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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Dansindiadans
Not bad

thanks a lot dear😃

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Miss-Pakiie-KMH
Woow Bro 😲
Did'nt knoow you can write that well and soo funny too 😆
there's no post of you which i can dare to correct 😛 its alwaays perfect and super good to read : i can read yoour posts all my daay 😆 i juust loved it ❤️
the uddi baba's hair line was the most hilarious one and other were amazing too 👏
thanks a loot for the pm :🤗 i'm glaad you've pmed me for that suprise gift 😆
keep writing big bro : yoou'll be a sucessul person huun <3 why not a book writer one daay ?

aww sweety thats so sweet n kind of u . u dont need to dare u have the right to point my mistakes any day .n i always feel there is room for improvement like here too

@ red thats the best compliment i ever received 🤗

thanks for ur wishes me n book writer raddivala bi nahi kharidega .i will publish n i ll be the sole reader

n stop being formal😛

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: piya2025
🤣
That was hillarious,🤣amazing man..
Nice thing,& thanks for the pm.

thanks piya 😃 n u r an awesome writer i have read ur few posts

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

ok friends thanks for all ur awesome compliments .i need to go now will reply e later

good Night

sweet dreams n take care🤗

Signing off

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abidafaizeen123

@abidafaizeen123

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

👏its really awsome !! u must continew !!! great job !!👏

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pkaur92

@pkaur92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: manojshonafan

Anant ke pyaar mein Navya hai BEKARAAR
Navya ke mohabbat mein Anant hua BIMAAR

I love this line -hehe so filmy lol😉

Originally posted by: manojshonafan
ok guys that was it i know was crap .par please jhel lena .Ande tamatar ke liye hu ready 😆

And we wont treat you with tamatar, you should be awarded with the khitaab of shayrana - it was really good seriously 😊

PS you should continue when the show progresses - goood luck and well done 😉

Edited by pkaur92 - 14 years ago

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pgdn

@pgdn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

oh dear its was really nice 👏

and thanks for pm me😳

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

hey Manoj;

Thank you for PM sorry for late reply, I was just busy at work.

I loved the shayar👏i..I myslef write a little here and there too, but your's was really good.

I would probably add somthing to it when my mind is i nthat mood, but rgt now I m just crazy with my work and my clases strated from today too...

I'll add to it if possible, but i loved your shayari...and dont worry, tamatar ki koi zaroorat nahi padegi...😆

keep writing...

Anant ke liye kuch meri aur se...

Kuch arse se zindagi kuch adhoori si hai

sapno ke itne karib hote hue bhi kuch kami si hai;

sapno main tumse roz hi mulakat hoti hai

shikayat to hai bus itni ki

roz aakhein kholna itna zaroori kyun hai?

let me know if you like it?...

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Fatima

@.infinite.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

wow...lovely poem...love it...!!

keep up the great work...!!

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jaya

@bristi04

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: manojshonafan
Ladiezzz N Gentlemen Aaj ka mahol hai kuch RUHANA
Aaaj Dil kar raha hai Shayari FARMANA

Anant ke pyaar mein Navya hai BEKARAAR
Navya ke mohabbat mein Anant hua BIMAAR

Bimar Anant se Milne ki Navya ne jab THHANI
Raaste mein kuch namune ne ki kuch SHAITAANI

par Dar Kaisa jab Pyaar hai Tumhare SAATH
Anya ke pyyar ki liye aage aye Farishton ke HAATH

Jab Farishtey Mohan ne Takle baba se kaha Navya ke dil ka HAAL
tab khadey hogaye chand jaise takle par bache kuche UDI baba ke kuch BAAL

aadd gaya buddha aur Rokhna chaha Navya ki saach prem KAHANI
aur dusri Taraf Chudail Rama bangayi shaitano ki NANI

Jab Nahi Milne diya Dhadkan ko DIL SE
Tab Navya ne yaad kiya Bhagwan ko MUSHKIL MEY

Phir Kya tha Bhagwaan ne Badaya apna HAAT
Bhej diya ek Farishtey ko Banakar apne Aashirwaad ki SAUGAAT

Farishtey ne Thanna milaygi vo Anant ko uske PYAAR SE
Par kismat ne Bhej diya us Booh Aah dadi🤢 koMushkil ke DEWAAR JAISE

Saache pyyar ko Aaj tak bala kaun Rok PAYA HAI
Aakhir sache Pyaar par Ruhani suroor CHAYA HAI

Jab mil gaya Dil ko Dhadkan ka SAATH
Tab Saaso ne Thama Anant ka HAATH

Kholkar apni Palkein Bulaya apne PYAAR KO
Akhir Tadap raha tha Parvana Shama ke DIDAAR KO

Ab nahi ho raha intezaar dil ho raha hai BEKABOO
Shukravaar he itni door Jab Anant kahega Navya se I LOVE U

ok guys that was it i know was crap .par please jhel lena .Ande tamatar ke liye hu ready 😆

Nice..keep it up!😊

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