NAUC -TSC #2 |Cousins till the End|

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Our NAUC world begins where the story ended on television...Hope you Enjoy!!!

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Initiator: Annie : sam_premc

Episode Banner Credits: Maggy : _A-Hopeful-Ray_

Writers this week:

Anju: Anjalipunia (Inactive)
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Mansi: mansi_as18
Shibu: ...Shibu...
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Maggy: _A-Hopeful-Ray_
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episode 277(BY AnjaliPunia)Scene1

Kabir Nisha home

Nisha runs away from Kabir but collides with sofa and falls . Kabir who was chasing her also looses balance and falls on her.

Their eyes meet for a microsecond and Kabir gets up as he sees Nisha getting uncomfortable.

Kabir : Sit here like an obedient child while I get food warna idhar udhar girti rahogi. I won't move around lifting you wifey .You are just too heavy.

Nisha didn't react just sat there.Kabir got poha for them .

Nisha : You are not angry that I am not letting you close to me?

Kabir( with shocked expression ) Who can get angry with such a cute person (he said with a grin)

Kabir feeded Poha to nisha with his own hands while she just watched him thinking to herself

NISHA (TO HERSELF) : I MUST HAVE DONE SOMETHING REALLY GOOD SO I GOT A MAN LIKE HIM .

Next Nisha feeded him with utmost concern

Finally after they washed the dishes and cleaned a little messed up kitchen they went to sleep cuddling each other.Nisha had slowly started taking baby steps towards getting recovery. She was now trying to get usual to Kabir's touch. He on the otherhand was making sure that he respected Nisha's privacy and feelings.

NISHA WOKE UP IN MIDDLE OF NIGHT HAVING HORRIBLE NIGHTMARES

Kabir looked at her and tried comforting her . He held her hand Nisha jerked his hand away to his dismay.She pushed him away and was not allowing him near her .

Kabir : Nisha relax . ! All right I am no where near you . RELAX.TAKE A DEEP BREATH.

Nisha: No don't don't touch me don't ( Nisha screamed with her eyes shut.

Kabir didn't know what to do . He came near her and shook her thats when she opened her eyes and reality dawned on her. She hugged him tighter than ever,leaving no space even for air to pass through He held her as she sobbed. This was going to be tough for both of them

Scene 2

Gangwal House.

All the cousins are gathered on terrace along with Saurabh and Aman.

Umesh : Guys I have decided I am determined to start my own restaurant .

Saurabh : Wow !! So here's an addition to the entreprenuer group of family.First Dolly then Kirti and Now Umesh.

Dolly : Kirti? When did she join any entreprenueral business venture.

Saurabh : Oh! I forgot to tell you Kirti has joined us . Our clothing venture . She has been a great help.

Dolly was surprised beyond anything . She could not believe what she heard. NO she had no issues with Kirti joining in but She ought to have been informed earlier atleast she thought so.

Kirti : Umesh bhai You continue. We can discuss these things later Saurabh and dolly di.

Umesh : Ya so but there is a big problem. The expenses for a month fall around Rs .3,10,000 including land rent , salaries of helpers. Setting up place and all the food

(He sighed )

Amanpreet : That is a huge amount. How are we going to manage. It is really a big amount.

Sukku : Nothing is unachievable.Dekhte hai kya kr sakte ( We will see what can be done)

Umesh : Thanks people.

They all left for their work.

Scene 2

Dolly and Saurabh in room

Dolly : Yaar Saurabh you ought to have informed me about Kirti joining in.

Saurabh : So now I have to ask you for even this. Listen Dolly You weren't around and Kirti has a great sense of knowledge so she helped me and I offered her to join in.

Dolly : You are taking it wrong Saurabh . I know its your venture but You made me a partner so I should have been informed.

Saurabh : Allright I will be careful next time but you are busy with your job and then business and then you are pregnant dolly. Please don' t take unnecessary stress lest it harms you. ( Saurabh said while holding her hands)

Dolly : Ya Saurabh. I hope you are not angry on me for working out.

Saurabh (embraced her lightly):

I am just worried

Kirti passes by and sees them hugging and goes to terrace .

They break the hug.

Dolly : I have to go to site today.

Saurabh : Take care. May I drop you.?

Dolly : Sir will pick me up on the way. Our house falls in the route.

Saurabh : Allright.

Saurabh leaves for terrace as he had some dupattas placed there for drying .

Scene 3

Kirti is checking the dupattas while Saurabh comes from behind and scares her

Saurabh : Boooho Miss Blah.

Kirti trips and falls on ground and Saurabh says sorry holding his ears

Kirti : Bloody hell .I think I sprained my leg.Ah !! The pain is terrible.

Saurabh : I am so sorry. Show it ( He sits beside her and looks at her feet and massages it gently. Kirti lets out a scream )

Kirti : Ouch ( She tries getting up and saurabh helps her to take her to her room.

Dolly has already left.They are alone in home Everyone is out.

Saurabh helps her sit on the bed

Kirti :Thanks Saurabh.

Saurabh turns to leave while Kirti holds his hand.

Kirti : Wait I got somrthing for you.

Saurabh : Ahaan ! You are maska lagayeing me .

Kirti : Shut up!!There is my suitcase get it here and open it

Saurabh did what she said and to his amazement found a new branded woodland jacket. Something he always wanted to own but could not. It was too costly he thought shelling out 5500 bucks wasn't his cup of tea after all.

Saurabh : What was the need Kirti.

Kirti : I got everyone what they liked so I got this for you.Try na Saurabh.

Saurabh wore it but could not zip it up So Kirti helped him and he hugged her in excitement .Kirti was taken aback but before she hugged him back he retreated himself.

He left immediately to avoid awkwardness

Scene 5

Viraj house

Viraj was at the breakfast table whe he saw all his favourite dishes served.He saw his Mom preparing more items and went to her.

Viraj : Why don't you just leave me on my own .The way you did years back. Stop fooling me with your made up care . For God sake Let me be alone.

Vasundhra: I know I made a mistake and spoiled your life but

Viraj cut her in between

Viraj : You tried spoiling your other son's life too. I just don't wanna see you. I already bore you enough

Saying this Viraj stormed out and drove to a park few kilometres away from his place.

He saw people hovering around.

He saw a mother carrying a kid in her arms and another walking by holding her hands. He smiled seeing them .Next he saw a couple .The guy was holding his ears may be he made the girl wait a lot 'Viraj thought to himself'.

He saw the couple embracing each other. The girl saw him staring at them. She approached him and he turned back.

Girl: Sir autograph please.

Viraj (sighed) : Sure but no pen you see.

Guy : I got one but no paper.

Girl extended a tissue paper to him which reminded him of how he had once written a note for nisha That he is normal and not an alien. He smiled to himselfand signed the note.

Life was harsh on him.He lost everything he earned .He yearned for care ,love and acceptance but what he got was opposite. He was too broken to be mended. Blame it on him Nisha still ruled his heart . He could not let her go in a second though he knew she didn't love him anymore. He was happy for her. She deserved better than him and she got it . Kabir was a gem of person Viraj had taken the note mentally and had decided not to interfere in their life. He wanted peace in his loneliness.He had nothing to him .No one to live for except for the dream of Lakshya Academy which now seemed distant. He stood looking up to the sky and said 'But I will live for MYSELF, MY DREAM AND MY PEACE.I WILL LOVE MYSELF WHAT IF NO ONE ELSE GIVES A DAMN , I DON'T CARE ANYMORE'.


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Epi-278

Scene-1
GH house
Umesh was in a lot of stress and was wondering here and there in his room.

Aman- " kya hua laddu kyu idhar udhar ghum kar khud ko stress kar rhe ho. Baith jao... we will find some way na" (what happened laddu... don't take stress)

Umesh- " aman mai apna sapna poora karna chahta hu par ye sab kaise hoga mjhe kuch samajh nhi aa rha h... tumhe to pta h na kitna bda investment hai" ( aman I wanted to achieve my dream but u know how big this investment is... how will it happen)
( lines of tension appeared on his face)

Aman ( holding his hand)- " sab ho jaega laddu... m with you na" (everything will happen as per u decided... m with you)

" we too... umesh bhaiya and aman bhabhi" - sukku, kirti, and dolly appeared.

" Why u take so much tensions umesh bhaiya "- dolly said.

" Tensions nhi tension dolly di"- aman corrected.

" Ha umesh bhaiya... dekho hm sab milke koshish karenge na to sab ho jaega.." -sukku said. (Yes... see we all will try our best)

" Ur ha nishu k London ticket ko cancel kra k jo paise aae hai na vo aap rakh lo"( and the cancellation amount of Nisha's london ticket is all yours)- sukku said handing over a packet

" Par ye sab to tm logo k pocket money h na"- umesh said. (But thats ur pocket money)

" to kya hua umesh bhaiya... kaam to hmare hi aaega na... hm aapke business m invest karenge to profit bhi to milega"( so what... if we will invest in ur business then we will get profit too)- said kirti giving him her deposit too.

Scene - 2
Kn house

Nisha was sleeping after kabir has comforted her. While kabir was busy in thinking ways to get this fear out of nisha. He can't see her like this. He knew she is fighting but she needed help. He began to surf internet for some kind of treatment and he came across some yoga and meditation techniques to relieve stress. He read every minute detail about it and decided to apply it. He looked beside himself at his love and said " mai tere lie kuch bhi kar sakta hu nisha... ur tu bilkul fikar mat kar... mai tjhe tere dard se bahar nikal k hi rhunga" ( I can do anything for you nisha... I will definitely bring you out from your pain)

Scene - 3
Gh house

Dolly was standing in her room trying to remember something when sairav appeared in front of her with medicines in his hand and said " ye bhool rhi h... kha le jaldi".(this is what u are forgetting)
Dolly was sweetly surprised at his gesture.

" Ur sun... ye kuch fabrics laya hu mai agle assignment k lie... dekh le ur select kar" he said. (Listen these are some fabrics for next assignment... choose one)

Dolly kept looking at the pieces of clothes. " Hmmm ye... ye achha h" (this one is good)
she said pointing towards one of them.

" Ha yaar achha to hai... but dolly yaar ye kapda bahut costly h" (u r right but its too costly) said saurav
dolly- " are saurav best h ye... bhot achha rhega pta h hmare office m na sab yehi fabric pehen k aate h" (this is the best...u know everyone in my office wear this only)

Saurav - " yaar I know... but ise rkhenge to manufacturing cost hi itni ho jaegi ki hme loss ho jaega" ( I know... but this will shoot up our manufacturing cost and we will be in loss)

Dolly- " tu meri koi baat manta kyu nhi h yaar" (why don't you agree to me ever)

Saurav - " tu thik se soch dolly ghate ka sauda hai , abhi to hmne thik se khud ko set up bhi nhi kiya hai" ( just think carefully... it is business of losses and we are still growing)

Dolly- "dekh saurav... mai bhi is buisness m teri partner hu ur tjhe meri ye baat manni hi padegi... hmesha apni marzi mat chalaya kar" (see... m also ur business partner and u have to listen to me...)

Saurav was getting angry now " dekh dolly bhot ho gya tera... maine esa kya kar dia h jo tu itta bhadak rhi h" (what have i done... why you behaving like this)

dolly was angry too " dekh saurav maine keh dia jo kehna tha... iske aage mjhe tjhse koi baat nhi karni" (see I have told u what I wanted too... after this m not gonna talk with you on this issue)

Saurav wanted to argue but he didn't wanted to drag this much so he just left from there. He banged with kirti who was standing at the door of dolly's room and has witnessed the whole fiasco. " M so sorry... I was just passing by and..." kirti said.
"Never mind..." saurav said with a sad smile.

Scene - 4
Kn house (morning)

Nisha woke up. But kabir wasn't in the room, she looked at the clock it's just 6 in the morning " where is kabir at this hour of day" she thought. She got up from the bed and headed towards drawing room. She was shocked when she saw the scene in her drawing room. The tv was on and a young woman was performing a yoga asana. Her eyes spotted kabir who was trying to lift his one arm and leg simultaneously while he was in a kneeling position. He was trying to do it when he lost his balance and landed straight on the floor. Nisha burst out laughing seeing him. He looked up and frowned seeing her laughing at him.

" Oe daant kya dikha rhi h... " (why are u laughing ) kabir said pretending to be angry.

" hasu na to ur kya karu... bandar ki tarah harkate kyu kar rha h subah subah" (what should i do... ur behaving like a monkey) nisha said still laughing.

" oe ise na yoga kehte h jo sabke bus ki baat nhi h" ( this is called yoga and not everyone can do it) kabir said imitating her.

" waise b yoga is healthy and ye mere dance m b help karega.." (yoga is healthy and it will help me in dancing)

" ha ha dikh hi rha h... ek b pose to bna nhi paa rha h... help karega..." ( ya ya i can see... u cannot even hold a pose.. what will it help) she said imitating him.

" Huh.. dekho bol kaun rha h jisne kabhi yoga ka y bhi nhi dekha... bandariya khi ki" (see who's talking who didn't even know abcd of yoga) kabir said smirking.

" Oe tjhse to bhot better kar lungi mai... kuwa khi ka" (i can do it better than u) nisha hissed.

" tu bus bol hi sakti hai kuch kar nhi sakti"( you can only talk and can't do anything) kabir said.

" achha bachhu ye baat hai... ruk abhi batati hu"( oh let me show you now) nisha said sitting beside him.

He smirked as his plan worked, he soon switch the cd and stopped at a posture (the one which was a remedy for her prblm).

" Ye karke bta to manu"(do this then I will be satisfied) kabir said.

" Ha ha thik h " (ok i will) nisha said and started doing it while kabir patted himself for his success.


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EPI-279

WRITTEN BY- SHIBU



Scene 1

Kabir- Ab hum meditation karte hai...

Nisha looked at him with a "whatever look" and sat down on the floor. She closed her eyes and started breathing. Kabir stared at her face.

Kabir-(in mind) Meditation relives stress, and I hope ki it helps you too...

He closed his eyes and sat. Nisha opened her eyes and stared at his face, but not with love, with IRRITATION.

Nisha- (in mind, angrily) Kabire, yeh mujhe kahaan phasa diya?

They sat in the position for more 5 minutes, but then it started turn difficult for both of them. Nisha finally opened her eyes and stood up.

Nisha- Ho gaya meditation, what's next?

Scene 2

Dolly- (knocking on the door) May I come in sir?

She heard a yes, so entered in the cabin. Looking at his face alone, made her nervous.

Adhiraj-(pointing towards the chair) have a sit Miss. Gangwal.

She nodded and sat quietly.

Adhiraj- Dekhiye, this is a bit personal. My sister, Aisha really loved your work.

Dolly- (happily) Mam liked my work yeh sunke bahut khushi hui...

Adhiraj- Aur woh chahti ki tum uske to-be-born baby ka room design karo...

Dolly was surprised.

Dolly- (in mind) Aisha mam ne mujhe room design karne ke liye kaha hai... Oh My Gods!

Adhiaj looked at her face with confusion, as her face first gave surprised and happy look.

Adhiraj- So will you do it?

Dolly- Of course sir... Main yeh kaam jaroor karunga...

Adhiraj- And I want it to be perfect...

Dolly- Bilkul sir...

Adhiraj- Room ka color should be olive green, it's her favorite...

Dolly- Sir, aise halat mein, mam should be surrounded with bright colors, what about pink?

Adhiraj- Pink? (He cringed and closed his eyes in frustration) Nahi, pink nahi...

Dolly- toh lavender?

Adhiraj- hmmm... Now you may leave...

Dolly smiled and stood up. She went outside the cabin closing the door behind her, when she heard a loud thud form the cabin. Surprised, she peeped in through the window. She saw that Adhiraj had anger on his face and rubbed his head in frustration. The files that were neatly lying on his table were now scattered on the floor.

Scene 3

Kabir- Vrukshansana

Nisha- What?

Kabir- Dekho, you stand on your left feet, and the other, placed on the right thigh and hands high up, in prayerful posture.

Nisha stood in the position, but couldn't balance herself. Kabir too stood in the position, but being a dancer, it wasn't so difficult for him. He closed his eyes and started breathing.

Nisha watched as he did the exercise and tried to balance herself, but it was difficult for her. Finally, her right leg gave in, and she fell down.

Kabir hurriedly opened his eyes to see his wifey sitting on the floor, holding her foot and face showing pain.

Kabir-(concerned) Nisha, tujhe kya hua?

Nisha- (annoyed) Kuch nahi, bas bethe-bethe "rona-dhona" asana kar rahi hoon, you want to join in?

Kabir sat down and saw that her foot was swollen.

Kabir- (caressing her foot, with guilt in his voice) It's swollen...

Nisha nodded in a yes and winced in pain. Kabir picked her in his arms and laid her on their bed. He found the first aid box and applied ointment on her foot and bandaged it.

Nisha stared at her hubby as he did all this with concern and fear written on his face. If she wasn't in pain, she would have hugged him tight.

Nisha- (in mind) Tension mein bhi tu kitna Cute lagta hai Kabire...

Scene 4

The kids sang, "Machli jal ki rani hai" as Ramesh counted the beats on his palm. All were unaware of a figure behind the door.

Ramesh- Accha bacchon, aaj ke liye itna hi, kal milte hai...

Ramesh said when they completed the song and the figure walked off from there hurriedly. But his wife had seen him, hiding and watching their son sing and teach the students.

Saroj- (to herself) Kitna bhi chupalo aap, par apne bete ki taraf apna pyaar aap nahi chhupa sakte...

Dadaaji sat in his room and smiled.

Dadaaji- (in mind) Tumhare sapno mein maine tumhara saath dena chahiye tha Ramesh... Aaj tumhe inn bacchon ko padhata dekh, dil ko bahut jyaada sukoon mila... Tumhe tumhari khushi mili, yeh sochke aaj dil ko chain mila...

Scene 5

Dolly sat the bed tired. Her mind was just thinking about Adhiraj and his strange behavior. Suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulder and looked up. It was Aman.

Aman- yeh lijiye Dolly di, apke liye Nimbu paani, aapko behtar feel hoga...

Dolly took the glass from her and drank the juice.

Aman- Aur office kasia chal raha hai?

Dolly- Accha hai, I mean work load jyaada nahi hai, aur colleagues bhi acche hai... par humara boss... (she sighed)

Aman- Kya hua, accha nahi hai?

Dolly- (annoyed)Accha? Ek number ka sadu hai... Rakshas kahin ka...

Aman giggled.

Dolly- baaki sab kahan hai?

Kirti- Yaha hai...

All the cousins entered the room.

Umesh-(concerned) Dolly,are you ok?

Dolly- Hmm Umesh Bhaiya, bas todhisi tired hoon...

Jwala- Di, apke liye yeh letter aaya tha... (she handed her an envelope)

Dolly read the letter and smiled.

Bunty- Kya hua Dolly di, aap bahut khush lag rahe ho?

Dolly- Mere aur Sumeet ke divorce ki 2 hafton baad pehli hearing hai...

Sukku- (happily) Sacch? That's awesome news...

Umesh-(smiling) Seriously that is a great news...

All were happy, but their smiles turned upside down when they saw that Dolly kept the letter in the envelope silently and wiped a tear that was about to fall down.

Kirti- How blah Dolly di? Itni acchi khabar ahi, aur aap ro rahe ho?

Dolly- (trying to calm herself) No, I am not crying...

Sukku- Jhoot kyun bol rahe ho Dolly di, we all know that it must be very stressful for you... Yeh divoce case, baby, job...

Jwala-(smiling) Par don't you worry, sab kuch thikh ho jaayega...

She hugged her and all joined them.

Scene 6

Kabir entered their bedroom and smiled as he watched Nisha with her mobile.

Kabir- (sitting beside her) Feeling better?

Nisha nodded in a yes.

Kabir- Sorry yaar, mujhe laga yoga karegi toh tu todhisi relaxed ho jaayega...

Nisha- Kabir, I am fine... You don't need to do all this...

Kabir- I know, par I want you to be super fine...

Nisha-I will be super fine, tum jo mere saath ho...

Kabir smiled.

Kabir- Haan, din bhar mera dimaag khana tujhe pasand hai na...

Nisha- (angrily, picking up the pillow) You...

But by that time, Kabir was out of her sight. Nisha smiled and hugged the pillow and stared at the door. Kabir peeped in and gave a cheeky smile, making Nisha laugh.

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