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Episode 280 by Harshika

It is the next morning...

Scene 1: Dolly's office

Dolly enters Adhiraj's room. "Sir may I come in?"

"Yes come in...achhoo!!" *sneezes*

"Sir wo maine rough idea socha hai aapke behen ke room ke lie. Wahi discuss karna tha."

"Miss Dolly, kya aapko pata nahi ki hume rough ideas nahi...*coughs*...final work pasand hai. Isliye aap jaiye aur ek firm model tayyar kijiye, fir akar hume bataiyye. *sneezes again* "Excuse me"

"OK Sir" Dolly leaves.

Scene 2: KNH bedroom

Its 9 am and Kabir wakes up, and is surprised to see Nisha sitting besides the bed doing meditation. "Nisha, ye tu kya kar rahi hai? Tere pair me toh sprain hai! Aise me tujhe yoga karne ki koi zaroorat nahi." He asks worriedly.

"Chill Kabir! main sirf pranayam kar rahi hoon. Isme pairo ka koi use nahi. Aur waise bhi aaj subah se mera pain bahut hi kam hai. Pata hai Kabir, mujhe realize hua ki yoga se stress sachmuch kam ho jata hai."

Even Kabir realized that Nisha didn't get her usual nightmares the previous night.

"Isiliye maine ye decide kiya hai ki abse roz yoga karungi. Aur jab tak pair theek nahi hota, tab tak sirf meditation."

Kabir smiled. He suddenly remembered something. As Nisha's eyes were closed, he quickly went to the cupboard and took out something happily. He came and sat down next to Nisha. When Nisha opened her eyes, she saw him holding a beautiful red gown and smiling." Kaisa hai" he asked.

Ye tu mere lie laya hai?

Nahi Nisha! Hamari wo neighbor hai na, Miss Diyah uske liye laya tha.!! Achha hai na?!!

"Kabir, tu...! K Kahika!!" she tried to hit him but Kabir held her hand and slowly made her stand up.

"Tu bhi na Nisha. Ye beautiful sa gift Kabira sirf apni wifey ke liye laya hai. Tujhe pasand to aaya na?'

"Bahut sundar hai Kabir!" she smiled.

"Aur ek baat Nisha, bahut din ho gaye hum kahi bahar nahi gaye. Toh main soch raha tha ki agar hum aaj dinner karne chale toh..?"

"Bahut hi achha idea hai Kabir. Yaha paas hi me The Oakwood Restaurant hai. Waha chalte hai."

"Theek hai Nisha, par main chahta hu ki tu aaj yeh red gown pehne."

"OK Kabir!" she smiled, and started going towards the kitchen.

Kabir turned around and smiled happily. She again came and to his surprise, placed a kiss on his cheeks and went out of the bedroom. He smiled even more and thought his plans were gradually working and Nisha seemed more relaxed now.

Scene 3: Dolly's office(Adhiraj's cabin)

"Sir may I come in?"

"Miss Dolly, aap? Itni jaldi aapka final design ban gaya? *coughs*

"No Sir! Main actually aapko ye... ye tablets dene aayi thi", she said bringing forward her hand. "Aapko cold ho gaya hai na, aur bahar ka climate bhi theek nahi hai toh..."

"Matlab ab aap mere personal matters bhi workout karne lag gayi? Aap yaha kis post par hai? Interior designer ke ya nurse ke? " he shouted.

"Sir main toh bas..." she tried saying nervously.
"Aapko kya lagta hai? Hum apna khayaal rakhna nahi jante? Hum lawaris hai?! Humara koi nahi?! Hum akele hai iska matlab ye nahi ki puri duniya ko hamare life me jhaakne ki permission de de!" *coughs again* "You better mind your own business."

This time Dolly didn't keep quite. "Bas kijiye Sir! Maine dekha ki aapki tabiyat kharab hai aur aap busy hone ki wajah se us par dhyan nahi de rahe, isiliye...sirf isiliye main aapko ye medicines dene aayi. Meri family ne mujhe hamesha ek baat sikhai hai, ki jab apne aas-paas koi problem me ho aur hum uski helps kar sakte ho, toh hume karni chahiye. Par aap is insaniyat ke nate help karne ko agar taak-jhaank samjhte hai to jaisi aapki marzi." She keeps the tablets on the table and leaves.

Scene 4: Umesh and Aman in an auto-rickshaw

"Bas bhaiyya, yahi rok dijiye." said Umesh to the auto-driver. "Aao Aman." They get down. "Ye dekho, yahi hai wo jagah jiski main baat kar raha tha. Ye hamare restaurant ke lie kaisi rahegi?"

"Ye toh bahut achhi hai Laddoo!! Aur iska location bhi bilkul perfect hai. Side hi main shopping centre hai toh hume customers bhi bahut sare mil jaenge."

"Ha Aman, maine iske owner se baat kar chuki hai. Ek baar paise ki arrangement ho jae, fir main deal aage badhaunga."

"Laddoo..wo mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha."

"Ha, bolo Aman"

"Waise to kafi paise jama ho gaye hai, lekin phir bhi agar kam pad jae toh main apne gehne bech dungi. Usse hamari sare problems solve ho jaengi."

"Ye kaisi baat kar rahi ho Aman?! Wo gehne tumhare bauji ne die the tumhe aur..."
"Laddoo!! Tumhine ne to kaha than a ki ye restaurant hamara hai toh hum dono ko milkar ise banana hoga. Aur ek baar hamara restaurant khul jae aur usse hume profit mil jae fir tum mere lie naye gehne banwa dena. Main tumhari patni hoon Laddoo! Har sukh-dukh ka hume milkar samna karna hai." She holds his hand.

"Pata hai Aman, tumhari yahi sab baate hai jo hamesha mere dil ko chhu jati hai", he grew emotional and hugged her. After realizing that they were in the middle of the road they broke their hug.

Scene 5: Dolly sitting at her workplace

Dolly is upset over what all happened. She takes her phone and puts Saurav's number on the screen, but then keeps down the phone hesitantly. A tear rolls down her cheek. She slowly places her hand on her stomach, "Baby, ye kya ho raha hai Mama ke saath? Main toh bas sir ko tablets..." she thinks for a while. "par Sir ne aisa kyu kaha ki who akele hai,... lekin jo bhi ho unhe ye samajhna chahiye tha ki main sirf unke ache ke lie tablets leke gayi thi... Par pata hai baby, is baat se bhi zyada bura mujhe kisi aur baat ka lag raha hai. Is waqt mujhe Saurav se baat karni hai. {The song Yaara re from Roy starts in the background} Wo mujhe samajhta hai, par pata nahi kyu ek ajeeb sa faasla ban gaya hai. Main chaah ke bhi usse baat nahi kar paa rahi.

{Ajnabi kahe ki apna kahe
kya kahein kya na kahein .
Ishare bhi chup hain
Zubaan khamosh hai
Sadaa gumsum si hai
Tanha aagosh hai
Yaara re, yaara re..
Kyun faaslon mein bhi tu yaara re}

Scene 6: The Oakwood Restaurant

Nisha and Kabir are sitting at a table. A perfectly lit place with romantic numbers playing in the background. Nisha is looking at Kabir thinking how much he loves her and she loves him as much. But she is a bit surprised.

"Kabir, tu ye baar-baar yaha-waha kya dekh raha hai?" she asks confused.

"Dekh raha hoon ki koi mere hot wifey ko dekhke behosh toh nahi ho gaya!"

"Tu bhi na Kabir!" she smiles, " Waise tujhpar bhi yeh black coat bahut suit karta hai"

"Attention Ladies and gentlemen, aaj humare restaurant ki anniversary hai aur isliye hum aaj kuch special karne wale hai. Yaha pe jitney bhi loving couples baithe hue hai unse main request karta hoon ki who yaha dance floor par aakar ek romantic sa dance kare." The hotel manager announces, and everybody claps.

Nisha excitedly, "Kabir, chal na hum bhi chalte hai."

Kabir is surprised, "Ye tu keh rahi hai Nisha?!.. Waise toh main dance ko kabhi mana nahi karta lekin aaj nahi Nisha. Tere pair me chot lagi hai aur aise me..."

"Maine kaha na tujhse Kabir, mera pair bilkul theek hai...aur waise bhi tu hai na mere saath. Mujhe aur kisi cheez ki fikar nahi..." she looks at him dreamily and suddenly starts "Bas, mujhe tere saath dance karna hai matlab karna hai!..."

Kabir stands up giving her an angry look, and suddenly sits on his knees, bringing his hand forward asking for Nisha's hand. Nisha, happy seeing this gesture of his, keeps her hand on his and they both move towards the dance floor.

{The song starts --- Kahi to Hogi Woh' from Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na} https://www.saavn.com/p/song/hindi/Jaane-Tu-Ya-Jaane-Na/Kahin-To-Hogi-Ho/KgdGaxgDAH8

Kabir lightly places his hand over her waist and hers over his shoulder, and both hold each other's free hands, and start swinging with the tune. He lightly pushes her away and then pulls her with one hand wrapping her in his arms, and again they swing with the tune lost into each other. Nisha turns around and places both her hands near his neck, while Kabir places his on her waist and they both dance looking into each other's eyes. He holds her both hands, they move one step backwards and again come towards each other. Then he slowly twirls her holding her one hand. And when she comes near him, he makes her bend and bends over her slightly placing a kiss over her neck. Then he holds her waist and lifts her up lightly and turns around. Nisha feels that she is on top of the world(both literally as well as connotatively) . He slowly brings her down, cups her face gently in his hands and places a kiss on her forehead. A tear escapes her eyes. They gaze at each other...lost...As the music stops, everybody around starts clapping, and they hug each other tightly.


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So Sorry to inform that the next episode is on Saturday and not tmrw. Sorry abt this...really really sorry
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Veryyy beautiful,and well written...waiting for next...doing a fabulous job, nibir dance was soo romantic.
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Episode 281 by Lekha

AN: (Author's Note)
I know, another surprise epi😆
yesterday I posted that we wont have an epi today coz maggy was busy but she can write now...but today you guys have my epi...hope u all like it😳...n tmrw you'll get maggy's epi. Enjoy reading and Do Comment and/or Like😳 and about error. PLEASE. If you find them let me know in discussion thread...i'll correct😊

"So you would like to apply for a loan?", the manger asked.

Umesh nodded and the manager went through the file Umesh handed over. It contained a detailed plan of the restaurant business.

"Laddoo", Aman whispered to her husband, "I said we'll sell my jewelry right?"

"I can't let you do that", Umesh whispered back, "If we get this loan it'll be good enough."

Aman was about to argue but Umesh held her hand indicating it's the wrong place.


The manager laid down the file.

"You business seems promising", he said.

Umeh and Aman smiled at each other.

"But we'll need some kind of asset that can be in our control till you pay us back", he continued.

The smiles faltered.

"But sir we don;t have anything of that sort", Aman said, "You seem to believe in our idea. Can't you make an exception?"

"Sorry ma'am. It's the rules. Do come back with something and I'll gladly give you the loan.", The manager said with a smile.

The couple tried their best to return the smile and walked out.


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Dolly was busy trying to get the full plan for AR's sister's unborn baby's room. Ar had rejected three of her designs already and now she was trying to create something that he won't criticize.She got up to go to the washroom when she felt her vision go a little blur. Before she knew it she lost her conscious.


Thankfully AR was passing by and caught Dolly before she hit the floor.

"Someone get first aid and someone call the doctor", he demanded and everyone ran to do what they are told.


In a short while the doctor arrived and examined Dolly. She was made to take rest in the infirmary of the office.

"She's fine", The doctor assured AR, " She was just exhausted. She shouldn't over work like this especially since she's pregnant."

Before AR could respond to the last line the doctor handed him the prescription and left.


His PA took the prescription from a still shocked AR and took care of getting the medicines. AR walked back to his cabin in silence.The minute the dor closed behing him he toppled his chir down in frustration.


"She was pregnant. I should have known", AR thought, "She should have told me. What if something happen to the child. It'll be my fault...again!"

he let out a frustrated scream.


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"Saurav", Kirti said as she stood at the door of his room, "Are you free?"

"Kirti",he said with a smile spontaneously apearing on his face, "Come in. Ma let you in right?"

Kirti nodded but she didn't smile.

"Is everything all right?", Saurav asked as they both sat on the couch.

"Saurav.I don't want Dolly di and you to fight because of me", she said, "You both didn't agree on letting me join your company right?"

Sarav was surprised.

"Kirti! That's not your fault", Saurav said, "Dolly doesn't seem to have time for me. With her job and taking her of herself and with the baby coming along..."

Saurav trailed off and Kirti noticed the disappointment in his face.

"Relationships are not easy", Kirti said, "You will face challenges."

"That's true Kirti", Saurav said, "But she seems so focused on being independent that she has forgotten that I'm here."

"Maybe she wants to prove herself", Kirti said.

"Does that mean she should forget she loves me?",Saurav asked.

Kirti didn't reply but she felt very bad for Saurav.


"Chod yaar", Saurav said, "You are in the company final."

Kirti smiled at him.

"If you need anything-"

"I'll call you", Saurav completed her sentence.

Kirti nodded and she left.


Just then Saurav got a call from Dolly's office about her fainting incident and he rushed out.


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Nisha handed a tea to her mom and dad and settled down opposite to them.

"What happened Nisha?', Laxmi asked getting tensed, "You aren't having issues again right? Should we get another counselling appointment? We can have Kabir there too this time?"

"Laxmi, relaxme", Nisha said with a faint smile.

"Then what's the problem?", Ramesh asked.

"Actually...",Nisha started and laid her cup of tea down, "Kabir and I went on a date yesterday."

"That's good nishu", Laxmi said.

"Yes. It is", Nisha said, "but I have a feeling Kabir is holding himself back these days."

"What do you mean?",Ramesh asked.

"Well", Nisha said hesitently, "Hedidn;t want to dance yesterday till I convinced him to. He doesn't flirt with me that much anymore. I think he's getting too cautious."

"He's just worried about you", Laxmi said, "So he's trying not to make you feel uncomfortable again."


"I know ma", Nisha said, "but I'm comfortable with him now. I told him he doesn't have to try to get the stress out of me. Being with him has helped a lot too. I wish he would go back to his old self. That has helped me a lot. He used to distract all the pain and sadness."

"Talk to him Nisha", Ramesh said, "He thinks you are having second thoughts about the two of you."

"What?!", Nisha said, "But I love him. I think I'm ready to take baby steps to take our relationship forward."

"I think Kabir should know this", Ramesh said.


Nisha nodded.


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Later that day Ramesh was planning out his music class for the next day at the terrace. Umesh and Kirti were standing at the entrance wondering if it's a good idea for them to go ahead and talk. Ramesh looked up from his notes to find two hesitant people at the door.


"What happened?", he asked them, "Come on. It's just a terrace. No ghosts here."

The brother and sister smiled at their uncle's poor try to crack a joke.

"Chachu", Umesh started off, "We were thinking about Dolly and Saurav."

"What about them?", Ramesh asked.

Kirti and Umesh looked at each one last time before telling Ramesh about their observations regarding the newly formed couple. Kirti also told them about her conversation with Saurav.


"I'm just worried that this will end bad", Umesh concluded.

Ramesh thought for a while.

"Laxmi and I will talk to both of them separately. Then we'll see what's to be done.", he told the worried duo.


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It was dinner time and Nisha had just set the table. She was so clueless as to how to let Kabir know that she's ready to take baby steps.

"Oh God! How do I do this?", she said.

"Nisha!!", Kabir called out at that particular time, "Where's my black t-shirt?"


Nisha went to their room to find Kabir only in a towel looking through the cupboard. He turned around to find a pair of eyes looking at him. His first instinct was to cover the distance between them but then he held back. He couldn't deal with seeing Nisha give him that look again.

"T-shirt", he said bluntly and quickly turned towards the cupboard.

Nisha was about to say something at his behaviour when she thought that actions speak louder than words.


She found the t-shirt and kabir was about to take it when she hid it behind her.

"Nisha give it", he said cautiously, not wanting to get too close until she does.

"Kiss me first", she said.

"What?!", he asked in surprise.

"Kiss me and you get you t-shirt"

Kabir didn't know what was going on.

"Nisha. Give it na. Then we'll do yoga together"

"No yoga till you kiss me", Nisha said with a stubborn look.


Kabir sighed and kissed her on the forehead. He was tempted to go for her neck but then he knew it can't go further and it'll get ugly again.


Nisha wasn't happy. she pouted and sat on the bed.

"What happened", he asked concerned.

"Kabir", she said, "Do you know why it was easy for me to move on from Viraj sir?"

"The trip"

"And you Kabir. Remember I told you that you didn't let me think about my pain."

Kabir remembered his words and smiled.

"You were so K that i forgot to think about my troubles. I want that from you."

Kabir's attention went back to Nisha.

"Be the Kabira who tried to make me laugh", Nisha said, "The yoga helps but being with you helps more."

"But Nisha I see you get a little uncomfortable-"

"I tell you to kiss me and you pretend like my lips are invisible."

"But-"

Nisha put her arms around Kabir's neck.

"I want K Kabira back. ", she said, "The one who makes my life colourful."


She gave Kabir his shirt and got up to leave when she caught her hand and pulled her back down.

"What?", she asked.

"You asked for something", Kabir said with a smirk.

"Wha-"

Kabir cut her off with a kiss. It was soft and tender. She eased into it and wrapped her arms around him again. He broke the kiss.

"Now I earned the t-shirt", he said with a wink and headed to for a shower.


Nisha was in a trance from the kiss. She had never kissed anyone before and it was way better than she had imagined.

"After all it's kabir", she thought with a smile lingering on her lips.



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Epi 282(By Maggy)



Scene1:

Saurav was going 2 Dolly's office. He reached there,searches 4 her n thn met her. He watched Dolly taking medicines frm 1 of the employees.Saurav calld her.

Saurav:Dolly...

Dolly:Arey,Sayrav.Tu yahan kaise? Tujhe kisne bulaya?

Sayrav:Arey,tera matlab hain hain? Teri halaat inta kharab ho gaya aur tu bol rahi hain ki mujhe kisne bulaya?

Dollly:Nahi matlab papa ko bhi toh bula sakte the.

Employee:Woh mam,apki mobile mein last dialed numbr inki thi toh isiliye... Ok,mam main chalti hoon. Ap log baat kijiye.

Dolly:Ok

Saurav:Tu kahna kya chahti hain Dolly? Main teri lyf mein imp nahi hoon?

Dolly:NAhi Sayrav..AIsi baat...

Saurav:Kaisi baat Dolly? Ahcha yeh chhod.. Maine tujhe kitni baar bola hain ki itni kaam mat kiya kar. Aur sabse zarrori baat.Tujhe yeh job karni hi nahi chahiye thi.

Dolly:Par tu janta hain na..Maan aapni pyaaro mein..

Saurav:Baas Dolly... Baar baar ek hi baat kehne se kuch nahi hota... Ab toh mujhe lag raha hain ki tere lyf mein meri koyi value hi nahi rahi

Dolly:sau...

Saurav:Nahi baas Dolly. Main toh baas tera aur teri bachche ka khayal rakhna chahta tha. Lekin mere liye toh teri paas waqt hi nahi hain..

Dolly was nw crying

Saurav:Aur aaj tune prove kar diya ki is bachche pe meri koyi haq hi nahi hain..Yeh bachcha mera nahi hain.. Aaj mujhe lag raha hain ki tu bhi...

Dolly:(shouting):Baas Saurav.. Baas... Main aur nahi sah sakti. Maine tujhe haan sirf isi liye bola tha kyon ki mujhe laga tu alag hain.

Saurav:Haan Dolly ... PAr main jis Dolly se pyaar karta tha woh aisi nahi thi.

Dolly:Bass Saurav.. Tujhe meri saath rishta rakhna hain ki nahi?

Saurav:Matlab kya hain tera?

Dolly:Haan yah na..

Saurav:Sacchi mein Dolly? Toh thik hain koyi rishta nahi rakhna mujhe teri saath.

N he goes frm there leaving behind a shockd n destroyd Dolly.. Bt the whole scene was shown by a person behind the wall n it was none bt AR.

Scene 2:

In the shop

Dadaji:Arey,Viren... Umesh us din bhi kahi chala gaya tha aaj bhi nahi hain.. Kar kya raha hain woh?

Viren:Pata nahi bauji.(2 himself)Kuch toh ghadbaad hain. Us din woh diary aur ab aise gayab ho jana.Akhir baat kya hain?

Scene 3:

In teh evening all the cousins in the terrice of GH(Xcept Dolly). All hav returnd frm work bt is in there respective rooms. UMan tells thm the whole conversations wid the manager.

Umesh:Pata nahi kaha se layunga aisi property.

Kabir:Umesh.EK property hain..

All bcom surprised.

Kirti:Kaunsi jiju?

NIsha:Haan Kabir,Kaunsi?

Kabir:Hamara ghar...

The others:Kyan?

Kabir:Haan toh problem kya hain? Tu jab achchese kama lega toh ghar wapas milhi jayega na..

NIsha:Kabir tu serious hain?

Kabir:Haan..toh?

Aman:Kabir tumhe hum pagal lagte hain?Nahi,hum nahi le sakte.

Suketu:Nahi..Bhaiya-bhabhi. Kabir ka idea bura nahi hain.

Jwala n Bunty also agreed.

UMan:Ok,we will think abt it.

Scene 4:

NiBIr reaches their home

Kabir:Nisha,i hope ki tujhe mera decision sahi laga.Matlab,tu naraj toh nahi hain na ki maine tujhse bina puchhe...

Nisha:Kabir.. Mujhe tujhse baat nahi karni.

Kabir:Par Nisha.

NIsha:Kya Kabir?

Kabir:Tu naraj hain mujhse?

NIsha:Main tujhse bohut jaida naarj hoon. Aur yeh sirf tabhi kaam hoga jab main tujhe thappad marungi.

Kabir:Kya?

Nisha;Haan...

Kabir:Ok..

Nisha:OK???

Kabir(Pouting):Haan..Agar issey tera gussa kaam hota hain toh...

Nisha movd 4ward n Kabir closd his eyes. Bt 2 his surprise he felt a peck in his cheeks...

Nisha:Kaisa laga?

Kabir:Nishu...

Nisha:Kaisa laga yeh?

Kabir:Matlab tu naraj nahi hain?

Nisha:Really kabire..TU kauwa hain.. Main kiase naraj ho sakti hoon?TU aaj meri dil mein apne liye aur izzat kama liya...

Kabir smiled.

Nisha:Aur tere liye ik surprise hain...

Kabir(naughtily):Achcha,kuch aur dena hain?

NIsha:Hmm... Dena toh hain lekin... yeh..

She gave him a letter

Kabir:Yeh kya hain..

Nisha:Khol k dekh

Kabir saw dat it the same letter he got as the confirmation of the job as the assistant choreographar at JAIPUR DREAM DANCE(JD2)

Nisha(xcitedly):Haan...Kabir tujhe job mil gaya...

Kabir;Par NIsha..

NIsha:Kya hua? Tu khush nahi hain?

Kabir:Nishu,actually... Mujhe yeh letter pehle hi mil gaya tyha.. MAin tujhe surprise dena chahta tha.. Par uski baad tere probs ki wajese... NAhi bata saka... Ab toh ulta tune mujhe hi surprise de diya...
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Note:Sry guys 4 being late n 4 late epi. N I knw this was nt a gud epi,actually a vry bad epi. Actually I wrote 2 fast... Sry... 4giv ne.

Actually,m busy wid my nw college n the vacaton jst startd. get vry less tym 2 com 2 IF.So i aplogize 2 all my frnds 4 nt talking wid thm n reading their stories... I wrote the saga n some FFs bt couldn't commnt. So plz 4giv me...

Will come here regularly aftr some days till the vacations..

N 1 more thing..This saga was going MAGICAl... So don't get upset bcoz of 2day's epi,my kamina babas... 😊

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Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 10 years ago
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SORRY READERS...there will be no episode today, we know that you all have been waiting for the episode, but unfortunately today's episode has been cancelled due to some difficulties...hope you all understand us...sincerely we are sorry for the inconvenience caused by us to you...the episodes will resume from tomorrow at the same time...hope you all like the upcoming episodes...sorry...!!!
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EPISODE-283 (BY anju)

Scene 1

Dolly's office

Adhiraj had witnessed all the conversation of Dolly and Saurabh. He clenched his fist as he saw Dolly sinking into her chair and silently sobbing as she kept a hand on her baby

Dolly: Baby what is going wrong? Am I that bad that everyone just comes and goes away like a wind. Why isn't Saurabh understanding! I do love him but I need my own time and space. This is so painful I (Dolly feels dizzy and her head is about to collide with the table when Adhiraj comes and rests his hand in between her head and table)

Adhiraj: Are you allright?

Dolly in state of unconsciousness holds his hand and says

DOLLY(dizzy) : Please don't leave me Saurabh. I just need some time. I am sorry.

Adhiraj asks one of his female assistants to take Dolly TO THE REST ROOM and inform someone from her family to take her home and leaves.

Scene 2

Gangwal house(on terrace)

Aman: It is really good of Kabir and nisha that they are helping us but still we can't take their house as security

UMESH : But why aman? What is the problem?

AMAN : My dad told me one thing about business and that is it should never sore personal relationships. It is their house. God forbid if anything goes wrong, it is their house that will go away and I don't want that

Umesh: I guess you have a point there. Oh! Did I tell you I just thought of a new recipe . let me pen it down . Where's my diary now!!

Aman: In our room wait I will get it.

As aman enters the room she finds Viren searching for something and going near the diary. He is about to pick up the diary when aman comes in

Aman : Papa kuch chahiye tha ki?(She picks up the diary and asks)

Viren (GETTING SUSPICIOUS): haan I needed a pen mil gya . I will go now.

Aman(to herself): Bach gye

Scene 3

Viraj has organized a press conference and almost reporters from every channel are present in the hall

Viraj: Well ladies and gentlemen .You all have been invited here for a special announcement. I hereby announce reopening of Lakshya Academy after 3 months. Till then shooters can apply for admission. Another thing is I am planning to resume Shooting myself plus we will start archery training as well.

Reporter1: Sir , Will you readmit Miss. Nisha Gangwal , the girl who was pronounced to be next star shooter but maligned your respect publicly

Viraj : WHOA! Boy ! Relax you seem to be too enthusiastic knowing about it. First of all To join or not to join is solely to be her decision and for your information she Mrs. Rathore now, Mrs. Nisha Kabir Rathore (My younger brother's wife). And as far as the fiasco of last press conference is considered Nisha was not at all responsible for it. I was deceived by my own people. I wish I had not reposed blind faith in my aunt who leaked all those e-mails creating a mockery of mine as well as Gangwal family.

Nisha Kabir and the entire gangwal family is clean. I am really sorry for whatever happened . I know you people have already forgiven me but since the entire fiasco was public why has apology to be confined to 4 walls of your place. As for Nisha I am making a public offer to you .Lakshya academy will be honoured to have you back .Rest is to be your decision. That's all.

Reporter2 : Sir is it true that you still love Miss. Nisha and you came away from Jaipur because of this and is it also true that Your mother lives with you now.

Viraj: How does that matter if I love her or not or if I ever loved her or If I am ever going to love anyone. That's my personal sphere. As for My mother she left me when I was 7 , I haven't seen her since the same selfless women who left me back then is never ever going to come back again( he said with tears threatening to fall from his eyes) I must leave now I have a meeting.

Scene 4

Kabir -nisha house VIraj-Kabir phone convo

Nisha and Kabir were on their seats. Tears threatening to fall from their eyes too. Kabir knew Viraj still loved Nisha but He was proud of his brother who had decided not to sit in past and curse himself for lifetime. He was sas as Viraj still couldn't accept their mother. Nisha was sobbing

Kabir: Relax, Nisha . It is allright. Why on earth are you crying.?

Nisha : I wish I had an answer to that. He still loves me, he hasn't moved on. Grr should I be dancing around.

Kabir: He has moved on from you to his dream . NISHA . He moved on the day he realized you don't love him anymore. He is just trying to get usual to feeling of void in his life AND COMEON He madean open offer to you. What do you think about it?

Nisha: nothing yet. I have to decide first what I exactly want shooting or archery or both or none.

Kabir : You got three months to decide for it

(Phone rings Kabir moves out of the bedroom)

Viraj :All good?

Kabir: YEAH kind of!!

Viraj: it is awkward!!

Kabir : Awkward as hell. I get a brother after a long time . I want to say a lot but I don't know what to say.

Viraj and Kabir chuckled. Kabir and his antic dialogues

Viraj: So what do you want to say? Want to share anything?

Kabir: I got a joB . Watched your conference . I WANT TO SPEAK TO YOU MY HEART OUT BUT IT IS TILL AWKWARD

Viraj : Awkward

Kabir : Yeah awkward

And they burst out laughing.

Kabir : You laugh??

Viraj: You can make anyone do that!! Such a nice addition to circus family.

Kabir : You miss them

Viraj : Awkward again.

Kabir : yeah awkward. Next time we will talk weird .

Viraj : yeah weird.

A/N : Dandas jutas tamators all welcome.

This is my last episode with TSC. I AM SORRY BUT I AM BURDENED WITH A LOT OF STUFF. I HAD THOUGHT OF BACKING IT OUT ON HERE TOO BUT JUST COULD NOT. Enjoy the episode hit the like button. More of Viraj because This was my last wanted a due farewell for him


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EPISODE 284 (BY MAGGY)



Scene 1:(NiBIr house)

Nisha:Kabir,baat ho gayi tere bade bhaiya se?

Kabir:Haan...

He saw her upset n tensed.

Kabir:NIsha tu tension maat le. Tu pyaar karti hain na mujhse? Mujh par bharosa karti hain na?

Nisha:Haan Kabir... Tu yeh kyon puchh raha hain?

Kabir:Toh jiase chote bhai ko aapna pyaar mil gaya waise bade bhai ko bhi mil jayega.

Nisha: Matlab?

Kabir:Matlab ki dekhna ek din bade bhaiya ko bhi aapna pyaar mil jayega. Aur unka pyaar dhondenge ek main aur ek tu...

Nisha smiled.

Nisha:Kabir tu bhi na... Haan sahi bola tune unka pyaar ek tu aur ek main hi dhoondenge. I really hope ki unki sari pareshani door ho jaye. Unki lyf mein pyaar ki bohut zarrorat hain.

Kabir(naughtily):Ek minute,wifey. Maine jab bola ki unhe unka pyaar mil jayega toh tune iska matlab puchcha... Kahin tujhe aisa toh nahi laga ki main tujhe Draupadi banakar share karne ka soch raha tha.

Nisha:(angily):chhiii... Kabir haad hain. Tu ek number ka kamina hain.. Kauwa kahin ka.. Tere liye saare gaalis bhi kam padenge.

Nisha starts going frm there.

Kabir: Nisha plz ruk.

He hold her by arms

Kabir:Sry yaar.Thoda excess ho gaya na.. PAr sachchi mein main toh baas teri mood cheer up karne ki koshish kar raha tha. Mujhe ab realize hua ki maine kya bol diya. Maaf karde plz... Tujhe toh pata hain ki kuch karne baat us baare mein soch ta hoon. Dekh meri job ka 1st day hain. Plz pz plz gussa maat ho. I promise yaar aagese aisa kabhi nahi karronga.. Plz plz plz .. Maaf karde. Thik main kaan pakadke uthak baithak karta hoon.

N he really startd doing so. Nw Nisha couldn't bt startd laughing.

Kabir(pouting cutely):Achcha,toh maaf kar diya...

Nisha(still laughing):Ok,cuteness ki dukaan. Sirf teri job ki khatir maaf kar diya. (Being serious)Bt promise me ki aise baate dobara kabhi nahi karega.

Kabir:Haan pakka promise. Kabhi nahi karoonga.

Nisha:Sacchi?

Kabir:Muchchi..

N they hugged each other,

Scene 2:(GH at UMan room)

Umesh sees Viren going frm their room. He quickly goes there.

Umesh:Aman,papa yahan kya kar rahe the?

Aman:Lagta hain papa ko saak ho gaya aur vo is diary ki paas pauchne hi waale the kim tabhi main aa gayi...

Umesh:Matlab unhe kuch pata to nahi laga na?

Aman: Nahi laddoo,bal bal bach gaye.

Umesh:Yahan toh bach gayee. PAr loan ka kya karenge?

Aman:Arey chhod na. Pehle toh tu recipe likhne wala tha na...

Umesh:Nahi Aman.. Mujhe lagta hain ki tu sahi bol rahi hain. Hume unka ghaar nahi lena chahiye. Main baat karta hoon Kabir se.

Scene 3:(GH at Jwala's room)

Jwala thinking abt whether 2 teach Bunty or nt.

Jwala(2 herself):PAta nahi iss Bunty ko padhana sahi rahega bhi ya nahi. Kitna badtameez ho gaya hain vo. Magar main agar nahi padhati hoon toh Laxmi chachi buda mann jayegi. Pata nahi kya karoon. Kitna badtameez ho gaya hain yeh ladka. Uss din kya keh raha tha ki mujhe padhayi chhod kar makeup karna chahiye... Par uski baat mein kuch toh tha. Mujhe toh saab chashme wali nerd hi bulate hain. Nahi Jwalu,tu yeh sab baaatee chhod aur aapni padhayi pe concentratekar.

Scene 4:(AR office)

AR was thinking abt the whole scene of DoSa.

AR:Yahaan yeh ek ladki hain jise baare mein maine pataa nahi kitna ulta seedha socha par isey kitni fikaar hain aapni bacche ki aur yaha tak ki uss ladke ki bhi. Aur meri so called patni...

He breaks a show-piece kept on his desk in anger. At that tym his PA comes.

PA:Sir,vo Dolly mam ki gharse unki behen aayi thi. VO unhe le gayi hain.

AR:Thik hain.

Scene 5:(In the car 2 GH)

Kirti:Dolly di ap sabko baatane kyon nahi de rahe hain ki aap itni bimaar hain aur Saurav...

Dolly:Kirti plz sabko sab kuch aapne aap pata chal jayega. TU plz kisiko kuch maat bol.

Kirti:PAr di aisa kya hua ki..

Dolly tells her the whole convo btween Saurav n her n starts sobbing.

Kirti:Dolly di aapne aise kaise rishta tod diya?

Dolly:Maine rishta thida? Arey woh aisa kaise kah sakta hain main aur yeh bachcha uski hain nahi.

Kirti:Par usne aisa toh naho bolana..

Dolly:Magar uska kehne ka matlab yehin tha. Ussey samajh mein kyon nahi aata ki main kuch banna chahti hoon.

Kirti:Par di..

Dolly:Tu uski side le rahi hain...

Dolly again feels dizzy noticed by Kirti.

Kirti:Achcha,thik hain main kuch nahi bolungi.Aap thik se batho aur plz ro maat.

Scene 6:(Viraj's home)

Vasu:Viraj beta.

Viraj:Mrs.Kumar. Hum aapse kitne baar kahenge ki hume beta maat bulaya kijiye.

Vasu:Par beta...

Viraj:aapko samajh mein nahi aata ki hum pe aapka koyii haq nahi hain.

Vasu:Achcha,yeh toh bolo ki tumne Laksh Academy phirse khulne ka announcement de diya aur hume kuch bataya bhi nahi.

Viraj:Hume nahi laagta ki hume aapse baat karne ki koyi zaroorat hain. Ap hume hamari haal par cchod dijiye. Hume achcha nahi laagta ki aap hamare aas paas bhi rahe.

Vasu starts crying.

Vasu:Tum hume baas ek aur mauka nahi de sakte?

Viraj:Dekhiye aap plz..

At the same tym his phone starts ringing n the caller was Kabir.

Kabir:Bade bhaiya,kaise ho?

Viraj:Hmmm...Hum thik hain

Kabir:Vo aapko na ek khush khabri deni thi. Matlab waise wali khush khabri nahi...

Viraj(Laughing);Aap bhi na chote.

Kabir:(surpeised):Chote!!

Viraj:Haan toh agar aap hume bade bhaiya bula sakte hain toh kya hum upko chote nahi bula sakte?

Vasu who was still standing there understood that the caller was her son Kabir.

Kabir:Arey,wah.. Hamari jodi kitni achchi hain na... Bade bhaiya aur chote..

Viraj smiled n at the same tym also heard Nisha frm the other side,saying: Kabir,tym nahi hain tere paas. Hamesha majak karta rahta hain.

Viraj:Haan chote,boliye kya khush khabri hain. Aapki patni naraj ho rahi hain.

Kabir:(being embarassd):Kya..Aap bhi.. Vo khush klhabri yeh hain ki mujhe naya job mila hain. Assistant choreographer in JD2.

Viraj:Arey wah!! Yeh toh bohut bari khushi ki baat hain.

Kabir:Up plz mom ko bhi bataa dena.

Viraj:Unse aap hi baat kar lijiyega.

Vasu was getting vry curious 2 knw abt the news.

Kabir:Aap abhi tak mom se naraj hain?

Viraj:Chote,Chhodiye na. Hume bhi aapko ek khush khabri dena hain. Humne abhi abhi faisla liya hain ki hum kuch hi dino mein jaipur aa rahe hain.

Kabir:(Being xcitd)Kya, Sach mein... Yeh toh sabse baari khush khabri hui. Arey,bhaiya, bohut late ho raha hain. Aaj 1st day hain na... Main baad mein aapse baat karta hoon.

Viraj:Thik hain,All the best!!

Kabir:Thnks a looot.

They cut the call bt this desicion of Viraj left Vasu shocked.

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Note:Dear Kamina babas,, Plz 4giv me 4 mistakes. N hindi mistakes ke liye toh mujhe blame bhi maat karna coz m nt an indian. I write on hindi jst 2 bring thoda serialwali feeling..So,khabardar..Don't blame me. Tongue
N do like n comment if u really lyk n feel 2 comment Big smile
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