a nibir story- TU JO MILA *updated 7/9 on page 35*

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mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...
Awesome👍🏼
Nishu ne sab thikh kiya

thanks shibu

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Itsmeriya

@Itsmeriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Nice chapter
Kabir itna ghusse mein... 😒

Edited by Itsmeriya - 10 years ago

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mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: itznimi003
res again

unres

superb update mansi👍🏼

anshika ne kabir ko sab bta dia😊

loved kabir anshika convo😊

kabir kinne gusse me h...😔

She looked at
their wedding photo which soon got
blurred due to tears. He entered the
room and stood behind nisha. "
nisha mjhe sach janna h..." he said.
" kaunsa sach..." she asked. " ur
jhuth nhi sunna mjhe nisha... tu
kaise kisi ki bhi baat p ese behave
kar sakti h" kabir screamed. Nisha
was dumbstruck. " ha nisha sab pta
h mjhe" kabir said. She turned
towards him and moved away. "Kuch
galat to nhi kha na un lgo ne
kabir... jo kha vo sach hi to tha...
dekh mjhe... ur dekh khud ko... did
I match u... no... " she said. Kabir
was baffled at what he heard.
"What..." he screamed. " ha kabir...
vo kya sab yhi sochte h... ur sahi hi
h... mai hu hi kya... kuch bhi nhi...
tere layak nhi hu mai " she
screamed. " Nishaa... " kabir
shouted. He moved forward and
grabbed her shoulders. " how dare
u... how dare u say that... " kabir
said. " I didn't dare kabir it is a
truth... jab tjhe ye realise hoga tb
tk..." she couldn't complete her
words as they got lost in a loud
noise. " CHUP... EK DUM CHUP
NISHA... EK SHABD UR NHI SAMJHI...
SAMAJHTI KYA H TU KHUD KO... JO
TERE MAN ME AAEGA BOLTI JAEGI...
JRA SA DIMAG H KI NHI TUJME... YE
SAB BOLNE SE PEHLE... TUNE EK
BAAR... EK BAAR NHI SOCHA..."
kabir was out of his senses now. She
was standing rooted to her spot. His
eyes were bloodshot red... anger
dripping from them. It seemed he
would create a havoc in a minute
and his voice was unbearably
painful. " MERE BAARE M YHI
SOCHTI H TU... KI YEH PAISA FAME
DEKHKE... CHHOD DUNGA MAI EK
DIN TJHE... YHI JAAN PAYI H TU AAJ
TAK MERE BAARE M... KABHI SAMJHA
NHI TUNE MJHE???... TJHE JRA BHI
BHAROSA NHI H MJHPE... MERE
PYAAR P?????... " kabir yelled at her.
He hit the wall behind nisha with
such a force that his hand started
bleeding. Nisha closed her eyes due
to its impact. " Kabir tere haath se
khoon..." nisha was trying to hold
his hand when he pulled it away
with a jerk. " koi jarurat nhi h meri
fikar karne ki... hu kaun mai ha... koi
maayne to h nhi mere tere lie... to
ye fikr kyu nisha... jab tjhe mjhpe
bharosa hi nhi tu mjhe apna samjhti
hi nhi to fir ye chinta kyu?... koi
jarurat nhi h is sab ki"... he hissed
bitterly yet painfully. He turned and
walked towards the door crashing
another glass vase into the ground
deepening his wound further. But
his mind never registered the pain
and he banged the door leaving
behind a shattered nisha. Nisha
slide down the wall with never
ending tears in them. "

@blue m speechless tears are continuosly rolling frm my eyes 😭 u wrote it so beautifully yr...hatts off to uh...❤️

nisha faint ho gyi...supriya ne sab sach bta dia...kabir ko...

kabir ka state dekh k rona aa rha yr...

sorry for late update n thanx for pm

thanks nimi...

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: Itsmeriya
Res pe res,res pe res milte gai par unres nahi mila my lord 🤣

ye mera dialogue hona chahiye... 🤣

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Chapter 2- Fabulous chapter yaar👏👏👏

Love all the parts thoroughly❤️

ab kya tareef karoon 😆

Nisha and kabir were household names now where nisha was the best shooter of the country and kabir was the most famous and nationally acclaimed choreographer. They were the best friends cum admirers of each other. Kabir never ever missed any of her event while nisha always tried her best to be with him in his every single venture. He was famous... actually way more famous then nisha and she had always wholeheartedly accepted it. She was happy... happy with him, for him. He was the heartthrob of every girl. He was what any girl could wish for. The cute couple was truly madly and deeply in love with each other and they knew it. All was going smoothly in their life. Kabir being kabir never missed a single chance to annoy nisha and she used to be very angry on him every now and then. She always use to think that never in her life with kabir she had seen him getting angry on someone and here she was... always ready to blast on him.- Love this part😃 Ur narration is always on point👍🏼 One cannot be in more awe of this amazing couple yaar and the bond and the love they share❤️

" Nisha... nisha... jaldi bahar aa... bhot achhe news leke aaya hu..." kabir was jumping with joy. " Kya hua kabir yaar... itna kyu chilla rhe h " nisha said coming out of their room. " Nisha nisha nisha... " kabir picked her up and started spinning around. " kabir... neeche utar mjhe chakkar aa jaenge yaar " nisha said. He placed her on the floor gently. " Nishu tjhe pta h... mjhe new york m ek live concert ka offer aaya hai... " he exclaimed in joy. " sachhi... " she asked. " Sachhi muchhi kuchhi nisha ki bachhi... m so happy yaar... tjhe pta h ye kitni badi opportunity h... mera career mera dance school sab ek nayi height p hoga..." kabir said dreamily. " Jaroor hoga kabir..." she said and hugged him. He smiled and hugged her back. " nisha next week mjhe new york jana h... ur usi week mera performance bhi h... I know ki tera final h usse pehle but... kya tu..." kabir said. " Shhh... kuch kehne ki jarurat nhi h kabir... mai jarur aaungi... chahe kuch bhi ho jae... mai tere lie vha jarur aaungi..." she said placing a feathery kiss on his cheek. Kabir smiled wider. " I know my nisha never breaks her promises..." kabir said and kissed her softly yet deeply.- ❤️❤️❤️ Romantic, adorable, cute, lovely, amazing... aur kya kahoon😳 Love Kabir's excitement, Nibir's understanding and their love 🤗

Felt bad for Nisha when she missed her target Especially when she had been waiting for this opportunity for over a year

" Nisha... kya ho gya h tjhe yaar... u have to go... " she said to herself trying to control herself. Her head was spinning again. Her flight was scheduled in 4 hours but here she was a total mess. Her health has deteriorated instead of being better. " nisha... nisha... control urself yaar... remember your kabir is waiting... u have to be there... for him " she said.- U can never stop admiring the love Nibir have for each other😳

Nisha was crying in her bedroom when her phone rang. She saw the caller id and wiped her tears trying to control them. " hello kabir... kaisa h... sab thik chal rha h na... tune kuch khaya na... sara din kaam mat karta rehna... ur tune vo..." she started off. " nisha... kya hua... tu ro rhi thi kya " he asked concerned. " nhi... nhi to mai kyu roungi..." she said. " jhooth bolegi mjhse..?" Kabir said. " Mjhe pta h u missed ur target but koi baat nhi na nisha... next time you will surely win" he tried to cheer her up. But here she was tensed... tensed because she knew if he get to know about her health he will be right back without a second thought. " tjhe kisne btaya... " she asked. " supriya ka phone aaya tha... usne btaya... " kabir replied. " Ur kuch kha usne " she asked in a timid voice. " nhi... kyu kuch hua h kya " he asked. " Nhi to kuch nhi hua... mai to bus ese hi" she said. " Achha nisha I will call u back... mjhe jana padega... ur ha ab rona nhi ur apna dhyaan rakhna... ur tu aaegi na" he asked softly. " ha kabir... tjhe pta h na mai kabhi apna promise nhi todti... ur you too take care ok... parso milte h" she said and hanged up- Love the way Nisha is trying to mask her pain and be strong for Kabir😳 The way Kabir understands her is adorable Their concern for each other and the fact that they can leave anything for each other is just amazing yaar

Mrs. Nisha kabir kumar? " the driver enquired. " Yes " she said smiling at her own name. " how cute my name sounds with his " she thought smiling.- Adorable😳😳

Here kabir was in rehearsal hall doing what he is best in. But his heart wasn't present in it. He was somewhere else. His heart was waiting... waiting for its beat come and make him alive once again . One of his student called him and they started their rehearsal. Kabir was dancing on the beat when he felt nisha's presence. His face was showing his happiness, that gloomy expression vanished and got replaced by his brightest smile. He twirled the lady hard with whom he was rehearsing and freed her. He reached the door and there entered his reason of life his wifey. He immediately took her in his arms and started twirling with her. Nisha was more than happy seeing him and being in his arm was the best feeling. She leaned on him and hugged him like no one's is watching. The music stopped and the crew applaud loudly for the love birds. Nisha realised her surroundings and left him- Loved this part also😆❤️ lagta hai favorite parts highlight karte karte post limit khatam ho jaayegi😆 Their excitement, their perception of the other's presence, their love for each other...everything is perfect yaar and beyond adorable

" Nisha... tu aa gyi... kitni der lga di... pta h maine tjhe kitna miss kia" kabir said. " kitna miss kia " nisha asked. " itna saa" kabir said showing her a small gap between his fingers. " kabir tu kitna k hai yaar... " she said. " Ur tu mere k se kitti j h yaar " he replied laughing. " Chal hotel chalte h... fir shaam ko concert bhi h na... " kabir said leading the way taking her hand in his. She smiled at him. But she felt she will trip any moment she clutched his hand tightly and gave him her best smile.
" Tu thik h na nisha... " kabir asked concerned. " offo... sil of laxmi... relax me m perfectly fine ok... " she said.- Cuteness overload😳😳

So a perfect chapter once again😳

Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago

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mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: arviabhigya
lagta hai last week main bahut saari stories update huyi hain😆i need to read all updates now😆
i dont know mere comments tumhe kab milenge but let me atleast read ur story😳
also i dont think i have reserved posts on this story so
res😆

mihu... agli baar se I will res for u.. 🤣 🤗