NIBIR TS- Bol Do Na Zara ( Epilogue updated pg 25) completed

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shrutigaur37

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

it was so beautifully written.
loved it.

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poornima_15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Beautiful update ... Continue soon 😊

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neha_zamia500

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Say something😊

Nehi.. 😉

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neha_zamia500

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002

Nehi.. 😉

Ok fine.. telling.. it was awesome... but it's ts right

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Anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Awesome updates👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved them !!!😳😳😳😳😳😳

Part-2a

Sad kabira's emotion well described👏[ 🤢🤢🤢 for kabir]
Viraj is a dangerous vyakti
Sad Sad nishu 😭😭😭
Mai soch rhi thi ki aisa hi kuch hoga 😭😭😭
Last last mai k kabira wapas a gya 😉😉😉

Part-2b

Haww K kabira emotional black mailed his mother 😲😲😲😲
Viraj ne humare andar ka angry young man jga diya 😡😡😡😡
Nisha abla girl kaise ban gayi i know ish viraj nehi kuch gad bad ki hai😳😳😳😳😳
Nisha started to feel something something for kabir but her damn marriage
Nishu ne kabir ka dream dekha 😳😳😳😳
I know nishu will accept to be kabir's friend 😳😳😳😳

Update Soon I' m w8ting 😳😳😳😳

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Awesome anmol

kabir played the game nicely

Just hoping that nibir's friendship does not bring more trouble for nisha

Cont soon😊

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Shanz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Ab kya bolo. ...WOW...just wow keep going ...can't w8 ...jaldi...and yeah abhi mpinmw ki update hi like ragi join raat ko mil jayega agar wi fi ki meherbani rahi tho

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

wow awesome story
loved it ...
update sooonest plzzz
u said its ur 1st/2nd story?? and u don't knowhow play with words??
jhoot...
u did it really well...
part 1 padhke to mujhe sahi feeling ati jaise exam me padai nai hui bolke last moment tak apka fend paper likhta rahe.. u did same thing!! nai ata bolke , kya superb likha hai!!
jab start se hi u r this much mindblowing ... forum k saare writers to pachhad dene ka irada h kya??
loved ur writing...
I m ur fan now

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321
Mastermind kabir 😆
awesome update
lovely every bit of the story so much... 😊
Continue soon
excited for the next part 😃

Thank u 😳