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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

No epilogue 😭
Ok no problem kabhi kal isko bhi enjoy karna chhaiye 😃

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
No epilogue 😭
Ok no problem kabhi kal isko bhi enjoy karna chhaiye 😃

i don't know!

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: sam_premc

i don't know!

What 😆

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

What 😆

epilogue ka!

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: sam_premc

epilogue ka!

Epilogue dene waali ho kya
Now i am confused 🤪

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Epilogue dene waali ho kya
Now i am confused 🤪

i said...i don't know!

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: sam_premc

i said...i don't know!

Baba ji if you don't know tab epilogue dedo 😉 sayad confusion dur ho jaye

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Shats

@Shats

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Completed in 1 go 😕storu od I was hooked to dis.hats off baba 👏 👏 👏 def 1 of ur bestest stories so far 👏 👏 👏
Literally gave me goosebumps
Killer imagination.
D story and d way u presented it 👏 👏 👏
Actually could feel each nd every emotion 😭 😭
It was painfull yaar.aww my nibir 😭 😭
But kahte hai Nah ant bhala to sab bhala.luved d ending but thora confused thi.

Loved it loved it loved it 😛

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Superb update abm 😊

Kabir people utha loved d way he was adoring her 😉
Nisha jab uthi... Loved d way she express her inner feelings it was written perfectly 👏 👏
D tears fall from his eyes 😭
Den fir sukku kabir ka jhagda 😕
Kabir ko kitna pain ho ra hoga 😭
Sukku bhi aise kabir ko dekh k shock ho gya 😭
Jab kabir nisha ko chhod k ja ra tha dat moment was verry painful 😭
Kabir ka day dream 😉 was written superbly...
Finally dey met 😊
Nisha ne kabir ko maaf kr dia 😊

And the most beautiful thing in this part was u added yr conception yr way of writing... It seems unique n interesting n I just loved it d way u wrote dat 👏 👏