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episode 285( by mansi)



Scene-1
Kn house

Nisha- kabir yaar kitta time lagata h tu... jaldi kar hm late ho rhe h ( how much time will u take... we are getting late)

Kabir- are... aaya... ab tu kitchen m kya kar rhi h ( m coming... wat r u doing in the kitchen)

Nisha- ye le kabir... ye kha ke jaa... ( eat this)

Kabir- ye kya h... dahi ( whats this... curd)

He made faces but nisha glared at him and stuffed a spoon full of dahi in his mouth

Kabir- kya yaar nisha... subah subah kaun dahi khata h (what is this nisha... who eats curd in the morning)

Nisha- kabir maa kehti h jab koi achhe kaam ki shuruat karta h to use dahi cheeni khila k muh meetha kar k bhejna chahie samjha... duffer (maa told me that when a person is leaving for some good work so he should start it by eating some sweet)

kabir- (with a naughty smile) ohho... meri wifey... mera muh isse thodi na meetha hota h ( this isn't how I eat sweet)

he pulled her through her waist on himself and looked at her lips

Nisha (shocked) - kabir k bachhe ye koi romance karne ka time h... late nhi ho rha h ( this isn't a time of romance.. we are getting late)

Kabir- hae... romance nhi karunga to kabir k bachhe kaise aaenge.( if I don't do romance from where will my kids come)

Nisha blushed hard and hit him playfully. Nisha- ho gya tera to ab chale... ruk mai ye rkh k aati hu (have u finished then we should go... let me clean it up)

Kabir- jaldi... (fast)

Nisha- oh no...!!!!

Kabir- kya hua nisha...(what happened)

Nisha- yaar dekh na kitchen ka tap kharab ho gya h... tu jaldi aa jaega na to plumber ko bula k thik kra lega please.. ( see... kitchen's tap is not working... will u pls call the plumber in the evening and make him repair it)

She made a cute baby face

Kabir- are dear why to fear when kabira is here... mai kar dunga (I will do it)

Nisha- tu rehne de kabir... tjhse nhi hoga... ab chal late ho rha h ( you can't do it... lets go we are getting late)

She dragged him and they left.

Scene - 2
Dolly's office

AR was walking by the corridor when he saw dolly working.

AR- miss dolly... aap itni subah office me kya kar rhi h and why u r here... u should be at home. (Why are u here so early)

Dolly ( amazed at AR)- vo sir actually maine ur do nye designs tyar kie h... bus last touch dena tha to socha office m aakar hi complete kar lu ( actually sir I have made two new designs so I thought to complete them here)

AR- aapki tabiyat kaisi h ab? U should be taking rest (how are u now)

dolly- m fine sir... thank you

AR- hmmm

AR left for his cabin

Dolly- kya baat h baby... did u saw... mr. Sadu ne mera haal chaal pucha... lagta h kisine kuch khila vila diya inhe. ( baby.. did u saw that... mr. Sadu asked about me.. is he alright)

She gigled at her own thought. But became sad when she remembered yesterday's events.

Scene-3
Gh house

Ramesh was at the terrace arranging things for his class when saurav entered. Ramesh turned to saw saurav whose face was dull and sad.

Saurav- namaste uncle... aapko pta h kirti kha h (uncle do u know where kirti is)

Ramesh- nhi beta... apne rum m hogi... ( no son.. she must be in her room)

Saurav - ohk uncle... mai dekh ta hu (ohk uncle... let me see)

Ramesh- saurav ruk... (saurav stop)

Saurav stopped and turned towards ramesh

Ramesh- kya baat h saurav... ese muh kyu latka hua h tera (what is the matter... why have your face is so gloomy)

Saurav- kuch nhi uncle... bus kaam ka thoda pressure h na islie. ( nothing... just work pressure)

He tried to smile unsuccessfully.

Ramesh (smiling )- saurav... tu bhi inhi bachho k sath bda hua h... vo bhi meri aankho k samne... mai unhe ur tjhe dno ko achhe se jaanta bhi hu ur samjhta bhi... islie mujhse jhoot bolne ka koi fayda nhi h. Ab chal bta kya baat h.( saurav u have grown up before me... I know u well... so don't lie to me... now tell me what is it)

Saurav looked at ramesh with tears in his eyes. He just hugged him.

Ramesh- kya hua saurav... sab thik to h na (what happened... is everything alright)

Saurav - kuch thik nhi h uncle... kuch bhi thik nhi h... dolly esa kaise kar sakti h... usne esa socha bhi kaise... ( nothing is right.. how could dolly do this to me... how could she think like that)

Saurav sobbed hard. Ramesh patted his back lovingly.

Ramesh- kya hua saurav... saaf saaf bta (what happened... tell me clearly)

Saurav then told him the whole conversation.

Saurav- uncle... maine har baat m uska sath dia h ur aage bhi dena chahta hu par vo kuch samajhna hi nhi chahti... kya mai uske lie kuch bhi nhi hu... kya meri koi importance nhi h uski life m
( I have supported her everytime... and I will support her.. m I nothing to her.. m I not important in her life)

Ramesh- esa kuch nhi h saurav... I know both of you... ese do pal k gusse m sab kuch katam kar dene se baat bigdegi sambhlegi nhi... u should talk to her once and clear this mess... warna tm dno ko hi dard hoga... tu samajh rha h na...( its nothing like that. .. an anger of a moment will destroy everything... talk to her... else u both will be in pain)

Saurav didn't said anything but nodded.

Scene - 4

Kn house

Kabir was back from his work. He had an awesome day and was in a very good mood. Kabir switched on the music system and headed towards kitchen.

Kabir- bhot bhook lgi h yaar... kya khau.. ha lets make noodles kabira ( m very hungry... what should I it)

Kabir made noodles and ate. When he entered the kitchen again he saw the tap and remembered what nisha said.

Kabir- hmmm... mjhse nhi hoga... ab to mai hi thik karunga is tap ko..( I can't do it... wait now I will show her how to do it)

And he started repairing the tap. But as he didn't know anything about it he messed it up real bad.

Kabir- ye to aur kharab ho gya... ab kya karu... nisha ne dekh lia na to bhot pitegi.. kya karu... ha lets call sukku he must know some plumber. ( I have made it worse... what should I do.. if nisha saw this... she will beat me for sure)

He called sukku but he didn't picked it up.

Kabir- ab ye sala bhi kisi kaam ka nhi h.. time p phone hi nhi uthata h.. (he is of no use... never pick the phone on time)

Just when he was mumbling nisha entered into the kitchen.

Kabir- nisha tu kab aae (when did u came)

Nisha- jab tu apne aap m badbda rha tha tab... ur ye kya kia kabir... ur kharab kar dia (when u were mumbling then... what have u done... u have damaged it completely)

Kabir- oe... jyada mat ghoor... abhi thik kar dunga mai... tu janti nhi h mai multi talented hu..( don't stare at me like that... I will repair it.. m multi talented)

With this he opened his arm wide and accidently hit the tap with the hammer breaking it completely.
The water rushed out of the tap and looked like an artificial rain.

Nisha- kabir... kya kiya ye... poora hi tod dia... duffer (what have u done... u broke it)

kabir (trying to hold the water coming from tap) - mjhe daantna band karegi... yha aake help kar (stop scolding me... come and help)

Nisha- ohk..

Kabir and nisha tried to stop the water but it didn't help. Both of then got tired and were drenched.

Nisha- chhod ise thak gae hu mai... hath bhi dard karne lge..( leave it m tired... n my hands are paining)

Kabir - ohho... let me see mrs. Kabir kumar where have this stupid tap hurt you.

He took her hand in his and caressed it like it's a feather. She looked at him lovingly. He stopped caressing it and kissed her hands. She blushed pink at his touch. He looked at her angelic face and pulled her in his embrace. He again get lost in those beautiful brown eyes . They both shared a very cute eyelock. The water was still sprinkling on them. A drop of water get settled on her lips. Kabir broke the eyelock and his eyes traced the path of that drop. Nisha could hear him taking a hitched breath. He leaned over her and captured her lips in a hungry kiss. Her hands automatically moved to his neck and she kissed him back.

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EPISODE 286 - BY HARSHIKA

Scene 1: KNH

Kabir and Nisha were both drenched...and Kabir's ringtone brought them back to their senses. Nisha broke the kiss and freed herself from Kabir's arms. Kabir took out his phone from his pocket. It was Sukku. "Hamesha galat time pe call" he murmured.

"Hello Kabir! Tune call kiya tha?"

"Wo kiss toot...mera matlab nal toot gaya. Hamare kitchen ka na nal toot gaya hai, toh tere paas kisi plumber ka number hai?" Kabir stammered.

"Uh..ha..hamare area me ek plumber hai. Main ek kaam karta hu use call karke tumhara address de deta hoon."

"Okay. Thanks yaar sale!" He kept the phone and turned around. Nisha had gone to the bedroom. He smiled to himself.



Scene 2: Gangwal House(Dolly's room)

Dolly was sitting at her study table. Papers were lying in front of her but she was lost in her own thoughts. Lakshmi entered.

"Dolly beta!"
"Chaachi aap! Aaiyye na" she made her to sit on the bed. Lakshmi held her hands and made her sit next to her. "Tabiyat kaisi hai tumhari?"

"Main ab theek hu chachi."

"Sachmuch?" Dolly looked at her tensed. "Tumhe yaad hai beta, jab tum 8th standard me thi aur tumhe school picnic ke liye sheher se bahar jana tha?! Lekin tum apne papa se poochne se dar rahi thi. Us din raat ko dinner ke baad main aur tumhare chachu tumhe ice-cream khilane le gaye. Aur tumne apni is chachi se sari baate share ki."

"Ha chachi, main kaise bhool sakti hu?! Phir aapne mummy aur papa se baat kar unhe manaya tha.''

"Aaj tumhari wahi Lakshmi chachi tumhare samne baithi hai. Main janti hu Dolly is waqt tum bahut hi mushkil waqt se guzar rahi hoon. Ye sab aasan nahi hai lekin tumhare man me jo kuchbhi chal raha hai wo tum mujhe bata sakti ho. Balki tumhe batana chahiye."

Dolly's eyes were filled with tears. She hugged Lakshmi and felt the same warmth that she had years ago. She calmed down and narrated everything. Lakshmi placed her hand on her cheeks and said "Dolly tumhe bahut hi chhoti umar me bahut kuch sehna pad raha hai jiske liye kahi na kahi hum bade bhi zimmedar hai. Pehle to Sumit ne tumhare saath jo kiya, uske baad apne saath-saath is bachche ki chinta, aur Saurav se jud raha tumhara ye naya rishta. Ye sab ek saath manage karna aur wo bhi aisi halat me bahut mushkil hai Dolly. Lekin kisi bhi problem ka solution baith kar baat karne se hi nikalta hai. Main manti hoon ki Saurav tumse bahut pyaar karta hai, lekin kisi bhi rishte ke panapne me waqt lagta hai. Aur aise me jab tum already itni stressed ho tumhe thoda wait karna chahiye. Tum dono ko ek-doosre ko aur apne is rishte ko thoda waqt dena padega. Ek baar baki sab kuch theek ho jae uske baad hi tumhe ise aage badhana chahiye. Yahi baat tumhe Saurav ko samjhani hogi. Usse baat karke, milke koi faisla karna hoga. Wo tumhari baat zaroora samjhega beta!."

"Aap theek keh rahi ho chachi. Main Saurav se is bare me baat karungi. Thank you." Dolly smiled emotionally.

"Kabhi bhi koi baat ho na toh use apne andar mat chhupao Dolly. Kisi se bhi, kisi bhi apne se share karna. Aur kuch bhi lage toh ye Lakshmi chachi hai tumhare saath." Saying this she hugged her and left.


Scene 3: Gangwal House

It was morning. Dadaji had is tea and went to the washroom. Dadi finished cleaning up the room when Jwala arrived.

"Are Jwala, waha darwajje pe ke kar rahi hai? Andar aa ja."

Jwala came and sat next to Dadi. "Dadi aapse kuch poochna tha?" Jwala said hesitantly.

"Ke hua? Bol!"

"Dadi, aap bachpan me kaisi thi? Mera matlab aapko kya-kya pasand tha? Aapko sajne-sawarne ka shauk tha?"

"Arre!! Ye ke pooch rahi hai? Apne pote-potiyon ke bachpan dekh chuki hoon,aise me mere bachpan ki ke baat batau?!"

"Phir bhi daadi, bataiye na. Aap jab meri umar ki thi tab aap kaise rehti thi?"

"Hmm... main hum beheno me sabse badi thi, isliye humesha hi samjhdar aur jimmedar thi. Lekin pata hai mere andar ek chulbulapan tha. Main waise toh apne bapuji ke samne bahut shant rehti thi. Lekin chhup-chhup ke bahut shaitaniyan karti thi!"

"Waise aap kya pehenti thi? Aap make-up wagerah karti thi??"

"Hain!! Us zamane me konnsa make-up! Mere bapuji bahut hi,.. wo ke kehte ho tum log...'istrict' the!! Lekin main unse chhup-chhupke thoda-bahut sajti sawarti thi. Jab wo ghar pe nahi hote tab main apne saheliyon ke sundar-sundar firock' pehenti thi, apne baal khule chhod kar unme gulab ka fool lagati thi. Mujhe is sabka bahut shauk tha lekin hamari ke himmat ki apnne bapuji ke samne ye sab kar sake..." she laughed naughtily.

"Dadi aap bhi na..kitni sweet ho!!" Jwala embraced her.

"Wo sab theek hai lekin manne ye bata ki tu aise sawaal kyu pooch rahi hai?"

"Kuchh nahi Dadi. Main na abhi chalti hu. Thank you. Bye!."

Dadi was surprised to see Jwala's changed behavior.


Scene 4: KNH

It was 8 am. Kabir was sitting at the dining table having his breakfast hurriedly, while Nisha was packing his tiffin.

"Chal Nisha, mujhe na bahut der ho rahi hai. Mujhe nikalna hoga."

"Are, par ye tiffin toh leke ja."
"Ha, ruk!" he went to the kitchen and she handed over the tiffinbox. Kabir was about to leave but then looked at her naughtily. She was cleaning up the kitchen platform quickly. He stood behind her and opened her hair clutcher.

"Kabir! Ye kya kar raha hai. Mujhe bhi dukan par jana hai...aur tujhe to late ho raha hai na?!" Nisha said angrily.

"Main toh bas apni wifey...achhoo!!!"*sneezes* *sneezes once more*

"Ye kya Kabir, tujhe cold ho gaya na?! Maine kaha tha kal ki sone se pehle kapde change kar lena...lekin tu.."

"Nisha..Nisha!! Shant ho ja. Bas thoda sa cold hi toh hai. Shaam tak theek ho jaega. Ab main chalta hu." He began to leave.

"Ruk Kabir!" she took out medicines from the drawer. "Ye le, ye medicine kha le warna thand badh jaegi."

"Kitni care karti hai meri wifey, par kya ye kadvi medicine khani zaroori hai??" he said with a pouted face.

"Ha! Abhi ke abhi kha le" she handed him a glass of water. Kabir had the medicines making dirty faces.

"Ok?? Ab main nikalta hu!!"

"Ruk Kabir! Tue ek aur cheez bhool raha hai!"

"Ab kya baki hai? Ek aur medicine nahi!!"

She came closer to him and placed a peck on his cheek. "Shaam ko jaldi aana aur apna khayal rakhna."

"Ok wifey!" he smiled and returned her the kiss on her cheek and then ran away.

Nisha smiled looking at the door.


Scene 5: Rupan's room

"Mom, main Saurav ke saath consignment ke liye ja rahi hoon,so lunch main bahar hi kar lungi." Kirti entered the room.

"Kirti, yaha aa.Mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai."

Kirti comes and sits next to her. "Tu ye aajkal dinbhar Saurav ke saath kyu rehti hai?"

"Mom, what question is this? Maine Saurav aur Dolly di ka business join kiya hai, toh mujhe uske saath hi kaam karna padega na!"

"Lekin Kirti, to be honest mujhe ye Saurav kabhi theek nahi laga. Kaise Dolly ko bhi fasa liya usne.."

"Mom please! Ye aap kaisi baate kar rahi ho? Aur Dolly di koi bachchi nahi hai. Unhone khud Saurav ko ha kaha tha."

"Beta Kirti, tu bahut bholi hai! Jald hi logo ke baato me aa jati hai."

"Mom apne past ke galtiyo se main seekh chuki hoon. Logo ko pehchanna mujhe aata hai. So please...aur waise bhi, mujhe ab late ho raha hai." Saying this Kirti leaves Rupan in a worried state.

She comes back and peeps from the door, "By the way mom, aap aise worried mat raha kijiye. Aapke face ka glow chala jaaega!" She winks and smiles. Rupan tries hard to smile.

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Episode 287 (by Pooja)




Saurav waits for kirti outside GH for going for meeting. Dolly sees him from balcony nd goes to talk to him.
Dolly: Hi saurav.
Saurav: Tu yaha kyu aayi hai dolly? Kuch kehna baki reh gaya tha kya?
Dolly: Tu aise kaise baat kar raha hai saurav...meri bat to sun
Saurav: Ab bacha kya hai dolly..sabkuch to tu bol chuki hai nd ab ye relation bhi tut chuka hai
Dolly: Saurav par meri baat to sun plz... Kirti is coming out smiling but stops seeing dolly nd saurav talking. She's not feeling good seeing them together but decides to keep mum. But saurav sees her coming. Saurav: Hii kirti...chal dolly hum log chalte hai hume late ho raha hai meeting k liye...thik hai, bye Kirti: Dolly di aap thik ho? ( dolly hides her tears) Dolly: Ha im fine...u guys go nd njoy ur dinners Kirti: Dolly di dinners nahi dinner (but saurav nd dolly both are not in mood to laugh, kirti notices this) KN's house Kabir comes home and falls on sofa being tired. He goes to kitchen to drink water nd notices that tap is working properly and smiles that nisha ne plumber se tap thik karva liya hoga. He considers himself lucky to get wife like nisha who balances work nd house so easily along with him. At that moment nisha enters nd seeing him smiling nisha asks him. Nisha: Kabir, thik hai na? Akele akele kyu has raha hai bandar ki tarah Kabir: Bas ek bandariya k bare me soch raha hu Nisha( in shock) : Kaun hai wo? Uske to dant tod dungi me Kabir: Koshish karle wifey, me aisa hone hi nahi dunga Nisha: Naam bata bas uska (getting more angry) Kabir: Sochle...mere rehte hue koi usko chu bhi nahi payega aur wo koi aur nahi tu hi hai nisha Nisha: (blushing) Kabir: Oye hoye wifey blush karte hue to aur cute lagti hai..man kar raha hai aaj to family planning kar hi leni chahiye *winks* Nisha: Shut up kabir, kuch bhi bolta hai... Mujhe bahot kaam hai me jaati hu Kabir(helds her hand and pulls her towards him, nisha's back hugging kabir's chest): Sochle aisa chance vapas nahi aayega... Nisha: Bye kabir ( nd she freed herself from his arms, and kabir thinks kab tak bhagegi wifey, jaha jaogi hume paogi) After meeting at dinner. Kirti: Saurav dnt mind me asking but is evrything is fine between you and dolly di? Saurav: (tries to change the topic) tune yaha ka Chinese try kiya hai? Its awesome Kirti: Its not the answer of my question saurav...plz batana Saurav: Ha sab thik hai nd jo thik nhi hai wo ho jayega yar...tu ye sab chod dinner k baad ice cream khayegi? Kirti: Thik hai Saurav: Thik hai fir...jaldi se khale fir hum ice cream khayenge. At GH Dolly is still thinking how to talk to saurav when he is not even ready to listen to her. Just then she sees kirti nd saurav coming after dinner. She feels jealous. She wants to talk to saurav but she thinks this is not the proper time, she will talk to him tomorrow morning. Saurav sees her in the balcony but avoids any eye contact, because he can not hide his feelings for her. He just leave without even saying her goodbye. Dolly(in monologue): Ek baar to meri baat sun le saurav. Kab tak naraz rahega mujhse...*crying* Saurav(in monologue): Tu aisa kaise kar sakti hai dolly, tune ye relationship todne se pehle ek baar bhi nahi socha...meine tujhe nd baby ko apna mana tha, job k liye bhi tujhe nahi roka par tu mujhe samjh hi nahi payi dolly.


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NOTE FROM NAUC-TSC TEAM

Dear readers,


We are extremely sorry for not posting today's episode...there had been some issues about the episode...so the episode has not been posted...sorry for our mistake. We hope that you forgive us. We promise to give a good and long episode tomorrow. Hope you guys will love tomorrow's episode...!!!
Sorry...!!

Thankyou,
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NAUC-TSC #2



MAHAEPISODE- by shibu and sonal


Scene 1

Adhiraj entered his bedroom and sat on the bed thinking about the past few days. Dolly's entry in his office, him knowing about her pregnancy and her and her boyfriend's argument.

Adhiraj(angrily)- Why the hell am I even thinking about that girl?

(His sister, Ayesha entered the room with snacks)

Aisha- (surprised) - girl...i mean really, ohh god my brother raj is thinking about a girl?

(Adhiraj looked at his sister and smiled. She placed the tray on the side table and sat beside him)

Aisha-(concerned) Raj, kya baat hai, you look tensed.

Adhiraj- Kuch nahi, some employee...

Aisha-Tumhe kabse apne employee ki padne lagi?

Adhiraj- Nope, actually, I am not tensed, but guilty...

Aisha- (confused) Kyun?

Adhiraj-(gulity) Di, she is pregnant, aur maine usse itna kaam karwaya... I mean, I rejected her 3 designs...

Aisha- Kaun hai woh?

Adhiraj- Our new interior designer, Dolly Gangwal...

Aisha- Aur tum isiliye guilty ho kyunki you made her work hard and it could have affected her health, right?

Adhiraj- Hmm...

Aisha-(trying to explain) Raj, this is the hundredth time I am telling you ki jo hua usmein tumhari koi galti nahi thi...

Adhiraj-(trying to hide his tears)meri hi galti thi, If I had given her a better lifestyle, she wouldn't have taken such a major step Di...

Aisha- (sighing) Raj u r thinking so much...n u know what woh tumhare pyaar ke layak nhi thi...

Adhiraj-i don't know di...i think main usey apna point of view samjha hi nhi paya

Aisha-aur isliye tumhe lagta hai ki that was ur mistake...u know what bro plzz move on...now its been three years

Adhiraj-di plzz not again...i really don't want to talk about that...iss topic ko toh start hi na Karen

Aisha-kyun na karun...teen saal ho gye hain...tum kya saari life akele rahoge...why don't u understand life is so long kisi ka toh saath chahiye hoga na...zindagi akele nhi kaati jaati...raj m ur sister n thats why m concerned

Adhiraj-n tell me one thing di r u sure that this time it will work what if agar phir se kuch ho gya toh

Aisha-u know what raj u have made a perception...according to u tumhari life mein sab galat hi hoga

Adhiraj-toh wohi toh hota aya hai

Aisha-raj why don't u understand...tum kahin kho gayye ho mera raj kabhi itna serious aur negative nhi tha jitna ab ho gya hai...plzzz give a second chance...to u n to ur life

Adhiraj-di plzz...m happy

Aisha-listen raj

(She was interrupted by Adhiraj's mobile ringing. He excused himself and received the call)

Aisha-kya karoon main...babaji ab aap hi kuch karo...koi toh aisi ladki hogi na jo mere khoye hue bhai ko vapas la sake

Scene 2

Aman was about to enter Viren-Vimla's room to remind Viren about his medicines, but stopped when she heard him speak something about Umesh.

Viren- Kuch toh hai Vimla, jo Umesh chhupa raha hai...

Vimla- Aisa kuch nahi ji, aapko bas lag raha hoga...

Viren-(determined) Toh phir woh inn dino dukaan pe kyun nahi aata? Har waqt pata nahi kaha rehta hai...

Vimla- Aap yeh sab baatein chodo, aapka dawayi ka waqt hua hai...

Viren- Nhai, pehle main Bauji se milkar aata hoon...

Vimla- (trying to stop him) Arrey par?

Aman hid behind the door and watched her father-in-law walk away. She knew it was time to take some major action.

Scene 3

(The cousins and Kabir assembled on the terrace. Dolly wasn't there with them as she was with Daadi. Aman told them about Viren-Vimla's conversation)

Aman- Mujhe lagta hai hume sab ko sach bata dena chahiye...

Umesh- Nahi Aman, Papa mujhe zinda nahi chodenge...

Sukku- Aur Dadaaji humari aatma tak nahi bakshenge...

Aman-par kabhi na kabhi toh batana hi hoga na...aur mujhe poora yakeen hai ki woh samajh jaayenge

Kabir-i guess aman is right

Sukku-haan teri toh wo behen hai toh tujhe toh sahi lagega hi na

Bunty-behen...par yeh kab pta chal...i mean i know that viraj sir n kabir jiju r bhai...but aman bhabhi yeh kab hua

Sukku-arey aman bhabhi is viraj sir's behen na n kabir is viraj sir's bhai toh automatically dono bhai behen hue na

Bunty-matlab

Umesh-arey chodo na yaar tum log ab yeh rishta kya kehlata hai kheloge kya...n aman we r not telling them

Aman-(trying to explain) Par Laddoo...

Umesh- I know Aman, tum tensed ho, par we'll find a way out na...

Bunty- Haan Bhabhi, Iss tension ka bhi koi na koi solution nikal hi aayega...

Kirti- EK aur tension hai...

Sukku- Kya? Tera naya dress kharab hua kya?

(All giggled and stopped when they noticed Kirti throwing daggers at them)

Kirti- How Blah! That wasn't even funny... Anyways, Main Dolly Di aur Saurav ki baat kar rahi hoon...saurav bohot sad hai

(All became silent)

Nisha- I think hume unka patch up karwana chahiye...

Kabir- I agree with Nisha...i know kaisa lagta hai jab aapki GF ya wife aapse ladti hai(with a puppy face)

Nisha-u mean main tujhse ladti hoon

Kabir-arey i didn't say that

Nisha-but u meant that...kabir tu kitna k hai na

Kabir-aur tu mere k se kitna j hai na

Sukku(with an irritated face)-aur hum sab kitne B hai na

Everybody-B

Sukku-haan bewkoof aur bore...n nisha aur kabir...change the dialogue yaar i mean har baar same J n K...really

Kirti-i know...how blah...n lets concentrate on saurav n dolly di...toh humein unka patch up karana hai...so everybody is agree with me

Everybody(except umesh)-yep

Umesh- Par I don't...

(All looked at umesh in confusion)

Aman- Yeh kya baat kar rahe ho Laddoo? Hum Dolly di ki baat kar rahe hai, unki khushiyon ki...

Umesh- Wahin toh Aman, hum uski khushiyon ki baat rahe hai... So don't you think ki hume usse aur Saurav ko iss waqt iss situation ko face karne dena chahiye?

Kirti- Matlab?

Umesh- Practically socho, Dolly ke divorce ki hearing shuru hone waali hai... She is busy with her job now... Aur yeh sab woh sirf apne bacche ke liye kar rahi hai.. Khudh ki identity banana ke liye kar rahi hai... Aise mein we can't impose another responsibility on her...

Nisha- Par Saurav?

Umesh- main yeh nahi keh raha hoon, ki Saurav isn't a part of her life, par kuch samay ke liye... Let them be...

All understood Umesh's point of view and agreed to it. Suddenly Kabir noticed that Jwala was quiet during the whole discussion.

Kabir- Kya baat hai Jwalu, tu itni chup-chup kyun hai?

Jwala- Kuch nahi jiju...

She looked at the others sadly and walked away. All stared at retreating figure in confusion.

Bunty- Shayad koi test hogi...

Sukku-Maybe...

Scene 4

(nisha was going to meet jwalu n she is mumbling something)

Nisha-samajhta kya hai khud ko...usne kaha main ussey ladti hoon...main baat hi nhi karungi jab baat hi nhi hogi toh jhagda kaise hoga

(kabir came there n hugged her from back)

Kabir-wifey...thinking about me

Nisha-leave me kabir

Kabir-never ever

(she pushed him)

Kabir-oye Jhansi ki rani...haath pair todegi kya

Nisha-i don't want to talk to u

Kabir-okk m sorry...i was just kidding

Nisha-accha sorry bol diya aur ho gya...pehle bta main tujhse kab ladti hoon

Kabir(in a low voice)-kab nhi ladti ye puch

Nisha-i heard that

Kabir-majaak kar rha hoon...u know what tujhse ladkar jhagadkar hi toh tujhse pyaar kiya hai...nisha u n this relationship is my life...tune mujhe complete kiya hai...main kya karoon tujhse lade bina mera din bhi toh poora nhi hota mera har sapna aur har khwahish ab tujhse judi hai...main toh tujhe hurt karne ka soch bhi nhi sakta and

Nisha(she was feeling overwhelmed)-shhh...dont say anything(she hugged him)tere bina meri life bhi kuch nhi hai...suna tune(and she kissed his cheek...they broke the hug)

Kabir-waise wifey irada kya hai...hugs n kisses haan(he winks at her)

Nisha-tu maar abhi khayega ya ghar chal kar

Kabir-main tera pati hoon izzat kar

Nisha-tu ruk

(kabir ran from there n nisha headed toward jawalu's room)

Scene 5

Jwala sat on the bed with her History text book in her hand. But her mind was somewhere else. Rupan entered the room with a glass of milk and almonds.

Rupan- Jwalu, History kar rahi hai? Aaj Science mein kya padhaya?

She turned to face her daughter. She was confused to see the book in Jwala's hand upside down. She touched Jwala's shoulder. Jwala came out of her trance.

Rupan- Kya baat hai Jwalu? Tabiyat thikh hai naa teri?

Jwala- Haan Maa, I am fine...

Rupan- Toh thikh hai... Yeh le, pehle doodh pee aur phir badaam kha, badaam se memory tej hoti hai...

Jwala- Hmmm...

Rupan patted her head and walked out of her room. Jwala went and stood infront of the mirror and looked at her reflection sadly. Nisha entered the room.

Nisha- Jwalu?

Jwalu- Haan Nishu Bro?

Nisha- Kya baat hai? Itni udaas yun hai?

Jwalu- Kuch nahi, bas History ki padhai nahi ho rahi hai...

Nisha- Jhoot mat bol... apni Nishu bro se chupayegi?

Jwala-(sadly) Nishu Bro, main aisi kyun hoon?

Nisha- (confused) Matlab?

Jwala- Main Kirti aur mom ki tarah khoobsurat kyun nahi hoon?

Nisha- Kisne kaha ki meri Jwalu khoobsurat nahi hai? Meri Jwalu toh sabse pretty hai...

Jwala- (irritated) Chodo, main bhi aapse kya puch rahi hoon, aap toh Jhalli bane phirte ho...

Nisha smiled and nodded her head slightly. After all this was the dialogue she had heard from childhood.

Nisha- Aa mere saath...

She made her sit on the bed and started searching through the shelves of the cupboard.

Jwala- Kya dhoond rahe ho?

Nisha- Yeh...

She showed her their childhood album and went and sat beside her. She started flipping through the pictures discussing about their childhood memories. Jwala laughed remembering some and made faces when Nisha teased her. Finally, they finished with the pictures.

Nisha- Tune ek baat notice ki?

Jwala-(confused) Kya

Nisha- Inn saare pictures mein kisine kisi ne tujhe hug kiya hai...

Jwala-(confused) Toh?

Nisha- Toh iska matlab yeh hai, ki hum sab tujhse pyaar karte hai, aur jo humse pyaar karte hai, woh hume apni acchiyan-buriyan dekhe bina accept karta hai, as we are...

Jwala smiled.

Jwala- Jiase jiju ne aapko accept kiya, hai na?

Nisha looked at her in shock and the blushed. She made a face and walked away.

Jwala- Thanks Nishu Bro, I really needed this.

She said hugging the album.

Scene 6

(Dolly entered the kitchen and saw Rukma arranging the vegetables. She started helping her. Suddenly her eyes fell on the lemons and she remembered how Saurav had helped her during her morning sickness. She smiled, but in a millisecond, reality crashed on her and tears formed in her eyes. She rushed in her room and closed the behind her. She then sat on the bed and cried her heart out)

Dolly-ohh gods main kya karoon sab galat kyun hota ja rha hai...kyun

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