EK SHAYARANA PESHKASH - Mulaisa Farmaiye

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ladiezzz N Gentlemen Aaj ka mahol hai kuch RUHANA
Aaaj Dil kar raha hai Shayari FARMANA

Anant ke pyaar mein Navya hai BEKARAAR
Navya ke mohabbat mein Anant hua BIMAAR

Bimar Anant se Milne ki Navya ne jab THHANI
Raaste mein kuch namune ne ki kuch SHAITAANI

par Dar Kaisa jab Pyaar hai Tumhare SAATH
Anya ke pyyar ki liye aage aye Farishton ke HAATH

Jab Farishtey Mohan ne Takle baba se kaha Navya ke dil ka HAAL
tab khadey hogaye chand jaise takle par bache kuche UDI baba ke kuch BAAL

aadd gaya buddha aur Rokhna chaha Navya ki saach prem KAHANI
aur dusri Taraf Chudail Rama bangayi shaitano ki NANI

Jab Nahi Milne diya Dhadkan ko DIL SE
Tab Navya ne yaad kiya Bhagwan ko MUSHKIL MEY

Phir Kya tha Bhagwaan ne Badaya apna HAAT
Bhej diya ek Farishtey ko Banakar apne Aashirwaad ki SAUGAAT

Farishtey ne Thanna milaygi vo Anant ko uske PYAAR SE
Par kismat ne Bhej diya us Booh Aah dadi🤢 koMushkil ke DEWAAR JAISE

Saache pyyar ko Aaj tak bala kaun Rok PAYA HAI
Aakhir sache Pyaar par Ruhani suroor CHAYA HAI

Jab mil gaya Dil ko Dhadkan ka SAATH
Tab Saaso ne Thama Anant ka HAATH

Kholkar apni Palkein Bulaya apne PYAAR KO
Akhir Tadap raha tha Parvana Shama ke DIDAAR KO

Ab nahi ho raha intezaar dil ho raha hai BEKABOO
Shukravaar he itni door Jab Anant kahega Navya se I LOVE U


ok guys that was it i know was crap .par please jhel lena .Ande tamatar ke liye hu ready šŸ˜†


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kya baat kya baat kya baat...Dint know you had this quality too Manoj!!!šŸ‘
Of your entire poem...these 2 lines really really cracked me up!!!

Jab Farishtey Mohan ne Takle baba se kaha Navya ke dil ka HAAL
tab khadey hogaye chand jaise takle par bache kuche UDI baba ke kuch BAAL

LOL!!!šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rituloveskmh

Kya baat kya baat kya baat...Dint know you had this quality too Manoj!!!šŸ‘
Of your entire poem...these 2 lines really really cracked me up!!!


Jab Farishtey Mohan ne Takle baba se kaha Navya ke dil ka HAAL
tab khadey hogaye chand jaise takle par bache kuche UDI baba ke kuch BAAL

LOL!!!šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

thanks ritz i m glad u liked my mumblings😳
Edited by manojshonafan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zara990

SuperbšŸ‘šŸ¼

thanks zara n big thanks for the PM😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Manoj, u write poems also??? gr8 ability yaar... awesome poem... funny too... esp Rama part..

lol @ "tamater"...

n u started writing poems now..??? l8r udi baba ki tarah pravachans de denge kya??? šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

btw awesome post... well done šŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chucklebuddy

Manoj, u write poems also??? gr8 ability yaar... awesome poem... funny too... esp Rama part..


lol @ "tamater"...

n u started writing poems now..??? l8r udi baba ki tarah pravachans de denge kya??? šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

btw awesome post... well done šŸ‘

no yaar i m not that poetic .it all depends on mood .aaj forum mein sab precap ko leke khush hain phir socha thodi khushi mein bi isme jod du 😳.i dont know how far i succeeded in my attempt .

P.S me n pravachan never agar kab aisa hua tho u know me na .log haskar mujpe tamatar marengešŸ˜†
mera pravachan stand up act ban jayegašŸ˜†
Edited by manojshonafan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ande tamatar nahin, hum to kahenge wah wah!

Superb:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anantanant

Ande tamatar nahin, hum to kahenge wah wah!

Superb:-)

thanks dear😃 but whats ur name
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: manojshonafan

no yaar i m not that poetic .it all depends on mood .aaj forum mein sab precap ko leke khush hain phir socha thodi khushi mein bi isme jod du 😳.i dont know how far i succeeded in my attempt .

P.S me n pravachan never agar kab aisa hua tho u know me na .log haskar mujpe tamatar marengešŸ˜†
mera pravachan stand up act ban jayegašŸ˜†


u'v v well succeeded yaar... n u r maintaining a low profile n being humble... its gud... šŸ‘
rofl @ P.S 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well u said tamatar and ande...but r u ready for chocolates??? 😳

It was indeed very well written...obviously the udi baba one was the significant one...but the last one was totally "navyaish" with the words bekaboo and ILU šŸ‘

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