YES I DO (NIBIR SS) part XII page 77 - Page 65

Hi Natasha, this is Lily...😊... I really loved your entire story, I had been reading it, but I forgot when I commented the last time😆...and finally read X, XI and XII together...😆...

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Hi Natasha, this is Lily...😊... I really loved your entire story, I had been reading it, but I forgot when I commented the last time😆...and finally read X, XI and XII together...😆...

I really liked how the equation between Nisha and Kabir changed after IX with Nisha slowly starting to understand his perseverance, Kabir patience and determination to support her and efforts he took to understand her left me speechless...... You wrote very beautifully the dilemma Nisha was facing when she was confused whether or not she should chose him as her life partner... and cousins are sooo caring...👏...The end of XI nearly gave me a heart attack😆...

Then in the beginning of XII I heaved a sigh of relief, after all they are to be together...😉...

It was really cute how Kabir seeked Bunty's approval before the engagement...or rather in between...😆😆

Awesome SS...👏... If possible(😆),
write more... you write really well...😃

PS - Please update ch-X, XI pg no. in your index...( it is pg-63, 70..😆)...I had to go through all the pgs pg-54 onwards...

Lilly i am glad u liked reading the story. I endeavoured to carefully build nisha and kabir's relation and i wanted the cousins to play a major role in it.

Ps: i do kn the index is a bit messed up, mihu and saru did bring it to my notice but pretended to nt kn abt it
😆 the fact is i thought everyones read the story and no ones gonna read it after this so i left it as it is
😆 my bad i am sorry u had to rummage through the pages to get to the right one 😆

Originally posted by: picadally

Lilly i am glad u liked reading the story. I endeavoured to carefully build nisha and kabir's relation and i wanted the cousins to play a major role in it.

Ps: i do kn the index is a bit messed up, mihu and saru did bring it to my notice but pretended to nt kn abt it
😆 the fact is i thought everyones read the story and no ones gonna read it after this so i left it as it is
😆 my bad i am sorry u had to rummage through the pages to get to the right one 😆

Originally posted by: do0dleR

@Bold - And the way you accomplished it - was the best part of the story..👍🏼... Whenever I think about the show, I feel they really messed up a very promising story a lot in order to satisfy SP...

Well, your story was worth reading, so I didn't mind for a chapter...😆... But now that you know the exact pg numbers, you can update it...😉

True that lilly but at the end its business and you hv to given in to survive probably thats the reason they chose to shut shop instead of continuing with the saas bahu saga.


Ps: i will update the index 😊

Ok I m not quoting ur reply to my comment but just answering your query 😆
I know u were pleasantly surprised to see my comment 😆 but then I knew I had to comment CZ I had kept u waiting long enough 😆 Also I love surprising people with my comment i.e. I don't like to state that I m commenting today or stuff CZ somehow I feel that takes away the joy the author feels when he/she gets my comment unexpectedly 😆 And I m sure that my comments aren't so bad that I can't take this risk 🤣 Plus I m very udaar toh mujhe iss khushi ko baantne mein maza aata hai 😳 😆
And about the order of my comments u need to know that it is all a product of your teachings ie. laziness is my first priority 🤣 🤣
since I did so much mehnat of locating the pg number of this chapter I thought I might as well comment on it 😉
Also I was unsure of the the details or chapter numbers where my comment was still pending and I thought who will do so much mehnat of going through my posts and locating my unres comments hence I commented on this chapter 😆

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Ok I m not quoting ur reply to my comment but just answering your query 😆
I know u were pleasantly surprised to see my comment 😆 but then I knew I had to comment CZ I had kept u waiting long enough 😆 Also I love surprising people with my comment i.e. I don't like to state that I m commenting today or stuff CZ somehow I feel that takes away the joy the author feels when he/she gets my comment unexpectedly 😆 And I m sure that my comments aren't so bad that I can't take this risk 🤣 Plus I m very udaar toh mujhe iss khushi ko baantne mein maza aata hai 😳 😆
And about the order of my comments u need to know that it is all a product of your teachings ie. laziness is my first priority 🤣 🤣
since I did so much mehnat of locating the pg number of this chapter I thought I might as well comment on it 😉
Also I was unsure of the the details or chapter numbers where my comment was still pending and I thought who will do so much mehnat of going through my posts and locating my unres comments hence I commented on this chapter 😆

Meri pyari shishya i am proud ur following my footsteps 😆 keep up the good work
Ohh and btw ur comment didnt surprise me cauz i knew it one day or the other it wud come but yes it did bring a smile to my face while i read it u and saru put in so much of effort to comment on each and every detail of the chapter feels worth writing after reading ur comments thanks cause i hv never said it but it feels great 🤗

Wow Superb update 👏

Originally posted by: -yami

Wow Superb update👏

beautiful ending to an amazing story👍🏼👏

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Natz updated her index...🥳

U actually checked to make sure i updated my index 😆

Once i hv said something ill do it 😊

Originally posted by: picadally

U actually checked to make sure i updated my index 😆

Once i hv said something ill do it 😊