YES I DO (NIBIR SS) part XII page 77 - Page 62

Originally posted by: picadally

1.i hv promised u saru and i hv told u once i hv promised i will do it by hook or by crook. That is y i hv nt replied to any comments here.

2. I dont kn if ur talking abt same explanation as what i am thinking it is if so i hv nt forgotten dat either.

3. SB i hv told u i will pm u, tell me what u wanna kn.

4. I hv told u before also i am nt decided i hv nt refused anyone anything till date and avoiding this question frm u kills me equally saru. I hv told u the reason also, saru give me some time.

Originally posted by: ammu4u

👏😭pagli rulayegi muje🤣..LOL main ne yeh kahi suna hai i thnk Mishri IV main LOL

😭..yeh khushi ke azoo hai beta...tune finally apna SS complete kardii...😭yeh wala original azoo hai teri story ab nahi padne ko milegii😭😭..i knw tu kithni siddi hai...isiliye main tuje new story likhne keliye nahi bolungi...LOL...i knw ek bar tu decide kar diya tho kisi ki bhi nahi sunthi LOL...

😆.

am also breking d promisee thnk u so much nattu 4 writing dis storyy..Big wala jappi for u...Love u nattu

Nattu tuje patha hai u r an awsum writer...d way u describes emotions situvtions and even d postions they stand is too gud yaar...thts d main thng i like abt ur storiess..i luv d way u write 👏⭐️

coming to dis last part

while reading d part mera face 😃..aisi thi...enjoyed ot a lot yaar...

usully sab log haa main shadi karne keliye tayyar hu kehthi hai lekin d way nisha said

"I don't just want to get married to you Kabir I want to see myself with you whenever I see you."

this is just⭐️

..muje goos bumps aa rahi thi when i read dis line.

teri SS ki title Yes i do hai isiliye muje patha tha ki nisha finally yes hi bolengi ..😆

suku ka wistle😉 and cousins huging each other..aww such a lovely scene

Ramy and Laxmis happiness😃😃

He felt as if Nisha had just pulled off a stone from his chest which obstructed his breathing

👏👏

i can imagine Kabiraas reaction😉😉

Vasu ka suggestion muje bohuth pasand aayi..aaj hi engemnt😉

agar kabira ka bas chali tho aaj hi shadi karva dethe😆😉😉

that saree wala idea 👏 woh bhi blouse ke sath..not bad Kabiraa and sukku😉

kabiraa is so sweet yeh specil moment cherish karne keliye pehle se hi hone wale saale ke sath plan banaya😉😳😃

Kabir stopped me from doing so. He didn't want anyone to influence your decision. He knew you would not like that. aww kithne ache se smajthi hai yaar Kabiraa Nishu ko😉

der talkng with eyes such a cute moment😉..bina kahe hi bohuth kuch keh dethe hai yeh dono ek dusre se

RaKa sceneloved each n evry word of kabir said to Ramy👏😃

she definitely loves with all her heart once she acknowledges her feelings👍🏼😃 100% true abt nishaa

By now she could blindly guess his touch. If not her atleast her heart did😳😉

kabiraa kithna understandg hai such a sweet guy...he understood her hesitation..nisha ne saree pehne keliye tayyar bhi hogayiii so sweet😃😉

She always manages to surprise me. I'll never solve this riddle, which is her!"😆👍🏼

nishas entry in saree and all dat scenes remind me of saree wala Nauc epi

Vasu teasing Kabir😆

bechare tho nisha ko dekh kar baki sab bhul gaye...😉😳

He was unaware of the fact that Nisha had already put the ring on his finger🤣

I can't get engaged just yet...LOL yeh main ne expect nahi ki thi

I had told Nisha I will win the hearts of all the cousins her included... while I have managed to win all their hearts I realized you are the only one left😉😃..yeh kabiraa bhi na😆

bunty tho pehle din se hi Kabiraa ke side main tha LOL...nishu bro ke dar se chup raha 🤣

Kabir pur ring on her finger

and ur right its not d end its begining of der lifee😉

super se bhi upar wala update nattuuu...loved every bit...enjoyed a lot...the whole story is ⭐️⭐️⭐️

P.s::am gonna miss ur storiess and mnday updatess

once again thnk u for writing dis story 🤗 big wala huggie to u

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Natz Sissy...🤗🤗🤗

Finally Vo din aa gaya jiska mujhe Intezaar aur darr tha...🤣
Sorry to say siisy bt this time also Mera Monlogue wl b here as of Now I m going to express my heart's feelings frm When i saw Ur PM, When I came to read SS, When I read SS, & While I m writing this comment...😈 & U have to read all these😉 So Sorry😳😆🤣

When I Saw ur PM😳 (Which was First In my PM list😆) I was like Ek aur RES within a frac of sec it changed to Mayoosi.. 🤔"LAST RES" den My K mind woke up & I cheated my RES LIST infront of ME😈(Which I usuallly do😈 only 4 Ur Story as I cant wait🤣🤣🤣) & I opened the SS😉

Saru is cheater, she is a cheater😆 chalo ab aapko cheating karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai😆

When I saw the Thanks Giving Part😳 I was soo touched🤗 & I didnt cheat anyone..😆 I read it first den moved to read SS😳 But I want to quote ur sentence @RED Since I won't be writing anything after this I would like to thank a few people.Yeh mujhe bahut dukh de dia Sissy..🤔 I just cant accept this😡 & Wl never gonna accept this in my whole life...🤔 U wl write 😳& U wl Write😳 & U wl Write...😳

i am not giving up writing saru i told you that i just wont be writing nibir anymore

LIKHNA IS GOD"S GIFT & U SHUD WRITE 4 Me... I hope one day U wl surprise me with ur PM of ur new NiBir story I wl be waiting 4 dat day (ab aap soch rahi hongi iss ladki ki main kya karu? samjathi nahi hai baath ko.. hai nah??😉 maine yeh yuhi nahi kaha I got sumthng frm ur SS dat gave me this hope.. & wat is dat u wl get to knw at the end of my comment..😈)

I so knew it you would come up with this 😆

Aapki PS dekhakr mujhe surprise feel nahi hua..😉 Bcz I knew it mera Naam par aap yeh ek na ek din balme daal hi doge.. & I feel Privileaged dat I influenced U to write more☺️😳

Saru's Monologue😉(Ab toh SS ki baath kar...🤣🤣🤣)

I knew it you would react like this on my PS and you will have a long monologue😆

Sissy...😃 How do u think & write this SS so beautifully???🤗 My fav part ab toh part 12 hi hai..😳☺️ I m afraid ki mere iss comment ko IF "OVERLIMIT" na bol de😡😆🤣

Kahan se shuru karu tareef???🤪 I loved whole portion...☺️Lemme start 😆

Iss Update par mere bahut FAV parts hai...😳

Toh sabse pehle wala hai @Blue Nishu's line☺️ Mujhe samaj main nahi aa raha tha sissy ki How do u think & wrote such a PERFECT answer instead of a SIMPLE YES????👏Iss ek line se jo feeling aa rahi hai nah vo kisibhi "YES" se nahi aa sakthi.. I m in love with this way of saying "YES"☺️ (Soch rahi hu jab mere time aayega main bhi yahi bol du..🤣)

"I don't just want to get married to you Kabir I want to see myself with you whenever I see you."

Writers job is to create something which has not happened

Ab baath karthi hu RL ki where I saw My parents' happiness... @Blue My sec fav part😳 Mujhe patha hai mere papa aur mama ko bhi yahi feels aayenge wen I wl say Yes😳

Lakshmi squeezed Ramesh's hand even harder. Ramesh had never felt this happy in his life. He felt as if Nisha had just pulled off a stone from his chest which obstructed his breathing.

My third fav part @Blue again Kabir's reaction...😳 Its Sooo Adorable to watch..😳

Kabir sat there astounded at what he just heard. He realized he had almost forgotten to breathe while waiting for Nisha to continue. His breathing was still uneven.
It wl be a Girl's luck if her would be is soo much excited & impatient to knw abt her "YES"...😳😆 It wl be her honour to see her would be want to be with her for lifelong.. Jis tarah se Kabira ki feelings ko aapne describe kia I was Awww ng How lucky Nishu is😳

yeah lekin aise sirf stories main hota hai🤣

Then The Next para was a Mini surprise 4 ME...😲😆🤣
Sukku aur Kabir ke secret Meeting... Saree aur Blouse ki kahani... 👏👏👏 Sissy U thought so deep👏👏👏 & The last sentence @BLUE Just made me Awww ng... again as I cant stop myself frm admiring Kabir again & again sach bolu toh I was feeling J😆🤣 Aree yaar aisa Banta REAL life main q nahi hotha???☺️

"No Nisha I told them everything only this morning. I could not wait to break this news to them yesterday itself, but Kabir stopped me from doing so. He didn't want anyone to influence your decision. He knew you would not like that."


See How Understanding Our Kabira is.. Vo Nishu ki har choti choti baathom par kitna dhyan detha hai??? I love U Kabiraaa☺️ Sorry But I just cant stop me frm saying this Sissy😳

Lol thats k saru happens if you are so much in love with the Kabira of my story that means i achieved my aim as a writer, if i can make people fall for him 😳

@RED portion My Next Fav portion & All I was Doing while Reading was Awwng & Feeling J🤪 I had always told u abt how I admire NiBir Silent talks thru EYES...😳 & Maine pehle bhi kaha ki Aap, Niyu Mamma, Buasi & Nimi always amke me Aww ng for Kabira with ur respective stories.. In all ur works U guys highlight this understanding thru Eyes Jiski main Sabse badi FAN hu... @BOLD RED I felt the same

"Nisha's eyes reflected love and respect for Kabir. She walked upto him and stood right in front of him, gazing into his eyes. She had always refrained from doing so but this time she just wanted to feel his captivating gaze. She wanted to drown in the feeling that he aroused in her when he looked at her passionately. She stood their conveying a thank You to Kabir through her eyes. Kabir could see the love and care in Nisha's eyes like Ramesh had told him. Everyone standing there could feel the power of their understanding exuding from them.

yeah its my fav part too. Thanks to Niyu she inspired me to write this.

Next Para was My Most Fav
@Bold Blue dat made Tears to form in my eyes 😭😭😭 (I dont knw whether it was Tears of happiness😊 or I m just crying bcz it just touched to my core???😳) I want My Sirphira to say this to My Papa Its the best word a Daughter's father can receive frm his would to be Damaad& The hug at last para was just... just.. just.. cant express my feelings When I read dat👏 Spl claps 4 writing this Sissy..❤️

Kabir finally got up from the sofa and walked upto Ramesh. "I knew she is not what she appears to be uncle. I knew it the very first day. I knew it even before you could explain it to me today, but I wanted to know what she felt for me before I could confess my feelings. So I decided to look deeper. I was right uncle I struck gold. She may not be a girl every boy dreams of but she is definitely a girl I would dream of. You were right again she definitely loves with all her heart once she acknowledges her feelings." Ramesh was so overwhelmed with Kabir's words that he pulled him in a tight embrace.

if only someone could be so understanding girls woudnt be afraid to get married.

The next para was making me feel more Aww ng & making me more J🤪🤣
@PINK Hayeee... ☺️Nishu ke Heart ab bass Kabira ke ek touch se jaan lethe hai ki voh uska Kabira hi hai...☺️ & @BOLD BLUE See How Easily Kabir sensed her discomfortness even in this crowd😳 Finally maine ek baar comment main bola tha Nishu ko Kabira ke laaye huye Saree pehna dia jaayega gharwale😆 bt Iss Tarah se hoga voh Maine socha nahi tha👏👏👏

@RED I loved it... I just Loved it... Adorable...

Nisha hesitated while taking the saree and turned to walk away with the saree. She felt Kabir's hand on her shoulder. By now she could blindly guess his touch. If not her atleast her heart did, she wondered if her heart beats notched up so high that even Kabir could hear them. She turned around before she was embarrassed further. "If you do not want to wear that saree, I can handle it. Please don't hesitate." He whispered. Nisha smiled at him warmly and said "I was skeptical about it, but now I am not" she whispered back and left. Kabir grinned and shook his head gazing at her retreating figure. "She always manages to surprise me. I'll never solve this riddle, which is her!" He muttered under his breath.

The next part slightly showed our K Kabira😈 @Red Proof for K ness of Kabira..😆🤣 His reaction while seeing His Nishu was making me ROFL🤣🤣🤣 aisa lag raha tha ki mano agar Kabira ke bas main hotha toh aaj hi shaadi kar letha aur aaj hi...☺️ aap Samaj gayi nah...🤣 K kahiikaa... 🤣🤣🤣aur VJ's Dialogue "Control" 🤣just made the scenario more PERFECT👏

@BOLDBlue Kabira & His Restlessness..🤣 Pyaar main Lattoo😈

haan K kabira main samaj gayi aap kya keh rahi ho saru after all i am innocent K 🤣

@PINK Awww... It touched my Heart... 😳Especially "Pride in his eyes dat SHE BELONGED TO HIM"☺️☺️☺️

every girl has the right to feel the belonging.

He was stunned to see how beautiful Nisha looked in a saree and the maroon colour complimented her fair skin. He noticed how the saree accentuated her curves further. He could feel his heartbeat rhyme with every step that she took down the stairs. "Control yourself Kabir!" Vasundara teased Kabir. Kabir realized his mouth was wide open and everyone now looked at him. All the cousins chuckled at his expression. Nisha could see the pride in his eyes that she belonged to him. As Nisha stood next to Kabir he found it increasingly impossible to concentrate on anything.


I like it when girls deviate a guys concentration with their dressing😉
Bechara Bunty toh pehle se hi Kabir Ko JIJU maan chuka tha😆 par Nishu bro se dartha tha bechara...😆

Bunty blinked at him and looked around. "Kabir bhaiya I liked you on the very first day even before Jwala started to like you, but I was afraid Nishu Di would scold me if I got friendly with you."

Isliye kehthe hai bache bhagwan ke roop hothe hai😳 & unke mann main koi ghot nahi hothe😳🤗Shyayad NiBir ke Jodi Upar se likhi thi isliye Bunty ko sabse pehle hi Kabira pasand tha😃

Yeah bechara Bunty. I always found Bunty to be very sweet.
Sissy... Sissy.. Sissy...👏 Spl claps again 4 Justifying The Title of ur SS👍🏼

Kabir bent down placing his hands on his knees and spoke to Bunty "So Bunty would you take me as your brother in law?" he held out one hand. Bunty took his hand and responded "Yes I do" with the approval of the youngest sibling Kabir finally put the ring on Nisha's hand.

@Blue Honestly I never expected this type of Justification...👏 U just Rakceddd👏 I am feeling so Proud Of ME😈 bcz I m a Fan of Ur Writing skills😎😎😎

I am so proud of myself that you like to read my story so much. Franky speaking i never considered myself a good writer 😆 so i always felt you overreacted 😆 but now i feel you genuinely liked my SS

@Bold Blue

Finally NiBir ki Engagement ho gayi...😳 Aapki Basanti ki spl Dance toh banthi hai...🤣



Ab bolthi hu Y I said so ki aap ne mujhe HOPE di hai ki aap aage likhengi...😉

i wont write THE END because according to me its just a start of something new...

@BOLD just see the sentence.. U wrote it to make ur SS neverending😉 & Since Saru is UNIQUE...😈 I take this as MY HOPE dat My Natz Sissy wl be BACK WITH A BANG🤗

It was a PLEASURE to read this SS & Thank U 4 gifting us Such A beautiful NiBir Story🤗

Again Sissy I repeat My words "This SS shud have been selected for NAUC S2 if it happens in Future..👍🏼 I really want to watch it on TV...!!! & Experience NiBir= MishRi Magic adding Tadka to ur SS☺️❤️"

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Supet not end d begningg. Askimg bunty at end was superb.tete liye nestle kitkat

Originally posted by: Anshi1509

Awesome update natzz maasi
I m really gonna miss this FF:((

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

m grinning from ear to ear... what an update... and it shouldn't be the end too... do write more... because I want to read more... 🤗

Originally posted by: itznimi003

res
unres

Thankyou😊...so much natz...for mentioning my name👏...iske liye le meri taraf se ek badi wali jhappi🤗...

All you people have formed the
rainbow of my SS and I will always
cherish its colours.

@bold dis lines touches my heart yr...kya soch h teri n u wrote perfect words in perfect situatn...❤️

Now coming to ur update...

super se b upar update tha yr😊

ramy kitna nervous ho gya tha😔

"I don't just want
to get married to you Kabir I want to
see myself with you whenever I see
you."

@red loved how nisha convey her feelings...u portrayed her feelings so beautifully❤️

kabire ki to saas hi ruk gyi thi🤣

turant hi engagement waah👏🤗

awww...nishu k liye kabir ne whi saree le aaya n blouse bhi❤️...i love dis kabira❤️

sukku n kabire ne sab intzaam kr liya superb👍🏼

I could not wait to
break this news to them yesterday
itself, but Kabir stopped me from
doing so. He didn't want anyone to
influence your decision. He knew you
would not like that."

@blue...kabir chahta thi ki nishu apna decision khud le awww🤗

"Nisha's eyes reflected love and
respect for Kabir. She walked upto
him and stood right in front of him,
gazing into his eyes. She had always
refrained from doing so but this time
she just wanted to feel his
captivating gaze. She wanted to
drown in the feeling that he aroused
in her when he looked at her
passionately. She stood their
conveying a thank You to Kabir
through her eyes. Kabir could see
the love and care in Nisha's eyes like
Ramesh had told him. Everyone
standing there could feel the power
of their understanding exuding from
them.

dis was my fav. para...i became speechless on reading dis👏👏

"I knew
she is not what she appears to be
uncle. I knew it the very first day. I
knew it even before you could
explain it to me today, but I wanted
to know what she felt for me before
I could confess my feelings. So I
decided to look deeper. I was right
uncle I struck gold. She may not be
a girl every boy dreams of but she is
definitely a girl I would dream of.
You were right again she definitely
loves with all her heart once she
acknowledges her feelings."

@green loved ramy kabir convo it was so emotional...❤️

awww kabira kinna caring h wo saree nhi pehna chahti ye soch k usne kaha dont worry i will handle it...aur nishu ne saree pehne k use surprise kr dia... ❤️

nishu ko saree me dekh k kabira k to tote ud gye bechara kabira🤣 🤣 😆

engagement rok dia ailla😲😲

"I
had told Nisha I will win the hearts
of all the cousins her included...
while I have managed to win all
their hearts I realized you are the
only one left."

@blue...kabire ne apna promise nhi toda awww ...

Bunty blinked at him and looked
around. "Kabir bhaiya I liked you on
the very first day even before Jwala
started to like you, but I was afraid
Nishu Di would scold me if I got
friendly with you." Instantly the
room was engulfed with a roar of
laughter. Kabir bent down placing
his hands on his knees and spoke to
Bunty "So Bunty would you take me
as your brother in law?" he held out
one hand. Bunty took his hand and
responded "Yes I do" with the
approval of the youngest sibling
Kabir finally put the ring on Nisha's
hand.

loved convo of bunty n kabir...❤️aila jiju ne sale ko propose kia...🤣but love dis unique proposal❤️

Mujhe lga tha YES I DO Nisha bolegi...but yha to mera prediction hi ulta pad gya🤣🤣

seriously natzzz u r unpredictable😲 😡 😉

loved d way u said dis is not THE END

I really love dis story it is verry close to my ❤️

Plz dont stop writing come back soon dear wid a big bang👍🏼

sorry for commenting so late😉

Originally posted by: marymol

Oh my dear Natz...it was an awesome climax for an awesome story... 👏..I too felt like whistling along wit sukku...
Actually i was thinking of leaving d forum for sumtime, as my exams are near..but decided to wait till u update..And im happy dat it was worth waiting...

Well abt d story..it was an extremely lovely story nd nibir r d best couple...It was good u didnt write THE END at last...bcz der story never ends... 😳

PS.. If some miracle happens nd u feel like writing again...plz do pm me...i wud luv to read...

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...