~~ AnYa Drabbles ~~ - Page 3

hey this is truely amazing... u read anant's mind or wat...

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Hey JZee,

I am totally in awe 👏, with your lovely piece of art. Gosh! one of the best way to explain Anant's Dilemma, I should say! You've made literature for me even more easy to understand. We, students, after reading a poem, are always told to explain the poem in our own words and bring out the essence of it, And NOT paraphrase it...And that is what you have taught me, actually, with your explicitly wonderful thoughts, emotions...all captured in these wonderful Philosophical, but Encapsulating poetic words. 😍

Ah! How I love to read every piece of work by you! Really soothes my mind, and also teaches me to think even more broadly...to have a wilder imagination 😍!! An Imagination so pure, so perfect, so huge that is found, usually, while reading the beautiful, empowering, and Romantic poems, stories, short stories...all works of Literature by our Beloved, most Appreciated Romantic poets and authors.

How I love to just go on and on about your Awesome, Fabulous, pieces of work...but am out of words really!! Guess I'll have refer to the dictionary next time, while I comment! 😉

P.S.: What about your FF - Shakespeare In Love? When will you be continuing it? Do let all of us know! 😃

Regards

Annie 😊

Hey I am new to this forum, nd i ahve not read other wiritings form JZee.. can you please provide mewith te link or more details abt the Shakespeare in Ove- FF that you are talikng about and also some other. I'll aprrecite it.

I am so glad you made this one!
Will get some quality reading in ONE thread!!!
Keep going!!
Love,
Ritz😳

Originally posted by: smitasmita

Zee this is simply amazing...I don't have words to express how i feel right now or the impact this write up has caused...It felt like you were roaming in Anant's mind , beautifully explained every bit.
I don't think I can write more , b coz U are too good at it ...n praises fall short👏

Originally posted by: laddoo598

JZee That.Was.Fantastic.😃
How do you manage to write so eloquently? Take a bow girl..👏👏
You have penned down Anant's dilemma, his state of mind so well..
I had always wondered if Anant questioned himself seeing Navya doing so well with the while "ignoring thing" and you were bang on with this..He knows its hurting her like hell but still her resolve was stronger than his somehow..
Loved how he did not want to have any negative emotion associated with navya's memory..His remembrance of their times together was written so beautifully..❤️
Loved the dig with Shagun ie. her name wasn't synonymous with the effect she had on Anant's life..
Loved the ending the best..Anant's questions are so similar to our questions, aren't they? The car scene made it quite clear that Anant was ready to fight but Navya's reaction was a damper.. Why did she give up so easily? As you put it "she hadn't even deemed the cause worth a fight in the first place. Did I mean so little to her? Did 'we' mean so little' I had brand new questions, to ask the same old things."
Once again, beautifully written and I urge you to keep writing these drabbles..You will rectify everything the CV's messed up, or missed, beautifully and in the process provide us with a creative literary treat!😛

Originally posted by: nishi755

wow that was so nicely written

Originally posted by: sohn

Hey girl!

Thanks for the pm or else I would have missed this!

I'll try n keep it short.

If I could just start by saying...you write beautifully...it would be an understatement already. Im a psychology student, I've the trained keeda(worm) in me to analyse dissect heads and keep looking for life in the shreds! I loved every word u wrote, devoured it...amazed with it!

Forget about what you wrote here n always do. I just want to let you know that you have an ability very few do, a method to reach hearts and convince them whichever way you wish to, a command n flow on language people will just sit n envy and a way with words only gifted ones posess! You would think Im just sitting here with Miss Flattery! Nope..I mean every word. Maybe in future, when you get some time to think ...a good subject...a thought or a concept...you should write a book. I promise you, I would be one of the first ones to read it. Im not kidding. - Aah, maybe you weren't trying to, but I truly am mega mega flattered! Thank you so much for such kind comments. I have to admit reading all the feedback actually makes me appreciate my own writing a tad bit more - something I can rarely manage in general! So thank you much!

Anant n Navya are just characters..technically dull n boring ones considering they are a part of a soap which tries to cater to all age groups in an indian audience. The story along with the integrity of the characters goes up n down most of the times. But, look at what you've done! You've brought them to life! You've managed to convince me in your drabble that Anant is alive..living somewhere close to you, he shares every bit of his life with you and tells you everything! At times...I thought he was you!!! You've managed to pen down all his emotions and turmoils so easily and profoundly...like you are living them. Not an easy job I say! Not at all! - Yayyy! Character sketches make so much difference to me, that I can actually watch or not watch a show completely based on that sole criteria (and read/not read books too) I'm very pleased to hear you think I make the characters come more alive, because these are leads with potential to do much much better!

About what you wrote...3 things I loved the most..

I wanted to return to a flash back of a rare, arbitrary memory of her soft laughter, and revel in the wonderful feeling of freedom and fondness that evoked in me. I wanted to think of the times we had come close. Lose myself to that heady, mesmerized feeling, have my breath hitched somewhere on its way up, just remembering the abandon of restrain that exhilaration afforded me, an unprecedented, progressive high, each time'

^You had me in these lines. Every word is delicious! Yep, romantic I am haha, who isn't?! ...I guess whoever you find here on the forum are hopelessly in love with love! Needless to say they all are waiting for the moment when Anant says I Love You. 😛

Foolishly, I looked up, to instantly drop my eyes firmly back to the food on my plate ' which was when I noticed it had remained untouched. I set right off to correct this minor matter at least ' taking a spoonful of the curry, plucking off a tidy bite from the chapatti, framing a scoop of it to plug into the dry bhajiyaa and stuffing that into my mouth too. Funny how effective routine tasks were engaging, even momentarily distracting, when you really concentrated. For it wasn't every day you took the care to make the scoop of your bite geometrically symmetrical, right?! I was three bites down, and the focus paid off ' I could sense the tension diffusing, and I had not thought about my many troubles for a record 120 seconds, give or take ten.

^These lines tell me how much you think..you feel the pulse n dissolve yourself in the character! If I was Anant, I would experience this as you have narrated, word by word...even the most routine task, given the frame of mind I was in. So...Beautiful again!

To the most crucial matter of my life' and to a decision as taken by them that I saw no sense in, whatsoever! Perhaps they had hence realized I needed space, and time.

Or just perhaps, rebelling wasn't so hard, or so impossible. Perhaps sometimes, when you were dire, your assertion became evident, and those at its receiving end figured there was nothing to change about it.

Could that be? Was Mohan bhaiya right? Had I given up without a fight? If my answer was yes, why was it?

^I loved the sudden natural realisation which came from nowhere or somewhere.."maybe rebelling wasn't so hard!" I loved the build up to it. I know we come up with different solutions and realisations for many ongoing issues in our life in a sudden snap, like coming out of a tunnel and suddenly seeing light..wondering how we didnt realise it though it was always there..waiting to be realised! I precisely how Anant might realise that he cannot do with Navz anymore...its these small incidents leading to the final decision...Its her and I cannot let go of her, no way.

Dont have more time, wanted to write more,will do so as n when I get time I promise. My neice is pulling my laptop n wants to tap the keys. Have to go..

Im a fan already. Do keep writing...always, not just here, anywhere else as well. Write for yourself or others...but write. Keep up the grand work! Taaliyaaan again 👏

luv

Sonia

Jzee,