NiBir SS- Love, Obsession and Crime (Chapter 8 on Page 41, complete) - Page 28

Originally posted by: janvi0513

Superb updates
Very well written

Thanks Janvi😃

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Ohhh...
Suspense aakhir khul hi Gaya 😆
It was superb Shibu... Hope you write more thrillers... They are much enjoyable than any other genre 😉

Thanks Krishi😃
hope ki tym mile aur tum logo ko main apne stories se torture kar paau😈

Finally poora parliya yayy 😆 😆
Luved d whole concept
navya kidnapped nisha 😡 😡
Her obsession fr kabir 😲 😲
Nibir 😳 😳
Obsession ne navya ko kya bana dia
Waiting fr d disclosure of d plan
Luved it

Good one shibu

Awsome update dear
nicely describe scene ... loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

Awesome update!

Originally posted by: Shats

Finally poora parliya yayy 😆 😆
Luved d whole concept
navya kidnapped nisha 😡 😡
Her obsession fr kabir 😲 😲
Nibir 😳 😳
Obsession ne navya ko kya bana dia
Waiting fr d disclosure of d plan
Luved it

Thanks Shats, poora padhne aur comment karne ke liye😃

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Good one shibu

but yaar woh dead body kis ki thi

Thanks Ritu😃
aaj hi sabkuch bata doon kya?😕

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome update dear
nicely describe scene ... loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

Thanks Anu😃

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN

Awesome update!

So the confusion is clear! But, i still have a doubt. Was the ransom call planned by Navya or Khyati? 😕

About the update, Your portrayal of Navya's obsession for Kabir through the shayari, and Nisha's shock on knowing about it was very nice.

The ransom calller speaking / using Anushka Sharma's voice was funny 😆

Clever move by Khyati! By tapping the call and also informing Kabir about it!

The Kabir-Nisha scene was lovely!

RL's confusion and worry was well portrayed 👍🏼

Waiting to read Navya's confession!

Please continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

Thanks Vishru😃
@bold, let the story tell u