NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED

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Unress hogaya πŸ€ͺ

A few things to be cleared, the story is based on what happened when Nisha had confessed about her Pilani incident to Viraj so this is what I imagined

1. As usual NiBir are childhood friendsπŸ˜†

2. Nisha had confessed about her Pilani incident by far


Not proof read as always πŸ˜† , πŸ˜†I hope you enjoy reading 😳

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NiBir SS || You Complete Me ||

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Chapter 1

Nisha had come to know about someone who was trying to get hold of that person who was trying to spoil the reputation of Lakshaya Academy and she tried to follow him, she almost got hold of him and even Viraj had come to know about this and he was thankful to Nisha for she did, he was also amazed at the way she had told him what she had been through, they both were heading back to Jaipur but some local goons stopped their car in mid-way

"Diver, kya hua?" Viraj asked in his usual attitude

"Sir, kuch log gadi ki aage aagaye hai, shayad yahan ke gunde hai" the driver replied in a little scared voice

"Inn logon ko aur kuch kaam nahi aata, aap rukhiye, bahar mat nikaliye ga, Miss Nisha, aap bhi andar hi rahiyega..." He said and stepped out of the car

He tried talking to them normally but then one of them started hitting him, Nisha got worried and so did the driver

"Bhaiya, aap jake help kijiye na unki..." Nisha said patting his shoulder

"Madam, sir ne kaha tha na ki bahar nahi nikalna hai, sir ka hokum main kaise taalun?" he said and ignored what she said, she looked at him shocked and decided to step out herself but she stopped when she saw someone else interfere in between, she looked at the figure keenly trying to recognise the person as he felt familiar to her

She opened to window and tried to hear what the person was speaking... "Ek aadmi aur 6 gunde, too bad, chalo abh 3 ko main sambhalta hun aur 3 ko aap sambhaliye sir!"

It took her a moment to realise whose voice it was, her lips curved in an ear to ear smile, she wanted to get out the car and just hug him tightly but instead she wanted to watch him do some action!

She looked at the two fighting with the goons and that is when she noticed that one of the goons had taken a knife out and was about hit it in Viraj's back she hurriedly opened the door and went and pushed Viraj and closed her eyes to feel the sharp pain but that never came, she slightly opened her right eye to see what happened and gasped at the sight

"Kabir" she half screamed and half whispered as he was standing holding the goon's hand in mid-air and the knife was almost near his eye, he was trying hard to snatch the knife from that goon

"Tu kya kar raha hai Kabir, lag jayegi tujhe!" she said

"Acha? Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha, abh kya app humari madat karengi Miss Gangwal?" he said sarcastically as he finally managed to throw the knife from the goon's hand

"Main teri madad kaise karungi?" Nisha asked

"Aise" and the next thing she knew was that Kabir had lifted her in his arms and was twirling her

"Chal meri Hitler, hit him now" he said and winked at her, taking it as a clue Nisha used her leg and kicked one of the goons.

He made her stand on her feet and spun her catching one of her hand and she used her other hand to punch the goon and then Kabir pulled her towards him, they both smiled and looked at the 3rd goon who had already accepted his defeat

Here Viraj had also dealt with one goon and looking his skills the other two were about to leave when Kabir stopped them

"Kahan chale Bhaiya? Apne in saathiyon ko to leke jao" he said and giggled, Nisha joined him too.

The three did as said and soon disappeared as soon as they went Nisha turned and hugged Kabir so tightly that made him loose his balance...

"Shaant Lady Bheem shaant" he said as he hugged her back holding her tightly making her winch in pain as he had unknowingly clutched her too tightly that too at the same spot where she had badly got hurt just a few minutes ago, hearing her scream Viraj turned back and Kabir immediately loosened his hold on her and broke the hug

"Kya hua?" he asked concerned as he cupped her face with one hand, but before Nisha could reply Viraj had already approached them

"Aap theek hai Miss Nisha? Aap bahar kyun aai, humne kaha tha na aapse ki gaadi se bhara mat aayega, phir bhi aap bahar kyun aai?" he scolded her but only because he was worried about her safety.

"Right... tujhe kisne kaha tha bahar aane ke liye?" Kabir supported Viraj and scolded her which irked Viraj, he was already quiet angry as he saw Kabir and Nisha hugging, he remembered what Nisha had told him a few minutes ago when she confessed about her Pilani incidence. For him it was Kabir who had hugged Nisha as his back was facing them when Nisha had hugged him and now he was scolding her like he had complete right on her.

"Sir vo gunda aapko chaku se marne wala tha issliye main bahar aai" Nisha said, Viraj was amazed at her selflessness and was about to thank her when Kabir interrupted

"Waah, aur agar vo chaku tujhe lagta toh? Waise bhi tujhe chot lagi hai na? Tu shanti se nahi reh sakti kya?" Kabir said as he walked towards her...

"Tujhe kisne kaha mujh chot lagi hai? Mujhe koi chot nahi lagi" Nisha said sternly and crossed her hand across her chest

"Acha?!" Kabir caught her by her shoulder and turned her around, he slightly pressed his finger on the wound and she closed her eyes once again to bear the pain

"Kya kar rahe hai aap? Unhe chot lagi hai, aur yeh kya tareeka hua kisi ladki se baat karne ka? Hai kon aap?" Viraj was getting irritated with Nisha and Kabir's closeness and how rightfully Kabir was talking to her

"Vahi toh main keh raha hun sir, isse buri tarah chot lagi hai" Kabir said glaring at Nisha who looked here and there but wasn't ready to admit her mistake

"Ghar chale?" Nisha said as she wanted to avoid the topic

"Aapne abh tak humare sawal ka jawab nahi diya" Viraj said sternly looking at Kabir

"Konsa sawal" Kabir asked innocently and Nisha giggled

"Aap hai kon?" Viraj asked again and this time little more sternly than the previous time

"Main Kabir hun, Nisha ka Boyfriend" Kabir said and winked at Nisha who looked at him with eyes popped out

"Kya?" Viraj asked, he was shocked would be an understatement he looked at Nisha for a reply but she was busy talking to Kabir in eye gestures, he felt something which he hadn't felt ever before but ignored the feeling

"Anyways, aap bhi humare saath chaliye, aapne jaan bachai hai humari aur..." he stopped as he realised that these two were really busy in their eye gesture talks, he went and sat inside the car on the passenger seat next to the driver and honked brining their eye talk to a halt

Nisha looked embarrassed as she entered the car and Kabir smiled sheepishly as he followed her, both of them sat on the back seat and the driver drove the car

Viraj was having a glance at Nisha and Kabir who seemed to enjoy each other's presence, what irritated him was Kabir was holding Nisha's hand too rightfully, he looked outside the window to distract his mind.

The next time when he looked at the mirror to have a glance at them he found out that they both had fallen asleep with Nisha resting her head on Kabir's shoulder as she

cuddled him and Kabir's head resting on the top of Nisha's as he secured Nisha in his arms.

He asked the driver to drive carefully as their sleep shouldn't be disturbed but also fast as they had to reach home on time!

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Chapter 2


Chapter 3


Chapter 4


Chapter 5


Chapter 6


Chapter 7


Chapter 8


Chapter 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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res πŸ˜ƒ
unres
awesome awesome
awesome
awesome
awesomeee
kabir ki entry hamara hero πŸ˜ƒ
nibir convo was so sweet
the bond they share is so perfectly presented πŸ‘
viraj getting j was the best 🀣 i love such scenes πŸ˜›
ending was the cutest part of the update
loved it a lot behna πŸ€—
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Res πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† Jab aapka unres hoga tab humara bhi ho jayega πŸ˜†

-----Unres πŸ˜†-----
Finally... Mujhe laga Niyu bhool hi gayi iss res ke baare main πŸ˜‰
First question - TS for 2 shot or three shot πŸ˜ƒ (I want it to be a three shot honestly)...
Now to the part...
Well it was amazing which is obvious.. After all Niyu ne jo likha hai πŸ˜‰
I loved it... The way Nisha recognized Kabir at once, and especially their talk after the fight!
Nishu is selfless 😳 Kabir is hero 😳 and Viraj is... Confused probably.. But yes he is jealous πŸ˜ƒ
They slept in the car.. Bade Bhaiya told driver to take precaution na... Bade Bhaiya is so nice 😳

Ab jaldi se dusra part update kar dena πŸ˜›
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RES jab khuda ki marzi hogi tab unres hogaπŸ˜‰
Unres--------------************-------------
Awesome πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Viraj Mr. JπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Nibir 😳

Kabir Mr.hero πŸ˜‰

Nisha Miss LovelyπŸ˜‰

Loved it ❀️

do cont. faster πŸ˜‰
Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago
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Res...πŸ˜‰

unres

Superb start Niya...πŸ‘πŸΌ

I just luved the fight sequence...🀣

Nibir Hug...😳

Viraj bechara J ho raha hai...🀣

Update next part soon...πŸ˜ƒ

Thanx for the pm...😊
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Superb start niya πŸ‘
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Wow mind blowing start πŸ‘
Fight sequence was just awesome 🀣 and viraj's jealousy🀣
Loved it
Continue soon!!!
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Aw cute start to ur ts
Nibir are so adorable together
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Niyu kya update tha yaar
dil Jeet leta yaar
nisha ne voice se pehechan liya
nibir fight
the hug
bechara viraj totally confused
eye talks
slept holding each other
wow Cont soon yaar
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