Everything I have, is You||Nibir TS||CHAP 3 page 22||last page-29 - Page 22

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

baba ji this was one of the most beautiful TS on nibir 👏
the morning scene was too adorable for me
the way he unintentionally protected her from the sun rays the way he adored her sleeping was
nisha's words after that were 😭
dolly and kabir's convo was well written 👍🏼
I loved the end a lot the dream sequence was lovely
your perception gave it different and unique end 👏
finally nibir are together

P.S.-mujhe bhi aisa kabira cahiye so caring and loving

Annie Annie Annie

Originally posted by: star.angel

Annie Annie Annie

Wt wz ittt 😲😲😲

I m shaaakkkddd 😲😲

M shakddd cz how cm smone write so beautifully

M just speechless as

Czz it wazzz amazing , superb , mb, and so on cz I HV no words

Seriously I loved it 👏

I loved it so mchh 😳

Really awsome and superb!!just luvd it,.

pothi🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

starting was awasome... after it became emotional... and some suspension in story... after relevance it was shocked me... and I had thinking state... and after I felt some bored because I don't like more emotional scene between two love birds... but the conversation between dolly and kabir was emotional and very nice... the war between sukku and kabir was interesting and gave me cousins feel... last was always happy as usual and lovely... overall it was mash-up of all loveable emotions with perfect description of all characters... very very nice... lovely... sorry for late reply...

@daaddee thankoo!

Beautiful Update Annie...just luved it...ur lines were awesome...really a different type of update...luved it...😊

Please give an epilogue...please please please...😉

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Beautiful Update Annie...just luved it...ur lines were awesome...really a different type of update...luved it...😊

Please give an epilogue...please please please...😉

awesome story yaar...👍🏼