NiBir SS- Love, Obsession and Crime (Chapter 8 on Page 41, complete)

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#291

This was so nice...
Navya out finally... And Kabir is such a sweetheart ❤️
I loved the whole story... Thanks Shibu for this 😊
And ya, the shayari is too good 😉

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#292

Finally finally n finally navya is out of the picture *huge sigh of relief* 😆 Awesome ending shibu...

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#293

Superb update 👏 👏
Finally saare doubts clear ho Gaye 😊

Last NiBir scene was so perfect... And shayari was too good... Loved it !!!!!

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#294

Fabulous Ending ...!!!
Very well written ...!!!
Loved the whole SS ...!!!

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Aha121

@Aha121

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#295

Kabir- Nisha
U ended so soon😭
Nice update

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#296

Awesome update!

Khyati is a very smart lady, I must say!

Sumit's confession of his ill-deeds, Rupan and Mohan's pain and wailing on knowing about their daughter's fate was well written!

Nisha - Kabir moment was too good! 👍🏼

The way you showed Navya's obsession and her subsequent confession through a psychiatrist was really good!

NiBir's last scene, Dolly and Saurav watching them from afar was nice and Dolly's shayari was very apt for the situation.

A perfect ending 👏

Thanks for pm'ing througout and do write more once your free 😊

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Shats

@Shats

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Posted: 9 years ago

#297

Amazing closure to d story 👏 👏
Sumit & navya 😡 😡
Nibir scene 😳 😳
Loved d last scene 😛 😛

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#298

Shibu it was mind blowing 👏
Seriously it was superb
I really felt bad for roopan and mohan 😭
Navya and sumit are disgusting 😡
Khyati is the character which i loved the most 👏
Kabir fulfilled his promise 😉
Nibir scene was lovely 😳
Shyari shibu you nailed it 👏
I will badly miss this ss
I known you said don't ask for epilogue but still i am telling please give an epilogue 😆
Thanks for pm