~~ AnYa Drabbles ~~ - Page 2

JZee That.Was.Fantastic.😃
How do you manage to write so eloquently? Take a bow girl..👏👏
You have penned down Anant's dilemma, his state of mind so well..
I had always wondered if Anant questioned himself seeing Navya doing so well with the while "ignoring thing" and you were bang on with this..He knows its hurting her like hell but still her resolve was stronger than his somehow..
Loved how he did not want to have any negative emotion associated with navya's memory..His remembrance of their times together was written so beautifully..❤️
Loved the dig with Shagun ie. her name wasn't synonymous with the effect she had on Anant's life..
Loved the ending the best..Anant's questions are so similar to our questions, aren't they? The car scene made it quite clear that Anant was ready to fight but Navya's reaction was a damper.. Why did she give up so easily? As you put it "she hadn't even deemed the cause worth a fight in the first place. Did I mean so little to her? Did 'we' mean so little… I had brand new questions, to ask the same old things."
Once again, beautifully written and I urge you to keep writing these drabbles..You will rectify everything the CV's messed up, or missed, beautifully and in the process provide us with a creative literary treat!😛

wow that was so nicely written

Hey girl!

Thanks for the pm or else I would have missed this!

I'll try n keep it short.

If I could just start by saying...you write beautifully...it would be an understatement already. Im a psychology student, I've the trained keeda(worm) in me to analyse dissect heads and keep looking for life in the shreds! I loved every word u wrote, devoured it...amazed with it!

Forget about what you wrote here n always do. I just want to let you know that you have an ability very few do, a method to reach hearts and convince them whichever way you wish to, a command n flow on language people will just sit n envy and a way with words only gifted ones posess! You would think Im just sitting here with Miss Flattery! Nope..I mean every word. Maybe in future, when you get some time to think ...a good subject...a thought or a concept...you should write a book. I promise you, I would be one of the first ones to read it. Im not kidding.

Anant n Navya are just characters..technically dull n boring ones considering they are a part of a soap which tries to cater to all age groups in an indian audience. The story along with the integrity of the characters goes up n down most of the times. But, look at what you've done! You've brought them to life! You've managed to convince me in your drabble that Anant is alive..living somewhere close to you, he shares every bit of his life with you and tells you everything! At times...I thought he was you!!! You've managed to pen down all his emotions and turmoils so easily and profoundly...like you are living them. Not an easy job I say! Not at all!

About what you wrote...3 things I loved the most..

I wanted to return to a flash back of a rare, arbitrary memory of her soft laughter, and revel in the wonderful feeling of freedom and fondness that evoked in me. I wanted to think of the times we had come close. Lose myself to that heady, mesmerized feeling, have my breath hitched somewhere on its way up, just remembering the abandon of restrain that exhilaration afforded me, an unprecedented, progressive high, each time'

^You had me in these lines. Every word is delicious! Yep, romantic I am...I guess whoever you find here on the forum are hopelessly in love with love! Needless to say they all are waiting for the moment when Anant says I Love You. 😛

Foolishly, I looked up, to instantly drop my eyes firmly back to the food on my plate ' which was when I noticed it had remained untouched. I set right off to correct this minor matter at least ' taking a spoonful of the curry, plucking off a tidy bite from the chapatti, framing a scoop of it to plug into the dry bhajiyaa and stuffing that into my mouth too. Funny how effective routine tasks were engaging, even momentarily distracting, when you really concentrated. For it wasn't every day you took the care to make the scoop of your bite geometrically symmetrical, right?! I was three bites down, and the focus paid off ' I could sense the tension diffusing, and I had not thought about my many troubles for a record 120 seconds, give or take ten.

^These lines tell me how much you think..you feel the pulse n dissolve yourself in the character! If I was Anant, I would experience this as you have narrated, word by word...even the most routine task, given the frame of mind I was in. So...Beautiful again!

To the most crucial matter of my life' and to a decision as taken by them that I saw no sense in, whatsoever! Perhaps they had hence realized I needed space, and time.

Or just perhaps, rebelling wasn't so hard, or so impossible. Perhaps sometimes, when you were dire, your assertion became evident, and those at its receiving end figured there was nothing to change about it.

Could that be? Was Mohan bhaiya right? Had I given up without a fight? If my answer was yes, why was it?

^I loved the sudden natural realisation which came from nowhere or somewhere.."maybe rebelling wasn't so hard!" I loved the build up to it. I know we come up with different solutions and realisations for many ongoing issues in our life in a sudden snap, like coming out of a tunnel and suddenly seeing light..wondering how we didnt realise it though it was always there..waiting to be realised! I precisely how Anant might realise that he cannot do with Navz anymore...its these small incidents leading to the final decision...Its her and I cannot let go of her, no way.

Dont have more time, wanted to write more,will do so as n when I get time I promise. My neice is pulling my laptop n wants to tap the keys. Have to go..

Im a fan already. Do keep writing...always, not just here, anywhere else as well. Write for yourself or others...but write. Keep up the grand work! Taaliyaaan again 👏

luv

Sonia

wow Zee...itz simply amazing...cnt w8 to read more...thnx 4 PM

Hey dear!!!

😊 Hi Zeee...sorry for the late reply but was speechless after going thru ur post...so beautifully written...wish u were one of the cvs ...u have put down so many lovely emotions of ananth...mohan ...wish we cud see them actually saying these to themselves in their mind...

It was her. She had given up without a fight – she hadn't even deemed the cause worth a fight in the first place. Did I mean so little to her? Did 'we' mean so little… I had brand new questions, to ask the same old things.

what u said above was so right till yesday...but yesday after seeing navya going to the extent of taking the risk of going to his house n calling his bro...i have a feeling she will do it all...n wish ananth knows the exent of pain n tension she went thru when he was ill n unconscious...n sick sagun, all bother abt the roka n praying god to give ananth back some of his fever after the roka...how disgusting...ananth u need to know how navya was when u were down...n zee, wish i cud see ur drabble on that...from ur point...

whatever it is, u r just awesome n i cant help myself from scrolling to the top n reading n reflecting each point visualing the same...though im short of time...to end a big hug n 👏👏👏👏 for such a lovely n mindblowing post after a dull n painful week...

Jzee, Thank you for your PM😊, or else I would have missed such a beautiful peice of art...

Hey JZee,

Thanks for the post and the msg JZee!

I felt that your post filled a big void I felt when I watched the last few episodes... I had really wanted some scenes where Anant spoke out his thoughts - he has gone through a big transformation from being the "good" boy to discovering a totally unexpected side to him... The 3 scenes where he did speak to Navya about his feelings were fine but I was looking for more I guess... Your post is very satisfying to read because it goes through Anant's feelings the way I wanted to... He has suddenly grown up, his life is no longer simple and he has battles on his hand which he never ever imagined he would have... I felt that cvs should have dwelt on his dilemma with a lot more punch... Would've loved to see your writing enacted on-screen...

Makes me wonder, if there was no Navya, would he have accepted Shagun?

Thanks for giving us a bright spark - I have almost given up hope of seeing nayi soch in the serial, at least the forum is giving me the food for thought I crave!

Keep writing!