi thi toh sab ki izzat bachane ke liye mujhe mandap pe bhetha diya... Main khub royii khub chilai main kisi se pyar karti par kisi ne nhi suni meri.. Sab ne kaha Maine maan liya yehi apni kismat smjha par jab se shadi kar ke aai hun tab se leke aaj tak kabhi bhi viraj ne mujhse dang se baat tak nhi hamesha tana marna ki Teri bhen bhag gai.. tujhe kuch nhi aata.. Har baat pe daat te rehte the phir unhone ne mujh pe haat uthana chalu kar diya.. Maine socha ki ma papa se baat karun iss baare me jab Maine maa papa ko batya viraj ko samjhane ke bajaye mujhse kehne lage ki vo mera pati hai or kuch bhi kar sakta hai yeh husband wife ke beech ki baat hai kisi or se na kahun or duniya ke samne sab theek hone ka natak Karun phir smaajh ki baat aa gai.. Mujhe phir chup hone KO kaha gaya... Or tab se leke aaj tak chup hun main... kabhi viraj ki maar ke darr se kabhi samajh ke tano ke darr se kabhi apne maa papa ke darr se Bas chup hun!! Said nisha all the time crying... Kabir was too crying n get the reason of her condition it was him yes kabir
Agr vo us din nisha KO propose kar deta toh nisha ye keh kar sabko mana kar sakti thi ki vo kabir se pyar karti hai koi benaam secret admirer se nhi...

Kabir was all in guilt his emotion choked his words but he had promised her to tell her truth
With difficulty he called her " nisha"
She looked up her vision was blur becoz of tears
Aa... Aa... I... Ee... Ee... Am yo.. You... Your... Se... Se... Secre... Secret... Ad... Adm... Admire... " he said with great difficulty looking down with guilt
Nisha gasped aloudly with this Revelation started breathing heavily
Dhokha " she said in between her breath in low voice which caught kabir attention.. He looked up to see what she is saying
Dhokha " she said again
I know nisha Maine tumhe dhokha diya hai par main bas Janna chata tha ki tumne ye shadi q ki or tumhe har dard se mukt karvana chata tha bas is liye maine ye kiya I m sorry " said kabir

She looked him with blanked face don't know how to react on this she always thought when she meet her secret admirer that day will be best day of her life koi bhi din us din se bada nhi hoga par aaj... Now she understand why always kabir come in her dreams this is a deep connection of their heart which always tell her she knows kabir from long... Her chain of thought broken by kabir's voice..

Nisha q nibha rahi hai yeh shadi or kis ke liye samajh.. tere parents.. kis ke liye tujhe pata hai tu ek crime kar rahi hai. crime Shena bhi ek crime hota hai... Viraj deserve to live behind bars not in this society he is a criminal... Nisha agr tu yeh soch rahi hai ki log kya kahenge nisha 2 din bas 2 din is baare me baat karenge phir bhul jayenge... Rahi baat tere parents ki toh unhe koi fark hi nhi padta tu jiye ya mare.. tere samne puri zindigi hai nisha barbad mat kar.. Main Teri koi madat nhi kar sakta haan koi madat nhi jab tak tu khud na chahe apni madat karna... Tu kisi pe dependent nhi hai tu chahe toh kya kuch nhi kar sakti... Please nisha help yourself please... " said kabir in pain

She can't think she can't speak all emotion had clouded her sense she don't know how to react or give expression...
Only one word come out of her mouth " dhoka"
Fine nisha main chala jaunga Teri zindigi se dur hamesha hamesha ke liye par jaane se phele mujhe thujhe is dard se aazad karne de please" said kabir hurt and guilt reflected in his voice while nisha look him with blank face...
Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

I am truly honored. Thanks 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Res
Unres
Awesome update 👏
Kabir is very big k 😈
Is plan was superb
Arjun toh ghulame- A- wife nikala🤣
Viraj torture nisha 😡
Nisha ab dosti kar lo kabir phir baad mai shaadi bhi kar lena 😉
Update soon kyu bolu jab aaj hi update karne waali ho 😆
Sorry for late unres 😃


Thank u sujay ji 😃
Kar diya update😉

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