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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786



mele nibir loo le ai toh me kaishe na Lou???
phups 😭

ale vo bhi chup ho jaenge... pehle tm to rona band karo
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...

Superb update ...👏
Mindblowing ...👏
Loved it ...

thanks amina
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanju

superb👏

update soon...

thanks anju
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

ale vo bhi chup ho jaenge... pehle tm to rona band karo




OK... promise karo!!! 😕
bolo ruhi promise..?? 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786




OK... promise karo!!! 😕
bolo ruhi promise..?? 😊

ru promise
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow mansi...awesome yaar
I thought nishu is pregnant
i liked ur kabir...
nisha is wrong at this point of time..😉
Loved this angry young man
kabir se chupane ki kya jaroorat h..😕
amazing update...
full of emotions..👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: naina.majik

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Wow mansi...awesome yaar
I thought nishu is pregnant</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">i liked ur kabir...</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">nisha is wrong at this point of time..😉
Loved this angry young man
kabir se chupane ki kya jaroorat h..😕</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">amazing update...</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">full of emotions..👏</font>👏👏👏

thanks nishi
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Posted: 10 years ago
TJM - 5 It's been 3 hours since he had left and now nisha's heart was racing madly thinking about him. " kabir kha h tu... khi kuch... nhi nisha esa kuch nhi hoga.. kabir thik hoga... naraz h na thoda... abhi waapas aa jaega" she tried to console herself. " bhagwan ji pls... pls mere kabir ko waapas bhej do... jo koi saza deni h mjhe de do but pls use waapas bhej do" she folded her hand and started praying, tears still making their way through her cheeks. She was hyperventilating now thinking of every possible possibility. She was marching in her living room in anxiety when she heard a car screeched to a halt. Nisha looked at the door and found kabir coming in. She felt so relieved and happy. She just ran in to him crashing herself in his arms. " koi itna darata h kya kabir... jaan nikal gyi thi meri... pta h kitne bure khayal aa rhe the mjhe... kitna darr gyi thi mai... aage se.." she couldn't complete as he jerked her away. " mjhe neend aa rhi h " kabir said and went to the room without sparing a look at her. she was dumbfounded at what he just did. A feeling of getting abandoned washed over her being in a minute. She felt like she was all alone in this big world with no one there by her side. " nhi... kabir..." she said and ran into the room to found him lying on the bed asleep. She sat beside him on the floor. He looked so exhausted and was in so much of pain that she couldn't help but curse herself for what she said. " m so sorry kabir... I never meant that words..." she cried. She took out the first aid box and started tending his wound ever so softly so that he won't get disturbed. " this is just because of me... I'm so mean... I hurt u in my insecurities. " she said sobbing. The night went by with the two lovebirds in their own pain. Nisha woke up first and saw a sleeping kabir. " aaj tjhe mai naaraz nhi rehne dungi kabir... kuch bhi ho jae teri nisha tjhe mna legi" she whispered in his ears and got up to get ready. Kabir woke up with a heavy head and a painful feeling. He looked at his hand which was bandaged now. A small sad smile appeared for a microsecond which soon got replaced by an angry expression. " mna kia tga fir bhi nhi mani..." kabir said. He got up and started getting ready for the day. As he came in the living room he found nisha standing at the dining table with a smile on her face. " kabir... dekh I have ur fav... bread butter jam... kal se tne kuch nhi khaya na... " she said and stand in front of him with the plate in her hand. Kabir didn't even looked at the plate. He just stared nisha with mixed emotions of anger pain and love in his eyes. " just move away... " kabir hissed. He moved nisha away from himself softly yet firmly. He just didn't know what to do so he did what was best. He immediately walked away from the room leaving behind nisha deeply rooted in her guilt. " Kyu karti h tu esa nisha... mat kar... mat kar mere lie kuch" he thought when a tear of agony and pain rolled down his cheeks. " kya karu mai kabir... kya karu ki tujhe mna lu... " she asked sliding through the wall letting her grief engulfing her. Kabir was out for the whole day, practicing actually punishing himself for god knows what. The only thing he can think about was her words banging his mind. Here nisha was weeping whole day. " nhi nisha.. ese rone se kuch nhi hoga... kabir se maafi to mangni hi h tjhe... usse kisi bhi haal m mna k rhungi mai..." she thought wiping her tears and started preparing for her mission. Kabir came back in the evening and found a lock at the door. He took out a spare key and opened it. " aaj light nhi h kya..." he asked himself but ealked straight to their bedroom. He switched on the light and what he saw melted his heart though not completely. There were pictures of their beautiful moments together everywhere on the walls. The room was decorated with balloon and candles. There was a soft music flowing in the air. But he still frowned and said " nisha... baahar nikal". She came out wearing a beautiful blue sari though fixed a little untidy but yet she was looking gorgeous. " kya h ye sab..." he asked angrily. Nisha knew kabir will walk out once again so she locked the door and came in front of him. " Kabir I know I have hurted u beyond anything... but kabir I didn't mean all of that... I was just a little high on my emotions... my insecurities got better of my heart and I did that stupidest stint. I know u luv me and will always luv me only... pls forgive me this time... I promise I won't let u down... I luv u kabir and.." nisha couldn't complete as kabir moved away ones again. " ho gya tera... kh dia jo kehna tha... ab ja yha se... ur tjhe nhi jana h to mai chala jata hu" he said and turned. But this time nisha wasn't in a mood to let him go. Kabir would have walked only a few steps when he was pulled forcibly and was pinned to the adjacent wall. " samajhta kya h tu khud ko ha... yha mai tjhe mnaye ja rhi hu ur tere nakhre hi nhi katam ho rhe h..." an angry nisha gritted from her teeth. Kabir's initial reaction was of shock was soon converted into an angry one. He rolled again as now nisha was pinned to the wall. " achha... ehsaan kar rhi h tu mjhpe... mjhe mnake... jitna hurt kia h na tune mjhe... uske lie mai tjhe itni jaldi maaf nhi karunga." kabir said. Nisha's anger was also on peak now. " achha... esa kya kia h maine... ha... ha manti hu galti ki h maine kisi ki baateon sinkar mjhe ese react nhi karna chahie tga... par iski sza bhi bhugti h na kabir... jitna dard tjhe hue ha utna hi mjhe bhi hua h... ye hi soch soch k jaan nikali jaa rhi thi ki mai esa kar kaise sakti hu esa kh kaise sakti hu... par tu tu mjhe akad dikha rha h..." she screamed pushing him. " achha mai tjhe akad dikha rha hu... ur ye sab kya h galti teri ur sza to maine bhi bugti h nisha... tu akeli nhi tadpi h... mai bhi utna hi roya hu... utne hi dard hua h mjhe bhi... " kabir said grabbing her shoulders. " to kyu itna dard de rha h khud ko... mai galat hu to mjhe sehne de... tu kyu khu ko punish kar rha h" she asked grabbing his collar. " kyuki pyaar karta hu tjhse nisha... paaglo ki tarah pyaar karta hu... tjhe agar ek sui bhi chubhti h na to talwar chalne jitna dard hota h mjhe samjhi... ur jab tu esi baatien karti h na to esa lgta h kisi ne mera dil hi nikal lia h mere seene se... saans lena mushkil ho jata h mera..." he said tears brimming through his eyes. Nisha couldn't taje it anymore and she just crushed herself on him pulling him closer to herself. " ur jab tu baat nhi karta na mjhse to mera jeena bekaar lhne lgta h kabir... man karta h khud ko itni saza du ki jaan nikal jae meri... ur us par jab teri narazgi ki wajah mai khud hu... to khud se hi nafrat ho rhi h kabir... khud se sharam aa rhi h mjhe..." she sobbed harder... " jee karta h khud ko khatam kar du... aazad kar du tjhe apne aap se... teri khamoshi nhi sahi jaati mjhse kabir... nhi sahi jati" she said crying out her heart. " ae... paagal ladki... esa kuch socha bhi h na to mjhse bura koi nhi hoga samjhi" kabir pushed her a little and cupped her face in his palm. " tjhse naaraj hoke mai kha jaaunga nisha... tere siwa mera koi ghar nhi..." kabir said and pulled her in his tight embrace. Tears flowed through their eyes but this time they were conveying love and just love for each other. " Nisha waada kar tu kabhi esa nhi sochegi kabhi khud ko dusro se compare nhi karegi.." kabir asked. " waada kabir.." she said. They stood their in each other's embrace for a long time. scroll down... 🤣
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" Waise nisha... vo ladki thi badi hot... h na" kabir came back to his k panti again. " kya... kya bola tne.." nisha jerked him away and glared at him throwing daggers through her eyes. " bus yhi ki vo ladki kitni hot thi" kabir made a cute face. " achha hot thi na... abhi mai yjhe btati hu hot kya hota h.. ruk" she squealed and started running behind him with the pillow. " are nishu dekh... maar mat yaar lag jaegi" he said while running for his life. " lg jaegi to lg jae... aaj mai teri taange tod dungi kabir" nisha hissed. They both kept running in the room and after a time both fall down on the bed with nisha beating him with pillow. But as they landed on the bed with a force the bed broke apart from the middle.

They both looked at each other in horror and then started laughing like maniacs. After some time nisha stopped laughing and looked at him in tears. " m so sorry kabir... I never meant to hurt u... I can never do that... I know I have proved myself unworthy but I luv u kabir I luv u..." she said with her eyes down. " shhh... nisha dare u ever say urself unworthy... ur my treasure nisha... my heart my soul... my everything is from u... I m sorry too nisha... if I have taken care of u... this wouldn't have happened... just remember one thing... no one in this world can replace u in my heart or in my life... samjhi" kabir said lovingly. She just couldn't say anything and hugged him with all her love. She felt so blessed to have him and thanked god for everything. Kabir looked at her and put a kiss on her forehead when he felt she shivered. " Nisha... u r ok?" He asked concerned. " yes kabir... m just.." she couldn't complete as her head throbbed and she fainted.
Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dono saachi main baache hai 🤣
Ek pagal bachi /.. dusra K bacha 🤣
but aisa kyun lag raha hai ki abh inka bacha aane wala hai ? 😳
Continue soon 😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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