Everything I have, is You||Nibir TS||CHAP 3 page 22||last page-29 - Page 20

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN

Well that was a really confusing update 😆

To begin with, the opening scene was really beautiful!

The whole scene of Nisha making herself comfortable in Kabir's arms and him shielding her from the sunlight was so symbolic of them being each other's salvation, that they would be there for each other always no matter what the circumstances might be.

Nisha speaking to Kabir thinking he is asleep was the best part of the whole update!

You have written it so well! I absolutely loved that part. ❤️

For me that was the true definition of their love, remembering the other part of your soul when u fail to recognise your own!.

The Kabir-Dolly conversation that followed was again very well written and much needed to knock some sense into Kabir.

Coming to the terrace scene, I actually got a little confused when you wrote ' I thought '. I brushed it off thinking it may be a typo 😆.

Kabir's pain on leaving Nisha and the Gangwals, his wish to see her one last time, his last hope to reunite with her when in airport was nice

And then the next paragraph made me realise this was your perception!

Now this is why I told in the start that it was a really confusing update for me, because one moment I'm feeling sad over Kabir's pain and the next moment I'm laughing at your monologue 😆

Kabir's hallucination of Nisha was nice and their final reunion was also really good! (hope that was not his delusion too )

A very different type of ending but it did leave a smile on my face at the end.

Overall a wonderful TS and loved reading it!

Thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Hats off to u yaar ...plz mujhe apni pyaar fan bana le

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome chptr dear
beautifully written & superb ending 👍🏼
loved it ... ❤️
keep writting

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002

Speech less.. Love this..u almost made me cry

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Baba... I liked your POV more than NiBir's😳

Railway confession ki yaad aagai😭

End thoda aur elaborate kardete😳

Originally posted by: shreya52

Incredible the way you show it was great i loved it

But i think in ending there was something missing

Originally posted by: janvi1018

It was dam awesome

Loved it

Well done

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

a beautiful end indeed..

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Loved it dear

it was very emotional and apt

I loved dolly here

she spoke all right things

kabir yaar I have started loving him more after this ts of your

I loved him a lot here

and the way u described his confusion

lovely it was

I was somewhere not happy with the airport scene srry yaar but I didn't liked it that much

I loved the convo in the dream of kabir but confused kI did nisha regained her memory or not