NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

wow ... i read the first part of story and really liked it ... bt that time it was a ts and then i had to go for a trip and i returned today and very first thing that i saw was ts se ss transformation and i m shocked( happy wala 😃 ) and now so eager to read all the parts ... abhi sirf part 2 padha ... and my all tiredness is gone 😆 now coming back to update ...

viraj being j of their friendship and the family's love for kabir ws nicely written ... bt nisha's excitement and slip of tounge indicates something related to kabir ka past what is that.. I'll read it soon 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

part 3:- they both are so understanding... flashback was too emotional and the little baby 😔 ... it was very well described ... the current scene too cute nisha ko apne room me neend nayi ayi bt she slept peacefully in his room 😊

Thank you, you still have two chapters to go😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all parts in one go...nd wht a story yr mindblowing...too mch pain...bt too mch love... love u for writing sch a good story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing yaa
Too cute
Adhiya kitni sweet ha 😳
Kabira bandar 😆😆
Kabira banna protective father 😆
Their cute confession 😳
Awww loved that 😳😳
Super sweet update
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naucloverkittu

Read all parts in one go...nd wht a story yr mindblowing...too mch pain...bt too mch love... love u for writing sch a good story

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Amazing yaa

Too cute
Adhiya kitni sweet ha 😳
Kabira bandar 😆😆
Kabira banna protective father 😆
Their cute confession 😳
Awww loved that 😳😳
Super sweet update
Thnx for pm

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789


Pasand aaye na dono?😆

m head over heels for them ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 4 :awww adhya is so cute ... nisha and kabir's princess 😊 ... viraj and kaira confused ... 😉

part 5 : super cute update ... lunch amd kabir's protectiveness for his daughter and nisha making him understand the situation was beautiful 😊 ... kabir's confession and nisha's reply 😳 the chasing session 😆

bas isi speed se updates dete rehna ... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

m head over heels for them ❤️

Sambhal ke sar phod mat lena🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

part 4 :awww adhya is so cute ... nisha and kabir's princess 😊 ... viraj and kaira confused ... 😉

part 5 : super cute update ... lunch amd kabir's protectiveness for his daughter and nisha making him understand the situation was beautiful 😊 ... kabir's confession and nisha's reply 😳 the chasing session 😆

bas isi speed se updates dete rehna ... 😊

I am glad you are liking it😳
Thanks for the comment, yaa I'll update soon😆

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