a nibir story- TU JO MILA *updated 7/9 on page 35* - Page 21

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

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unres
mansi awesome tha yaar
it's just perfect 👏
u described each n every feeling in the most promising way anyone can
I could so imagine it yaar
words toh tum log mere liye chodte nhi ho toh claps hi kar leti hu 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Niha205

aur haa mansi agle update kab hone waali hai ????😉

aur iss baar ki lambi update ke liye bada waala🤗🤗🤗

thank god nisha ne first aid kar diya😊

kabiraa ko bina bandage jaane ki jaroorath kya thikithna khoon bahgayaaur itna hi shouk hai tho blood bank mai donate karna chahiye tha na🤣

The way of manaofying is😳u wrote it sooo beautifully bathaa nahi kounsa word use karu😕😕

all scenes i was seriously could imagine😃

thanku mansi for the beautiful update😃

Originally posted by: sam_premc

Bechaara bed...🤣

Finally kabir ka gussa shaant hogaya😆

Yaar ab nisha kitni baar chakkar khaake giregi..???ye to batade MANSI hua kya hain..???

Originally posted by: ammu4u

read both d parts yaar..

superb update

finally nisha ne mna hi liya

loved der emotional conversion

nicely written

ab nxt part jaldi update karo

nisha ko kya hua😕

Originally posted by: naina.majik

She just ran in to him crashing herself in his arms. " koi itna darata h kya kabir... jaan nikal gyi thi meri... pta h kitne bure khayal aa rhe the mjhe... kitna darr gyi thi mai... aage se.." she couldn't complete as he jerked her away. " mjhe neend aa rhi h " kabir said and went to the room without sparing a look at her. she was dumbfounded at what he just did.--❤️❤️loved how nisha hugged kabir...kabir is being rude this time..😛

Kabir would have walked only a few steps when he was pulled forcibly and was pinned to the adjacent wall. " samajhta kya h tu khud ko ha... yha mai tjhe mnaye ja rhi hu ur tere nakhre hi nhi katam ho rhe h..." an angry nisha gritted from her teeth. Kabir's initial reaction was of shock was soon converted into an angry one. He rolled again as now nisha was pinned to the wall. " achha... ehsaan kar rhi h tu mjhpe... mjhe mnake... jitna hurt kia h na tune mjhe... uske lie mai tjhe itni jaldi maaf nhi karunga." kabir said. Nisha's anger was also on peak now. " achha... esa kya kia h maine... ha... ha manti hu galti ki h maine kisi ki baateon sinkar mjhe ese react nhi karna chahie tga... par iski sza bhi bhugti h na kabir... jitna dard tjhe hue ha utna hi mjhe bhi hua h... ye hi soch soch k jaan nikali jaa rhi thi ki mai esa kar kaise sakti hu esa kh kaise sakti hu... par tu tu mjhe akad dikha rha h..." she screamed pushing him. " achha mai tjhe akad dikha rha hu... ur ye sab kya h galti teri ur sza to maine bhi bugti h nisha... tu akeli nhi tadpi h... mai bhi utna hi roya hu... utne hi dard hua h mjhe bhi... " kabir said grabbing her shoulders. " to kyu itna dard de rha h khud ko... mai galat hu to mjhe sehne de... tu kyu khu ko punish kar rha h" she asked grabbing his collar. " kyuki pyaar karta hu tjhse nisha... paaglo ki tarah pyaar karta hu... tjhe agar ek sui bhi chubhti h na to talwar chalne jitna dard hota h mjhe samjhi... ur jab tu esi baatien karti h na to esa lgta h kisi ne mera dil hi nikal lia h mere seene se... saans lena mushkil ho jata h mera..." he said tears brimming through his eyes. Nisha couldn't taje it anymore and she just crushed herself on him pulling him closer to herself. " ur jab tu baat nhi karta na mjhse to mera jeena bekaar lhne lgta h kabir... man karta h khud ko itni saza du ki jaan nikal jae meri... ur us par jab teri narazgi ki wajah mai khud hu... to khud se hi nafrat ho rhi h kabir... khud se sharam aa rhi h mjhe..." she sobbed harder... " jee karta h khud ko khatam kar du... aazad kar du tjhe apne aap se... teri khamoshi nhi sahi jaati mjhse kabir... nhi sahi jati" she said crying out her heart. " ae... paagal ladki... esa kuch socha bhi h na to mjhse bura koi nhi hoga samjhi" kabir pushed her a little and cupped her face in his palm. " tjhse naaraj hoke mai kha jaaunga nisha... tere siwa mera koi ghar nhi..." kabir said and pulled her in his tight embrace. Tears flowed through their eyes but this time they were conveying love and just love for each other. " Nisha waada kar tu kabhi esa nhi sochegi kabhi khud ko dusro se compare nhi karegi.." kabir asked. " waada kabir.." she said. They stoodtheir in each other's embrace for a long time. -- this was my favourite part... main hamesha se chahti thi ki koi aisa scene include kare apni story n mansi u did dat thank you so much🤗

lovey dovey couple k ladai dekhne m bhi bda maza ata hai...ye story padh samjh aa gya...

suspense kb khatm hoga ?? nishu chakkar pe chakkar kha rhi hai ... KOI DOCTOR KO BULAO BHAI...KHUSHKHABARI HAI😉😆

kabir k K panti fir star...😆😆

cute update mansi loved it🤣