NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Niyu lovely update yaar
i have stalked and read the story twice today while waiting fr the update
yaar this one has to be the most cutest story ever yaar
just cant stop awwing at the scenes
everything so simple yet pure and beautiful
the small moments of nibir you wrote were sheer brilliance and full of love
both will soon become aadhyaa's parents soon and are eagerly waitinf fr it
lovely niyu
nibir talks at the balcony were simply brilliant
both understanding each other makong sure that they are not forcing the other fr something was the best part

cant wait fr next part yaat
update soonish

ps yes u do deserve a shbashi fr speedy updates
pps check your indox plz

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Wow...so cute update Niya...

Beautifully written as usual...😃

Very very excited for NIBIR's engagement...😳

Continue soon & thanx for the pm...🤗

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Again a fantastic update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Nibir ki engagement

Everything is descriptive and beautifully written...👏

Loved it a lot!!!!

Update soon!!

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Snow12345654321

@Snow12345654321

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#234

Awesome update...👏

Fabulously written!!

Nibir so cute😳

Excited for next part...continue soon😊

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Aha121

@Aha121

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Super duper update
Jail 😆
Nibir☺️
Update soon

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Niharika

@Niha0606

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#236

i was just like aadhya reading this smiling clapping😃loved it to the core 😃😃

niyu👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Aww such a sweet update!

Aadhya's cuteness is the best thing yar! She's a real darling ❤️

A very pleasant start with cousins playing with Aadhya but Kabir wanting her for himself as he was away from his cutie daughter for two months, dadaji and Dadi reminding about tomorrow's occasion and Kabir stiffening at it's mention and Nisha being his strength as always, dadu - dadi asking about KN's marriage and the family giving a no-objection sign for it, KN blushing and everyone excited for their marriage were all very well written moments. 👍🏼

Aadhya clapping seeing everyone happy though she had no clue of what was going on, KN kissing her cheek adoring her cuteness and that small eyelock were written beautifully ❤️.

Kabir smiling looking at a sleeping Nisha, Aadhya excited to be with her dad and him putting her to sleep while Nisha prepared their coffee was so lovely!

The KN moment that followed was a nice lighthearted one!

Nisha wanting to confirm whether he has moved on from his painful past and Kabir assuring her of the same, Him joking of getting into a life long imprisonment by marrying her and she getting annoyed at him, Kabir asking if she's ready to embrace the changes their marriage would bring and she answering in affirmation, Nisha telling she can't wait for them to be Aadhya's official parents and that last moment about the result of their fights after marriage and that cheek kiss!, were wonderful! 👏

Engagement in two days and marriage shortly after!

Eager to read their marriage preparations coupled with Aadhya's cuteness 😳

Please continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

Edited by .vishrutha. - 9 years ago

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poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#238

another cute update this was full of aww moments ... 😊 the best thing abt ur writing is the small minute details u r giving is making me fall for this story more 😊 I just loved it 😃