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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u nehu... having exam so will update later
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part - 3


Adheer POV


It was almost another week without any major happenings apart from kabir going insane due to daksh non stop questioning about the girl and him trying to answer them. As far as i m concerned, i was pretty busy with my wife to be, u know u should enjoy the courting period to utmost. I was strolling in the corridors of hospital whistling and winking at staffs who kept on giggling and shaking their head at my antics when a particular ringtone blared in telling me that my wife to be is calling. Smirking, i picked the call "hellow sweetheart... missing me already?". As a sound of blowing a breath can be heard i know she is rolling her eyes at me. "yeah... watever... listen i have called u to ask kabir about that program in US... did he filled the form or..." she started rambling. I smiled at her so concerning nature, one of my fav qualities of her from thousands. "yup i will ask today... m going to him only.. but what will i get in return" i smirked. "what do you want..." she asked in a tired voice. "aww sweetheart... don't u sound enthusiastic..." i teased her. "hello mr. Not everyone is so peppy at 2 in the mng... so tell me what u want quickly so i can go to sleep at last" she yawned. "fine... give me a kiss baby... so i can go and do my job without missing u too much" i said in a sing song voice irritating her a little more. "why dont u come after ur shift and get what u want.. until then bubyee darling..." she hanged up with that making me abruptly stop in my track. She is getting bolder day by day not that m complaining. But now i want to turn around and go back to her apartment... sighing at my gushing desires, i stopped in front of the infamous room 18M.

"buddy... why isnt she waking up... its been 1 week??" the screeching voice of daksh hit my ears while kabir tried to hush him down. "shhh... daksh she is resting... she will wake up soon i promise but just keep patience ok" he replied massaging his temples. He looks so worn out and tired with his disheveled hair and lack of light in those eyes. There are black bags under his eyes and his body is slouched forward screaming for some proper rest. Shaking my head at his stubborn self i decided to make my appearance. "holla buddies gang... whatcha doing" i shouted earning a glare from kabir while a cute chuckle from daksh. I winked at him and slapped kabir back while settling on daksh bed, doing our fist bump. "what are u doing here..." kabir asked in a bored tone while his eyes were continually flicking over the other bed where a cute young girl was lying still. "m here to meet daksh and that sleeping beauty not u mr. Grumpy so don't feel flattered" i mocked him while he rolled his eyes at me and settled himself on the couch. Soon daksh engaged me in a light hearted conversation. I love this boy. He is so full of life and light that only his small smile and twinkling eyes can lighten up the world. How could someone can lay a finger on this cute child. He deserve someone caring and i know that someone is trying his hard to be able to give daksh all he deserves. I know kabir is trying hard to have him in his custody and i know he will be successful. Though he need to take a break from all of this. Its been more than a month since he visited his apartment. Daksh was still talking and gushing about his new book when kabir stood and threaten him to sleep. After 15 min of bickering and banters, we were successful in sending him to dreamland. "finally..." kabir exclaimed and dumped himself on the couch with an oomph. I chuckled and sat beside him. "why dont u go home kabir... ur really tired.." i told him. "i dont feel like going in there" he said in a small voice. I exhaled slowly knowing why he didnt wanna go there.

"its ok kabir... its been 2 yrs since aunty... well u should go and at least check in there... she wont be happy seeing u r stressing too much"

"i know but i cant bring myself to go while she wont be there to hug me or greet me and i just... i just miss her too much"

"i miss her too..." i patted his back while he looked at the ceiling.

"i know"

"so... hows ur sleeping beauty... know when she gonna wake up?"

"not u too man... i have enough of investigation with daksh already"

I laughed while he too chuckled with me.

"i dont know when she will wake up... but i want it to be soon" he sighed still looking up. I smiled at his words while my eyes drifted towards the black headed beauty. She was so still that it looked like she isn't breathing but the lines on the equipment told another story. I was about to turn towards kabir when i saw a slight tremble in her hand. "hey i think ur wait is over" i shook kabir and pointed towards his mystery girl. His head whipped towards her and a hope shone in his dull orbs. We stood up and walked towards her bed with kabir immediately checking up on her vitals. I chuckled seeing his eagerness as her hands started twitching and he started mumbling incoherent words.

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Nisha POV

Everything is still dark in here only that i can hear some voices now but still its like tuning in and out of a radio station. Someone was asking about a girl who isn't awake probably and someone was asking him to have patience. Are they talking about me? then again everything went black and i couldn't hear anything. i was trying to push myself through this state when suddenly another voice entered in my ears.

"i dont know but i want her to wake up soon.."

"hey i think ur wait is over..."

Whose wait is over... who is waking up... where m i actually? My eyes aren't obeying me, i want them to open up but nothing is working. I jerked my hand in frustration and i think i felt it... yes my fingers twitched but still nothing else is working. There is light outside... i can feel it but still my eyes are refusing to get open though i can still hear voices around. Something is beeping continuously while two people are talking.. about me?

" adheer why isnt she opening her eyes..." someone whined in a cute voice, i wanted to chuckle.

"dont be so impatient... she is working it up... her stupor will go away..." someone said in an amused tone.

"but.. its been 30 min now" he whined again and may be stomping his foot like a 5 yr old, i wanted to laugh out loud.

"stop stomping your foot... don't forget u r a doc..." the other person said in a bored tone. My lips twitched in a small smile hearing it.


Suddenly a door opened and i heard footsteps going away from me. But i can feel someone watching me intently, someone eyes boring in me.

"hey adheer see her lips... oh nevermind" that edgy voice was a little husky now and i can feel his watch on my lips and if i won't be in such condition i would have been blushing profusely. But right now i m focusing on opening my damn eyes. God damn it... open up. With a lot of effort and after zoning out from my surroundings, my eyelids flutter open. Finally. The light was too bright and caused a sudden pain in my head. I groaned but opened them any way. All the things were too white...nope they are sky blue... after a lot of concentrating i got to know that. My eyes wandered here and there and immediately settled on a handsome face which was looming on me with a curious yet anxious expression. As i blinked my eyes repeatedly, a small smile made its way on his lips and he sighed... in relief?? I tried to speak but my throat was too itchy and burned up. He immediately bought a glass of water to my chapped lips. Finally i gained some moisture and my throat got drenched with water while i quenched my thirst. "how are u feeling" he asked in his oh so husky voice. I tried to speak but no voice came out. I tried and tried but nothing came out. A wave of panic arose in me and i tried to feel my throat but there was a cut there and my eyes grew wide with fear. I started panicking when he held my hand softly. "hey... don't worry... it's fine... u go through a certain procedure i will explain u later ok... for now it will take a day or two to get back ur voice... now answer me by nodding ur head ok?" he smiled sweetly at me making my fear go away slightly. I smiled nodding.


"so how are u feeling... is there any pain somewhere.." he asked concerned. I nodded as i felt pain surging in my every nerve.

"where..." he asked in a soft whisper while i tried to tell him about it and he nodded his head in understanding.

"ok... lets forget that... now are u feeling something unusual... do u remember ur name or anything?" he asked while tucking a strand of my hair behind my ear but retracted his hand immediately, realising what he did. I nodded again and he smiled ruefully to me. His eyes lighting up a little.

A door opened and i focused towards the feature strolling towards me."hey kabir... did she wake up" he asked standing by my other side still looking at some file. Oh so his name is kabir... nice name. Kabir rolled his eyes though he still had that smile on his face. "look by urself adheer and keep that aside" he said. The one named adheer looked up at him and poke his tongue out then his eyes landed on me smiling gleefully. "oh hello there sleeping beauty... finally u r awake" he clapped his hands like a cheerful boy while kabir smacked his arm. "what??" adheer hissed in pain. "daksh is sleeping u idiot..." he signalled towards my left. I tilted my head with difficulty to see another bed there with a cute boy sleeping while soft snores were coming out of his mouth. I smiled looking at the sight but a sharp pain shoot up in my head which vibrated till my toes making me dizzy. I abruptly shifted my head and kabir looked at me with furrowed eyes but then his eyes widen and he helped me lying straight and glared at me playfully. "don't move like that... ok?" he pointed a finger at me while adheer snickered. He threw a murderous glare at him while he rolled his eyes again. "hey mystery girl... how do u do that?" he asked me with a curious expression. I raised my eyebrows at him questing that what he was talking about. "how do u manage to look beautiful" he asked with a wink while i rolled my eyes but still a blush crept on my neck. "adheer... shall i call ani now, telling her how she is wasting her time with u" kabir all but glowered at him. Why is he sound... angry or jealous?? Adheer pouted like a small kid and batted his eyelashes like a girl. "why so mean kabir... m ur friend..."he whined and turned towards me. "u beautiful lady... keep up with ur health... i will see u again" he gave me a flying kiss while kabir glowered at him again making me confuse."hey don't mind him... he is just jealous" he whispered bit loud enough to irritate kabir. I smiled along with him but another wave of pain spluttered in me. "take ur beautiful ass out of here adheer n call sister angela with a sedative..." kabir pointed towards the door. "m going... u dont need to feel insecure... and by the way sister angela is on leave thats why u r here babysitting daksh" he said while opening the door and sticking his tongue out at kabir. "idiot..." he mumbled and turned to me. "dont pay attention to him... he is like this only... close ur eyes and take rest" he smiled down as a nurse came in and he injected me with i don't know what. I looked at him with fear swirling in my eyes. I don't want to sleep again... what if i won't wake up. He seemed to read my thoughts as what he said afterwards made me close my eyes in peace.

"m here for u... i will not let anything happen to u again... just take rest".

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Kabir was with his patients taking his last round of the shift. He was just done with his work when adheer came from behind and bumped his shoulder. Kabir grunted in pain and sighed. "what do u want now..." he asked. "ur shift is over... go home kabir... i want u to go home" adheer said sincerely. Kabir sighed and turned to leave for the staff room. "m not going..." he mumbled while adheer followed him. "kabir listen up hear... stop running from things just go there and rest... u need it otherwise the next bed beside daksh will be yours.. so u better listen to me now... and and and as far as daksh and that girl is concerned m here only... now u go..." he completed and pushed him out. "fine but m not going home..." kabir mumbled but adheer heard it anyway. "ani wants to talk to u... maybe u should go to her and for ur relief maira isnt there" adheer shouted from behind while kabir waved him off. He reached to his car and drove off to ananya's.All the traffic and buzz were not even helping in his headache so he drown himself in the music. The songs were soothing but still his agony wasn't leaving him alone so he started thinking about daksh, the only thing which relieves him but soon his mind drifted to the one lying in the same room. To those eyes whose colour was somewhat unique, they were neither pure black nor they were exact brown. A mysterious contrast of both giving the girl same aura, but still expressing each n every emotion so beautifully and those lips which curves so sophisticatedly that his heart melted at its site. That pale yet glowing skin has a unique milkiness in it which calls him to touch her again n again. Those small yet slender fingers made him crave to hold them in his. He knew she is sporting a lot of scars at this time and they will be there for a long run but still she is as beautiful as ever. Just one thing is missing that is her voice. He so wanted to hear her voice and know what her name is. His reverie broke as he reached to his destination and sighing he killed the engine. He didnt even had the chance to press the doorbell when ananya opened the door sporting a big grin on her face. Kabir rolled his eyes and pushed her aside, settling on one of the sofas. She stuck her tongue out at him from behind and sat in front of him. "what do u want to talk about?" kabir asked still massaging his temples. This headache was having a permanent vacation in his head. "about that US programme... u want to fill it right?" she asked. "yes... but i cant leave daksh here alone for whole of 2 year..." he said. She stood up and walked towards her kitchen still speaking "u dont have to... we are here and u can always complete it beforehand and come back so that's not a prblm... plus u know u wanted to so stop making excuses.. and for ur information i already enrolled u... u just have to confirm it" she came back and gave him a glass of water while he drank it without question and sighed "why u have to ask me then..." he said making her give him a sweet sugary smile. "how many..." he asked making her confused."what??"she asked. "how many sleeping pills were in that glass ani..." he asked tiredly. She grinned like a cheshire cat and clapped her hands "enough to last 12 hours of sleep..." she said. Kabir jolted up in his seat and glared at her. "are u mad..." he exclaimed. "nope.. u r... and u need to calm down so the pills can kick in and lets go upstairs we will talk and then u can sleep there" she smirked and ran upstairs. He sighed but followed. He stopped short in front of her room with bulging eyes "m not going to sleep in those stupid pink sheets ani... thats awful" he said distaste. Ananya glared at him "shut ur stupid mouth and lie down now... i have to go meet daksh today and not to forget that girl too..." she rolled her eyes while he came inside stomping his feet."hows that girl" she asked him while selecting what to wear. His face lit up remembering her smile and a faint streak of adoration laced in his voice. "she is good... she finally woke up ani... but she was in pain and she cant talk for a day or two due to tracheostomy but she make me understood everything with those eyes... i swear i saw them twinkling but she was afraid to sleep i think... but..." he suddenly stopped as ani stared at him with an amused smile causing him to blush a little. "never mind" he mumbled and dipped himself in bed. She shook her head and sat by his side on her side table.

"so tell me why didnt u go home kabir..." she asked him once he lie comfortably. "i can't... m afraid... i can't step in that house without her and now when she isnt there... everything remind me of hers and i just... cant... it.. it pains" he looked away from her so that she cant see his unshed tears but she knew him better. Patting his hand she stood up. "close ur eyes kabir..." she said softly while he obliged. He knew his friends are trying their best to fend him but it isn't easy to let go... he is so torn between letting go his memories or to run away from them. Ananya sighed as she watched his breathing go steady and slow, she pitied this wonderful boy. He has been nothing but a miracle to lot of people around him but yet he still is craving for one. She shook her head and switched the lights off before going to get ready. She was just finishing up her dress in maira room when a quiet whimper resonated in the house. Her eyebrows furrowed in confusion but she soon realised what it was. She make a run for her room and saw kabir silently crying in his sleep. Her heart broke seeing her best friend in such condition and she sat by his side holding his hand praying to god to lessen his pain.



Kabir was watching his mother cooking for him, her humming was resonating in the house while the sweet aroma filled his nostrils. He came from behind and scared the hell out of his mother while she beat him up with the spatula. He was laughing with her when suddenly she stopped abruptly and gave him a sad smile while tears brimmed at the corners. He called her out and tried to touch her but he cant... she just kept standing while he helplessly tried to get hold of her but nothing worked and that's when he broke down. A series of shuttered sobs escaped and he lost his footing.

Ananya kept stroking his hand and his forehead while her own tears filled her eyes. At Last his nightmare came to an end and his breath became regular again. She sighed and stood up to leave.

"hello there smart kid..." ananya ruffled daksh hair while he gave her a toothy grin. She smiled and kissed his cheek. "what about me?" adheer asked signalling towards his cheek. She rolled her eyes and pecked his before turning towards daksh. "so how's ur new story going kiddo" she asked. "oh awesome... i found a new plot..." he grinned mischievously while ananya and adheer raised their eyebrows at him. "and what that will be..." he asked. "oh nothing... just a doc and his beautiful patient" he smiled sheepishly. Adheer choked a cough while ananya scrunched her nose. "what is he talking about?" she asked looking at adheer. "meet the new match maker... mr. Daksh.." adheer exclaimed. "ok... but whose match?" she was still confused. " kabir bhaiya and that girl..." daksh smiled ruefully at her while she glanced at the petite figure who was far away from the conspiracy of a young mind. "but why her??" she asked. This time daksh rolled his eyes "u should see kabir bhaiya whenever he talks about her... he is soo worried like he was about me and i know he love me so he loves her too" hence he proved his theory with an affirmative nod. "oh boy! This kid is dangerous" ananya mumbled while adheer laughed at her. "he is right ani... kabir is too intrigue in her... he was so impatient when she was in her stupor and he was jumping like a kid in disneyland when she smiled at him... u should see him around her... he is totally different... i mean happy around her... may be daksh idea isn't bad" adheer pointed towards the girl and ananya too had to agree that something sure was different in her as she reminded herself the way kabir talked today about her. "may be she is that miracle..." she thought.


A/N- ok so dont ask me why i gave u update of this... it just clicked so here it is... though m thinking what m i going to write in exam

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Posted: 9 years ago
I love Daksh already 🤣
Kabir sleeping on Pink sheets? No boy likes that but they don't have a choice 🤣
His nightmare🥺
Hope these three manage to bring these two idiots together😆
All the best for exams, padhai ka asar update main dikh raha hai, Google Chacha ki help leni padi kuch words ka meaning jane ke liye 😛
Jaldi wapas aana🤗
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

I love Daksh already 🤣

Kabir sleeping on Pink sheets? No boy likes that but they don't have a choice 🤣
His nightmare🥺
Hope these three manage to bring these two idiots together😆
All the best for exams, padhai ka asar update main dikh raha hai, Google Chacha ki help leni padi kuch words ka meaning jane ke liye😛
Jaldi wapas aana🤗

that pink idea was mine actually... i gifted my brother a pink shirt... now he is running arpund screaming on me... i m going to spoil his bday 🤣 oh i luv daksh too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome update...😊
Mr Daksh... d match maker & his theory, lol 🤣
Superb mansi...
Now time for some critics over writing...
Nisha's diagnosis plz!?
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Kafi jagah problem hui mujhe while reading their dialogues.. Plz put some more space coz it was mixing up with narration sometimes...😊
Edited by -VisheshTippani - 9 years ago
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Res😃😳
unres beautiful update mansi
this time we got everything from adheer's pov😉
i really like his and kabir's bonding😉
both keep pulling each others leg😆
adheer realises that kabir is over working himself
he even realises that kabir is drawn towards nisha😳
adheer flirting with nisha and kabir getting jealous was fun🤣

nisha woke up but cannot speak but still kabir's words make her calm down both are already having effect on one another😳
daksh he is cute 😊
he got a new topic doctor and his patient kabir and nisha🤣
ani and kabir's talk was nice
seems kabir lost his mother and thus does not want to go to his house again😭
kabir knew ani had mixed sleeping pills lol😆
he slept on pink sheets 😆
what did he expect in a girls room if not pink😆

i really like the way u narrate the stories feels like i am there watching them doing everything and even feeling there emotions👏

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago
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Lovely update...
So beautifully expressed everything. Loved it😳
Kabir's nightmare 😕
Match maker Daksh😆
Continue soon😃

All the best for exam😊
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

that pink idea was mine actually... i gifted my brother a pink shirt... now he is running arpund screaming on me... i m going to spoil his bday 🤣 oh i luv daksh too...

Usko bol yeh tere paise udane ka jurmana hai 🤣
I'll imagine 'Ansh' from Punar Vivah as Daksh
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niya_789


Usko bol yeh tere paise udane ka jurmana hai 🤣
I'll imagine 'Ansh' from Punar Vivah as Daksh

that was my evil plan 🤣
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

that was my evil plan 🤣

I am proud of you 🤣

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