~~ AnYa Drabbles ~~ - Page 4

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Originally posted by: Abhi911

Shagun, they call her, although her advent into my life has had no namesake effect.

Not everyone can be a namesake case now, can they ;)

Wow! Wonderful piece of work JZee. Anant's trauma, his fight woth his emotions, his vulnerability has all been woven so beautifully by you. Emotions are racing through his mind at a supersonic speed, he's unable to comprehend, he doesnt yet know whether he's right or not, whether his feelings are right or not, he just knows that he wants her.

Anya, keep drabbling, all the more 😃

PS- I'm back! I missed the complainig adda, btw where is it now?

Originally posted by: supria

😊 Hi Zeee...sorry for the late reply but was speechless after going thru ur post...so beautifully written...wish u were one of the cvs ...u have put down so many lovely emotions of ananth...mohan ...wish we cud see them actually saying these to themselves in their mind... I'm actually quite late replying back myself, but yesterday was just such a long typing day for me, I couldn't beat it out!

its been long since ...while watching the scene where mohan tells ananth to be careful n think welll before taking a decision i wanted ananth to analyse his bro-bhabhi relationship when alone n realise what u have penned down so beautifully...here as ...

Shortly before, the elder and sadly sidelined Bajpayee heir, my brother Mohan ' who made such a habit of talking in monosyllables that you wondered if the sound of his own voice didn't surprise him once in a while ' had actually verbalized his disappointment. Heck he'd been angry at me if anyone had ever wondered whether he was even capable of such emotion,

n i wanted Ananth to just realise why his adorable bro was so tongue-tied...n visualise for himself how henpecked n burdened his life in future wud be with apshagun... these wud have been better than seeing those banaraswali scenes...the above sentences alone wud have made a beautiful episode ...i just wud have loved to see ananth going thru these emotions but sad that the cvs dont think of such things n torture us with CSB, hari om prabhuji n banaraswali scenes...

He had smiled me up and down, There was a distinct I-know-what-you're-upto air about his manner, I could sense, even as I vainly consoled myself by putting it down as the doing of my own guilty conscience.

as abt CBS, i hate it when he sneers at ananth n looks at him up n down as if he has done a big sin...so much for being a loving grandfather...cant even imagine grandpas being so mean...they r the best in reality...n zee... uve put ananth's heart inside out with these lines...

I wanted to be happy thinking about her. I wanted to return to a flash back of a rare, arbitrary memory of her soft laughter, and revel in the wonderful feeling of freedom and fondness that evoked in me. I wanted to think of the times we had come close. Lose myself to that heady, mesmerized feeling, have my breath hitched somewhere on its way up, just remembering the abandon of restrain that exhilaration afforded me, an unprecedented, progressive high, each time'

Thanks Supriya - yes, I've really wanted Anant to be shown as understanding his brother's plight, when coming up with the resolve to fight his own forced fate. After Navya herself, it should be his next big reason to rebel!

CVS...pls hire ZEE on ur team, shes got the heart n pulse of the audience n pours it all out so well...n brings out the essence of this innocent AnYa love story so well...zee...a big hug to u for this para...Instead, I found myself thinking of the sight of her vulnerable, accusing eyes on the bus back from the picnic; CZee...after this post im going back to AnYa scenes on YT n loooking at them thru ur eyes...loved this line especially...

Zee...even the CVS will be knocked out reading this... Aww, surpriya, you make that sound very grand, thank you, but I'm happy just hanging around the forum for fun stuff - with all my criticism of the CVs and their pitfalls, I never want to be in their shoes churning out day after day and dying with a response that can never be 100% positive because the audience will always be in variable minds!

It was all utterly, miserably futile. Until I had her word. She hadn't assured me. She hadn't shown resolve to strive for this thing we had' on the contrary, she had expressed her personal regret in being thoughtless, and her resolve, if any, was only to flush this unwanted disruption out of her system. Well she could wish. I'd been there, done that, and now it wasn't my position to deny her the chance to follow the book to correct our situation, but I could ask her ' I had asked her ' if she really believed there was riddance of it for good? There wasn't, damnit, ask me! Hadn't I been striving to accomplish the same, right up to the point where she stepped into my shoes and took over ' and our roles reversed?

Zee...as abut the absagun part...i hate that character so much that i just dont like to comment or waste time on her though u have put it all so welll...

to end my take...i just cant stop reading n reading the following lines of urs...

Was Mohan bhaiya right? Had I given up without a fight? If my answer was yes, why was it?

It was her. She had given up without a fight ' she hadn't even deemed the cause worth a fight in the first place. Did I mean so little to her? Did 'we' mean so little' I had brand new questions, to ask the same old things.

what u said above was so right till yesday...but yesday after seeing navya going to the extent of taking the risk of going to his house n calling his bro...i have a feeling she will do it all...n wish ananth knows the exent of pain n tension she went thru when he was ill n unconscious...n sick sagun, all bother abt the roka n praying god to give ananth back some of his fever after the roka...how disgusting...ananth u need to know how navya was when u were down...n zee, wish i cud see ur drabble on that...from ur point...

Point taken missy - will definitely try and churn out something for that! Not sure how soon though...

whatever it is, u r just awesome n i cant help myself from scrolling to the top n reading n reflecting each point visualing the same...though im short of time...to end a big hug n 👏 for such a lovely n mindblowing post after a dull n painful week...