YES I DO (NIBIR SS) part XII page 77 - Page 64

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Natz a big hug for u🤗

tune toh dara diya tha par finally nisha maan gyi

kabir nisha ke liye gift le Kar aaya aww so sweet

the ending was superb

bunty kabir convo was good

Will really miss this story

ritika

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Speechless!!! I went through each line of this update again and again..👏 Really awesome.. I could imagine each of those reactions, expressions and dialogues.. Do write more..

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

Sorry for late comment...

But what a fantastic ending...

Kaafi had tak Maine guess Kar liya tha...

But ...the update..was simply super se bahut bahut upar wala...

Fabulous job...

I am gonna miss this story...

Originally posted by: picadally

thanks mani yeah i can make long posts at time just like my long updates 🤣

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Sissy Aap Kitni K hai nah???😡😆🤣

Mujhse Itna mehanath karwaya to list out ur comments frm my LONG COMMENT😕 I was first shackked to see just two sentence as ur comment then I thought she promised me den where is that reply??😕 den I read wat U quoted tab samaj main aaya ki U wrote in b/w my comment😆 Kya aap usse HIGHLIGHT nahi kar sakthe the kya koi COLOUR use karke????🤣 I was wandering thru all my comment to read wat is ur comment & wats MINE???? Dnt say dat I used all the colours so U used BOLD BLACK 4 Ur comment 🤣🤣🤣

Coming to ur comment😉 I just want to mention my reaction to two of ur comments😉

1. I m shacked😲 to knw the secret dat U considered ME & My comment as OVERREACTIVE🥺 till u read my LAST comment🥺 It literally shaked me...😳🤣 Sachi I always said dat Mere comments mere face & Mind ka Reflection hai...😛 phir bhi aap aisa samajthi thi... Maine yeh sapne main bhi nahi socha tha...🤣 Mujhe yeh bhi nahi patha tha ki aap khud ko achi writer nahi samjthe ho...😲 Aap ho ACHI WRITER Sissyyy🤗 Dat Y I want UR COMEBACK & Dats Y I m READY TO WAIT

Kaash aap mere saamne hothi toh Main aapko HILAKE main bol dethi aree sissy Ur Writing Skills R Superbbb👍🏼 & I m Strict NiBir ian too So I like to read Ur NiBir Stories In Future too...🤗

2. U wont write on NiBir🥺 I dont think so... As I promised u dat I wl Wait & Saru ne ek baar PROMISE kar di vo kabhi peeche nahi hadthi... I wl Wait

Dat Day wl be Party 4 ME when Ur PM of new story come🥳 Ur Basanti wl be Dancing🥳

Aap ab HURT math ho jaayegaaa🤗 I M EXPERT in Waiting🤣

@BOLD I meant It.. 😎No worries how much it take long..😛 My HOPES r with ME❤️ I knw U WL BE BACK

Originally posted by: picadally

Saru i thought you overreacted cauz i thought i was not that good a writer that you made me through your comments 😆 but patta hai kya i always waited for your over reactive comments😆

i would wait for ur unres 😆 and you know what i i liked that you cheated with your unres lists🤣

yeh cheating karne ke liye 🤗 😆

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chapter 10- Lovely chapter👏👏👏</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">A heart-rendering chapter❤️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Even-though there was hardly any Nibir in this part, this chapter was indeed beautiful with the way u described and brought out the bond shared by the cousins👏</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Wonderful👍🏼👏👏</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#339900">Jwala stood at the door and glanced at Nisha. Nisha gave her an assuring smile. Jwala appeared to be contemplating over something. Suddenly she raced toward Nisha and hugged her. "Jwala I am fine. However grown up you may be for us you are still a child. I promise once you grow up enough to take your own decisions you will be the first one I will call, till then you will have to wait and trust me." Nisha cupped Jwala's face and stared deep into her eyes "Will you trust me Jwala?" Nisha's eyes penetrated through Jwala's soul. Jwala nodded tears welling up in her eyes. She gently brought Nisha's hand to her lips and kissed it. "I trust you. I always have and always will Nishu Bro." Jwala's voice cracked as she struggled to keep her tears from falling. Nisha wrapped her arms around her tightly and brought her closer- </font>Loved the understanding and the bond shared by Jwalu and Nishu😳This truly was a heart-rendering scene❤️</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#339900">All the other cousins wrapped themselves over Nisha and Jwala like the closing petals of a flower- </font>What an analogy👏absolutely loved this line❤️</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#339900">"Dolly Di why didn't you tell me, I would have helped too" Nisha's voice hinted disappointment. "Oh! really Nishu Look at yourself, you look so lost you think you could have helped us in this frame of mind?" Kirti retorted clearly annoyed at Nisha's disappointment.- </font>Kirti and Nishu's emotions have been penned down well👏</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">"Why do you always hide your feelings? Why don't you feel the need to discuss it with us? Do you think we can't solve your problems as effectively as you can solve ours?" Kirti continued to whine. Nisha furrowed her eyebrows at Kirti's accusation. "Your assumption is wrong Kirti" Nisha spoke softly upset with Kirti's accusation.- It's great that u have penned down Kirti's thoughts cz somehow I feel in the show, they were unable to do justice to her character. Kirti may appear to be a self-centred character but the fact is that she is an important part of the cousins gang and equally cares for their welfare like Dolly or any other cousin. Also unlike the other cousins she doesn't hesitate to speak her heart out which is again something I love about her😉</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#339900">She struggled to get the words out "Dolly Di I am confused about Kabir."She poured her heart out and shared the entire day's events with her cousins. Dolly spoke carefully choosing her words. She knew it was always difficult to handle Nisha when it came to this topic, any mistake on her part would send Nisha running</font>.- Loved the sensible side of Dolly😉</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#336633"></font><font color="#339900">"I know what you are thinkings about Nisha. You must be feeling that you were not interested in Kabir at alls, you just wanted to get rids of him and now suddenly you have second thoughts about him. Isn't it?" Nisha placed her head in Dolly's lap and lied down on the bed. She nodded her head in Dolly's lap. Kirti pulled back her hands and supported herself with the table adjacent to the bed. Dolly placed her hand on Nisha's head and lightly started patting it. "Nisha calm down. You don't need to be afraids. It's normal." Dolly glanced at Umesh, finding it difficult to continue. Umesh raised his palm at her gesturing her that he would continue. Umesh knelt before Nisha and spoke while stroking her head gently "Nisha you have developed feelings which are unknown to you, which you have never felt before. Such feelings can make anyone nervous you're not the only one. From what you have shared with us I think Kabir is a nice guy Nishu. You should really give it a thought. I know we initially helped you with your plan but now I feel it was not a good decision. I don't mean that we regret supporting you but if we would have succeeded in our plan we would have ruined your chance to have such a beautiful person in your life." Nisha shifted her eyes to look at him. "Yes Nisha inspite of our plan to humiliate him and your deliberate attempts to continue with the plan he only persevered to know you better shunning aside all our immature behavior. Don't throw away the chance to have him in your life. But the decision is ultimately yours we promise to support you in whatever you decide</font><font color="#336633">.- </font>Loved this part❤️I</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">just love thedynamicsof the relationship shared by the cousins</font>❤️Also in the show somehow, it was always Nishu who helped the cousins and not the other way round. However, this is the ideal scenerio where the cousins share a give-take relationship and not a one way relationship😃Ialsoloved the description😳Also i love the way the cousins are not forcing their decision onto Nishu or influencing it👏They are just helping Nishu to clarify her thoughts and allowing her to take a wise decision making sure that it is not taken in haste. Also the part where Dolly and Umesh take turns to explain things to Nishu is just perfectI think this part makes us want to share such a bond and have cousins like the Gangwals🤗

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#339900">Nisha lifted her head from Dolly's lap and looked at Dolly for her opinion. Dolly blinked her eyes and nodded. "Now go to sleep Nishu. It's quiet late." Umesh ordered her younger sister. Nisha obediently agreed and lied down on the bed. Umesh turned around to check on Kirti since she didn't speak at all. He found her fast asleep against the table, resting her head on the drawer of the table. Umesh smiled at her innocence. Umesh gently picked her up and laid her on the other side of the bed next to Nisha. Dolly gently kissed Nisha and Kirti's forehead. "Sleep well Nisha! Tomorrow is a big day for you." Umesh spoke like a responsible brother.- </font>This part was so adorable😳🤗Umesh and Dolly behaving like responsible and caring elder siblings and putting Nishu and Kirti to sleep😳</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#339900">Ramesh and Lakshmi stood at the door witnessing the beautiful bond between the cousins. "I guess we worry too much" Ramesh told Lakshmi overwhelmed at what he had just witnessed. "I think the cousins have explained Nisha all that we would have. I guess she has got a young set of parents in her cousins. The cousins really have an inexplicable connect that binds them together. Nisha is lucky to have them. You know Lakshmi this is what I adore about the cousins they may commit mistakes and plan bizarre things but they are together to support each other at the end of the day."- </font>I think Ramesh's dialogues just mirrored and reiterated the emotions we felt we read the part where cosuins support NishuThe cousins are indeed lucky to have each other🤗</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#339900">"So five down two to go huh Kabir" Nisha said to herself. "Wait what five down two to go? I was counting myself with the cousins from the start. How could I do that when I didn't want him in my life? No! This cannot happen. I have taken my decision." She closed her eyes and sifted through the day's events. It was a matter of time when she drowned into her dreams. -</font>Nishu being affected by Kabira's charm and counting herself on Kabir's side😆😆😆Looks like she is on Kabir's side now😆What a perfect end to this chapter👏👏😆
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