Nibir SS - Teri Meri Kahani (part 10 in page 42) 7/01 - Page 2

Originally posted by: itznimi003

no its kasir dear (kabir +singh+rathore=kasir)

Oho... oops Sorry..🤣🤣

Awesm prologue, do continue. Plz pm me.

Of course ..yar..continue ...would love to read it...sounds intresting. ..and do pm me..😃

Plz plz continue

agli baar se no asking... only posting samjhi... hm to hai hi nibir k diwane bus tm likhe jao hm padte jaenge... awesome prolouge yaar mera kabira gangster... jaldi se update karna ur pm bhi pls pls pretty pls... (ab to everybody know this is my fav dialogue)

Kabir as gangster 😲

Thankyou...so much guyzzz...n will try to update as soon as possible...

Hey... Buddies m back...here is d first part...
The city in my story is "Mumbai"

Happy Reading...

PART 1:-

PROFESSIONAL TALKS WID PERSONAL EMOTIONS

At 8:30 pm

Its time for umesh mehta's Show "AAJ KI BAAT" & People were addicted to dis show becoz of his different and unique way of showing reality

Namaskar... "AAJ KI BAAT" Me aap sabhi ka swagat h
Mai Umesh Mehta...Aaj fir aapke samne le k aaya hu ek chouka dene wali khabar...
Jaane maane Industrialist Mr. Sumit Malhotra...pichle 2 Din se laapata h...unki patni ka kehna tha ki..wo 2 din pehle...ek conference attend krne k liye ghar se nikle the...Aur uske baad se unka koi pta nhi...
Kaun ho sakta h... iske pichhe...kiski saazish h iski jaach abhi b jaari h...

At 9 Pm in editor in chief's(Umesh mehta) Cabin for emergency conference meeting der were 12 members in meeting

Umesh- GE everybody...Aaj ki ye meeting ek khaas maksad k liye rakhi gyi h...Mr. sumeet malhotra d great industrialist aaj se inka case hmari first priority h...ye hmare channel ki TRP...k liye bahut zaruri h...

Rahul(Junior Reporter)- Sir but hmara channel to already no. 1 pe h

Umesh- Rahul No.1 pe pahuchna aasan h but us position ko maintain rakhna hi asli challange h...

Saurav - U r right sir...

Nisha - But sir is sumit malhotra missing case me kiska hath ho sakta h???

Umesh- well nisha...yhi to hme pta lagana h...

Nisha- yes sir i know but sir Pichle ek mahine me aise 4 cases ho gye h...wo b ek se ek naami logo k...aur abhi tak iska khulasa nhi hua h...i think ye sare cases ek dusre se connected h...

Umesh-hmmm...I was also thinking d same...anyway...ek hi Insaan h jispe sidhaa doubt kia ja sakta h...

Saurav - sir R u talking about "KASIR"????

Umesh - right saurav...aaj se tum n nisha is case k incharge ho yeh lo kasir ki file...

Nisha - opens d file...sir isme to sirf iski age likhi h i.e. 23 yrs old...na hi koi photo h na hi koi clue...fir hum ise kaise dhundenge...

Umesh - smiles lightly n says...he is a intelligent gangster...ek saal pehle hi isne underworld ki duniya me kadam rakha ...tha...n now he is most wanted gangster...kaha se aaya h...kaun h...kaisa dikhta h ...ye koi nhi janta...aur yhi tumhe pta lgana h...

nisha & saurav- ok sir we start our investigation frm 2morrow...

umesh- ok u may leave now

outside BCN channel office

saurav- nishu humne josh josh me keh to dia ki hum pta lga lenge but hum ye sab karenge kaise...

nisha- dont worry yr koi na koi rasta nikal jayega...
den both of dem started walking on road...n suddenly nisha looks up at d sky...n says ...Saurav wo dekh tootta tara...n she spread her arms n shouts loudly wid all of d strength she had "WELCOME TO MY HEART" ...
on seeing her like dis saurav says

Saurav- nishu ek baat puchhu tu jab b toota tara dekhti h to aise kyu chillaati h...

nisha - saurav tujhe pta h...jab b koi taara toot kr aasaman se juda ho k jaata h na to wo jaate jaate hme ek nyi umeed ek nyi roshni ki kiran de k jata h...

saurav- ye tujhe usi ne kaha tha na nishu...sach sach btana tu aaj b usko yaad krti h na...
nisha smiles painfully n says saurav yaad to use kia jaata h jise hum bhulte h...aur mai use kabhi bhuli hi nhi ...to yaad kya krna...wo aaj b mere sath h mere vishwaas k rup me...
den suddenly she thinks about something n says
nisha- saurav ek tareeka h kasir k bare me pta lgane ka
saurav - kya
nisha- i hv an informer n wo hme kasir k bare me koi n koi clue zarur de dega
saurav - nishu lagta h tera tootta tara wala formula kaam kr gya
nisha smiles...

At 11pm

At Mumbai Outerside...where only 1 old cottage was der n fir whaaa dur dur tak desert hi desert tha...people says dat dis place is haunted so no body dares to come der...

A person walks towards cottage he open d lock of main door wid magnetic card key..d door opens...der exist one more door he presses d button of door n d door recognises d person's heartbeat ...d heartbeat recognized n door open...d view of dat cottagge frm inside is totally different frm outside...


He enters...inside it was...a huge bunglow(named as TMK VILLA)...wid well furnished hall...having one 3 seater sofa n 2 two seater sofa...hanging black coloured curtains on wall which makes hall looks classy yet maintaining simplicity... he walks through hall...n goes upstair

He opens door & enters in his room...and den...he moves towards wall der was a button he presses it...again der exist a door ...which...recognizes his retina n den opens he walk inside ...switch on d tv Put BCN channel...he sees d headlines of Sumit malhotra mystery case and smiles ...
suddenly his phone rang...he picks up n says hello sweetheart...
kirti-hey kabir bro how r u????
kabir- m...gud my angel n as always missing uh...
kirti- miss u too bro...actually...bhaiii...mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi...bhai wo...nish...kabir den cuts her off...
kabir- angel...its too late here...n m too sleepy will talk 2 u tomorrow...n he hung up d phn.

how is it guyzzz...your criticism are most welcome...

res😆

UNRES NO:43😆

Nimi.. Yaar..😲 Tu toh ek damm Stylish Writer nikali😲👏👏👏👏👏

When I was reading first Part I was Feeling like I was watching a Crime Thriller with full on suspenses & Mysteries to be solved...!!!! Superbly written yaar.. Loved it👏👏👏👏

You knw I m Arjun Fan.. Arjun was a crime thriller on Star plus which is nw off air.. & U knw wat This Stroy gives me ASR (Arjun Suryakant Rawte) feels just like My Mannu dii's FF gives me..!!!!☺️😆

Thank U yaar...🤗

So Nishu & Saurav is behind Kasir😃

Well Mujhe aisa q lag rah ahi ki Kabir & Nisha knws eachother.. Actually frm the tootha taara scene I just guessed...😉😆🤣🤣 Mujhe Guess karne ki bimari hai dat too I got frm Arjun☺️🤣🤣 If NiBir knws eachother den Hw they went apart??
Kirti also knws Nishu?? How??? this also indicates towards the fact dat NiBir knws eachother 😆🤣 Let the Stry to unfold first Den I wl get my answers.. 😉😆🤣

@Bold Loved theis Sentence...👏👏👏

nisha - saurav tujhe pta h...jab b koi taara toot kr aasaman se juda ho k jaata h na to wo jaate jaate hme ek nyi umeed ek nyi roshni ki kiran de k jata h...

Kabir's Entry was Suprb.. Loved the Minutr descriptions of his Villa...👏👏👏

Superbly written Nimi👍🏼

Thanks 4 PM😳 Sorry 4 late comments😳
waiting 4 stry to unfold..
wl read part 2 & Unres now..😆🤣

Do write More🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣

its so mysterious... I luv it already... jaldi jaldi update karna