Everything I have, is You||Nibir TS||CHAP 3 page 22||last page-29 - Page 21

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Originally posted by: mika17

Thank you for the pm

Awesome ending to the story

Nibir together

Originally posted by: Nibirlove_amu

Awww... that was a beautiful ending 😊

Originally posted by: naucfan

A wonderful ending dear...

Originally posted by: Shats

Completed in 1 go 😕storu od I was hooked to dis.hats off baba 👏 👏 👏 def 1 of ur bestest stories so far 👏 👏 👏
Literally gave me goosebumps
Killer imagination.
D story and d way u presented it 👏 👏 👏
Actually could feel each nd every emotion 😭 😭
It was painfull yaar.aww my nibir 😭 😭
But kahte hai Nah ant bhala to sab bhala.luved d ending but thora confused thi.

Loved it loved it loved it 😛

Originally posted by: janvi0513

Beautiful story

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Superb update abm 😊

Kabir people utha loved d way he was adoring her 😉
Nisha jab uthi... Loved d way she express her inner feelings it was written perfectly 👏 👏
D tears fall from his eyes 😭
Den fir sukku kabir ka jhagda 😕
Kabir ko kitna pain ho ra hoga 😭
Sukku bhi aise kabir ko dekh k shock ho gya 😭
Jab kabir nisha ko chhod k ja ra tha dat moment was verry painful 😭
Kabir ka day dream 😉 was written superbly...
Finally dey met 😊
Nisha ne kabir ko maaf kr dia 😊

And the most beautiful thing in this part was u added yr conception yr way of writing... It seems unique n interesting n I just loved it d way u wrote dat 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002

first sorry i know i m commenting late... but i was busy but it was nice

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

Finally read all the parts sorry for the delayed comment.

Coming back to the story...

The way u described kabir coming to nisha and telling her a story in the hospital was amazing.

The emotional state of Kabir was described with perfection how the doctor was trying to make him understand that all that was an accident but how he was still blaming himself...

The bond that nisha developed with kabir who was for her a stranger (thanks to memory loss) was just fab ...I liked their silent and innocent bond.

Dolly explaining kabir was also nicely written.

But my most favourite part was in the end when you combined your perception with the story... That was simply... Marvellous...

The dream sequence and the following reality part...it was awesome...

Superb ending...

Sorry for commenting late.