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EPISODE - 289(BY HARSHIKA)


Scene 1: Dolly's room
"Why is this happening with me? I must do what Lakshmi chachi told me, she remembered. I need time and I need to talk to Saurav about this." She went out strolling in the verandah and she spotted him there. She was about to go to him but then stopped. She knew he wont talk to her and will again try to avoid her. She suddenly got an idea. She moved towards him and when he saw her, she closed her eyes and pretended to fall when he caught her. "Saurav!" she cried. He took her to her room, made her sit and handed over a glass of water worriedly.
She said she wants to talk and tears started rolling down her cheeks.
Saurav told her to calm down and asked her what happened.
"Right now whatever is happening between us is something I never wished for. I aint blaming you but my destiny which has so much of troubles in store for me. I feel that there is only one solution right now. We should take a break. Though we love each other yet this isn't the right time.
"So you want to end all this?" asked Saurav.
"No. I dont want to end the relation but I need some time. We both need to give each other some time. You are a part of my life and I want to move further with you, but first I need to leave my past behind, cope up with the present, and then move into the future."
Saurav who was listening all this quietly, suddenly hugged Dolly. "Do you remember I once told you that I am ready to wait my entire life for you?!" Saying this he began to leave.
"Saurav..." she tried to stop him.
He turned back and with a smile told her to take care, and call him whenever she is in need. "I ll wait and will hope that our wait ends soon." He left.

Scene 2: KNH(The next morning)
Both Kabir and Nisha were having their breakfast when Nisha informed Kabir of her decision to join LA. "I think shooting will be perfect, but I aint that sure yet."
"Very good Nisha. I am happy that you have finally taken a decision. And regarding your dilemma between shooting and archery, I think you should consult bade bhaiyya. He ll guide you better."
"You are right Kabir, I ll talk to Viraj sir once he comes here."
"So I now need more protection."
Nisha looked at him confused.
"Now that you ll learn advance shooting, I ll be at a greater risk, na!" He said teasingly.
"What do you mean? Am I such a bad wife?! Wait...now toh you are really gone."
"Darling, I was kidding.!! Sorry yaar." Kabir began running around the hall with Nisha following him in order to hit him.
At the same moment Ramesh entered. "Nisha! No violence. Why are you troubling poor Kabir?!"
"Thank god you are here papa. Now only you can save me." Kabir went and stood beside him.
"Papa, he is the one who troubles me. And you are my father, so dont take his side."
"Nisha he is your father, but not 'only your' father." Kabir winked at Ramesh.
"I can understand your plight dear. She has inherited these genes from her mother. " Ramesh said to him and smiled. "Btw Lakshmi had sent these malpuvas for both of you."
Nisha took the box from her father and went to keep it in the kitchen.
"Papa, I need to leave now or else I ll be late."
Ramesh told Kabir that he had some work nearby so they can go together.
Nisha arrived and looked at Kabir.
"Lets go." Ramesh asked Kabir.
But Kabir was staring at Nisha as they both were waiting for their goodbye kiss which had now become a routine. Ramesh saw them and understood everything.
"I ll go and wait outside." He said to Kabir. Kabir stopped him and told him he didn't need to go anywhere. He moved towards Nisha, held her gently and placed a peck on her cheeks. "Bye. Take care." Nisha smiled and told him to come home early.
Kabir turned to Ramesh and said, "Afterall, I have married your daughter legally. ..and that too twice.!" Ramesh smiled. He felt very happy. Every father wants this for his daughter, he thought. And then both Ramesh and Kabir left.

Scene 3: Gangwal Jwellers
Umesh entered the shop and went towards the counter when Viren stopped him and asked the reason for coming late. He lied that he woke up late. Dadaji who was witnessing all this called him. He asked Umesh the reason of his sudden changed behaviour. "You dont come to the shop regularly, are often late, and you seem lost these days. What's the matter?"
"Nothing dadaji! Sorry for being late today. I didnt wake up on time and some days ago I wasn't feeling well, thats why I was irregular. " Umesh again lied.
"Hmm...I hope you are not hiding anything. See Umesh, you are the eldest among your cousins. And I consider you more responsible and mature than them. I hope you dont disappoint me. And one more thing, not to hide anything. If there is something going on in your mind, you can come and talk to me anytime." Umesh nodded.

Scene 4: Road outside KNH
"By the way Kabir, hows your new job going on?"
"Its great papa. Infact I am enjoying it. Dancing isnt just a job but a passion for me."
"Good. You should listen to your heart and do what interests you."
Kabir suddenly stopped walking. "Papa I have an idea. Right now I am just an asst choreographer, but once I become a famous choreographer of Jaipur we both can start an academy of our own where we ll together teach music and dance. The most talented jodi!" Kabir winked.
"OK. I ll think about your offer sir." Ramesh joked and they both laughed.
"OK papa. There's an auto coming. I should leave now." saying this he hugged Ramesh and left.
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AUTHOR'S NOTE:- This time I tried writing in English. Actually didnt have much time. This episode was written in a real hurry, so sorry if it isnt upto the mark.
And I ll be away from IF for a week. Anyways leave your comments. Will read them later.
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Episode-290
by- mansi



Scene - 1
Gangwal jewellers

Nisha reached shop and started her work. She saw umesh lost somewhere.

Nisha- umesh bhaiya kya hua? Itne udaas kyu ho? Restaurant k baare m soch rhe ho.. ( what happened umesh bhaiya... why r u upset... r u thinking about the restaurant)

Umesh- nhi nishu... matlab ha vo bhi ek tension h par...( no nishu... means yes it is a tension but)

Nisha - par kya umesh bhaiya? ( but what)

Umesh- yaar mjhe bhot bura lag rha h... mai papa se dadaji se sabse jhoot bol rha hu... jab unhe sab pta chalega to unko kitna hurt hoga na nisha... mai unhe hurt nhi karna chahta...( m feeling bad for lying to papa and dadaji.. when they will come to know about this they will be hurt... I don't want to do that)

( he looked sadly at her)

Nisha - to sab bta do unhe...( so just tell them the truth)

Umesh- tu paagal ho gyi h kya... tu janti h na kya bol rhi h...( are u mad... u know what u r saying)

Nisha- ha bhaiya... jab aapko sab pta hi h to udaas kyu hona... jab aap successful ho jaoge to tauji ur dadaji kitne khush honge ye socho... ur apna kaam poora karo...( yes... when u know everything then why r u upset.. when u will get success then tauji and dadaji will be very happy... so just complete ur work)

( she said smiling at him)

Umesh- ha nishu tu sahi kh rhi h... mujhe apne kaam p dhyaan dena chahiye... (yes u r right... I should concentrate on my work)

They both share a side hug

Scene - 2
Dolly's office

Dolly was in a very good mood today as dosa had sorted out their problem.

Dolly ( monologue ) - baby aaj mamma bhot khush h... kyuki saari prblm solve ho gyi h... ab mumma apne kaam p achhe se concentrate karegi taki tmhe koi prblm na ho... are ye design to yhi reh gye... abhi dekar aati hu... kya pta ye bhi pasand aaenge ki nhi (baby.. mamma is very happy today... because all the prblms are solved.. now mamma will concentrate on her work so that u don't face any trouble... oh I forgot to submit these designs... let me give it to sir... I don't know if he will like it ur not)

Dolly walked towards AR cabin. She saw him worried, he was sweating and it looked like he was having a panic attack.

Dolly- sir are u all right... kya hua h aapko... aapki tabiyat to thik h na... doctor ko bulau... tu bhi na dolly paagal h pehle paani to de...(sir what happened to you... shall I call a doctor... dolly u r mad give him water first)

She handed over him a glass of water.
Dolly in a hurry spilled it on AR.

AR ( who was confused at her behaviour) - what the hell miss gangwal kya kia ye aapne... ur kya bole ja rhi h aap itni der se... kuch nhi hua h mjhe samjhi... (what have u done... and what r u talking about... m ok u understand.)

Dolly- but sir aapko itna pasina aa rha tha ur mjhe lga ki...( but u were sweating and I thought)

AR- miss dolly apna perception apne pass rakhie... or by the way hme pasina islie aa rha h kyuki ac kharab h... ur hm kuch imp soch rhe the... aap har baat ka itni jaldi result mat nikala kijie.. ( keep ur perception to urself.. m sweating because ac is not working... n I was thinking something important... u shouldn't judge everything so soon)

he was talking sternly to her

Dolly ( who was getting angry but keep her calm) - sir sorry for this... but mai sirf aapki help karna chahti thi... ye rhe aapke designs... ur ha jo aapne mjhse kha h vo khud p bhi apply kijiega.. ( sorry sir... I was trying to help u here are ur designs.. n what u have said to me please apply it to u too)

She left his cabin.

Dolly ( monologue ) - samjhta kya h ye apne aap ko... jab dekho chillata rehta h... iski to koi help hi nhi karni chahie...( what he thinks of himself... I shouldn't help him)

Aisha (other employee) - hi dolly kya hua... kya bole ja rhi h... (what happened dolly... what are u murmuring)

Dolly- kuch nhi yaar ye khadoos h na... mera matlab h AR jab dekho mjhe daantta rehta h bina mistakes k... (nothing.. this AR always scold me without any mistakes of mine)

Aisha- chill yaar dolly... dil p kyu leti h waise bhi jabse unki biwi ne unke sath...
( someone called aisha) achha chal mai chalti hu bhot kaam h.. bye ( chill... why u take it so seriously... since his wife has... ok I have to go bye)

Dolly (confused)- bye... (monologue ) kya keh rhi thi aisha... kya hua hoga... tu kyu itna soch rhi h dolly... apne kaam p dhyaan de... ( what was she talking about... what had happened... why r u thinking so much dolly... do ur work)

Scene - 3
Outside gangwal jewellers (evening)

Nisha was going back when her phone rang. A dreamy smile lingered on her face seeing the caller id.

Kabir - Hello wifey... kha ho (where are u)

Nisha - my dear husband jha roj hoti hu.. ghar ja rhi hu... ( going home)

(Suddenly a cute small boy passes by her side and she ruffled his hairs)

Kabir- hae... kabhi itna pyaar apne husband p bhi lutao yaar. ( shower some love on your hubby too)

Nisha (looked here and there) - tu kha h kabir... ( where are you)

Kabir- jha tum wha hum..( m there where you r)

He moved behind her and back hugged her.

Nisha- kabir... kya kar rha h yaar... road h ye( kabir what are u doing this is a road)

Kabir - to maine kab kha ki garden h... ( did I told u this is a garden)

Nisha- achha itna sab pta h to ye bhi pta hoga ki sadak p esi harkate nhi karte...( when u know everything thaen u should know that this behaviour is wrong at this place)

(she tried to remove his hands but he was determined)

Kabir- are mai apni wifey k sath kahi bhi romance karu... meri marji ( I would romance my wife where I would like)

Nisha - (saw people staring at them) kabir chhod na yaar paagal h kya (are u mad.. please leave me)

Kabir - na mai nhi chhodunga kyuki... kabir paagal nisha k pyaar m ( no.. I won't because kabir is mad in nisha's love)
(touching his head with hers)

Nisha- achha ji... aur agar mai jor se chillai na to kabir ko padenge joote nisha k pyaar m samjha...( oh is that so then when I will shout then u will be beaten in my love)
(she hit him on his head)

Kabir - tu mjhe pitwaegi...( u will get me beaten up)
(puppy face)

Nisha- nhi agar tu mjhe chhod dega to... romance karna h to ghar m karna yaar abhi to chhod... (no.. if u will leave me... if u want to romance then we will go home but not here please leave me)

Kabir ( freeing her and moved to her side ) - ohho to aaj meri wifey ka ghar jaake romance karne ka mood h... matlab meri to lottery lg gyi ( oh so my wife wants to romance in home... I have won the lottery then)

He winked at her while she hit him playfully.

" nisha didi... kabir bhaiya.." someone called them.
They looked here and there.

Nisha- yaar mere kaan baj rhe h ya sach m chandu ki aawaj aae..( my ears have some problem or this is Chandu's voice)

Kabir- oe tere kaan kharab hoge... mere to sahi h .. par mjhe bhi sunai dia yaar...( ur ears may have but mine are alright... but I can hear it too)

Suddenly someone pulled their clothes from behind.

Scene - 4
AR was thinking about what just happened. Her words were ringing in his ears.

AR - (monologue ) kya sach m mai cheeje apne hisab se percept kar leta hu... kya sach m maine dusro ka point of view samjhne ki koshish nhi ki... offo.. mai kyu soch rha hi ye sab... miss gangwal ki baato par itna serious hone ki koi jarurat nhi h mjhe... (do I really percept things... do I really don't understands others point of view... why m I thinking about this.. miss gangwal's banter shouldn't be taken up seriously)

(He picked up the designs.)

Hmmm... design to achha h... talent to h miss gangwal m... ( designs are really good... she have talent)

Scene - 5
Outside gangwal jewellers

Nisha and kabir looked at the girl pulling their clothes.

Nisha and kabir- chanduuu...
They sat on their knees

Nisha- tu yha kaise aae chandu... phir se koi tere piche pda h kya... ( how come u r here... is someone behind u again)

Kabir- khi tu kho to nhi gyi... tere mummy kha h... he bhagwan mjhe phir se bhabhiji k drame m mat phasana please... pta chala nisha se teesri baar shadi karni padi...(u got lost? Where is ur mother oh god don't sebd that bhabhiji again or I have to marry nisha third time)

Nisha glared at him while chandu tried to stop them from talking and finally put her hands on their mouths.

Chandu- aap dno chup hoge to mai bolungi na...( will u guys stop talking)

Both of them looked at her and then at each other.

Chandu - mai aap lgo se milne aae hu... mamma k sath... (I have came to meet u both with my mother)

Nisha- kha h tmhari mumma...( where is she)

Chandu- vo rhi... (she pointed at a shop)

Kabir - to chandu tune hme kaise dhunda..(how did you find us)

Chandu - aap dno ko yha dekha... ur mai aa gyi... aap didi ko pareshan kar rhe the? (I see u both here so I came... u were troubling didi )

Nisha - ha yaar chandu... ye bandar h na mjhe bhot pareshan karta h...( yes see this bander always irritates me)

Kabir - yaar chandu tu hi bta pichli baar kaun kise maar rha tha... ye mjhe ki mai ise... ( u tell me.. who was beating whom when we had met)

Chandu (laughing) - aap dno ka secret abhi bhi mere pass h( I have ur secret)

Nisha smiled - ab vo secret na sabko pta chal gya yaar... ur mjhe is kuwe se shadi karni padi... ( now that secret is out n I have to marry this crow)

( she made a baby face)

Kabir - to mai bhi to is jhansi ki rani ko jhel rha hu na... ( so what I m too tolerating this jhansi ki rani)

Chandu's mom came searching her.

CM - chandu why u came here..

She looked at nibir

CM - oh.. hi nisha hi kabir... mai ur chandu aap hi lgo ko milne yha aae the( we have came to meet u two)

Nisha - par aapne hme dhunda kaise.. (how did u know our address)

CM - vo kya h na ab hm india m hi settle hone wale h... iske dadaji ne hm dno ko accept kar lia h... ur unhone hi mjhe aap lgo ka address arrange karke dia... to maine socha aap lgo ko milke thanks bol du... ( we r shifting in india soon as her grandfather has accepted us he only provifed me ur address so I thought to meet u and say thanks)

Nisha and kabir smiled at her.

Kabir- chalie na hmare ghar... kitte din baad chandu se mil rhe h... (lets go to our house... we have met chandu after along time)

CM - hmare ghar? (Our house? )

Nisha - we r happily married now

She looked at kabir who encircled her shoulders and looked at her with pride.

Scene - 6
Gangwal house

Viren was marching in his room.

Viren - kuch to hai jo ye umesh ka bachha mjh se chhupa rha h... par mai bhi uska baap hu... pta lga k hi rahunga ki iske dimag m chal kya rha h... ur vo diary.. us diary ka kuch to connection hai.. umesh ka dukaan m late aana... bahane bnak jaldi nikal jna .. kaam m to uska dhyaan hi nhi h aajkal... ur aman bhi aajkal kuch pareshan si dikhti h...aakhir esi kaunsi baat h jo dno ko itna pareshan kar rhi h... (there is certainly something umesh is hiding from us... but I will find out soon.. n that diary also had some connection with this... umesh being late at shop.. he leaves with lame excuses.. and he didn't concentrate on his work too... aman looks worried too these days... what is the reason behind all of this)

(Suddenly his eyes fell on the gate aman and umesh were leaving for somewhere. )

Ye sahi mauka h... aaj to ye raaj khul ke rahega... abhi vo diary lke aata hu( this is the right time... I will take that diary now)

(He reached uman's room and started searching for the diary. )

Ah... ye rhi... aakhir mil hi gyi... (got it)

(Suddenly he heared someone coming)

Are khi ye dno wapas to nhi aa gye... ab to chhupna hi padega... lekin pehle ye diary chhupa lu... (are they back... I should hide but I will hid this diary first)

He hide behind the bed.



Author note- hi guys... this epi is out of nowhere. I didn't know what I wrote... it is just a spontaneous thought. N for the chandu part... its on niha's special request. I hope u enjoy reading it. Please give ur feedback its very important for us.
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written by- shibu


Scene 1

Aman entered the room and started searching for the diary but didn't find it. Every passing moment her nervousness increased. She was about to go, when her eyes fell on the drawer. She hurriedly opened it and sighed in relief as she found the diary. She opened it t make sure it was the correct one and smiled happily because it was the diary that was their key to happiness. She left the room.

Viren opened the diary and sighed in frustration to find it blank. He kept the diary and left for his room.

Scene 2

Dolly was still working.

Dolly- (to herself) Dawaayi ka waqt hogaya, par maine khaana bhi nahi khaaya... Aur jab tak kaam khatam nahi hota, main break nahi loongi, warna woh sadu phirse shuru ho jaayega...

Adhiraj, who was passing by, was surprised to see Dolly working during lunch time. He knocked the cabin door and rolled his eyes when he heard an irritated "Come in"

Dolly-(without looking at him) Dekhiye Ram bhaiya, I know its lunch time, par todhasa kaam bacha hai... Main wahin khatam karke aati hoon... Warna woh aapka sadu boss... (She turned and looking at his poker face, froze.)

Adhiraj arched his eyebrows.

Dolly- (scared) Sir, aap... kab.. kaise.. kyun...

Adhiraj- Inquiry khatam ho gayi ho toh main kuch kahu?

Dolly- (mumbling to herself) Please lecture mat dena...

Adhiraj- (confused) Kya? (changing the topic) Its lunch time...

Dolly- Yes sir...

Adhiraj- Toh what are you doing here? Shouldn't you be in the canteen?

Dolly- Sir, woh todhasa kaam...

Adhiraj- (interrupting her) Baad mein bhi ho sakta hai.. I think you should go and have lunch now...

Dolly- Sir but...

Adhiraj- (interrupting her, a bit loudly) Go now.

He gave a firm look. She gulped in fear and left for the canteen.

Adhiraj-(raising his hands in defeat) This girl is so WEIRD!!!

Scene 3

Kirti and Saurav sat with a whole lot of colorful cloths lying around them with confusion crystal clear on their face.

Kirti- So, for the very last time, pink (showing him pink silk material) or blue (showing him blue silk material)

Saurav- White.

Kirti- Saurav, white duppatas, how blah!

Saurav- Miss. Blah! White duppatas are in these days... Even Dolly loves them...

Kirti looked at him with confusion on her face.

Kirti- Did I miss something?

Saurav- Oh no! main tujhe batana bhool gaya... (smiling)Actually ______ Dolly aur meri baat hui thi aur humne decide kiya hai ki kuch time ke liye hum humare rishte ko break denge..

Kirti- Jaise maine socha tha...

Saurav- Huh?

Kirti- No, I meant, ki mujhe bhi lagta hai ki tum dono ko todha time dena chahiye... you know, ek doosre ko..

Saurav was about to say something when Rupan entered the terrace.

Rupan- Kirti, tu yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Kirti-(showing he the clothes, shrugging) Kaam..

Rupan- Mere saath shopping chalegi?

Kirti- Nope... hum colour pe hi hai.. we have to design the duppatas... Bahut time lagega...

Rupan gave Saurav a mean look and walked away. Kirti noticed this.

Kirti- Tum mom ki harkaton ko dil se mat lo..

Saurav- Chill, I know ki you mom is worried about your future...

Kirti shook her head and sighed.

Scene 4

Dadaaji, Viren and Mohan were discussing about the business, but Dadaaji noticed Viren lost somewhere.

Dadaaji- Viren, kya baat hai bhai?

Viren- Kuch nahi baauji...

Dadaaji- Umesh ke baare mein soch rahe ho?

Viren looked at him in shock.

Dadaaji- Maa-baap ko sirf bacchon ki chinta hoti hai...

Viren- Nahi baauji. Agar Umesh aise hi karta rahega toh dukaan kaun sambhalega? Uska toh kahin dhyaan hi nahi rehta...

Dadaaji- Dhyaan toh wahaan hota hai, jahaan mann hota hai..

Viren-Ji?

Dadaaji- Kuch nahi, woh Kaushikji ki order ka kya hua...

Viren was telling him about the order, but the eldest of the Gangwals was listening to faint music of the kids singing upstairs.

Scene 5

Vimla, Aman and Laxmi were cooking in the kitchen. Vimla was continuously pouring water in the flour, her mind lost in thoughts. Aman and Laxmi noticed this.

Laxmi -(keeping her hand on Vimla's shoulder) Didi, sab kuch thih toh hai naa?

Vimla- (out of her trance) Huh? Haan.. sab kuch thikh hai...

Laxmi- Aap mujhe bata sakti hai...

Vimla- Main Dolly ke baare mein soch rahi hoon...

Laxmi-(confused) Dolly ke baare mein?

Vimla- Meri bacchi akele kitna seh legi?

Laxmi- Aap bilkul fiqar mat kijiye Didi, humari Dolly iss sab se jaroor nikal aayega... Mera yaqeen kijie...

Aman- Haan Mummyji, Dolly di, bahut strong hai... woh sab kuch sort out karegi... aur woh akeli todhi naa hai... Hum sab hai naa unke saath...

Vimla smiled at her sister-in-law and daughter-in-law silently thanking them for the support.

Scene 6

Nisha and Kabir entered the house followed by Chandu and her mom. Asking them to sit, Nisha left to arrange snacks.

Kabir-(happily) So ab Chautale ko aapse koi problem nahi hai?

Chandu's mom looked at him in confusion.

Kabir- I meant Mr. Chautala.

Chandu- Nahi, ab Daadu mujhse nafarat nahi karte.. woh mujhse bahut pyaar karte hai.. Mere liye toys, sweets bhi late hai... Hai naa Mumma?

Chandu's mom smiled.

Kabir- Wah re Chandu, pehle toh ekdam silent killer thi, ab action thriller ban gayi?

Chandu giggled. Nisha placed the coffee cups and snacks on the table. Nisha and Kabir smiled as Chandu started telling them about her new school.

Nisha- Chandu, kitni bad-bad karti hai tu...

Chandu- Main toh aisi hi hoon... Mumma...

The three laughed as they remembered Kabir telling Chandu that they'll act as her parents in the hotel
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NAUC-TSC EPISODE 292
WRITTEN BY- NIYA


Scene 1

Nisha and Kabir had a great time with Chandu and her Mom... No one would say that Chandu talks so much...

Chandu: Bhai... Main didi ko Bhabhi bulon ya apko Jiju ...??

Nisha and Kabir were confused when she asked this question .. They din't understand why she asked this question all of a sudden..

Nisha : Chandu .. tum Mujhe Didi aur Kabir ko Jiju bulao ..

Kabir : Oye.. aisa kyun.. ? Vo tujhe Bhabhi kyun nahi bula sakti .. ?? he said pointing a finger towards Nisha..

Nisha : Kabir.. Bhabhi kitna old sound karta hai.. Mujhe bohut old feel hoga... Nisha made a face thinking how weird it is going to be if Chandu called her Bhabhi ..

Kabir : Acha.. Tut oh aise bhi kisi 40 saal ki aurat ki tarah lagti hai... Kabir said under his breath.. biut it was loud enough for NIsha to hear it..

Nisha : Main 40 saal ki aurat ki tarah lagti hun ?? Nisha asked angrily

Kabir : Haan.. he replied Absent mindedly and then realised wht he said.. Nahi.. but it was too late.. Nisha had already grabbed a pillow and was hitiing him with that..

She stopped when she heard someone laughing.. Chandu and her mom couldn't control their laughter seeing the scene infront of them

Nisha looked down embarrassed and shy at her act and Kabir give a silly smile

Chandu's Mom : App dono bohut pyaare hai.. Ekdum perfect for eachother.. Bhagwaan kare apki Jodi hamesha aisi hi rahe..

Chandu : Haan ekdum Tom and Jerry ki tarah cute hai app

Nisha looked at Kabir with a blush on her face and Kabir gave her a half wink which made her blush more..

Chandu's mom : Hame nikalna chahiye.. bohut late ho raha hai...

Kabir : Arey thodi der aur rukhiye na please..

Nisha : Haan please thodi der aur rukhiye na.. Ham kitne din baad Chandu se mile hai.. Infact agar yeh nahi hoti toh shayad aaj ham saath nahi hoti..

she looked at Kabir with a smile on her face which showed how true her statement was.. Chandu had indeed been an angel for them ..

Chanud's Mom : Rukhna toh ham bhi chahte hai but sach main hame der ho rahi hai .. Ham dubara aayenge na appse milne..

Kabir : Ok ..Chaliye main appko chod ke aata hun..

Chandu's Mom : arey nahi appko khamkha takleef hogi.. Main driver ko call karlungi vo hame lene aajayega

Scene 2 In London

Viraj had gone for a conference when he saw Kaira over there it was not possible for him to believe it at first but then when he saw her leave he followed her but failed to reach her.. He went home lost in thoughts

Viraj (in his mind) : Hame Kaira ke saath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.. hamne unhe kitni takleef kitna dard diya hai.. Unhone hamesha ek dost ka farz nibhaya hai.. Mana ki Buaji ki baton main aakar unhone hamse shadi karni ki koshish ki par unhone aisa nahi kiya,, Unhonesahi faisla lekar hame sab sach bata diya.. yeh asaan nahi hai.. Hamne ek baar bhi unse iss bare main baat nahi ki aur na hi unse apne bartaav ke liye maafi mangi.. Bas ek baar ham unse mil paye.. ham unse zaroor maafi mangenge.. akhir vahi toh hai jinhe ham apna dost keh sakte hai

He opened the door and saw Vasundera sitting in the living room reading a magazine he choose to ignore her and was walking towards his room but Vasu saw him and called him out he stopped and took a deep breath before turning towards her

Viraj : Boliye .. kya kehna hai abh appko

Vasu : Viraj kya hua beta .. bohut pareeshaan lag rahe ho.. ham koi maddat kare.. ham..


She was cutoff by Viraj

Viraj : Beta mat kahye hame.. yeh haq app bohut pehle hi kho chuki hai Mrs. Kumar.. aur app hamari zindgi main dakhal na de toh hi behtaar hai.. ham nahi chahte ki koi bhi anjaan ya bahari vyakti hamari neeji zindgi main dakhal de ya uske baare main jane..

Saying so he left from rthere... Vasu sat on the sofa with tears in her eyes

Vasu: Yeh kya kar diya hamne.. khud apne bachon ko apne app se door kar diya.. ek taraf Kabir hai.. Jo hamse baat tak nahi kar raha.. aur ek taraf Viraj hai jo hamse sirf berukhi aur nafrat se baat karta hai.. Hame apne karmon ki saza mil rahi hai.. aur ham yeh deserve bhi karte.. par ham bhi haar nahi manege.. ham apne dono bachon ko yeh yakeen dila ke rehnge ki ham badal chuke hai aur hame apni galti ka ehsaas hai.. ham India wapas jake apne dono bachon ko wapas pa lenge..

She wipped her tears and went to her room

Scene 3 on the road

Nisha and Kabir went for a night walk after Chandu and her Mom left.. they were walking silently hand in hand... Nisha broke the silence and spoke

Nisha : Kabir aaj Chandu se milke bohut acha laga.. Hai na..

Kabir : Haan yaar.. Purane din yaad aagaye.. Vo hotel ka manager yaad hai.. Kitna chilaya tha tune uss becahre pe

Nisha: Haan sab tere wajah se.. Tune hi mujhe irritate kiya tha.. abh tera irritation uss pe nikal gaya toh main kya karun..

Kabir : But uss waqt toh maine Mazak main hi keh diya tha ki ham dono husband and wife hai aur aaj dekh vo sab sach ho gaya..

Nisha : Haan.. Shayad isse hi life kehte hai Unpredictable.. Ham jo soch bhi nahi sakte vo ho jata hai... But jo hota hai ache ke liye hi hota hai..

Kabir was about to reply when he saw a couple with a small baby walking on the other side of the road... He was back to his K paan and said

Kabir: Nisha .. tujhe bache pasand hai ?

Nisha : Haan Kyun ?

Kabir : Tujhe bache cute lagte hai ?

Nisha : Haan Kabir..

Kabir : Toh tujhe nahi lagta hame bhi apne bache ke bare main sochna chahiye ?

Nisha : Haan.. she replied abescent mindedly but her eyes grew wide as soon as she realised what she said and had a blush on her face where else Kabir did a happy dance in his mind

Nisha : Kabir tu kitna K hai na..

Kabir : Aur mere K se tu kitni J hai na... But seriously Nisha tujhe nahi lagta ki abh hame apni family ke bare main kuch sochna chahiye ? dekh main pehle hi keh deta hun mujhe 2 bache chaiye ek ladka aur ek ladki.. dono ka dimag mujh pe jayega aur shakal bhi mujh pe hi jayegi ..

Nisha : Kabir tu Kitna K hai.. dekh agar ladki hui toh vo mujh pe jayegi aur ladka hua toh vo tujh pe.. samjha..?

Kabir : Nahi mujhe dono chahiye.. 10-12 bache toh hone hi chahiye kam se kam

He said with a huge smile on his face and Nisha just started at him and gave him You-are-unbelieveable' look and he just laughed he placed his hand around her shoulder and they went home laughing and hugging eachother enjoying the wind

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NAUC-TSC EPISODE-293

WRRITTEN BY NIYA



Scene 1

NiBir's Bedroom

Nisha woke up in Kabir's arms ... he holded her so tightly.. she smiled looking at him... he looked so cute.. like an innocent kid ... she ruffled his hair and smiled looking at him... she kissed his forhead and both his cheeks..

Kabir: subah subah itna pyaar wifey..?? irada kya hia..?

Nisha's eyes grew wide.. a blush crept on her cheeks .. she tried to hide it but it was too late .. KAbir had seen the blush on her face and had a devilish smirk on his face.. Nisha tried to change the topic and looked at him angrily

Nisha : Matlab tu jag raha tha ?

Kabir : Haan.. but phir u mujhe itna pyaar karne ke mood main thi toh socha tumhe apne irade pure kar lene dun... He finished with a wink..

Nisha: Kabir tu ..

Kabir: Janta hun bohut bada wala K hun main.. he laughed while she hit him and went to the washroom

Scene 2

Gangwal house

Umesh and Aman took NiBir's house papers and were about to leave for the bank to ask for the loan.. they had decided that once they get the loan they will haunt for a place as per the budget and make sure that they be able to repay the loan...

Umesh: Aman hume loan mil jayega na ?

Aman : Haan Ladoo tu tension mat le.. BabaJi hai na humare saath.. Unki mear rahi toh sabh ache se ho jayega tu bas apni dairy sambhal ke rakh .. pata hai kal Papa ke haath aagai thi dairy v otoh acha hua maine time pe change kar diya tha use...

Umesh: Yaar.. main itna careless kaise ho sakta hun.. actually daar le mare main sare kaam ulte kar raha hun.. dukan pe bhi bohut galtiyaan kar raha hun aaj kal.. pata nahi kya hoga kaise hoga..

Aman: Umesh.. tension mat lo..

Sukku and Kirti entered the room and saw Umesh tensed

Sukku : Haan Umesh bhaiye.. hum sab hai na appke saath app tension mat lo..

Umesh: Kaise tension na lun.. Loan mil gaya aur agar main repay nahi kar paya toh? Nisha aur Kabir ke ghar ka sawal hai..

Kirti: How blah Umesh bhaiye.. appko apni cooking skills pe trust nahi hoga.. hume toh pura trust hai appka restraunt bohut awesome hoga.. and super successful hoga...

Sukku : Right... abh chalo chalet hai late ho raha hai...

Umesh: Haan.. Aman main sham ko milta hun

Umesh and Sukku left.. Kirti placed her hand on Aman's shoulder in assurance and Aman smiled at her

Scene 3

Dolly's office

Dolly : Sir, Yeh rahe designs..

Adhiraj: Hmmm.. keep them on the table and leave

Dolly: Sir ek baar dekh th lijiye.. agar koi changes karne ki zaroorat padi toh main kar deti hun..

Adhiraj: Ek baar bola toh samajh nahi aata .. kaha na jao yahan se.. He almost shouted at Dolly.. she kept the designs and went outside with tears in her eyes.. Adhiraj noticed this and he closed his eyes in frustration

Adhiraj : Yeh kya kar diya maine.. bina wajah uspe chilla diy kisi aur ka gussa kisi aur pe nikal diya maine..

Scene 4

NiBir's House and Kabir's workplace

Nisha was doing her work when she noticed that Kabir forgot his lunch .. She smiled and shook her head at her husband.. and decided to take it to his office

Nisha reached Kabir's office and asked for Kabir at the reception and went to she room which the receptionist told her.. when she went there she met a girl and asked about Kabir

Nisha : Excuseme.. app bata sakti hai ki Kabir kahan hai ?

Alisha Oh.. tum Kabir ko dhund rahi ho... Vo mera best friend hai.. He is like more than a friend to me..

Nisha remembered that Kabir was telling about a girl the previous night who irritates him a lot but since she is one of the best dancers he can't even ask her to leave the group...

Nisha: Oh .. wiase kahan hai Kabir tum mujhe usske pass leke ja sakti ho ?

Alisha: Sure why not.. come

Nisha followed Alisha toh the reheral hall where Kabir was busy teaching a step to one of his students his back was facing them Alisha was about to call him but when he felt Nisha's presence and he turned with a wide smile on his face.. Alisha was shocked to see this.. since past few hours Kabir was really in a bad mood he din't smile at any of the students infact he was behaving more strictly with them today and now he was smiling ?

Alisha : Kabir she is Nisha.. my friend she wanted to meet you..

Nisha: Haan abhi abhi friendship hui hai..

Alisha: Yaa she is very sweet

Kabir : I know how inncocent she is..

Alisha: Tum jante ho ho isse ?

Kabir : Mujh se zyada meri wifey ko aur kon jane ga.. he walked towards Nisha and wrapped his arm around her waist and kissed the top of her head slightly

Alisha was shocked to the core she din't expect Kabir to be married.. All her dreams were shattered in just two seconds..

Alisha : Mujhe nahi laga tha ki tum married ho.. I mean you are so young.. Anyways congratulations .. Main chalti hun.. she left from there.. Kabir turned towards Nisha and asked

Kabir: Aaj yahan acahank kaise ?

Nisha : Tu apna lunch bhul gaya tha vahi dene aai thi.. ache se janti hun jab tujhe bhok lagti hai aur time pe khana na mile toh tera mood kitna saad jata hai

Kabir: Kya baat hai wifey.. aaj suabh se bada pyaar aa raha hai mujh pe.. pehle kisses abh lunch.. Lagta hai aaj mera romaticwala Lucky day hai.. he winked and Nisha just shook her head and said

Nisha: Tu kabhi nahi badal sakta na Kabir..

Kabir: Na.. chal abh lunch kare hai mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai..

Nisha and Kabir went to the canteen to have their lunch

Scene 5

Dolly's office

It was almost time for the office to leave.. Dolly was waiting to wrap her work and go home.. she was still upset with Adhiraj's behaviour towards her she was busy in her work when she felt someone staring at her.. she turned and found Saurav at the door frame smiling at her

Dolly: Arey Saurav tum kab aaye.. au raise muskura kyun rahe ho?

Saurav started walking towards her table and replied : Main abhi abhi aaya .. bas yeh deh ke muskura raha hun ki tu kaam karte waqt kitni cute dikhti hai

Dolly blushed a bit and said : Stop jokings Saurav.. Kaam karte waqt ki cute kaise dikh sakta hai

Saurav: Arey maine kaha na tu cute lag rahi hi.. Mujhpe yakeen nahi toh Baby se puch lo.. Baby , Mumma kaam karte waqt cute lag rahi thi ya nahi?

Dolly : Baby apne Papa se kaho ki vo Mummy ki tareef karne ki addat na dale baad main inhe bohut problems hongi

Saurav: Teri tareef karne main mujhe kabhi koi problem nahi hogi Dolly..Tere chere pe smile dekhne ke liye teri jitni tareef karni pade main karunga.. and vo bhi sachi wali..

Dolly was overwhelmed to hear this.. She felt lucky to have Saurav in her ife.. The way Sumeet treated her.. she felt terrible for choosing him as a partner.. he not only betrayed her but also her family.. her eyes got teary when she thought about past few months.. Saurav noticed it and changed the topi

Saurav: Aaj ghar chalne ka irada nahi hai kya ? Maine tere liye special pasytery bhi li hai Car main hai

Dolly got excited as she was actually craving for pastery in the afternoon and she badly wanted to have one

Dolly: Really? Pata hai mujhe na sach main pastery chaiye thi.. chal baki kaam main ghar pe kar lungi abhi mujhe pastery chaiye.. Saurav smiled as he was successful in diverting her mind.. He picked up her files and her bag Dolly smiled at his concern and rested her head on his shoulder and they left.. This entire scenario was witnessed by Adhiraj who had come to apologise to Dolly for his behaviour in the morning but seeing her with Saurav he decided to go and talk to her tomorrow

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