NiBir SS- Love, Obsession and Crime (Chapter 8 on Page 41, complete)

The sky was sparkling with stars and the moon was spreading its calm light. He walked in her room to see that she was sitting on the window sill and crying. He knew the next day was going to be tough for her. He hoped that his love would fight the troubles that would come her way and save her sister.

She felt his presence and turned. She wanted to hug him tight and tell him the truth, but couldn't. She gave him a weak smile. He smiled back. The situation reminds me of a shayari,

"Aane wale Kal ki betabiyaan Dil mein hai...

Aaj ki tanhaayihan hai dhadkano mein...

Bayaan karna chahti hoon yeh saari baatein...

Par kuch Raaz chipakar rakhna padte hai ..."

Character Sketch

Kabir Singh Rathore- 25 year old owner and establisher of Passion Dance Academy... Ladkiyan marti hai us par...Main ladkiyan ke peeche nahi, ladkiyan mere peeche bhaagti hai...Only son of Arjun and Vasundhara Singh Rathore. Cousin of Dolly.

Nisha Gangwal- 24 year old girl, full of life... Mast maula...kal ke liye sorry nahi, future ka worry nahi, aaj happy rehne ka, yeh uska rule hai...Twin sister of Navya Gangwal and elder to her by 5 minutes. Daughter of Ramesh Gangwal and Laxmi Gangwal. BFF of Saurav and Dolly.

Navya Gangwal- 24 year old girl, a simpleton... Sacche pyaar ke talaash mein... Ek ladki sirf itna hi chahti hai ... ki koi usse itna pyaar kare ... jitna kisi ne kisi se na kiya ho... Twin sister of and younger to Nisha Gangwal by 5 minutes. Friends with Saurav and Dolly.

Laxmi and Ramesh Gangwal- A couple who fought against all odds for their love... Apne parivaar ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai... Maa baap zindagi ke pedh ki jadh hai... Love their daughters a lot.

Arjun and Vasundhara Singh Rathore- They love their son a lot... Bete ki khushi sabse jyaada maayne karti hai unhe... Zindagi ke faisle naseeb karta hai ... maa baap nahi... Accept every decision taken by their son, believing that if he falters, then life will teach him a lesson.

Dolly Sighania and Saurav Shikhawat- Love each other and best friends of Nisha... Nisha unki jaan hai... Chahe marr hum jaaye phir bhi marham laga ke jaayenge ... dost ke dil se utar ke nahi, dost ke dil mein utar ke jaayenge... Just friends with Navya. Dolly knows Kabir as she is cousin sister.

Hey NiBirians, this is the first time I am writing a thriller SS. Hope you guys like it. If you want me to continue, like the Prologue and Character Sketch, A few Disclaimers to be followed.

~ The story has some scenes inspired form real life crime scenes (I watched them on crime shows) But aren't copied.

~ The story is original and not copied.

~The words in italics in the Characters Sketch are dialogues of famous Bollywood Movies and I don't own them.

~The characters are fictional and I don't intend to hurt anyone's emotions.

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Chapter One- A New Entry, A New Equation...

Chapter Two -Too Similar to be Strangers...

Chapter Three- When Love Happens

Chapter Four- A Death Creates Havoc

Chapter Five- Threats and Investigation

Chapter Six- The Worst Can Happen

Chapter Seven- Exactly What Happened

Chapter Eight- The Obsession, The Truth and the Story's End

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Shibhanzzz kya mast surprise dia h yaar tune😊
Thriller ss😊😊

Kya dhasu prologue tha yr 👏

Dil khush kr dia yr tune...and the shayari was too gudI juz loved it❤️

Now coming to the CS...tune kya dialog se sabka intro dia h loved dis concept yara❤️

Nisha ki twin sister...

Nisha danger me h???

Dono kabira se pyar krte h??

Waiting for mystery to be unfold...

Update asap dear😊
Awsm banner dear😊
Loved it❤️
Vasu ki plastic surgery ho gyi🤣
Shaurya ke maa paa...kabir k maa paa ban gye🤣🤣
Update soon dear😊

res 😊
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grand bhacchi 🤗
mystery thriller I love it 😃
prologue was amazing n the shayaari it was too
character sketch ma lines ka use was cherry on the cake
interesting start shibu 👍🏼

Interesting
Please do continue soon

Nisha ki twin sister...
Thx for pm

Interesting prologue

Nice prologue bt use pdh kr sad sad si feelimg ayi
...yeh sad story na ho bs plz...
Character sketch ws nice nd lovely use of those dailogues really loved dat...
Nisha ki twin sister yaani story me twist ayega...interesting...
A vry fresh concept. Mtlb mene nibir pe toh aesi story abhi tk nhi pdhi ...i loved it...
Nd crime wala part i wonder aesa kya crime hoga nd kisne kia hoga bt obsession.wrd se lg ra h k kabir k pyar me i guess dono me se ek sister shayad twist laye.. bs ab or predict nhi karungi...waiting for chappy 1

Shibu 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Interesting ...
Will love to read further ...
Continue soon ...

Thanks for the pm ...