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mansi

@mansi_as18

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Niya_789

I am proud of you 🤣

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oh nakhrewaali

@oh_nakhrewaali

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+ 33

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Awesome update👍🏼
kabira's nightmare😕
ATB fr exams papaaji👍🏼

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

WOW !!!
It was a Beautiful Update Mansi ...!!!
AMAZING
Very Well Written ...!!!
Loving it Sooo Much ...!!!
The story is moving very Beautifully ...!!!
The way Nisha being in a semi-concious state , can feel Kabir ... the way you are expressing her feelings towards kabir ... is Awesome ...!!!
And Kabir , not even knowing anything about Nisha , is Attracted towards her ... its Beautiful ...!!!
Felt so bad for Kabir ... he is so Lonely 😭
And according to Ani , Nisha is surely that Miracle , Kabir needs in his life ...!!!
On the Whole , it was very Lovely ...!!!
Continue Soonish ...!!!
And best of luck for your exams ...!!!

Edited by Amina... - 9 years ago

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Soha

@Crazysoha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Awesome mansi...loved it 😳

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Anmol

@Anmol333

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Amazing fabulous fantastic update 👏 👏

Start with adheer's POV ( u work on each every character loved it ) awesomely written 👏

Then nisha's POV was too too too good loved it 😳

Kabir in nisha's view 😳 and not to forget his jealousy 🤣 this adheer and nibirscene was best

Then ani and kabir scene was also one of best scene 👏

And last not the least Mr daksh love him yaar "Mr match maker " 😳 ❤️

All the very best for your exams 👍🏼

Continue when get time...!!!!

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Niharika

@Niha0606

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

All the best for your exams mansi:):)
What an update yaar ...its just amazing. ...
I am just wandering in the hospital room...till now ...lol
Aur Aaj se jab bhi koyi operation hone ke baadh patient conscious mai aayenge mujhe yeh story hi yaadh aayegi...just loving loving loving loving loving more and more with every update...
Daksh...ur amazing kiddo love u
Ani adheer such great friends of kabira ...
U make me fall for all the characters ...lol
But kabira comes first among all...mansi great update. ...
Exam kab hai? ? Kounsi exam PG entrance hai kya? ?

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Superb update
loved it

thnks for pm

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poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Wow such a beautiful update ... nisha is fine now ... hope she recovers her voice soon 😊... the update was full of emotions ... ani and adhere are the bestest friends kabir could get ... the way they take care of him depicts the the strong friendly love btw them 🤗... and kabirs feelings for nisha his eagerness to listen her voice and daksh such a smart boy 😃 his plot of the story 🤣 loved the update

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Beautiful update Mansi😳
Each & every scene was beautifully written
Adheer- Kabir-Daksh scene was very nice...Adheer luvs to irritate Kabir🤣
Nisha ko hosh aa gaya😃...NIBIR scene was so nice😳
Ani ne Kabir ko sleeping pills vale paani pila di🤣
Kabiraa's nightmare😭
Daksh is so cute😆...Doctor & beautiful patient's luv story🤣
Luved the update totally❤️

All The Best for ur exam👍🏼