NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: nitika4
Sorry for late comment
Do baar comment type kiya per dono baar phone hang hogya aur comment post nahi ho saka gusse me meine dubara nahi lika aur aaj likh rahi ho
Sorry again
Yaar what a story loved it
But yaar tune to bahut rula diya
Iiked sis and bro bonding
U described Nisha's pain beautifully
Kabir cared nisha when he didn't know her loved it
Yaar tumhare title se laga yeh dusare janam type story hogi
Yaar mein to acha nahi likhti if u liked the idea to dusare janam per bhi story liko please...it's request
I know u r very busy per jab time mile
Aur tumahri dono stories ki update ka intezar rahega
Thanks for pm

thanks nitika... agar mjhe koi idea strike kia to I will definitely write...

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

part- 2

Nisha's sleep broke as she felt thirsty. She opened her eyes slowly trying to adjust them through the dim light. Her head throbbed with pain. She tried to scan her surroundings when her eyes fell on someone. She looked at the innocent face sleeping with a small smile on his face. Suddenly she felt like ruffling his hair but refrain herself. She looked at her hand and tried to remove it but what she saw made her guilty... her nails were digged in his flesh due to her hard clutch. As she removed her hand kabir woke up. " u ok? Did u need something... " kabir asked in hurry. " sorry..." thats what came the reply. " sorry ? Why.?" Kabir asked. " for this... " she showed him her nail marks. Kabir smiled " it's ok... I will get you some water " he said and handed her a glass of water. " thanks " nisha replied with a small smile. " my name is kabir... " kabir extended his hand " m sauro and dolly's friend... " he said. " m nisha " she said. " I know... m the only one u have almost crushed with ur weight " kabir said with the most serious look. Nisha's eyes popped out as she remembered how she had ran upto someone and hugged him. " m so sorry... I don't know why I did that... m really sorry " she said apologetically. Kabir laughed at her innocence. " its ok nisha... I was just trying to lighten the mood " he said. She smiled at him. " u must be hungry... chalo kuch khate h... " he said. " Nhi mjhe bhook nhi h " she said gloomily. " tum kya chahti ho ki mai bhi bhookha rahu... " he asked making a cute face. She looked at him puzzled. " are tm nhi khaogi to dolly thodi na mjhe kuch khane degi... " he said making a cute baby face again. " Please khalo na pls " kabir asked. She smiled at his antics and nodded in a yes. He happily got up and brought her soup. " Lo abhi to yhi h " he said and started eating his food. Nisha tried to hold the bowl but it got dis balanced as she was very weak due to constant crying. Kabir held her bowl in time. " sorry " she said again. " sorry tmhara pet dialogue h kya... jab dekho sorry bolti rehti ho " kabir said. He started feeding her to which first she refrain but as kabir glared at her she began eating with his hand.

Kabir fed her like she was a small baby who need his utmost care. Nisha was smiling throughout but yet confused why is she doing so... why can't she say a no to him. He is a stranger after all. She didn't knew him... forget him she didn't knew anyone here. Suddenly she realised that she is all alone now. She had a home which had everything she could wish for but its empty now. She turned her face " bhot ho gya... ab ur nhi " she said and tried to lie down. Kabir didn't know what happened to her but he kept quiet and thought to give her some time. He helped her in lying down and kept the bowl aside. Nisha turned away and closed her eyes firmly which was an unsuccessful try to control those tears. He kept staring at her back but didn't have enough strength to ask her to not cry. " let her cry kabir... once she is done... I will make sure she will not cry again " kabir thought to himself.

They both slept thinking about what tomorrow's morning will bring for them.

Dolly and saurav entered the room in the morning and found the two broken souls sleeping. Kabir was holding nisha's hand while she was sleeping peacefully on his arm. Dolly and saurav smiled at each other. " kabir... wake up.. " saurav shook him. Kabir woke up with a start and saw nisha sleeping. He smiled. " bhaisahab... muskurana band kijie... ur uth k tyaar ho jaeye... " saurav shook him again. Kabir smiled cheekily at him and tried to remove his hand. nisha stirred in her sleep and woke up too. she saw him smiling at her. she too smiled but realised that she was sleeping on his arm all this while. she jerked up but her head spinned due to the sudden movement. kabir and dolly hold her in time. " u ok na nisha...?" dolly asked. "m ok dolly... i will go home now... u know ma will be..." nisha was at loss of words when she realised that her ma will not be waiting for her anymore.she closed her eyes firmly but her face told her misery. "khi nhi jaogi tum nisha..." saurav said. "ha nisha... at least jab tk tum bilkul thik nhi ho jati tb tk.." dolly said. "par mai... yha..." nisha said. "par var kuch nhi... tum yhi rahogi n thats final.. ok.. ab jao freshen up ho jao... medicine ka time ho rha h..." dolly said.nisha shook her head and couldn't understand why on earth she is not protesting or saying something.

kabir was more than happy as she was going to stay here but he too did't know why so. tanu came and sat next to nisha "aap kaise ho di... mai aapko nishu di bulau?" she asked. "why not... u can call me anything u want to tanu" nisha replied. suddenly aarav came running. " aarav.. kitni baar bola h no fast running.." dolly scolded him. "sorry di.." aarav said in a small voice. "koi baat nhi aarav... but next time no running.. ok" kabir picked him up in his arms. aarav happily nodded. everyone smiled.

a week pass by... nisha was getting better both physically and mentally. tanu and nisha were best of friends now. each day kabir and tanu comes to ccrc where tanu will be talking to nisha and kabir will be stealing glances. he did talk to her joked with her tried to make her smile but somewhere a small knot of grief still persist within her. kabir wanted to tear it apart and set her free. "dolly mjhe ghar jana h.. please.. bhot se kaam baki h" nisha said to her in evening. " but nishu di.." tanu tried to protest. " nhi tanu... ur nhi... mjhe ghar jana hi hoga.." nishu said. " par tu fikar mat kar... mai roj yha aaungi tum sab se milne waise bhi tum logo k alawa..." she stopped there. " ha ha ab bhot ho gya... kabir jao nisha ko uske ghar chhod aao... ur ha please usko koi help chahie ho to kar dena" dolly said. "kya yaar dolly... mai tjhe esa lagta hu kya.." he said making a puppy face. tanu and dolly laughed while nisha smiled.

the ride to nisha's home was quite. Nisha was looking outside while kabir was in deep thoughts about how to free her from her pain. " nisha tumhara ghar kaunsa h" kabir asked her while passing from a road. " that one..." she said smiling at a small bungalow situated at a corner. the smile on her face told kabir his way. kabir stopped his car in front of her bungalow and opened the door of her side. nisha stepped out of the car and literally ran towards her house, kabir's smile go wider at it. he followed her. she opened the door and lead the way. her eyes were moist again when she heard kabir. " nisha... is this ur house... mjhe bhi dikhao yaar.." he said. " ha chalo na.. ye dekho ye hmara living room h... pta h mai ur mera bhai roj yha cricket khelte the... vo samne wali window poore 50 times repair karani padi thi..." she said and chuckled. kabir was just looking at her face. they moved forward and nisha switched on the lights. " see... ye kitchen... maa he na roj hmare lie kuch na kuch nya bnati thi... hm log na wait hi nhi kar pate the... to mai papa ur sukku yhi kitchen floor p hi baith jate the.. fir jo maa se daant padti thi na..." she laughed and touched the floor. "ur vo... vo pooja ghar... papa ur maa... subah hme yhi milte the.. kyuki hm dno to uthte hi nhi the time p kabhi..' she smiled and opened the door of mandir. kabir followed her. "ye na meri ur sukku ki study h... vo blue wala portion mera ur black wala uska... waise vo black mera tha par mjhe pasand nhi aaya to maine sukku ko de dia.. bhot lda mjhse vo.. par maan gya thodi der m.." she continued without bothering if kabir was there or not. "yee ma papa ka room... mjhe jab bhi koi bura sapna aata tha na... mai bhaag k yha aa jati thi... ur vo couch h na chup chap jaake vha so jati thi... par subah jab neend khulti thi na.. to vhi bed p hi hoti thi.." she said touching the mattress. she walked towards another room. "ye dekho... sukku ka kamra... kamra nhi kachra ghar h... jab dekho saaman idhar udhar phekta rehta h...fir milta nhi h to poora ghar sar p utha leta h... itna ladta tha na mjhse ki pucho mat... ye bat dekh rahe ho... isse mai use itna marti thi na.." she caressed the bat. kabir saw her tears threatening to flow. " ur ye... ye backyard.. yha pta h ek baar sukku ne na mjhe girane k lie paani daala tha... phir mai jab giri ur mera pair fracture ho gya... bechara itna roya ki hospital m sabko lga ki usko chot lgi hui h..." she laughed hard. she was laughing like there is no tomorrow. kabir knew the last knot was teared now he just have to be there for her. kabir came from behind and put his hand on her shoulder. " nisha..." just her name in his voice breakthrough all her grief she laughed first like maniac but now her laugh got converted into that cry which can tear someones heart apart. she cried harder and harder. her wounds were bleeding kabir knew that and these wounds were inside her... only she can tend them. nisha lost her balance and fell down on the floor... her tears refused to stop. kabir couldn't see her anymore like this and took her in his arms. they both hugged each other. nisha was crying pouring her heart like never before. kabir was just at loss of words to soothe her. she kept crying for an hour or so. finally when kabir heard her sobs. he cupped her face in his palm. " nisha look at me.. i want to show u something" kabir made her stand and took her to one room and clicked opened the door. "nisha pta h ye ek bhot khoobsurat ur pyaari ladki ka kamra h... jisne apne saare sapne yha is pillow m chupaye h... jo har roj us window se us aakash m ud jaane k sapne dekhti thi... vo ladki jiski hasi se ye ghar gunjta rehta tha... vo ladki jo apni family ki ladli thi... jo apne hi nhi dusre k chehre p bhi khushi lana chahti thi... vo ladki jo aaj pta nhi kha kho gyi... nisha.. tu bta.. agar uski family ko ye pta chale ki unki wajah se us ladki ne hasna muskurana sab chhod dia.. jo ye bhi bhool gyi h ki vo bhi kuch h... vo jeena bhool gyi h... bta unhe kaisa lgega.." he asked her ever so softly. nisha was looking at him taking in his every sentence. "nisha kisi k chale jaane se jindgi rukti nhi h... na teri na unki... jo ho gya use to badal nhi sakti... par jo hoga vo tere hath m h... past m rhke tu present kho degi.. khud ko kho degi... tu bta.. tere papa khush honge ye dekhke... teri mom yjhe dekh paengi ese... tera bhai... vo apni behen ko rote dekh sakta h kya..." kabir said . she looked at him and nodded in a no like a child. to phir... khud ko punish karna band kar nisha... teri koi galti nhi... tjhe muskurana h.. khush rehna h... apne lie nhi unke lie jo tjhe pyaar karte..." he said and took her in a hug again. this time nisha did't cry, she just rested her head on his shoulder... she was too exhausted to cry more. kabir took her to her parents room and made her lie down on the couch. he patted her head as she closed her eyes. once she slept he made a call to dollly and asked her to keep tanu with her as he will be late. he came back and picked nisha up in his arms and placed her on the bed. he kept looking her face which was way more calmer then before.. he felt happy... actually happiest seeing her so relaxed. he knew now he don't have to bother as she is free now.. free from the grip of pain which he himself have had for a long time.

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Awesome👏
felt bad fr Nishu😭😭😭
update soon😊

Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago

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anjali

@angelanju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

awesome...👏

poor nishu...

the scene where she talked abt her family to kabir ...really herat touching...

and then how kabir pacifies her...so nice...

update soon...

Edited by angelanju - 9 years ago

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: angelanju
res😆

ur res is still waiting to get unred on my previous story😆

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...
Awesome👏
felt bad fr Nishu😭😭😭
update soon😊

thanks shibu...😳

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

res
unres

awsm update mansi loved it❤️
nishu uthi...n loved d convo of nibir
sorry wala convo was superb
loved d way he fed her soup
she aagain started crying
loved d way kabur said abhk jitna rona h role baad me mai tujhe rone nhi dunga
loved d way dey smile seeing each other wen dey woke up
nisha one week whi rhi
kabir usko ghar chhodne ja ra
ghar dekhte hi nishu apni family k bare me khush hoke bta ri
u portrayed dis emotions so beautifully dat i hv liss of words to describe dis
loved d way kabir consoled her patted her back n let her cry
now she was free frm her pain
loved d way he scoop her in his arm n laid her on bed
update nxt part soon...dear

Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago

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Amina...

@Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

I m at loss of words Mansi
..just have to say this , it was so heart touching ... so beautifully written ... and every emotion was so beautifully portrayed that that i m speechless ... i have no words to describe ...
Just Loved it ...
Thanks for the pm ...