NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end - Page 6

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wow mansi it's so emotional n u described each emotion perfectly 👍🏼
nisha's pain was so perfectly penned down
aawweee kabir handled her so nicely
your updates are always awesome n perfect just like this one

Hum jotna sochte hai usse kai zyada mushkil hai kisi ko bulana.. Kisi aisi jagah jana jahan har kone main unki yaad ho.. Jahan ki har cheez main unki jhalak ho.. Vo hasi unke jane ke baad bhi hume sunai diti hai.. Bas dil kehta hai ki kahi se vo aajaye aur kahe "Dekh.. Tere peeche hi hun " vo haath tham ke apni taraf keeche aur kas ke gale laga le.. Aankh main aansu aane ki der nahi aur vo gud guda kar hasne lage. .bohut yaad aate hai ...

Beautifully written👏

Originally posted by: naina.majik

Jab koi aapke liye bna hota hai ya kismat aapko kisi se jodna chati hai to wo kisi na kisi bahane se aapke samne ya aapke paas aa hi jata hai...

iss story ko padh k ye bat samjh m aa gyi...

kabir's care for nisha was cute..😳

nisha k liye bht bura lag rha hai..

kabir ne jis tarah se nisha ko samjhaya👏👏

u wrote the whole part very beautifully...👏👏

thats just so true...

Originally posted by: star394

Beautifully written..👍🏼

thanks buddy

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Tere jane ke baad bhi muskuraa rahe hai hum.. Dil main lakhon hai dard jinhe chipa rahe hai hum.. Har dard ko muskaan main badal rahe .. Yeh sochke ki hume muskurate dekh muskuraa rahe ho tum...

👏 niyu

Superb update mansi...
D grief of losing dear ones is unimaginable nd u hv described nisha's pain so well dat i could visualise d whole scene... Good work

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Hum jotna sochte hai usse kai zyada mushkil hai kisi ko bulana.. Kisi aisi jagah jana jahan har kone main unki yaad ho.. Jahan ki har cheez main unki jhalak ho.. Vo hasi unke jane ke baad bhi hume sunai diti hai.. Bas dil kehta hai ki kahi se vo aajaye aur kahe "Dekh.. Tere peeche hi hun " vo haath tham ke apni taraf keeche aur kas ke gale laga le.. Aankh main aansu aane ki der nahi aur vo gud guda kar hasne lage. .bohut yaad aate hai ...

thats just perfect 👏

Unres..!!