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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update mansi!
Adheer-Ananya-Kabir's friendship is so so beautiful!
Adheer's concern for Kabir and his entire pov was very well written! πŸ‘πŸΌ
Kabir has not stepped in his house for two whole years?! 😲
What is it that is troubling Kabir so much?!
Daksh all curious about Nisha and irritating Kabir is so cute!
Kabir - Adheer's banter was too good yar! πŸ˜†
Finally Nisha's up! Kabir understanding her by merely reading her eyes is so beautiful! ❀️
Kabir knows Ananya too well, doesn't he? Loved how he instantly knew she had mixed the sleeping pills in the water!
A horror sticken Kabir on knowing that he should sleep on Ananya's pink sheets! Lol! πŸ˜†
One moment I'm laughing at this and the next line has me emotional reading about his dream! πŸ˜’ How do you do it?!
Daksh is indeed a very clever boy! He has already realised Nisha is special for Kabir! πŸ˜‰
Waiting for more of KN interactions!
All the very best for your exams mansi! Rock 'em πŸ‘πŸΌ
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
So looks like I m going to be posting this comment after the sixth month anniversary of this chapter's update🀣🀣
Cheers MansiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£

So here I goπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Amazing yet Wonderful update MansiπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
I m sure u must have gotten bored by now by reading my "amazing update" phrase cz I keep recycling the same adjectives over and over againπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
but kya karoon, u never fail to amaze me with ur storiesπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
As always, loved this update too😳😳
Loved the beginning of the chapter where Adheer is teasing AnanyaπŸ˜†
Nice to gain his perspective on KabirπŸ˜ƒ
So Kabir lost his mom and is trying to run away from the pain
Loved how u described Nisha's state as she slowly wakes up from the stuporβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘ As opposed to the movies and serials where this process is almost instantaneousπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†, it is nice to gain a little perspective into the processπŸ˜‰
That analogy of Nisha registering information as though tuning in and out of radio was so apt πŸ‘πŸ‘
Especially liked that part where u show that Nishu is registering stuff but is unable to focus clearly on her surroundingsπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Absolutely love how Adheer was trying to flirt with Nisha and how Kabir was trying all tricks to send him out of the roomπŸ˜†
that entire part was hilarious🀣
I think it was my most fav part in the entire chapπŸ˜†
Loved how Kabir understood what Nisha was thinking or trying to communicate even before Nisha could would try and voice it😳😳😳
Just shows how Nibir are connected on a deeper level
Love how impatient Kabitr was when Nishu first displayed movementπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Kabir behaving like a child and his antics despite knowing that patients usually take time to become fully conscious was adorable😳
Loved how he kept thinking about her in the car and couldnt stop talking about her even when he met Ananya πŸ˜ƒ
The fact that Kabir could sense Nisha's fears and understand her pain even though these two are literally strangers was just beautiful
Love the bond Kabir and Ananya shareπŸ€—
Ananya put sleeping pills in his glass of waterπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£
funny but sweetπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Love how Kabir has got such caring friends like Ananya and Adheer
Kabir's dream was sad but described beautifullyπŸ‘πŸ₯±
Somehow have this feeling that although Kabir is Nisha's doctor but in this case Nishu will be the who will heal him😳
Love how Daksh is already thinking of Nibir as a couple kaafi smart ladka hai😎 he is quite perceptiveπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ and love how Ananya and Adheer too want Nisha to bring light in Kabir's life😊
All in all, a perfect chapterπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
⭐️⭐️⭐️



Edited by arviabhigya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the story totally .Its unique .The way u portrayed the inner feelings of nisha and kabir is mindblowing. Loved all the characters .All the best for exams mansi
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani

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Awsome update...😊
Mr Daksh... d match maker & his theory, lol 🀣
Superb mansi...
Now time for some critics over writing...
Nisha's diagnosis plz!?
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Kafi jagah problem hui mujhe while reading their dialogues.. Plz put some more space coz it was mixing up with narrationsometimes...😊

nisha's diagnosis has a vague description in previous parts... if u have read... otherwise she survived a head injury with a lacerated wound and an haemorrhage... a flial chest... broken ribs and fractures in hand and leg.

Dialogues are in inverted comma's... and thoughts are in simple sentences. As they are first person writing it is bound to get u confused. πŸ˜† i solely work on my mobile so its a bit conjusted due to it and if gives me hell to correct on phone so that u have to bear... 😳 thank u for the feedback
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited by Niha0606 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
ab ye kya h πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
13 aur 16 ko mera exam hai ...issi khushi mai i am happyπŸ˜ƒ
kyunki portion kuch bhi khatham nahi hua ...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niha0606


13 aur 16 ko mera exam hai ...issi khushi mai i am happyπŸ˜ƒ
kyunki portion kuch bhi khatham nahi hua ...

waah... kitti khishi ki baat h... lagi rho 🀣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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