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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sajni786
well u said tamatar and ande...but r u ready for chocolates??? 😳

It was indeed very well written...obviously the udi baba one was the significant one...but the last one was totally "navyaish" with the words bekaboo and ILU 👏

thanks sajni that means a lot😃

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: chucklebuddy

u'v v well succeeded yaar... n u r maintaining a low profile n being humble... its gud... 👏
rofl @ P.S 🤣 🤣

thanks for the compliment par mein itna accha nahin hun 😳

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niveda

@niveda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

your udibaba ke baal wala line made me rofl...🤣...good work manoj

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: niveda82
your udibaba ke baal wala line made me rofl...🤣...good work manoj

thanks nivi😃 thats my 1 of fav part too

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aimin

@aimin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

I'm taking the liberty of calling you Manoj here, since everyone else is. ^^

Going to repeat what I said to you in a previous post of mine, your thoughts are really surprising! & even more so novel were your poetry, lol! This poem was particularly rib-tickling as well.😆 & I loved this bit:

aadd gaya buddha aur Rokhna chaha Navya ki saach prem KAHANI

aur dusri Taraf Chudail Rama bangayi shaitano ki NANI

LOL!! But jokes apart, I really liked it. :)

P.S. No need to be so formal & apologetic. ^^''

Edited by aimin - 14 years ago

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: aimin
I'm taking the liberty of calling you Manoj here, since everyone else is. ^^

Going to repeat what I said to you in a previous post of mine, your thoughts are really surprising! & even more so novel were your poetry, lol! This poem was particularly rib-tickling as well.😆 & I loved this bit:

aadd gaya buddha aur Rokhna chaha Navya ki saach prem KAHANI
aur dusri Taraf Chudail Rama bangayi shaitano ki NANI

LOL!! But jokes apart, I really liked it. :)

P.S. No need to be so formal & apologetic. ^^''

thanks aimin i m glad i can surprise u .i read ur posts .gosh u r such an awesome writer .i was skeptical what to post in ur thread .my lingusitic n writing skills arent as polished n great superb like urs.i m more a crass writer .i myself cant say what i write .i think something else write something entirely different n vague .i m crazy .like i said b4 whatever comes in my mind i blurt them out in my posts .even i cant say how i m gonna write a post 2moro .what wud be its theme .i will stop my blabberings here dont wanna bore u

Once again thanks for ur good words😃

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aimin

@aimin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: manojshonafan

thanks aimin i m glad i can surprise u .i read ur posts .gosh u r such an awesome writer .i was skeptical what to post in ur thread .my lingusitic n writing skills arent as polished n great superb like urs.i m more a crass writer .i myself cant say what i write .i think something else write something entirely different n vague .i m crazy .like i said b4 whatever comes in my mind i blurt them out in my posts .even i cant say how i m gonna write a post 2moro .what wud be its theme .i will stop my blabberings here dont wanna bore u

Once again thanks for ur good words😃

Aww, thank you for the compliments, but I wish you didn't put yourself down so much! I am not that linguistically gifted either especially when compared to some really great writers around here.

As for posting in my thread or any post of mine for that matter, you're very welcome there, as is everyone else. :) Language might be a barrier but you make your point pretty well either way. ^^

Sometimes, just letting your thoughts flow on paper (or screen) is exactly what's needed.

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: aimin

Aww, thank you for the compliments, but I wish you didn't put yourself down so much! I am not that linguistically gifted either especially when compared to some really great writers around here.

As for posting in my thread or any post of mine for that matter, you're very welcome there, as is everyone else. :) Language might be a barrier but you make your point pretty well either way. ^^

Sometimes, just letting your thoughts flow on paper (or screen) is exactly what's needed.

@ i .I will take care of that but cant promise😃

@bold agreed .i ll make sure i intrude in ur post 😆 .i m not that regular here but when ill get time i ll make sure to post my rants in ur post😃

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Mariaa.SG

@Mariaa.SG

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Woow Bro 😲

Did'nt knoow you can write that well and soo funny too 😆

there's no post of you which i can dare to correct 😛 its alwaays perfect and super good to read : i can read yoour posts all my daay 😆 i juust loved it ❤️

the uddi baba's hair line was the most hilarious one and other were amazing too 👏

thanks a loot for the pm :🤗 i'm glaad you've pmed me for that suprise gift 😆

keep writing big bro : yoou'll be a sucessul person huun <3 why not a book writer one daay ?